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Mere dost ko Meri maut ka ilzaam to na do -
20th January 2005, 05:36 PM
Mere dost ko meri maut ka
Meri ruh ko tum gaaliyaan sar-e-aam to na do Mere dost ko meri maut ka ilzaam to na do, Mujhko khabar hai,tumhara haal bhee kuch mujh jaisa hai Mere yaar se apne iss haal ka intqaam to na lo Mere dost ko meri maut ka ilzaam to na do, mere jeete jee Kabhee iss jism ko sakoon na diya Jo sunker meri ruh dahal jaaye,wo bayaan to na do, Mere dost ko meri maut ka ilzaam to na do, Ab marr he gayaa houn to mujhko chain ki saans le lene do, Jahaan ho jist phir dojak wo ruh-e-kayaam to na do , Mere dost ko meri maut ka ilzaam to na do Meri ruh ko tum gaaliyaan sar-r-aam to na do, ruuh-e-kayaam----a house of soul Karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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2nd February 2005, 04:35 PM
karan ji...
mere pass lafz nahi hai aap ki tareef ke liyeee......this one is tooo good... in punjabi....one poet wrote... kuj keha taan hnera jrega kevein...na boleyaa taan shmaa daan ke kehngyee?? mere geetan di maut de aaj ho gyee... mera jeena mere yaar kinj sehngyee??? ya pher............. jdon mileyaa si haan da si savraa jeha... jaan vele tur gya khuda baan ke... thanks for sharing this lovely poem............... |
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Wah wah wah wah |
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Wah wah wah wah -
3rd February 2005, 02:03 PM
Great replly with great words
I m punjabi as well.. really sweet quote you have written ... jaan vele tur gaya khuda bann ke...vah vah ki dil khush kittai tussi aande raina saddi mehfila vich ronak bann ke jaan vele tur na jana tusi khuda bann ke, hahahaha kidding .. well nice replly keep reading i will keep writing izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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3rd February 2005, 02:46 PM
Sirf wah wah hi keh sakte hain karan ji....
Shade in the shadow world |
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Meri perchaai |
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Meri perchaai -
8th February 2005, 01:20 PM
Chale aate ho her kalaam me humare
Saat to tum kuch perchai ki tarah he rehte ho Pleasure to have you here Izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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11th February 2005, 02:41 AM
Wah Karan, Just a great work. Mere dost ko meri maut ka ilzaam to na do...
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Hi parul |
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Hi parul -
13th February 2005, 12:05 PM
I worte it ages ago...
its nice to see you repllying my all posts It shows there is always something spacial in it Keep writing good and bad things about my posts i like it Izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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