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15th January 2004, 07:35 PM
BaHut DinON ke BaaD kucH LikH RaHa HuN YaHaN .. UmmeeD karta HuN DostoN me muaafi ki naRam DiLi PahLe jaisi Hi HoGi ..
ZakHM aasaniyoN se jo BHaR JayeNGE Hum Pe aiHsaaN Wafa ke utaR JayeNGe BeGuNaHee pe meRi Vo RoyeNGE JaB AshQ AshQ aa ke Ruk pe THaHaR jayeNGe MujH ko Dil se NikaLa too socha NaHi Hum jo BHeGhar Hue too kiDHaR JayeNGe MeRi CHaHat ke iss iNtehaN ka safaR KHtaM Ho JaNe De too GuzaR JayeNGe KaL moHaBBat yooN hi mujHse kaHNe laGee Aap maR Jao too vo sawar jayeNGe . . . Kya KHaBaR ki JaNaza MeRa UtHNe se PHOOL RaHoN me unki BHikaR jaayNege .. |
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Re: PHOOL RaHoN me unki BHikaR jaayNege ... -
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nawaab, kya likhu? bahot samay baad yaha tumne kuchh post kiya....... par aisa kiya ke sari kasar jaise ek hi gajal maie poori ki... daant hi nahi paai maie tumhe ke kyun post nahi karte...... ab hamesha padhhne ka mauka dete rahogae isi khwaahish ke sathh meri daad kubul karna |
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15th January 2004, 08:26 PM
Well me to agree with Meena Jee. Hor kee?
 Likhte rahna. Take care. God bless you. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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hi -
15th January 2004, 08:28 PM
bhai khitiz sahab
sab aap ko nwab kahte hain..phir is bat per koi aitraz kiyon kare ga k aap kam ate hain....magar boss aap ne itna nahin btaya k kiya kami ho gayi yahan.. jo ab aap apni her post per itna likhte ho .."bohat dinon bad kuch post kar raha hun"...i will like to request u..if u dont use thes words in ur next post.. ---------_____---------____ is post ki bat hi kiya karain..shayad hmain is k kabil reply tashne k liye bhi kisi aisi raat ka intzar karna pare ga..jis raat ham kuch likhne per majbor ho jate hain.... "MujH ko Dil se NikaLa too socha NaHi Hum jo BHeGhar Hue too kiDHaR JayeNGe .... kiya bat hay boss////aik onchi soch hi aisa sher takhliq kar sakti hay..or aap se ham aisi hi tawqo rakhte hain... aik banjara'''' bas''''' agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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15th January 2004, 08:52 PM
Kshitiz SweeTheart
bahut dino baad aayi hoon bahut accha likhte ho .. waise tum itne din kaha the mein aati thi par tumari koi shayri nahin milti thi mujhe bhool gayeee kya aur tum ko ye bata du mein ki lko aa gayi hoon ab hum dono milege .. ek baat aur kahni hai ki mera no change ho gaya hai ... mein tum ko de doogi .. apana khayaal rakna aur ... sab theek hai na ghar par reply me fast okey honey..... love u |
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15th January 2004, 09:22 PM
Kshitiz lovely..
Ek baat aur kahni thi vo tum ne jo GIFT diya tha vo aaj bhi mere pass hai .. tumari yaad bahut aati hai yarr tum nahin jante ho ki mein kya kar sakti hooN tumare liye... mein sochti hoon ki tum ko koi aur pasand na aa jaye ... plz don,t forget mee love u jaan |
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15th January 2004, 09:41 PM
wah wah...bohat khoob
aap kay alfaaz aisa lagta hai dil main utertay hain... humain bhi shoak hai muskurane ka, magar kya karein zamaney ka bhi roag laga hai dil par would u like to be friends with me.. aap ki nazm bohat achi hai, itne dinon baad kuch acha padhney ko mila... bas aik guzarish hai kay aap hamain bhi apni nazm ki copy bhej dain gay plz........... i'll be really thankful of u.. apna khayal rakheiye gaa......... mujhe to sirf tera waada aazmana tha. |
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15th January 2004, 09:52 PM
MeeNa DD ...
Humne kaha tha .. aapki Baat Hum aGLe kucH janmoN me Nahi taal sakte haiN .. KHaiR .. Chote sse ShayaR ka sabse pahLe hausla afzayi karne ke liye CHota saa DiL Hamesa kaRzDaar RaHeGa .. Bas AB aap mirja SaHaB ko BuLaiye yahaN Chahe kaise BHi ..Vo aapka kaam Hai .. ijazat DiJiye MuskuRate Hue... |
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15th January 2004, 09:56 PM
vah kshitz saheb
MujH ko Dil se NikaLa too socha NaHi Hum jo BHeGhar Hue too kiDHaR JayeNGe ise kehte hain der ayed durust ayed. bohat hi khoob khoob kaha hai aap ne. itna masoom andaaz aur itni saadgi aur tuassur ke saath. bohat khoob . isi tarah aate rahen aur apne shayeri ka joodu jagate rahen. wishing you all the best musharrafhusain |
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15th January 2004, 10:04 PM
SHimuL ..
DostoN me ShukRiya ADaa Nahi kiya jata waRNa zaRoR kaRTa .. ApNa KHyaaL RakHo ... BaNjaRa SaHaB .. LOG too Hume auR BHi Bahut naamoN se Pukarte HaiN .. auR Hum pukaRNe waLoN ki zuBaN me apNe Naam kaa wazooD TaLasHate HaiN ... BHai Kami Humme Hai Jo Iss Buzm se mahRoom tHe itNe DinoN kuch wazaHeiN Hoti HaiN JINHe BayaN NaHi kiya jaa sakta .. Jis GauHaR e AnDaaz se aapNe apNe alfaaz HumaRi Tareef me sajaye .. taa UmaR aiHsaaNMaND RaHuNGa .. AUR .. Bhai KaHTa HuN aapko Too JO BHi kaHNa Hua kaRe HaQ se kaHa ki Jiye ......... request too BeGaaNe kaRte HaiN .. KHairiyat ki GuzaRisH ke saatH |
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15th January 2004, 10:10 PM
DeepaLi Jee ...
JaaN KaR KHusHi Hui ki aap yaHaN fir aa GayiN haiN ... Kyaa Aap BataNe ki jaHmat kaRenGi ki kiss gift kaa aapne ZikR Kiya Hai YaHaN .. Baki .. GhazaL pasanD kaRNe kaa Bahut ShukRiya .. ApNa KHyaaL RaKHiye |
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15th January 2004, 10:19 PM
Asforu ...
humain bhi shoak hai muskurane ka, magar kya karein zamaney ka bhi roag laga hai dil par Wah .. Bahut acHHe KHusHNasiBi HumaRi ki aapNe Hume KaBiL E Dost samJHa .. aapke BaRe me JaaN ke KHusHi HoGi .. TaReeF ke Liye BaHut BaHut ShukRGuzaaR HuN .. KHYaaL RakHiye HausLa Afzayi ki UmmeeD se BaNDHa Hua |
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16th January 2004, 02:47 PM
Kshitiz..mere bhai....yaaR kaii dinno se apse koyii baat nahi kuch nahii..paR dosT ap ki khabaR hume milti rahtii hai meena Bhai se..
 ..hum tau jinndagii k ek dauR se guzar gaye....dost humara cell no. bhii badal gaya hai...hum ap ko call karr k bata denge....ummiD hai ki apka wohii purana no. hoga..nahi mila tau meena bhai se puch lenge....Ok..aur hume pata pada thaa kii apne likhnna bandh karr diya wo kyun bhala...yaaR shayri.com ki ap shaaN hoo....aur ap hii yahan aana badh kardoge tau kaise chalegaa....jahan tak hoo ap ab ye khayaL DIL mai aane nahi doge...OK...DosT harr bar ki tarah ap ne khub likha hai tairf ke channD alfaZ sanju se kabhul karoo....chalta huu..milte hai ap ki aglii post parr....INTZAR mai...ap ka bhai.. KaL moHaBBat yooN hi mujHse kaHNe laGee Aap maR Jao too vo sawar jayeNGe . . . Kya KHaBaR ki JaNaza MeRa UtHNe se PHOOL RaHoN me unki BHikaR jaayNege .. muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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16th January 2004, 05:28 PM
MussHaRRaf BHai ..
DekHiye aaNe Jana kab tak RaHta Hai ... Chote BHai ki TaReef me aapki ALfaaz JuDe .. AuR Kya CHaHiye ShukRiya QaBooL Ki Jiye KHuDa Hafiz |
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16th January 2004, 05:54 PM
SanJoo BHai ..
BeHaD KHusHi Hui aapko DekH ke yaHaN .. BHai us DaRmiyaN HumNe aapse RaBtaa kaRNe ki BaHUt KOsHisH kii ... maGaR kaamyaaB naa Ho sake .. UmmeeD kaRte HaiN HaLaat SuDHaR RaHe HONGe ABHi .. MeeNa BHai JaaN ke kya kaHNe .. BaDe waLe BHai HaiN vo SaBKi kHaBaR RaKHte HaiN .. Hum too UNke KaRinDe HaiN Chote sse .. Aap YaHaN aaye BHai ki HausLa afzayi ke Liye .. TaReef too TaH E DiL se QaBooL Ho Gayii .. AAP Humse se SHukRiya QaBooL FaRmaiye .. APNA KHyaaL RakHiye |
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16th January 2004, 08:26 PM
....KaL moHaBBat yooN hi mujHse kaHNe laGee
Aap maR Jao too vo sawar jayeNGe . . . Kya KHaBaR ki JaNaza MeRa UtHNe se PHOOL RaHoN me unki BHikaR jaayNege .. well! bhut dino k baad hi sahi, bhut kub kikha hai aapney. |
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17th January 2004, 01:17 AM
this is so beautiful...u did a wonderful job
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Waah! Waah! |
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Waah! Waah! -
17th January 2004, 05:10 AM
Tau Nawaab isi liey Nawab huye...
Ek Naa-yaab ghazal likhi hai aapne... ZakHM aasaniyoN se jo BHaR JayeNGE Hum Pe aiHsaaN Wafa ke utaR JayeNGe BeGuNaHee pe meRi Vo RoyeNGE JaB AshQ AshQ aa ke Ruk pe THaHaR jayeNGe MujH ko Dil se NikaLa too socha NaHi Hum jo BHeGhar Hue too kiDHaR JayeNGe Kya baat kahi hai janab...wakai...qabil-e-tareef! MeRi CHaHat ke iss iNtehaN ka safaR KHtaM Ho JaNe De too GuzaR JayeNGe KaL moHaBBat yooN hi mujHse kaHNe laGee Aap maR Jao too vo sawar jayeNGe . . . arre arre arree...tch ....tch.. Kya KHaBaR ki JaNaza MeRa UtHNe se PHOOL RaHoN me unki BHikaR jaayNege .. ab kya kahein...dil ko cheer jaane wala kalaam pesh kiya aapne... daad ke saath....paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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17th January 2004, 07:00 PM
Kshitij ji
padh ke dil ke jajbaat phir jag gaye. beautiful rachana hai aapki. bahut pasand aayi.likhate rahiye. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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18th January 2004, 04:57 PM
kshitiz,
der se reply karne ki muafi chahtee hoon!masroofiat ki waje se kaafi dinon baad aana hua!hamesha ki tarah ghazab ka kalaam likha hai!daad qubool kijiye!aur yunhi likhte rahiyega heena |
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20th January 2004, 05:13 PM
Meetu ..
kaisi Ho ... tumne jawaB Diya BaHut acHHa LaGa .. Take Care Sofia Jee .. TaReef ke Liye BaHut BaHut ShukRiya .. Take Care PaRaS .. Aapke Keemti waQt NikaLNe ke Liye ye GHazaL SHukRGuzaaR Hai AuR Hum BHi .. ApNi KHaiRiyat BaNaye RakHiye .. AkaNt Jee Aap BHi BaHut acHHa LIKHte HaiN BaHut KHUsHi Hui aapka JawaB DekH KaR ..LiKhte RaHiye TaKe care HeeNa Jee .. Kaisi HaiN aap .. AuR aap SuDHreNGi NaHi .. MuJe yaaD Hai maiNe aapse KaHa tHaa ki ye muafi jaise Lafz zuBaN pe mat Laya kaRiye .. APASDARI ME KHALAL PADTA HAI Baki TaReef ke LIye SHukRiya ADaa kaRta HuN .. Aap apNa KHyaaL RakHiye |
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Re: PHOOL RaHoN me unki BHikaR jaayNege ... -
20th January 2004, 05:34 PM
ZakHM aasaniyoN se jo BHaR JayeNGE
Hum Pe aiHsaaN Wafa ke utaR JayeNGe BeGuNaHee pe meRi Vo RoyeNGE JaB AshQ AshQ aa ke Ruk pe THaHaR jayeNGe MujH ko Dil se NikaLa too socha NaHi Hum jo BHeGhar Hue too kiDHaR JayeNGe MeRi CHaHat ke iss iNtehaN ka safaR KHtaM Ho JaNe De too GuzaR JayeNGe KaL moHaBBat yooN hi mujHse kaHNe laGee Aap maR Jao too vo sawar jayeNGe . . . Kya KHaBaR ki JaNaza MeRa UtHNe se PHOOL RaHoN me unki BHikaR jaayNege .. kshitiz bhai sach kehta hoon,,itna umda kalaam shayad hi kabhi guzra ho meri nazron se,,,mein samjh sakta hoon tumhare dil ka dard.,,,isiliye shayad alfaaz bhi dhoonde nahin mil rahe hai taareef ke liye,,,ek ek pankti ne mano dil ko bhed kar hamesha hamesha ke liye jehan mein sama gayi hai..bahoot khoob....aise hi likhte rahiye..hamari dua aapke saath hai -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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23rd January 2004, 07:38 PM
MaNoJ BHai ..
TaReef ke Liye SHukRiya .. Jis aNDaaz se HausLa afzayi ki DiL BaHUt taH E DiL se SHukRGuzaR Hai .. JawaB DeNe me DeRi ke Liye muafi CHaHta HuN ApNa KHyaaL RakHiye .. |
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31st January 2004, 03:11 AM
Salaam huzoor..
kaise haiN bhai aap..? a re bhai jaanta hooN bohat gussa aa raha hoga aapko mujhpar.. aur aapka gussa jayaz bhi hai.. kaan pakad kar muaafi maaNgta hooN bhai.. ab karte haiN kalaam ki baat.. ZakHM aasaniyoN se jo BHaR JayeNGE Hum Pe aiHsaaN Wafa ke utaR JayeNGe sach kaha bhai.. aapka ishara aur dard mehsoos ho raha hai.. ‘matlaa’ hi pur-dard hai.. aage to qayamat hogi.. BeGuNaHee pe meRi Vo RoyeNGE JaB AshQ aa aa ke Ruk pe THaHaR jayeNGe sochne pe majboor kar diya is ashaar ne.. MujH ko Dil se NikaLa too socha NaHi Hum jo BHeGhar Hue too kiDHaR JayeNGe aah bhai.. jhakjor ke rakh diya aapne.. kaash socha hota to yuN fareb ki wazah na poochhni padti… MeRi CHaHat ke iss iNtehaN ka safaR KHtaM Ho JaNe De too GuzaR JayeNGe kya kahuN bhai.. aapki aawaaz ke saath hooN.. KaL moHaBBat yooN hi mujHse kaHNe laGee Aap maR Jao too vo sawar jayeNGe . . . ‘log wafa ka silaa maaNgte haiN mohabbat meiN.. wo mohabbat hai khuda se badhkar.. usne be-wafai ka silaa maaNga to kya gunaah kiya..’ jaan qurbaan.. Kya KHaBaR ki JaNaza MeRa UtHNe se PHOOL RaHoN me unki BHikaR jaayNege .. phir bhi tabaah ho gaye… bohat khoob bhai… kis badhavaasi ke halaat meiN likha hoga aapne ise.. samjhna mushkil hai.. behtareen ghazal hai bhai.. ijazat dijiye.. likhte rahiye aur muskuraate rahiye… |
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1st February 2004, 07:29 AM
adaab kshitiz ji
kasie hai aap aaki post ko late rely kar rahi hoo is ke liye sorry bhut acha likha hai aapne har lafz aur har line mai ik aur hi andaaz hia. bhut dard hai aapki is nazm mai muhabbat aur wafa ki gehrai ko dikhati hai yeh nazam aanken badn karne par ik tasweer si pesh karti hai kee on writin and take care of ur self bye |
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2nd February 2004, 04:45 PM
MusafiR SaHaB ..
NaRaz Vo LoG Hote HaiN JiNHe ye HaQ Diya Jata Hai .. SHayaD RisHtoN ke DaRmiyaN iss HaQ se maHRoom RaHNa meRi taQDeeR BaN Gayii Hai .. Aap ke yaHaN aaNe kii keemat iss kaDaR CHukaNii PaDeGi .. Iss Baat ka GumaN Naa THaa .. KHaiR .. aapki TaReef HumaRe QaD se BaHut UpaR Hai .. jaRa NiCHe aa jaiye BHai .. Hume HumaRi TaReef KHuD Hii NaHi DikHai paD RaHi Hai .. Baki .. aap saLamat RaHiye .. ye Dua HamesHa Hii Humare DiL se aapke Liye NikaLti RaHeGi .. Gum too aap HamesHa Chupaa jate HaiN .. Darr LaGta Hai kiss MOD paR KHusHiyaN CHupaNe kii aaDat LaG jaye .. ApNa KHyaaL RaKHiye .. |
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2nd February 2004, 04:59 PM
RomaNa Jee ..
ApNii masRofiyat HumaRi GhazaL ke satH GuzaRNe kaa SHukRiya .. Aap apNa Keemti waQt NikaaL ke yaHaN aayiN .. AuR itNe KHooBsurat aNDaaz me taReef kii .. BaHut BaHuT SHukRiya .. ApNa KHyaaL RaKHiye |
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3rd February 2004, 06:18 PM
Kshitiz sahab adaab..
aapki yeh gazal meine kuch din qabL padhi thi aur behad pasand bhi ayee thi..lekin reply karnehi wala tha ke connection ne sath choD diya...iss baat se sharminda hoon ke beshak yeh kalaam reconnect karke reply karne ke kaabil hai...lekin kuch masroofiyat aisee thi ke ...PC se uthna paDa.. aap ke ashAar aksar wafa aur mohabbat ko apne har harf se bayaan karte hai.....mustakbil mein bhi aise hi khayalaat ko lafzoN ke sini mein pesh karte rehenge iss ummed ke saath izaazat chahtaa hooon... Talib. |
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12th October 2008, 09:39 PM
wow...........shitiz ji aapki 5 saal purani poetry padi aaj....kaya khoob likha hai aapne....aapki yeh poetry padkar main bahut hairat mein hoon ki, aapki kalam ne aapko etne saal chain se kaise baithne diya.....
 likhtey rahiye kush rahiye .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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13th October 2008, 12:46 AM
Sunitaa jee !
maiN bayaaN nahi kar saktaa huN ki vo daur kaisa thaa ... maine jab pehli martabaa yahaaN kuch likhaa ... to uss kuch ke badle meiN mujhe bepanaah pyaar milaa aur kuch aise rishte bhi mile jo ab taa umar mere saath rahenge ! maine aaj tak shayri ki kisi doosri website ki shakal nahi dekhi hai wazah jis din se SDC pe aana shuruu huaa uss din se yahiiN kaa ho ke rah gayaa .. aakhir insaan bhi pyaar kaa bhookhaa hotaa hai naa ... ye SDC mere liye sirf ek website nahi hai balki mere ghar ke jaisi hai aur ghar to ghar waaloN se hi bantaa hai ! uupar jitne bhi log aapko dikhe ye sab mere itne azeez hai ki maiN bayaaN nahi kar saktaa .. kahte haiN waQt kabhi ek jaisaa nahi rahtaa aaj sabhi apne apne kaamoN meiN masroof haiN ... ! ab aap khud hi bataaiye jab ghar wale hi ghar meiN nahi rahenge to ghar meiN insaan kaa dil kaise lagegaa ? maine pehle bhi aapki taareef kari thii aur aaj bhi kartaa huN ki SDC ke puraane chaahne waaloN ko wapis bulaane ke liye aapki koshisheiN tareef ki hadoN se baahar haiN ! maiN bhi issi ummeed meiN huN ki ek din sabhi ko apne ghar ki yaad aayegi aur hum sab fir se ek saath nazar aayenge ! aameen ! khudaa aapko salaamat rakhe aur barkat bakhshe ! apnaa khyaal rakhiye ! |
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26th November 2008, 05:18 PM
Kshitiz
Brother,, bus itna hi kahna tha,,, samjh gaye ho ge ap..k main kiya kahna chahta hun. Khan agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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29th November 2008, 12:39 PM
KaL moHaBBat yooN hi mujHse kaHNe laGee
Aap maR Jao too vo sawar jayeNGe . . . kya baat kahi hai..magar agar yaisa hi ho to mohhbaat sachi hogi kya??? ek achi gazal tumhari kalam se nikali..daad kubul karna apna khyaal rakhnaaaaaaaa ok शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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