Kisiki Yaad Mein!

[reemzi]

1:
raat bhi na guzre jiske bina, guzaru tho kaise guzaru mein din uske bina??

jiski saason mein hain saase humari, jiyu tho kaise jiyu mein uske bina??

jiski dunia hi hai dunia humari, woh dunia hi kya jisme jina mujhe pare uske bina??

2:
yaad aate hein woh hume din bhar, raat ko bhi na soh paate hein hum, tasveer unki rakhte hein hum saath har pal, usko dekh kar hi kush ho jaate hein hum.

3:
unki tasveer liye ghum te hein hum, unhe dekhe bina na neend aaye na mile humko chaen, jise dil diya, uske bin to, na guzre raat na din, isiliye tasveer ko hi gale se lagate hein hum...



hi guys! this is some of my own work, i dono if u guys will like it or not, but i am not tht good at ritin poems, i love readin all ur poems on this site, n they r really nice, this is wot i hve riten, hope u guys do like it, if thers any suggestion u guys can give me plz do not hesitate to send me a private msg, otherwise plz post ur views..

thanx
tc bye

[chaahat]

Reema ji,

Bahut hi pyare sher likhe hain aapne... Bahut dard bhare bhi hain...

Aise hi likhte rahiye..

Khush rahiye..

~Priya

[reemzi]

hi priya ji

how r u?

thanx so much for the encouragement, i rote those for my love, whom i miss a lot. he lives miles away from me, but is always with me...still i miss him very much. neways i wasnt expecting ne reply from ne1, coz i thot its not good. but thanx a lot, really apreciate it...n thanx for the encouragement!!!

THANX A LOT!!!

tc