Chalo Aaj Dard Bante................! - Page 7

dineshdharvi · 6th December 2007, 07:59 PM

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Originally Posted by LAMHA

bahut khub ..........acha likha hai aap ne.......

duniya ka aitbaar kare bhi to kya kare,
aansoo bhi apni aankh ka apna na hua..............

Mohabbat main itna door nikal jayenge kabhi socha na tha
Hum wafa karke bhi bewafa kehlaayenge kabhi socha na tha
Zamane se tanha hi takrayen ge kabhi socha na tha
Hum to Pyaar ke naam se hi na aashna the
Chahat ki itni bari saza payenge kabhi socha na tha
Us ka her andaaz doorson se judda lagta hai
Uske rang main hum rang jayenge kabhi socha na tha,

LAMHA · 6th December 2007, 08:59 PM

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Originally Posted by acharya_mj

kya kahe tum jaisa dost paa liyaa to aur kyaa chahiye hame.??? kuchh nahee kyun ki sab paa liya.............
Sab kuchh krbaan tum par....................................

har taraf ziist kii raaho.n me.n ka.Dii dhuup hai dost
bas terii yaad ke saaye hai.n panaaho.n kii tarah
[Sudarshan Faakir]

wahhhhhhhhhhh MANU.....kya baat hai......

I wish a wish for u,
it's a wish I wish for u,
the wish I wish for u,
that all ur wishes come true....................

LAMHA · 6th December 2007, 09:26 PM

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Originally Posted by dream

Dil main kuch ghum, aankh main kuch nami…..aur qalam se kuch naye alfaaz………………….!!!

Kya kahen hum kaise tujhse door ho gaye
Haalaat se, kuch khud se majboor ho gaye

Mohhabbat rula deti hai, kab ye maana tha
Apne dil ke afsaane wohi dastoor ho gaye

Manzil jise samjha bana wo meel ka pathar
Nayi manzil, naye raaste manzoor ho gaye

Hadd se barh jaaye jo ghum, deta nahin dard
Muskura rahe hain, aise hum ranjoor ho gaye

Dil tera reza reza hai, kaise sambhale tujhko
Khudaya humse kaise yeh qusoor ho gaye !!!

kya baat hai.....wahhhhhhhhh..........dil ko chu liya aapke is kalaam ne............

hum hanste hai to woh samajte hai,
ki humko aadat hai muskurane ki,
lekin wo naadan kya jaane,
ye bhi ek adaa hai ghum chupane ki................

LAMHA · 6th December 2007, 09:33 PM

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Originally Posted by dream

Apne sath hi sada mujhko paaoge tum…!!

Thak jaao gar pathreele raaston pe chalte hue
Kabhi soch na lena ki wahan tanha ho tum
Moond kar palkon ko apni jo tum dekhoge
Apne saath hi sada mujh ko paaoge tum

Har waqt bura kat jaat hai, yaqeen karna
Ankhon main kabhi tum ashk na bhar lena
Ghum barh jaaye, muskurahat khone lage
Apni duaaon main mujh ko paaoge tum

Ishq naam to nahin hai milan ka, deedar ka
Dil se dil ka mil jaana hai naam-e-mohabbat
Jo yaad aa jaaye meri, na samjhna ki door hoon
Apne seene main dhadakta mujh ko paaoge tum

Waqt ki garmi jo jhulsaane lage wujood
Meri chahat ki nami ko mehsoos karna
Jo sard hawaain zamane ki aane lagen paas
Meri wafaaon ki garmi ko mehsoos karna
Main tumse juda to nahin hoon mere humdum
Apne saath hi sada mujh ko paaoge tum !!

wahhhhh wahhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhh....kya khub likhte hai aap..........keep it up............

guzarta hai meri har sans se tera naam aaj bhi,
dhalti hai tere intezaar me meri har shaam aaj bhi,
tujko mujse bichde ek zamana ho gaya,
par hoti hai tere naam se meri pehchaan aaj bhi......

LAMHA · 6th December 2007, 09:41 PM

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Originally Posted by dream

Kuch dil Se.......

Raaste badal jaate hain, manzilain badal jaati hain,

Kyun nahin badalte dil jo taqdeerain badal jaati hain

Dil wohi rehta hai, yaadon ki anginat karchaiyaan le ke,

Aankhon ki nami chupa kar, nazrain badal jaati hain

Rooh rehti hai har lamha ashkbaar, lab hanste hain,

Bahar aur andar ki kis tarah fizaain badal jaati hain

Koi hota hai rafta rafta zindagi se door, bohot door

Haathon ki yeh lakeerain kyun aksar badal jaati hain !!

behtarin.............

koi waada nahi fir bhi tera intezaar hai,
judai ke bawajood bhi tujse pyaar hai,
tere chehre ki udaasi de rahi hai gawahi,
ke mujse bichad ke tu bhi bekarar hai....

LAMHA · 6th December 2007, 09:44 PM

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Originally Posted by dineshdharvi

Mohabbat main itna door nikal jayenge kabhi socha na tha

Hum wafa karke bhi bewafa kehlaayenge kabhi socha na tha
Zamane se tanha hi takrayen ge kabhi socha na tha
Hum to Pyaar ke naam se hi na aashna the
Chahat ki itni bari saza payenge kabhi socha na tha
Us ka her andaaz doorson se judda lagta hai

Uske rang main hum rang jayenge kabhi socha na tha,

bahut khub...........

raat hue jab sham ke baad,
teri yaad aayi har baat ke baad,
humne khamosh rehkar bhi dekha,
teri hi aawaz aayi har sans ke baad.......................

dineshdharvi · 7th December 2007, 09:05 PM

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Originally Posted by LAMHA

bahut khub...........

raat hue jab sham ke baad,
teri yaad aayi har baat ke baad,
humne khamosh rehkar bhi dekha,
teri hi aawaz aayi har sans ke baad.......................

THANKS LAMHA JI......................

Teri Tasweer meri ankhon main basi kyun hai
Jidhar dekho bus udhar tu hi kyun hai
Teri yadoon say wabasta meri takdeer hai lekin
Tujhe na pa ker meri takdeer roothi kyun hai

Mujh ko hai khaber asaan nahin tujhe haasil karna
phir bhi yeh intzaar yeh bekarari kyun hai
Barson guzar gaye merey tanhayee main lekin
Meri baanhon ko aaj bhi tera intzaar kyun hai

LAMHA · 10th December 2007, 09:42 PM

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Originally Posted by dineshdharvi

THANKS LAMHA JI......................

Teri Tasweer meri ankhon main basi kyun hai
Jidhar dekho bus udhar tu hi kyun hai
Teri yadoon say wabasta meri takdeer hai lekin
Tujhe na pa ker meri takdeer roothi kyun hai

Mujh ko hai khaber asaan nahin tujhe haasil karna
phir bhi yeh intzaar yeh bekarari kyun hai
Barson guzar gaye merey tanhayee main lekin
Meri baanhon ko aaj bhi tera intzaar kyun hai

sham hote hi chiragon ko buja lete hai,
ye dil hi kaafi hai teri yaad me jalne ke liye.........(NM)

dineshdharvi · 11th December 2007, 11:02 AM

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Originally Posted by LAMHA

sham hote hi chiragon ko buja lete hai,
ye dil hi kaafi hai teri yaad me jalne ke liye.........(NM)

saahil juda juda sahee munzill to ek he,
hum tum juda juda sahee muger dil to ek he

Govind143 · **Ikraar -** 11th December 2007, 02:44 PM

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Originally Posted by LAMHA

DOSTON,
kehte hai khushi bantne se badhati hai,aur DARD bantne se kam ho jata hai.........hum chahte hai ki is jahan mai har ek insaan khush rahe.......aur is ke liye hum ek dusre ka dard bant le............hum apne doston ke liye itna to zaroor kar sakte hai........hai na?............
to chaliye yaha is GAME ke zariye hum sher-o-shayri main ek dusre ka dard bante............
is SHAYRI .COM ka har member apna dard yaha bayan kar sakta hai........humare paas kisi DARD ka MARHAM to nahi,par ek waada zaroor kar sakte hai ki aap apna dard bantege to woh zaroor kam ho jayega aur yakeenan aap ke dil ka booj halka ho jayega...............
shart ye hai ki hum jo bhi bayan kare SHER-O-SHAYRI mai kare............
chaliye shuruwat mai karti hoooooo.........

na jane kyon ye ankhen udaas rehti hai,
in ankhon mai kisi ki pyaas rehti hai,
ye jankar bhi ki woh meri kismat mai nahi,
phir bhi kyon unhe paane ki aas rehti hai...

Hi lamha I am new user you wrote really a good shayri and I also want Share my feelings with you.

Kehna chahte hain kuch,
baat kuch aur kahte hain,
zubaan ladkhada si jati hai,
jab bhi ikraar karte hain,
sagar me hai jitna pani,
pyar hum unse karte hain,
chahte hain ki kehde hum ,
bus unki na se darte hain

LAMHA · 11th December 2007, 11:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Govind143

Hi lamha I am new user you wrote really a good shayri and I also want Share my feelings with you.

Kehna chahte hain kuch,
baat kuch aur kahte hain,
zubaan ladkhada si jati hai,
jab bhi ikraar karte hain,
sagar me hai jitna pani,
pyar hum unse karte hain,
chahte hain ki kehde hum ,
bus unki na se darte hain

arey janab.....inkaar ya ikraar to baad ki baat hai...mera manna hai ki pyaar ka izhaar kar dena chahiye....

is zamane se kabke guzar gaye hote,
thokar na lagi hoti to behak gaye hote,
bandhe the bas aap ki mohabbat ke dhage me,
warna kabke motiyon jaise bikhar gaye hote...........

LAMHA · 11th December 2007, 11:27 PM

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Originally Posted by dineshdharvi

saahil juda juda sahee munzill to ek he,
hum tum juda juda sahee muger dil to ek he

khud to dube, hume bhi le dube,
kisi ek ko to paar laga dete..................

Govind143 · 12th December 2007, 10:30 AM

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Originally Posted by LAMHA

arey janab.....inkaar ya ikraar to baad ki baat hai...mera manna hai ki pyaar ka izhaar kar dena chahiye....

is zamane se kabke guzar gaye hote,
thokar na lagi hoti to behak gaye hote,
bandhe the bas aap ki mohabbat ke dhage me,
warna kabke motiyon jaise bikhar gaye hote...........

Lamha ji kya khoob likha hai apne padte hi dil soch me pad gaya ki kya karoo phir socha jo aapne kaha wahi karoo.

AAP KE LIYE..........

Likh sakte kisi ki taqdeer agar hum
aaki taqdeer mai har khushi likh dete,
jo mod aapko kamiyabi dilaaye
har lakeer ko ussi aur mod dete.

Har khushi par haq ho aapka
khushiyon bhara safar ho aapka,
gam kabhi karvat na badle aapki taraf,
sadaa muskuraata rahe chehra aapka.

LAMHA · 13th December 2007, 10:14 PM

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Originally Posted by Govind143

Lamha ji kya khoob likha hai apne padte hi dil soch me pad gaya ki kya karoo phir socha jo aapne kaha wahi karoo.

AAP KE LIYE..........

Likh sakte kisi ki taqdeer agar hum
aaki taqdeer mai har khushi likh dete,
jo mod aapko kamiyabi dilaaye
har lakeer ko ussi aur mod dete.

Har khushi par haq ho aapka
khushiyon bhara safar ho aapka,
gam kabhi karvat na badle aapki taraf,
sadaa muskuraata rahe chehra aapka.

bahut khub.........thank u soooo much....

aaj mere dard ki inteha hone de,
mat rok mujhe jee bhar ke rone de,
nahi manzoor zindagi tere pyar ke bagair,
aaj mujhe mout ki aagosh me sone de....

krenil · 13th December 2007, 10:35 PM

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Originally Posted by LAMHA

bahut khub.........thank u soooo much....

aaj mere dard ki inteha hone de,
mat rok mujhe jee bhar ke rone de,
nahi manzoor zindagi tere pyar ke bagair,
aaj mujhe mout ki aagosh me sone de....

wah lamha bahut khub likha hai ab ye tumhare liye

kal meri aankh se ek aansu nikal aaya
maine puchha to muskurakar usne bataya
ki koi teri aankho me hai itna samaya ki
chahkar bhi main apni jagah na bana paya

people die younger because
god loves them so much but
u r still on earth because
someone loves u more than god

Govind143 · 14th December 2007, 02:18 PM

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Originally Posted by LAMHA

bahut khub.........thank u soooo much....

aaj mere dard ki inteha hone de,
mat rok mujhe jee bhar ke rone de,
nahi manzoor zindagi tere pyar ke bagair,
aaj mujhe mout ki aagosh me sone de....

khuda na kare kabhi tumhe maut aaye,
agar aaye to tumhari maut se hum mar jaayen.

Khuda teri adalat mai meri bhi zamanat rakhna,
mai rahoo na rahoo meri dost ko salamat rakhna.

Aankhen aapki pehchan hai hamari,
muskan aapki shaan hai hamari,
rakhna smbhaal ke khudo hamesha,
yeh dosti aapki jaan hai hamari.

Maine aapko dost kaha aapko bura to nahi lagaa agar lagaa to sorry. Lamha, ji

aasefa_4u · **aap ka intazar........ -** 14th December 2007, 02:50 PM

lamha ji app meri madad karna mere saath bewafai huvi uska naam faizal lekin mene usko utna hi pyar kiya lekin ek sall bad farhan aya jisne mere liye pura ek sal intazar kiya aur usne mujhe kaha ke mei use pyar karti hu ke nahi mene ha kaha ab mujhe ye samajh ni a raha ke mei use pyar karti hu ya nahi lekin har waqt har pal sirf uske bare mei soch ti hu uske txt ka wait karti hooon mei englans mei rehti hoon aur wo india mei .....................plz reply bak aaap ke message ko kisi ka intazar hai............plz meri madad kijiye aap chate hai to mujhe yahoo par bi email kar sakte hai ..........kyun ke app ko mera yahoo id hai aasefa_4u ........lekin ek baat puchu......bura mat manye app larki hai ya larka......aur aap ki umar liyaaa hai...

aasefa_4u · 14th December 2007, 03:40 PM

plz aaap mujhe addd kijiye aasefa_4u@yahoo.co.uk ya fir hotmail par aasefa_4u@htomail.co.uk thnxxx yaaaaar aaap mujhe plz addd kijiye aap ke aher to baat nahi meri bi kuch madad aao se yahoo ya hotmail pe baat hogi

dream · 14th December 2007, 04:49 PM

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Originally Posted by aasefa_4u

plz aaap mujhe addd kijiye aasefa_4u@yahoo.co.uk ya fir hotmail par aasefa_4u@htomail.co.uk thnxxx yaaaaar aaap mujhe plz addd kijiye aap ke aher to baat nahi meri bi kuch madad aao se yahoo ya hotmail pe baat hogi

Aansu jo beh rahey hein inhein behney do
Yeh keh rahey hein dil ki baat, kehney do

Buhat bewafa ho tum, yeh ham ko hai maloom
Tum apni wafa ki baat, apney tak hi rehney do!

dream · 14th December 2007, 04:51 PM

Tham-Tham ke barasna kabhii jham-jham ke barasna
Saavan ko adaa ye mere ashkon ne sikhaaii

dream · 14th December 2007, 04:52 PM

GALE LAGAYAA.....

Ghamon ne ansoo bahakar mujse ye kaha,
Saath na chhodo hamara tumse ye he iltaja,
Tumhare saath rehkar humbhi muskurane lage the,
Tum jab humein bayan karke logon ko hasane lage the,
Ab pad chuki hai aadat hamein muskurane ki,
Bhala har gham ko saza kyun ho rulane ki,
Ye sunkar humne ghamon ko gale se lagaya,
Phir kai mehfilon mein humne logon ko hansaya.

dream · 14th December 2007, 04:54 PM

Hamari Ghalti...

Hamari ghalti ye ki humne matlab se pyar nahi kiya,
Ya ye thi ghalti ki apni zubaan se dilon par vaar nahi kiya,
Ek baar basaya jisko bhi dil mein to usse kabhi bahar nahi kiya,
Shayad ye thi ghalti ke sabpe vishwas kiya to kuch accha nahi kiya,
Apno ya gairon ki cchodiye humne to mazhab ka bhi fark nahi kiya,
Thokar khakar bhi muskuraye aur muft mein gham bhi paaya,
Phir bhi hai khushnasibi apni ke hamein pyar karna aise hi aaya

danish khan · 14th December 2007, 06:13 PM

aankhe khuli to manzar ajeeb tha dard tha magar dil ke qareeb tha,

hum dhundhte the jinhe apni lakeero mein pata chala wo kisi or ka naseeb tha........

LAMHA · 14th December 2007, 07:29 PM

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Originally Posted by krenil

wah lamha bahut khub likha hai ab ye tumhare liye

kal meri aankh se ek aansu nikal aaya
maine puchha to muskurakar usne bataya
ki koi teri aankho me hai itna samaya ki
chahkar bhi main apni jagah na bana paya

people die younger because
god loves them so much but
u r still on earth because
someone loves u more than god

hey KRENIL,
kya khub sher likha hai aap ne...bahut hi pasand aaya muje....thanx 4 sharing here....

na jaane kyo ye aankhe udaas rehti hai,
in aankhon me kisi ki pyaas rehti hai,
ye jaankar bhi ke wo meri kismat me nahi,
fir bhi kyo unhe paane ki aas rehti hai.....

LAMHA · 14th December 2007, 07:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Govind143

khuda na kare kabhi tumhe maut aaye,
agar aaye to tumhari maut se hum mar jaayen.

Khuda teri adalat mai meri bhi zamanat rakhna,
mai rahoo na rahoo meri dost ko salamat rakhna.

Aankhen aapki pehchan hai hamari,
muskan aapki shaan hai hamari,
rakhna smbhaal ke khudo hamesha,
yeh dosti aapki jaan hai hamari.

Maine aapko dost kaha aapko bura to nahi lagaa agar lagaa to sorry. Lamha, ji

i think dosti se badhkar paak aur pyaara rishta to koi ho hi nahi sakta....meri khushkismati hai ki aap ne muje apna dost kaha aur dosti ke layak samja....is me bura manne wali koi baat nahi hai....

bahut pyare sher likhe hai aapne....shukriya.....

unse roz milne ko jee chahta hai,
kuch sunne - sunane ko jee chahta hai,
tha kisi ke manane ka andaaz aisa,
ke aaj fir ruth jane ko jee chahta hai......

LAMHA · 14th December 2007, 07:49 PM

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Originally Posted by aasefa_4u

lamha ji app meri madad karna mere saath bewafai huvi uska naam faizal lekin mene usko utna hi pyar kiya lekin ek sall bad farhan aya jisne mere liye pura ek sal intazar kiya aur usne mujhe kaha ke mei use pyar karti hu ke nahi mene ha kaha ab mujhe ye samajh ni a raha ke mei use pyar karti hu ya nahi lekin har waqt har pal sirf uske bare mei soch ti hu uske txt ka wait karti hooon mei englans mei rehti hoon aur wo india mei .....................plz reply bak aaap ke message ko kisi ka intazar hai............plz meri madad kijiye aap chate hai to mujhe yahoo par bi email kar sakte hai ..........kyun ke app ko mera yahoo id hai aasefa_4u ........lekin ek baat puchu......bura mat manye app larki hai ya larka......aur aap ki umar liyaaa hai...

hey AASEFA,
mere khayal se aap faisal se nahi par farhan se pyaar karti hai.....unke phone ka aur text msg ka intezaar karna,is se saaf zahir hai ki aap ko unke bina kahi bhi chain nahi aata....ye mohabbat hi to hai,dear....aap ki baaton se ye lagta hai ki wo bhi aap se bahut pyaar karte hai.....bahut khush-naseeb ho aap ki aap ko koi pyaar karnewala mila hai.....ye khuda ki nemat hai ise sambhal kar rakhna chahiye.....aap beshak farhan se mohabbat karti hai.....khuda aap ki khushiya uhi barkaraar rakhe......AAMEEN......

WAISE MAI AAP KO BATA DU KI MAI BHI AAP HI KI TARAH EK LADKI HOO...I M 22 YRS OLD....

LAMHA · 14th December 2007, 07:53 PM

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Originally Posted by dream

Aansu jo beh rahey hein inhein behney do
Yeh keh rahey hein dil ki baat, kehney do

Buhat bewafa ho tum, yeh ham ko hai maloom
Tum apni wafa ki baat, apney tak hi rehney do!

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Originally Posted by dream

Tham-Tham ke barasna kabhii jham-jham ke barasna
Saavan ko adaa ye mere ashkon ne sikhaaii

BAHUT KHUB.......bahut hi pyaare sher hai....

tu aatish-e-dozakh se darata hai jinhe,
wo aag ko bhi pee jate hai pani karke.
(N M)

LAMHA · 14th December 2007, 07:58 PM

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Originally Posted by dream

GALE LAGAYAA.....

Ghamon ne ansoo bahakar mujse ye kaha,
Saath na chhodo hamara tumse ye he iltaja,
Tumhare saath rehkar humbhi muskurane lage the,
Tum jab humein bayan karke logon ko hasane lage the,
Ab pad chuki hai aadat hamein muskurane ki,
Bhala har gham ko saza kyun ho rulane ki,
Ye sunkar humne ghamon ko gale se lagaya,
Phir kai mehfilon mein humne logon ko hansaya.

BAHUT HI PYAARI GHAZAL HAI......DIL KO CHU GAYI....

hume apne dil me basaye rakhna,
hamari yadon ke chirag jalaye rakhna,
bahut lamba hai safar zindagi ka,
ek hissa hume bhi banaye rakhna....................

LAMHA · 14th December 2007, 08:03 PM

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Originally Posted by dream

Hamari Ghalti...

Hamari ghalti ye ki humne matlab se pyar nahi kiya,
Ya ye thi ghalti ki apni zubaan se dilon par vaar nahi kiya,
Ek baar basaya jisko bhi dil mein to usse kabhi bahar nahi kiya,
Shayad ye thi ghalti ke sabpe vishwas kiya to kuch accha nahi kiya,
Apno ya gairon ki cchodiye humne to mazhab ka bhi fark nahi kiya,
Thokar khakar bhi muskuraye aur muft mein gham bhi paaya,
Phir bhi hai khushnasibi apni ke hamein pyar karna aise hi aaya

ek lamhe me unhone hamari zindagi sawaar di,
ek lamhe me unhone hamari zindagi ujaad di,
kasoor unka nahi hamara tha,
jo un do lamho me hamne apni zindagi guzaar di.......

LAMHA · 14th December 2007, 08:12 PM

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Originally Posted by danish khan

aankhe khuli to manzar ajeeb tha dard tha magar dil ke qareeb tha,

hum dhundhte the jinhe apni lakeero mein pata chala wo kisi or ka naseeb tha........

bahut khub likha hai DANISH.....such kaha aap ne...ye to kismat ki baatein hai...hamare kuch bhi chahne se kuch nahi hota...kismat pe kisi ka zor nahi chalta.....

ye koun chala chaman se khamoshiya lekar,
kali kali ro uthi hai siskiya lekar,
huns rahe the jo mere dubne par,
wo hi nikle hai meri talash me kashtiya lekar..............

00730t · **Hhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiii -** 14th December 2007, 08:35 PM

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quote=LAMHA;262032]bahut khub likha hai DANISH.....such kaha aap ne...ye to kismat ki baatein hai...hamare kuch bhi chahne se kuch nahi hota...kismat pe kisi ka zor nahi chalta.....

ye koun chala chaman se khamoshiya lekar,
kali kali ro uthi hai siskiya lekar,
huns rahe the jo mere dubne par,
wo hi nikle hai meri talash me kashtiya lekar..............[/quote]

LAMHA · 15th December 2007, 08:30 PM

koi dikhake roye,koi chupake roye,
hume rulane wale,rulake roye,
maza to tab hai dost,
jab katil bhi janaza uthake roye..........

acharya_mj · 15th December 2007, 10:56 PM

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Originally Posted by LAMHA

koi dikhake roye,koi chupake roye,
hume rulane wale,rulake roye,
maza to tab hai dost,
jab katil bhi janaza uthake roye..........

marane kii duaae.n kyo.n maa.Nguu, jiine kii tamannaa kaun kare
ye duniyaa ho yaa vo duniyaa, ab Khvaahish-e-duniyaa kaun kare
[Moin Ahasan Jazbi]

manu

LAMHA · 15th December 2007, 11:24 PM

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Originally Posted by acharya_mj

marane kii duaae.n kyo.n maa.Nguu, jiine kii tamannaa kaun kare
ye duniyaa ho yaa vo duniyaa, ab Khvaahish-e-duniyaa kaun kare
[Moin Ahasan Jazbi]

manu

nice one.............

zakham hai abhi taza sambhalne do yaroo,
dil ke bikhre tukdo ko sametne do yaroo,
abhi zinda hu kuch sitam aur karo yaroo,
saans chalti hai abhi dam nikalne do yaroo.

acharya_mj · **waah waah -** 15th December 2007, 11:34 PM

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Originally Posted by LAMHA

nice one.............

zakham hai abhi taza sambhalne do yaroo,
dil ke bikhre tukdo ko sametne do yaroo,
abhi zinda hu kuch sitam aur karo yaroo,
saans chalti hai abhi dam nikalne do yaroo.

kyaa sher mara hai lamha ,lekin ham bhi kuchh kam nahee, abhi apna hee likha sher pash-e-khidmat hai

tere zakhmo ko apni mahobbat ki dava doonga
tere gham ko apne seene men chhuupa doonga
tu dost apna dard-e-dil mujh ko de kar to dekh
tere chahere ko tabbsuum se hee sajaa doonga

regards
manu

nihar · 20th December 2007, 05:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by acharya_mj

kyaa sher mara hai lamha ,lekin ham bhi kuchh kam nahee, abhi apna hee likha sher pash-e-khidmat hai

Quote:

Originally Posted by acharya_mj

tere zakhmo ko apni mahobbat ki dava doonga
tere gham ko apne seene men chhuupa doonga
tu dost apna dard-e-dil mujh ko de kar to dekh
tere chahere ko tabbsuum se hee sajaa doonga

regards
manu

dard e zakham hum kisi ko batate nahi
har rah chalte ko hum aapna hum safar banate nahi
dil ki gehrai main utarkar dekha hain humne dost
isiliye hum kisi ko dard pahuchate nahi

krenil · 20th December 2007, 10:12 PM

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Originally Posted by nihar

dard e zakham hum kisi ko batate nahi
har rah chalte ko hum aapna hum safar banate nahi
dil ki gehrai main utarkar dekha hain humne dost
isiliye hum kisi ko dard pahuchate nahi

wah dost bahut hi achha likha hai

tanha se the jab duniya ki bheed me
socha ki koi apna nahi taqdeer me
ek din achanak yuhi aap dost bane
to aisa laga kuch khas tha hatho ki lakeero me

LAMHA · 20th December 2007, 10:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by acharya_mj

kyaa sher mara hai lamha ,lekin ham bhi kuchh kam nahee, abhi apna hee likha sher pash-e-khidmat hai

tere zakhmo ko apni mahobbat ki dava doonga
tere gham ko apne seene men chhuupa doonga
tu dost apna dard-e-dil mujh ko de kar to dekh
tere chahere ko tabbsuum se hee sajaa doonga

regards
manu

WAKEHI TUM KISI SE KAM NAHI HO MANU....BAHUT ACHA SHER LIKHA HAI......

Ae baarish zara tham ke baras,
jab mera yaar aa jaye to jum ke baras,
pehle na baras ki wo aa na sake,
fir itna baras ki wo jaa na sake.......

LAMHA · 20th December 2007, 10:45 PM

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Originally Posted by nihar

dard e zakham hum kisi ko batate nahi
har rah chalte ko hum aapna hum safar banate nahi
dil ki gehrai main utarkar dekha hain humne dost
isiliye hum kisi ko dard pahuchate nahi

bahut khub NIHAR........

aansuo ko aankhon ki dehliz pe laya na karo,
apne dil ki haalat kisi ko bataya na karo,
log muththi bhar namak liye firte hai,
apne zakham kisi ko dikhaya na karo........

LAMHA · 20th December 2007, 10:54 PM

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Originally Posted by krenil

wah dost bahut hi achha likha hai

tanha se the jab duniya ki bheed me
socha ki koi apna nahi taqdeer me
ek din achanak yuhi aap dost bane
to aisa laga kuch khas tha hatho ki lakeero me

bahut khub KRENIL................

Ehsaan doston pe jatane nahi hote,
karz bhi koi chukane nahi hote,
bas salaamat rahe ye dosti hamari,
ye wo rishte hai jo kabhi purane nahi hote.