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"Fark Zara Sa"- Ek aur chhoti si ghazal aapki nazrr kar raha hoon zara gaur dijiyega! |
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"Fark Zara Sa"- Ek aur chhoti si ghazal aapki nazrr kar raha hoon zara gaur dijiyega! -
3rd May 2009, 04:29 PM
Fark Zara Sa- Ye ek aur chhoti si ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai. Ye ghazal thode zyada gaur se padhiyega kyonki Fark Zara Sa hi hai....zara gaur farmaiyega...
Pehla She'r Pesh Karta Hoon YakeeN Woh Mujh Pe Kiya Karte HaiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai, YakeeN Woh Mujh Mein Kiya Karte HaiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai. Woh Hamaare Charche Kiya Karte HaiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai, Hum Unke Charche MeiN Hua Karte HaiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai. Woh Dawa-e-Mohabbat KareiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai, Woh Mohabbat Daawe Se Karte HaiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai. Mujhe Halaa'T Fakeer Bana De, Ye Ek Baat Hai, Fakeeri Mujhko Bhaa Jaaye, Ye Ek Baat Hai. Qaafiya Ghazal Se Na Jude, Ye Ek Baat Hai, Ghazal Phir Bhi Bann Jaaye, Ye Ek Baat Hai. Takhalluss Apna "Gohar" RakheiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai, "Gohar" Hi Bann JaayeiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai. Gohar Parth- The Polar Bear. Itna Bhi Acha Shayar Nahi Ke Bika KarooN MeiN... http://parth-committment.blogspot.com/ |
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5th May 2009, 01:26 PM
janaab aapkii koshish behad dilchasp lagii !
wakeyii fark zara sa hi rah gaya .. ghazal Qaafia , radeef ki paaband hotii hai ! aur pehle sher se hi aapne radeef Kiya Karte HaiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai, tay kar diya tha ... ghazal meiN kabhi bhi radeef nahi badalta hai ! aap iss pe ghaur farmaayenge to Qalaam aur khoobsoorat banega aur ghazal kahne meiN bhi maza aayega ! bakii ... aapki fikR mujhe pasand aayi ! daad ke saath ! |
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5th May 2009, 02:46 PM
YakeeN Woh Mujh Pe Kiya Karte HaiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai,
YakeeN Woh Mujh Mein Kiya Karte HaiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai. Woh Hamaare Charche Kiya Karte HaiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai, Hum Unke Charche MeiN Hua Karte HaiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai. Woh Dawa-e-Mohabbat KareiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai, Woh Mohabbat Daawe Se Karte HaiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai. Mujhe Halaa'T Fakeer Bana De, Ye Ek Baat Hai, Fakeeri Mujhko Bhaa Jaaye, Ye Ek Baat Hai. Qaafiya Ghazal Se Na Jude, Ye Ek Baat Hai, Ghazal Phir Bhi Bann Jaaye, Ye Ek Baat Hai. Takhalluss Apna "Gohar" RakheiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai, "Gohar" Hi Bann JaayeiN, Ye Ek Baat Hai. AAP KI GAJAL PADH KAR HAM WAH WAH KAREN YE EK BAT HAI HAREK SHABD WAH WAH KAR KE PADHEN YE OR EK BAT HAI..... BAHOOOOOOOOTTTTTT HI BADHIYA HAI KEEP IT UP wo sabhi samil the mere mehboob k mehman namaji par. +91-9978-1111-61
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