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8th July 2016, 11:01 AM
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Kya sher pesh kiya hai saba sahiba
Laja-waab kar diya aapne
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2nd sher
Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)
Parastaar= worshipper
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8th July 2016, 03:21 PM
Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن
مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن
1221,1221,1221,1222
1221,1221,1221,1222
MATLA
Mai ne ishq kiya koee gunehgaar nahi hu mai
Magar ishq ke asbaaq se bedaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)
1st sheir
Muhabet mein wafa kerna ager jurm hi tehrey toh
Sanam maan lo tum bhi k Khatakaar nahi hu mai
(Sabaa)
2nd sher
Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)
Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)
Parastaar= worshipperParastaar= worshipper
3rd sher
Muhabbat me lutayi hai yahaa.n maine sabhi cheezein
Ki imaan ko bhi bech dun taiyar nahi hun main(madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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12th July 2016, 07:11 AM
[QUOTE=Madhu 14;493650][CENTER][SIZE="4"][COLOR="Green"]
Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن
مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن
1221,1221,1221,1222
1221,1221,1221,1222
MATLA
Mai ne ishq kiya koee gunehgaar nahi hu mai
Magar ishq ke asbaaq se bedaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)
1st sheir
Muhabet mein wafa kerna ager jurm hi tehrey toh
Sanam maan lo tum bhi k Khatakaar nahi hu mai
(Sabaa)
2nd sher
Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)
Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)
Parastaar= worshipperParastaar= worshipper
3rd sher
Muhabbat me lutayi hai yahaa.n maine sabhi cheezein
Ki imaan ko bhi bech dun taiyar nahi hun main(madhu)
4th Sher
Mukammal nahi hoti meri haajat ye bahaaro se
Mujhe rizq-e-wafa chahiye gulzaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)
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15th July 2016, 11:50 AM
Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن
مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن
1221,1221,1221,1222
1221,1221,1221,1222
MATLA
Mai ne ishq kiya koee gunehgaar nahi hu mai
Magar ishq ke asbaaq se bedaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)
1st sheir
Muhabet mein wafa kerna ager jurm hi tehrey toh
Sanam maan lo tum bhi k Khatakaar nahi hu mai (Sabaa)
2nd sher
Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)
Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)
Parastaar= worshipperParastaar= worshipper
3rd sher
Muhabbat me lutayi hai yahaa.n maine sabhi cheezein
Ki imaan ko bhi bech dun taiyar nahi hun main (madhu)
4th Sher
Mukammal nahi hoti meri haajat ye bahaaro se
Mujhe rizq-e-wafa chahiye gulzaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)
5th Sher
humara jee sulaghtaa hai zamaana beasar rehta
khata ki hai zamaane ne yun bezaar nahi hu mai (Mast)
Qasid
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क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
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Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن
مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن
1221,1221,1221,1222
1221,1221,1221,1222
MATLA
Mai ne ishq kiya koee gunehgaar nahi hu mai
Magar ishq ke asbaaq se bedaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)
1st sheir
Muhabet mein wafa kerna ager jurm hi tehrey toh
Sanam maan lo tum bhi k Khatakaar nahi hu mai (Sabaa)
2nd sher
Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)
Be-shak tum se mohabbat hai khuda tum ko nahi maana
Mohabbat ka hu deewaana parastaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)
Parastaar= worshipperParastaar= worshipper
3rd sher
Muhabbat me lutayi hai yahaa.n maine sabhi cheezein
Ki imaan ko bhi bech dun taiyar nahi hun main (madhu)
4th Sher
Mukammal nahi hoti meri haajat ye bahaaro se
Mujhe rizq-e-wafa chahiye gulzaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)
5th Sher
humara jee sulaghtaa hai zamaana beasar rehta
khata ki hai zamaane ne yun bezaar nahi hu mai (Mast)
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Waah!!Bahut khoob ashaar doston.......daad qubool karein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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15th July 2016, 03:21 PM
6th sher
Qiyaase na laga dekh ke makhmoor nigaaho ko
Hai ye kaif-e-mohabbat koi sarshaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)
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15th July 2016, 07:55 PM
Aakhri sher koi pesh karey taake ghazal mukammal ho sakey
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16th July 2016, 05:40 PM
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6th sher
Qiyaase na laga dekh ke makhmoor nigaaho ko
Hai ye kaif-e-mohabbat koi sarshaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)
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Bahut umdaa sher hua hai Mujahid bhai daad qubool farmiyegaa
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क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
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18th July 2016, 10:48 PM
Aakhri sher jald pesh karey
Nayi behr ka aaghaaz karna hai
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21st July 2016, 04:18 PM
6th sher
Qiyaase na laga dekh ke makhmoor nigaaho ko
Hai ye kaif-e-mohabbat koi sarshaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)[/QUOTE]
7th sher
Kabhi aazma kar dekho hamey apni mohabbat mai
Tumhe sab pata kya saahib-e-kirdaar nahi hu mai (MUJAHID)
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21st July 2016, 04:21 PM
Ghazal yaha mukammal hoti hai
Aap sab ka shukriya shirkat karne ke liye
Bohat jald pesh hota hu nayi behr ke saath
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21st July 2016, 04:24 PM
Ghazal yaha mukammal hoti hai
Aap sab ka shukriya shirkat karne ke liye
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21st July 2016, 05:16 PM
buhet ache ghzal
Agli beher ka intezar rahega
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21st July 2016, 08:20 PM
Dosto pesh-e-khidmat hu mai nayi behar ke saath
Umeed hai aap sab shirkat karenge
BEHAR:
Behar-e-ramal musaddas mahzuuf/maqsuur
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212
Matla:
Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko(MUJAHID)
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21st July 2016, 09:58 PM
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Dosto pesh-e-khidmat hu mai nayi behar ke saath
Umeed hai aap sab shirkat karenge
BEHAR:
Behar-e-ramal musaddas mahzuuf/maqsuur
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212
Matla:
Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko(MUJAHID)
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Umdaa aaghaaz hua hai janaab bahut bahut daad qubool farmaiye is haseen sher pe
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
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BEHAR:
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Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212
Matla:
Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)
1st sher:
jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)
Qasid
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
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21st July 2016, 10:25 PM
BEHAR:
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Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212
Matla:
Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)
1st sher:
jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)
2nd sher
aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)
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21st July 2016, 11:34 PM
Bohat hi umda ashaar likhe hai aap dono ne mast sahab aur sarika ji
Achha laga sarika ji aapne bazm mai shirkat farmayi
Muntazir hai hum aur bhi ashaar aapke jaanib se aaney ko
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BEHAR:
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Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212
Matla:
Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)
1st sher:
jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)
2nd sher
aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)
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waah....bahut hee khoob behr di hai mujahid ji..aur uspe kamaal ke sher pesh kiye hain doston....bahut khoobsoorti se badh rahi hain ek haseen ghazal ki taraf..sabhi ko daad au mubarakbaad pesh hai...
Yun hee bazm roshn rakhein...
Apki
Madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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22nd July 2016, 06:10 PM
Ab aapki baari hai madhu sahiba sher pesh karne ki
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Agla sher pesh hai doston...
BEHAR:
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Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212
Matla:
Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)
1st sher:
jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)
2nd sher
aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)
3rd sher
Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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23rd July 2016, 05:35 AM
vah buhet achee beher aor sub ne buhet ache ashaar paesh kiye hai
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23rd July 2016, 09:02 AM
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Agla sher pesh hai doston...
BEHAR:
Behar-e-ramal musaddas mahzuuf/maqsuur
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212
Matla:
Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)
1st sher:
jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)
2nd sher
aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)
3rd sher
Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)
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Sarika aur Madhu behad umdaa sher lekar aaye hai is baar to ghazal jald hi muqammal hogi.....daad qubool farmaye
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[QUOTE=Madhu 14;493871]Agla sher pesh hai doston...
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Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212
Matla:
Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)
1st sher:
jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)
2nd sher
aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)
3rd sher
Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)
4th sher
Kab talak phirta rahega dar-ba-dar
Koi samjhaye dil- e -deewaaney ko
MUJAHID
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[QUOTE=Mujahid Ali;493883]
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Agla sher pesh hai doston...
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BEHAR:
Behar-e-ramal musaddas mahzuuf/maqsuur
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212
Matla:
Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)
1st sher:
jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)
2nd sher
aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)
3rd sher
Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)
4th sher
Kab talak phirta rahega dar-ba-dar
Koi samjhaye dil- e -deewaaney ko
MUJAHID
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Waah...bahot khoob mujahid sahab......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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23rd July 2016, 11:55 PM
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Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
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فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212
Matla:
Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)
1st sher:
jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)
2nd sher
aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)
3rd sher
Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)
4th sher
Kab talak phirta rahega dar-ba-dar
Koi samjhaye dil- e -deewaaney ko
MUJAHID
5 sher
Kam karo chaahat ka apni kuch asar
Kuch nasha chadne do iss maikhane ko (masti)
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BEHAR:
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Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ila'tun, Faa'ilun/Faa'ilaan
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فاعِلاتُن فاعِلاتُن فاعِلُن /فاعِلان
2122, 2122, 212
2122, 2122, 212
Matla:
Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)
1st sher:
jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)
2nd sher
aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)
3rd sher
Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)
4th sher
Kab talak phirta rahega dar-ba-dar
Koi samjhaye dil- e -deewaaney ko
MUJAHID
5 sher
Kam karo chaahat ka apni kuch asar
Kuch nasha chadne do iss maikhane ko (masti)
6th sher
Kya karein ?makhmoor ankhei.n kah gayii.n
Har koi jane mere afsaane ko... (madhu)
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24th July 2016, 04:48 PM
Ik sher bacha hai ghazal ko mukammal karne ke liye
Saba ji aap pesh kijiye
Baaqi membraan se bhi guzaarish hai
Aakhri sher pesh karey
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24th July 2016, 11:20 PM
Matla:
Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)
1st sher:
jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)
2nd sher
aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)
3rd sher
Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)
4th sher
Kab talak phirta rahega dar-ba-dar
Koi samjhaye dil- e -deewaaney ko
MUJAHID
5 sher
Kam karo chaahat ka apni kuch asar
Kuch nasha chadne do iss maikhane ko (masti)
6th sher
Kya karein ?makhmoor ankhei.n kah gayii.n
Har koi jane mere afsaane ko... (madhu)
Makta
Jaa.n luta kar bhi to humko kya mila
Wo to aaye hi nahi dafnane ko (masti)
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24th July 2016, 11:22 PM
Maafi chahungi mujahid bhai. Khayaal aaya to raha nahi gaya.
Chaliye ab matla hi kehne dijiye saba ji ko.
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25th July 2016, 07:20 AM
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Originally Posted by masti
Matla:
Shaam hote chal diye maikhaney ko
Dekhtey nazdeek se paimaney ko (MUJAHID)
1st sher:
jaam mein chalke hai yun chehra tera
kya bacha hai ab mujhe samjhaaney ko (Mast)
2nd sher
aap ke qisse chale the raat bhar
ab bacha kya bazm mein batlaaney ko (masti)
3rd sher
Mahfil e jana ke layak kuch na tha
Dil hee lekar aa gaye nazrane ko(madhu)
4th sher
Kab talak phirta rahega dar-ba-dar
Koi samjhaye dil- e -deewaaney ko
MUJAHID
5 sher
Kam karo chaahat ka apni kuch asar
Kuch nasha chadne do iss maikhane ko (masti)
6th sher
Kya karein ?makhmoor ankhei.n kah gayii.n
Har koi jane mere afsaane ko... (madhu)
Makta
Jaa.n luta kar bhi to humko kya mila
Wo to aaye hi nahi dafnane ko (masti)
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Waahh!! Makhta wakai hasil e ghazal raha sarika..bahut khoob....
Ek khoobsoorat ghazal par sabhi ko mubarakbaad......
Agli behr ka intzaar rahega....
Shukriya..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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25th July 2016, 09:01 AM
Iss mai muaafi kaisa sarika ji
Sher aap pesh karey ya saba ji kya farq pardhta
Ghazal jaari rahey voh zaroori hai
Chaliye agli behr ka intezaar hai saba ji
Aap jald se jald pesh karey
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26th July 2016, 11:19 PM
Koocha-e-kalaam agli behr ka muntazir hai
Koi pesh karey saba ji Aap kaha ho
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27th July 2016, 08:54 PM
Agli ghazal ke liye matla pesh hai doston...
Behr
1212/1212/1212/1212
Na chahtein na rahtein na dil me phir sukoon hai
Hai lutf e zindagi bhi kam agar nahi junoon hai
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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27th July 2016, 11:20 PM
Quote:
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Agli ghazal ke liye matla pesh hai doston...
Behr
1212/1212/1212/1212
Na chahtein na rahtein na dil me phir sukoon hai
Hai lutf e zindagi bhi kam agar nahi junoon hai
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Bahut khoob matla pesh kiya hai Madhu aapne ek aur pur asar ghazal ka aaghaaz karne ke liye shukriyaa...jald haazir hota hoon ek sher ke saath
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27th July 2016, 11:43 PM
1st sher
Tujhe batau bhi toh kya be-taab dil ki keyfiyat
Na aaye neend raato ko ye ishq ka fusoon hai (MUJAHID)
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28th July 2016, 12:25 PM
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Bahut khoob matla pesh kiya hai Madhu aapne ek aur pur asar ghazal ka aaghaaz karne ke liye shukriyaa...jald haazir hota hoon ek sher ke saath
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Shukriya apka...........
Zaroor aaiyega...bazm muntzir hai apke liye....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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28th July 2016, 12:27 PM
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1st sher
Tujhe batau bhi toh kya be-taab dil ki keyfiyat
Na aaye neend raato ko ye ishq ka fusoon hai (MUJAHID)
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Waah!! bahut khoob sher pesh kiya hai mujahid sahab........
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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29th July 2016, 05:12 PM
vah madhu ji oomda beher oar sher
jald likhne ki koshish krti hum mai bhi
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Agli ghazal ke liye matla pesh hai doston...
Behr
1212/1212/1212/1212
Na chahtein na rahtein na dil me phir sukoon hai
Hai lutf e zindagi bhi kam agar nahi junoon hai
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29th July 2016, 05:14 PM
buhet achaa sher mujahid sahib...............................
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1st sher
Tujhe batau bhi toh kya be-taab dil ki keyfiyat
Na aaye neend raato ko ye ishq ka fusoon hai (MUJAHID)
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