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9th October 2006, 07:15 PM
ghazal
Justajoo koi nahin,aarzoo koi nahin Kis khader tanha hain hum,roo-ba-roo koi nahin Kiya jaanae kis ka khauf hai,khamoosh hai saari fiza Hain zabaanaen sulb sub ki,guftagoo koi nahin Maeri nazraen dhoondti hain,hum safer koi milae Ghoom ker hum daekh aayae,chaar-soo koi nahin Her kisi ko hai fagar,husn per apnae bahut Per haqeeqat daekhiyae,maah-roo koi nahin Raah-zun hain her taraf,jis taraf bhi jaayiae Kaesae manzil paasakeen gaen,raah-roo koi nahin Jo khudi ko baech khaayae,raz unko bhool ja Un ki waqat kuch nahin,aabroo koi nahin Razia Yasmeen RAZ sulb.....dumb maah roo....baeutiful waqat......value |
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9th October 2006, 07:36 PM
wah razia ji kya baat hai ek anokhese andaz me aapne ise pesh kiya aur achha laga ise padhke basaise hi likhti rahiye aap apako parhna achha lagta hai
apna khayal rakhiyega aapka dost dhaval |
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9th October 2006, 10:04 PM
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hi razia how r u? buhut acha likha hai aur mujhe is liye bhi pasand aye ke meray dil ke kafi kareeb mehsoos howa aap ka likha howa keep writing aur inbox to khali ker do janab i m waiting |
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9th October 2006, 10:15 PM
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friend tumhi maeri ae kaawish achchi lagi shukriya dard nae mujh ko diyae tuhfae badae hogayae hain aaj sae darjae badae mail kertae rehna razia |
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9th October 2006, 10:23 PM
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friend tumhi maeri ae kaawish achchi lagi shukriya dard nae mujh ko diyae tuhfae badae hogayae hain aaj sae darjae badae mail kertae rehna razia |
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9th October 2006, 10:52 PM
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moon kaun kehta hai kae tanha hai kisi ki zindagi her kisi kae wastae hai her kisi ki her khushi phool sae zeenat chaman ki,phool sae hai taazgi mehek uttae is ki khushboo sae her kisi ki zindagi tum maeri kawish ko is khaabil samajhti ho to tumhara husn-ae-aqlaaq hai sooraj baghaer kirnoan kae sooraj nahin aur ae bazm aesi kayee sooraj apnae daaman main saemaet ker aagae bardh raha hai khuda is ki raushni ko sada khayam rakhae aamin mail kertae raho razia |
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11th October 2006, 06:38 AM
Justajoo koi nahin,aarzoo koi nahin
Kis khader tanha hain hum,roo-ba-roo koi nahin BAHOOT SUNDAR...!! Kiya jaanae kis ka khauf hai,khamoosh hai saari fiza Hain zabaanaen sulb sub ki,guftagoo koi nahin WAH...!! KAMAAL HAI...!!! BAHOOR SUNDAR RAZIA JI Maeri nazraen dhoondti hain,hum safer koi milae Ghoom ker hum daekh aayae,chaar-soo koi nahin AAPKE YEH SHER...!!DIL KO CHOO JATE HAI...NISHAANAAT BANA JATE HAI..!!! BAHOOT UMDA..!!! Her kisi ko hai fagar,husn per apnae bahut Per haqeeqat daekhiyae,maah-roo koi nahin WAH...!! KYA BAAT KEH DI AAPNE...MEIN KURBAAN HO GAYA IS SHER PAR....LAAJAWAAAB....!!! Raah-zun hain her taraf,jis taraf bhi jaayiae Kaesae manzil paasakeen gaen,raah-roo koi nahin Jo khudi ko baech khaayae,raz unko bhool ja Un ki waqat kuch nahin,aabroo koi nahin SUPERBB!!! APNA EK SHER YAAD AA GAYA.... PATJHAR MEIN JO GIR JAYE HAM WO PATTE NAHIN "KUREEL" MUFLISI KE DAUR MEIN BHI AZMAT KO BACHAYE RAKHNA RAZIA SAHIBA AAPKI KALAM SHAYRI KI MEHFIL MEIN KUCH IS ADDA SE CHALTI HAI JAISE MAIDAAN- E -JUNG MEIN KISI SURMAA KI TALWAAR...!!! BAS FARQ ITNA HAI KI AAPKI KALAM SE GHAAYAL HONE WALA HAR SHAQSH "WAH..!! WAH..!!" KEH UT_TA HAI..!! AAPKA HAR SHER KISI MASHAAL SARIKHA HAI,,JINDAGI KI HAQIQATON PAR ROSHNI DAALTA HUA...AAP ALFAAZON MEIN CHUPA KAR DAULAT PESH KAR DETI HAI..HAM MUFLISON KE LIYE!! MERI DHERON SHUBHKAAMNAYEIN AUR DAAD KUBOOL KIJIYE...LIKHTE RHAIYE...APNA KHAYL RAKHIYE -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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11th October 2006, 09:34 AM
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manoj khushi sae aaj gung hai maeri zabaan kin ujaaloan sae bhar giya maera jahan main zameen per hoon magar na jaanae kiyoon maerae khadam choonae lagae hain aasman main akaeli chal rahi thi raah per maerae peechae chalpada ek caarwaan raz kin shabdoan main biyaan ab kersakae itni khushiyaan mil rahi hain ab yahan manoj such baat to ae hai kae maera dil kehta hai aur main bae ta haasha likhti chali jaati hoon aek martaba ae bhi nahin daekhti kae main nae kiya likh diya hai bus likh daeti hoon aur maeri khush naseebi hai kae mujhae tum sae itni chahat mil rahi hai kae main zindagi ki saari kamiyoan ko bhool hi gayee khuda tumhaen sada khush rakhae aamin azia |
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11th October 2006, 09:52 AM
Justajoo koi nahin,aarzoo koi nahin
Kis khader tanha hain hum,roo-ba-roo koi nahin Maeri nazraen dhoondti hain,hum safer koi milae Ghoom ker hum daekh aayae,chaar-soo koi nahin Raah-zun hain her taraf,jis taraf bhi jaayiae Kaesae manzil paasakeen gaen,raah-roo koi nahin Jo khudi ko baech khaayae,raz unko bhool ja Un ki waqat kuch nahin,aabroo koi nahin razia jiiiii, salaam,kaisi hain aap???aaj kayi din baad mauka mila is site per aane ka aur meri khuskismati ke aap ke is nayab kalaam par meri nazar padi.kya kehne hai aapke.har sher bemisaal hai,lajawaab hai.haqeeqat-e-zindagi ko bayan karna koi aapse seekhe.bahut acha laga padhkar.upar ke diye yeh sher to bas chuuu gaye dilko. likhti rahiye yunhin. khayal rakhiye apna.. allah hafiz. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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