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Angry thak gayi hoon...... - 26th October 2005, 01:30 AM
thak gayi hoon mein rote rote
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Re: thak gayi hoon...... - 26th October 2005, 07:57 AM
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thak gayi hoon mein rote rote
toot gayi hoon mein khote khote
kab milegi mere is dil ko raahat
ke marrahi hoon harpal jeete jeete
meri priy farhana,

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26th October 2005, 10:02 PM
hi meenaji,,

mere liye toh lafz bhi kam padte hain apna dard bayaan karne ko...apna khyaal rakhiyega.

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27th October 2005, 08:43 PM
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thak gayi hoon mein rote rote
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Salam,
Fahana bhoot shukria hosla afzai ka,
Molhaiza farmiye mira dosra sher,

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27th October 2005, 09:36 PM
hi there,

aapko mera chota sher pasand aaya iske liye mein shukraguazaar hoon.yuhin padhte rehna aur apni pasand napasand batate rehna.
aur haan tumhara sher bhi accha hai...
isi tarah likhne ki koshish barkaraar rakkho.take care.

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30th October 2005, 04:14 PM
"thak gayi hoon mein rote rote
toot gayi hoon mein khote khote
kab milegi mere is dil ko raahat
ke marrahi hoon harpal jeete jeete"



nice very nice like it very much

merey sapney yoon akele naa hote
meri zindagi mai andhaire naa hote
merey sab khaab yoon aa bikharte
agar tum merey saath hote

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30th October 2005, 04:15 PM
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30th October 2005, 06:07 PM
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kab milegi mere is dil ko raahat
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30th October 2005, 11:48 PM
hi star.....tumhe accha laga jaanke khushi hui..aate rehna...take care

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30th October 2005, 11:49 PM
hi lucky....sahi kaha rahat milna behad mushkil hai..hum toh saalon se gham ki aag mein jal rahe hain....apna khyaal rakkho

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30th October 2005, 11:50 PM
hamara dard zindagibhar tak saath nibhane walo mein se hai chandsi.....isi ka afsos hai...apna khyaal rakhna

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keep it up - 2nd November 2005, 06:04 PM
farhana jaha dekha shayri pa tumha hi paya.gud work promoting shayri.log bhulta ja raha tha shairi ko.keep it up
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3rd November 2005, 06:09 AM
hi there.....im glad u liked the sher..take care.bye

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