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24th October 2008, 05:46 PM
Dillagi us rah pe le ayi hai
Her taraf gunjti shehnai hai Gum ki barish ka ab malal nahi Teri chahat se jindgi nahai hai kis se poochey derd-e-dil ki dawa sari duniya hi tamashai hai Tarap ke dil ne jab bhi tujhe di awaaz Her aah pe ankh meri bhar ayi hai Hath uthtey hai jab ibadat me"SONA" khuda me surat-e-yara nazar ayi hai |
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24th October 2008, 06:10 PM
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swati ji yun to ab bazm mein aana nahin ho pata,,aaj yun hi is aur chala aaya aur aapka naam dekh kar chaunk gaya mein aur khud ko yahan aane se nahin rok saka..aapki gazal ek arse baad padh raha hoon,,magar lazzat wahi paayi hai..mehakte hue lafz aur behte hue jazbaat..har sher khubsurat!!! meri daad kubool farmaiye -manoj kureel karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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24th October 2008, 06:38 PM
Aadaab Swati ji
Aapki gazal padhi bahut khoob likha hai aapne meri daad kubool kijiye Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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24th October 2008, 06:44 PM
bohat acha likha hai aap ne ahsasaat bohat ache lage ye shair bohat acha laga.........
Tarap ke dil ne jab bhi tujhe di awaaz Her aah pe ankh meri bhar ayi hai yunhi likhti rahiyega khush rahain apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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27th October 2008, 04:01 PM
manoj ji
apki is tareef ke liye shukriya..han aaj kafi arse baad yahan shirkat ki hai... |
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27th October 2008, 04:02 PM
kashif ji..
apki is hausla afzai ke liye shukriya! |
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27th October 2008, 04:06 PM
mani ji
apke jo sher pasand kiya uske liye shukriya |
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29th October 2008, 04:36 PM
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swati ji bahut dino bada apko pada..bahut dil ko chhune wala qalaam likha hai sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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29th October 2008, 04:52 PM
khoobsurat ahsaas pesh karne ke liye hamari taraf se daad kabool kijiye....accha laga aapko padna.
aate raha kijiye  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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29th October 2008, 06:36 PM
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kaisi hai.n aap? deepawali ki subhkaamnaaye.n... welcome back... aap ko paDhne me.n hamesha kuchh nayapan nazar aata hai... isiliye aap shayri.com par hamaari pasandidah poet me.n shumaar karti hai.n.. aur yahaa.n yeh aashaar behad behad pasand aaye! kis se poochey derd-e-dil ki dawa sari duniya hi tamashai hai Tarap ke dil ne jab bhi tujhe di awaaz Her aah pe ankh meri bhar ayi hai bohat khuub! yuu.n hi likhti rahe.n... Mayank |
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29th October 2008, 07:22 PM
sakhi ji..
apki is tareef aur pasand ke liye shukriya! |
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29th October 2008, 07:36 PM
sunita ji
apne pasand kiya ur apko parhna accha laga ye hi bahut hai..shukriya! |
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29th October 2008, 07:39 PM
mayank ji
apko aisa lagta hai,,ki mera likha apko pasand hai,,aur apki pasand me main bhi shumar hoon,,is ke liye dil se shukriya! |
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30th October 2008, 12:38 PM
Dillagi us rah pe le ayi hai Her taraf gunjti shehnai hai Gum ki barish ka ab malal nahi Teri chahat se jindgi nahai hai Very nice expression... kis se poochey derd-e-dil ki dawa sari duniya hi tamashai hai Tarap ke dil ne jab bhi tujhe di awaaz Her aah pe ankh meri bhar ayi hai Beautiful... Hath uthtey hai jab ibadat me"SONA" khuda me surat-e-yara nazar ayi hai[/QUOTE] Very very nice... Hi Swati, Kaisi hain aap? Muddaton baad aaj aapko padha... aur yakeen maaniye aaj bhi wohi dhaar hai aapki poetry me... Dil ko chhoo jaate hain aapke aashaar... meri dil se daad kubool kijiyega... likhti rahiye... aati rahiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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31st October 2008, 05:36 PM
pulkit ji
apki hauslafazai ke liye shukriya..!waise aaj kafi arse baad likhne ki koshish ki hai ..agar pasand aya hai to apki inayat hai... |
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31st October 2008, 06:10 PM
very nice and touching......................... me yaha nayi hu maine yeh shayri padhi bohut acha hai bohut hi pyara ehsaas hai
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1st November 2008, 03:52 PM
sanam ji
aapne mere ashrar pasand kiye uske liye apka shukriya! |
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4th November 2008, 02:50 PM
swati jee !
bahut achhi ghazal kahi aapne .. mujhe sabhi ashaar khoob pasand aaye ! umeed kartaa huN ye rawaani barQaraar rahegi ! tareef Qabool ki jiye ! likhti rahiye ! |
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9th November 2008, 09:46 PM
kshitiz ji
apko in lafzon me agar kuch accha laga to ye rawani yun hi berqarar rahegi shukriya |
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13th November 2008, 06:16 PM
Tum Zinda ho abhi tak...!
isi baat ki khushi kam nahi .. ki tumhara likha padh bhi liya .. ab to din safal ho gya... kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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19th November 2008, 04:47 PM
kunal ji
abhi itni jaldi merne wali nahi hoon....aap ne kya socha tha?ok..shukriya! |
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19th November 2008, 06:33 PM
swat ji,
aapka like alfaas bahot bahot aachhe lage.... har labz me dard zalkta hai yuhi likhte rahiye very very beutifull. Bhagwan |
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22nd November 2008, 01:54 PM
kis se poochey derd-e-dil ki dawa
sari duniya hi tamashai hai Tarap ke dil ne jab bhi tujhe di awaaz Her aah pe ankh meri bhar ayi hai bahut accha likha hai aapne...yuhi likhti rahiye... zainy |
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24th November 2008, 04:18 PM
lalwani ji
apko mere alfaz acchey lagey iske liye shukriya |
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24th November 2008, 04:28 PM
zainy ji
apki is hausla afzai ke liye dil se shukriya |
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