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main keha ji.. hun taan aa jo... -
4th September 2004, 11:12 PM
main keha ji.. hun taan aa jo..
main keha ji.. pyar naal hi bula rahi haan.. hun taan aa jo.. main keha ji.. kinni der ho chali ae.. hun taan aa jo.. main keha ji.. hun tan hadd ho gayi.. hun taan aa jo.. main keha ji... hun tan adha kaantta ho gaya net baithe baithe.. hun taan aa jo.. main keha ji.. dil ni lagda thode bina.. hun taan aa jo.. main keha ji.. hun kaleyan guazara nahi mera.. hun taan aa jo.. main keha ji.. hun taan aa jo... lolz... yeh bas wait karte karte likh diya.. socha aap sabse bhi share karun... bit funny!!! lolz.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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7th September 2004, 03:14 AM
    very nice. haan saaf zaahir ho raha ki chat pe wait karte hue likha hoga. good one priya. ek saathi ek saaya Forgive someone, to make 'em smile Forgive someone, to make u smile |
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7th September 2004, 01:07 PM
Priya ji,
KAISI HAIN AAP? KYA BAAT HAI kisika wait karte hue jo aapne likha hai kamaal ka hai..waqai bahut achha likha hai..waise mujhe punjabi utni nahi aati lekin jitni bhi samajh me aayi bahut achhi lagi...daad kubool kijiyega.. take care bye |
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7th September 2004, 06:56 PM
tuhaadi awaaz baithe baithe kana wich aa vaji...te asi aa gaye...lol
priya ji bahut sona likheya je..tuhadi intezaar wich ena pyaar he te phir tuhade pyaar da andaza sadtho nahi laga hona... eda hi likhede raho.. tuhaada apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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7th September 2004, 08:08 PM
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~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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7th September 2004, 08:15 PM
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Take care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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7th September 2004, 08:18 PM
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Tusi na aande tan asi thonu haank maar ke bula hi laina sii.. lolz.. thonu changa lagiya eh, bada vadiya mehsoos hoya mainu vi.. par jo tusi baad vich aakeha hai.. ki intzaar vich pyar and pyar vich pyar.. oh sab to vadiya laegya! Eh taan hun ohi dassange ki keede vich kinna pyar hai.. chalo phair milaange.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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9th September 2004, 07:30 PM
nice one didi
luv ya sabi |
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10th September 2004, 04:37 PM
OE...YAAR E KEE LIKHI JA RAHI HAI....JO DIL VICH AAUNDA HAI LIKH MARDI HAI....OYE MAIN MAR JAVA TENU SHARM - VARM HAI KI NAHI ENJ PYAR DA DHOL PITI JAUNDI HAI....SHARM KAR LE THORI JI...KURIYE...VYAVAN JAUNDI PAI HAI...HOR ANKHA VICH SHARM HI KOINI....AA JAO AA JAO AA JAO KI LA RAKHYA HI...CHAL THORA INTZAAR VI KARLE MARJANIYE....MAR NA JAYI....LE MAINU VE IK PUNJABBI GEET YAAD AA GAYA....PADH ENU TE GUNGUNA K SUNA FIR MAINU....
AYA NI AYA MAHIYE....MAINU VYAVAN WALA... AYA NI AYA MAHIYE....MAINU VYAVAN WALA... CHAL HAT CHALDI HAA.N .....HAAAAAAAAAAAAAN DHYAN RAKHI APNA BHAI JAD TAK O NAHI AUNDA....FER O KHUD HI TERA DHYAN RAKH LAUGA.. KAMLI NA HOYE TA... SUNITA (THREAD WALA NA NAHI LIKHANGI ETHE...) HA ....HA....HA...HA...ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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10th September 2004, 10:36 PM
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~Didi "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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10th September 2004, 10:51 PM
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Didi.. Bahut hi changa jawaab dita hai tusi.. maja aa gaya padh ke..! O jedi sharam di gal karde paye si tusi.. thonu ik gal nahi pata shaayad hale.. main taan pehle hi saal aina naal jaake sharam bech aayi si.. pata hai kinna okha siga bechna.. sirf 2 rupaye kilo vich bikki.. othe saare hi bechann aaye si.. koi khareedan nu taiyaar hi nahi siga.. ais karke... hahahhahaa  Taan hun taan thonu pata lag geya na.. es karke sharam nai aandi.. te rahi vyaah di gal.. koi gal nahi.. main vyah de dina vich sharam karaaye te lai aani ae.. hahhahahaa Tusi jeda gaana gaunda paye si.. sunya hoya taan lagda hai, par change naal yaad nai.. je thonu aanda hai tan pher suna vi dayo.. kathe hi gidda paa laange.. lolz... chalo hun jaani aa.. main taan apne nu saambh ke rakhun.. par tusi vi apna khayaal rakhiyo.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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10th September 2004, 11:01 PM
priiiii,
bahut khubsurat geet.... achha laga yunhi likhti rahna di |
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Thankyou very very very much!!! take care! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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