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Ghazal - Ret ka dil tatol kar dekho -
5th January 2006, 07:14 PM
Sabhi ahbaab ko naye saal ki nek Khahishaat pesh karta huuN. Bade dinoN baad aap se muKhatib huuN, ye Ghazal pesh-e-Khidmat hai. Aapki aara ka intezaar rahega.
GHAZAL Ret ka dil tatol kar dekho Ek paTthar se bol kar dekho Itni chahat hai gar baharoN ki Koi toofaN tatol kar dekho Unke peeche chhupa hua hai kya Apne patte to khol kar dekho Maal-o-daulat se hote haiN bhaari Chand ehsaas tol kar dekho ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge Meri muskaan khol kar dekho Baat uski zabaan meiN to karo Waqt bolega bol kar dekho Mil hi jaaoNga main kahiiN tumko Band lamhoN ko khol kar dekho --------------------------------------------------- Praveen Saxena manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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6th January 2006, 12:29 PM
Praveen Ji,
Aapke naye saal ki nek khahishaat bahut khoob hai. Khaaskar yeh Itni chahat hai gar baharoN ki Koi toofaN tatol kar dekho It's true. It requires guts to fulfill ambitions. Thanks for sharing this with us. ... jab se kisi ne karli hai suraj ki chori aao chal ke suraj dhoondhein aur na mile toh kiran kiran phir jama karein hum aur ik suraj naya banyein -NM |
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nam parh kar hee |
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nam parh kar hee -
14th March 2006, 07:46 PM
nam parha ummeed thee achha kalam parhne ko milega wahee huya bahut pyree baten hain koyee sher kam nahee par ye do yaad rahenge kabhee kisee ko tumhara nam le ke sunayoonga wah ko kitnee baar kahoon pata nahee par jitnee baar likhoon kam lagegee
Anil Maal-o-daulat se hote haiN bhaari Chand ehsaas tol kar dekho ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge Meri muskaan khol kar dekho kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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14th March 2006, 09:36 PM
Praveen Sahib...
itna nayaab heera kaise chupa reh gaya itne din...? dar asal hum zyada dard ki galiyon mein hi phera lagaate hain shayad isiliey...Anil ji ka shukriya jo unhone is heere ko dhuundne ki zehmat ki... Maal-o-daulat se hote haiN bhaari Chand ehsaas tol kar dekho ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge Meri muskaan khol kar dekho dil se mehsoos kiya ja sakta hai apke in ehsaason ko...behad khuubsurat! gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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15th March 2006, 08:58 AM
parveen ji ye gazal maine padhi hai aapki pahile bhi ab fir se aaj ise padhkar achha laga tab kuch karan se is par reply nahi kar paayi thi
aapki ye kalam bhaut hi encourage karne wali lagi sahas aur sach ka anutha sangam aap ki nayi post ke intezar mai shrdh 
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3rd April 2006, 11:17 AM
ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge
Meri muskaan khol kar dekho wah Praveen sir bahut hi badhiya likha hai shabdo ka kam prayog karke bahut kuchh samjha diya hai apne ese hi likte rahiye or mehfil ko sajate rahiye hum ese hi aapko padhte rahegenge or aapse sikhte rahenge bye sir have a nice day keep smilng  ~*~ EK SHAYAR Anjaan~*~ 
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29th July 2015, 05:22 PM
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Praveen ji aapki yeh aik purani shayri par nazar gye to maiN padey bina reh na saki...etne sacche ehsaas.....dil ke khaas kareeb rhi yeh poetry. yeh sher muje apne dil ke bahutttttttttt kareeb lga. ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge Meri muskaan khol kar dekho yu hi likhtey rhiye aur bazm mein aate rhiye. regards .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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31st July 2015, 04:13 PM
Waaaaahhh! !!..bahut khoob kalam praveen ji...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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31st July 2015, 05:53 PM
wah bahut sunder Praveen jee daad.......
Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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1st August 2015, 02:54 PM
waahhhhhhhhhhhh kyaa khoobsurat peshkash hai Saxena saahab.... nihaaytiii khoobsurat
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