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waaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!
Ananthji,
kamaal ke sher laate haiN aap................
dheroN dheroN daad..........................
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Waaaaahhhhhhhhh! umdaa....jij aap to ek se badhkar ek sher bana rahe hain impressive
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17th September 2014, 11:03 AM
aree wahhhh...bahut khoobsurat sher likhe aap sabne, Aadeil bhai, HSN bhai, Pari, Anant ji, Sarika ji, Naaz
Naaz ka to muje pta hi nahi tha ki esko shayri bhi aati hai muje lagta tha ki esko bas baate karni aati hai Naaz, bahut accha likhti ho tum bhi
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17th September 2014, 11:06 AM
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WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Aadeil sahab....aap to chhah gaye
pura......fusoon-e-aadeil k liye dheron daad
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Ananthji,
aapka bahot bahot shukriya..........................
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17th September 2014, 11:10 AM
Shukriya Sunitaji......
aur Naaz ke iis andaaz pe ek sher.....
naazuk dil rahe to rahe khaaksaar* kitna
aaya kisii pe aaj to shaayar banaa diyaa
(* humble)
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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17th September 2014, 11:12 AM
Shaayara.................
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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17th September 2014, 11:15 AM
haa haa haa................
ab kabhii kabhii beher ke hisaab se gender meN chhut leni paRtii hai, Hassanbhai ........................, aur phir dil toh hameshaa muzakkar hi hota hai? phir wo kisii mard kaa ho ya zann ka ho!
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17th September 2014, 11:15 AM
Bohat bohat shukriyaaH Baaji...
bas Allah se dua hai aap ka mohabbat bhara saath youn hi bana rahe (Ameen)..
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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17th September 2014, 11:16 AM
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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17th September 2014, 11:18 AM
aapka bahot bahot shukriya.....................
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17th September 2014, 12:04 PM
Naaz, agar tu dil se muje Dii maanti hai to tere kaan kheechne ka haq mera hamesha rhega, chahe tu poori bhi sudar jaye..to bhi
agar nahi maanti dil se to keh de...
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17th September 2014, 01:03 PM
Bohat bohat shukriya Dii......
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17th September 2014, 01:05 PM
kuch is tarah se hai zindagi meri zulmat-gaziin*
k jumbish-e-mizhgaan* tak hoti nahi nuur-e-azal* se
*in darkness
*movement of the eyelashes
*eternal light
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
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waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
Hassanbhai,
kya khub baat kahi hai......................
bilkul har insaan kii ye haalat hai......
dheroN dheroN daad..............
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waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!
Hassanbhai,
ek se badhkar ek ashaar haiN....
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Waaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!! Hassan bhai...reality at its best ....dheron daad
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teh-e-dil se manoon hoon jaaN se azeez dostoN ka................
khush rahiye...
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17th September 2014, 02:13 PM
hmmmm........yehi karna padega ab to
vaise muje yakeen hai pehle se hi
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17th September 2014, 02:16 PM
"uske Zulm-o-sitam be-intehaa hai,
hamara bhi sabr kamaal ka hai "
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"uske Zulm-o-sitam ki hadd nahi koi,
mere laboN par bhi shikwa nahi koi"
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"uske Zulm-o-sitam be-intehaa hai,
hamara bhi sabr kamaal ka hai "
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"uske Zulm-o-sitam ki hadd nahi koi,
mere laboN par bhi shikwa nahi koi"
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18th September 2014, 11:11 AM
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18th September 2014, 11:12 AM
azaab-e-rasn-o-daar-e-afsuun-e-baada-kashii* ke baad
qafas ke zulmatoN se kyuN pashemaaN hai arey insaan
(*tyrrany of gallows of enchantment of drinking)
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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azaab-e-rasn-o-daar-e-afsuun-e-baada-kashii* ke baad
qafas ke zulmatoN se kyuN pashemaaN hai arey insaan
(*tyrrany of gallows of enchantment of drinking)
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WAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!! Bohat khoob Aadeil sahab....dheron daad
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zulmatoN se nikal, hasti subha aaye hai,
dekh tere liye khoobsurat din laaye hai
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ZulmateiN bhi girtiN haiN rehmat bankar
Jab ashqoN ko chupaney ki jagah nahiN milti
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22nd September 2014, 12:03 AM
doston … waah !! aap sab ne apne khoobsurat aashaar ki roshni se lafz “zulmat” ko kis qadar darakshaan kar diya hai ! bahaut khoob ! aap sab ko meri jaanib se dheron dheron daad aur duaein !
bas ab kuchh hi palon mein naya lafz le kar haazir hota hoon.
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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22nd September 2014, 12:42 AM
doston, aadaab
fusoon-e-alfaaz ka silsila aage bardhaate huwe, is baar ka lafz hai MAHV
“mahv” means being deeply absorbed or engrossed in something.
mere hisaab se, lafz "MAHV" mein "AH" ka pronounciation waise hi hai jaise lafz "SHAHR" (city) ya "ZAHR" (poison) mein "AH" ka pronounciation hai. any other opinion or way of explaining is most welcome.
to har baar ki tarah hum lafz MAHV par ghaur karenge apne qalaam mein us ka istemaal kar ke, aur us par guftagoo kar ke.
shayari ki duniya mein “mahv” hone ke liye cheezon ki kami naheen hai … misaal ke taur pe mahv-e-gham, mahv-e-nazaara, mahv-e-yaad, mahv-e-chaman, mahv-e-ishq, mahv-e-yaas, mahv-e-khwaab, mahv-e-hairat, mahv-e-ada wagairah wagairah wagairah. shayar log to jahaan dekho mahv ho jaate hain, mahv hone ke liye ek cheez dhoondho to hazaaron mil jayengeen
on a serious note, lafz “mahv” is a very expressive and evocative word to describe the state of being completely absorbed / engrossed / lost / fascinated in something.
chaliye dekhte haiN lafz “mahv” par ustaad shora ke kuchh khoobsurat aashaar
mahv itna bhi n ho ishq-e-butaaN meiN ai “zauq”
chaahiye bande ko har waqt Khuda yaad rahe
Zauq
ajab n tha ke maiN begaana-e-alam ho kar
tere jamaal ki raanaaiyoN meiN kho rehta
tera gudaaz badan teri neem-baaz aaNkheiN
inhee haseen fasaanoN meiN mahv ho rehta
Sahir Ludhianvi
(mashhoor nazm “kabhi kabhi mere dil meiN khayaal aata hai” se)
hum aise mahv-e-nazaara n the ke hosh aata
magar tumhaare taghaaful ne hoshiyaar kiya
Daagh Dehlevi
kya huwe wo din ki mahv-e-aarzoo the husn-o-ishq
rabt tha donoN meiN go rabt-e-shanaasaayee n tha
Hasrat Mohani
kahaaN ke naale kahaaN ki aaheiN jamee haiN un ki taraf nigaaheiN
kuchh is tarah mahv-e-yaad hooN maiN ke fursat-e-yak-nafas naheeN hai
Shakeel Badaayuni
aaNkh jo kuchh dekhtee hai lab pe aa sakta naheeN
mahv-e-hairat hooN ki duniya kya se kya ho jaayegee
Iqbal
az azal taa ba abad mahv-e-tamaasha hona
maiN wo hooN jis ko n marna hai n paida hona
Asghar Gondvi
jo kuchh hai mahv-e-shokhi-e-abroo-e-yaar hai
aaNkhoN ko rakh ke taak pe dekha kare koyee
Ghalib
tamaasha ke ai mahv-e-aaeena-daaree
tujhe kis tamanna se hum dekhte haiN
Ghalib
“mahv” ki taqti mere hisaab se hai 21, any other opinion is welcome.
lafz “mahv” par mashq-e-sukhan ka silsila hum jaaree rakkhenge agle 7 dinon tak yaani 28th Sept raat 10:00 PM India time ya 4:30 PM GMT.
to chaliye, intezaar kis baat ka hai. apni shayari ke zariye lafz “mahv” mein mahv ho jaate hain.
duaon ke saath
zarraa
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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mahv-e-deed-e-khiraam meiN n ye hosh
ke ye aana tera ke jaana hai
- zarraa
(deed-e-khiraam = watching the graceful walk)
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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22nd September 2014, 09:43 AM
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WAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!! Bohat khoob Aadeil sahab....dheron daad
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Shukriya, Ananthji...................
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Waaaahhhhh! awesome very romantic...............
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Waaahhhhh! dear ye sher bahot khoob raha bahot awesome khayaal hai....
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Thanks Naaz...................
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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ZulmateiN bhi girtiN haiN rehmat bankar
Jab ashqoN ko chupaney ki jagah nahiN milti
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bahot khub, Naaz...............
a wonderful thought............
dheroN daad......................
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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zulmatoN se nikal, hasti subha aaye hai,
dekh tere liye khoobsurat din laaye hai
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waaaaaaahhhh... dii,
bahot hi khubsurat khayaal hai..............
dheroN daad.........
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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mahv-e-deed-e-khiraam meiN n ye hosh
ke ye aana tera ke jaana hai
- zarraa
(deed-e-khiraam = watching the graceful walk)
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
Zarraasaab,
bahot hi umda sher hai....................
dheroN dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad................
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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22nd September 2014, 09:59 AM
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doston, aadaab
fusoon-e-alfaaz ka silsila aage bardhaate huwe, is baar ka lafz hai MAHV
“mahv” means being deeply absorbed or engrossed in something.
mere hisaab se, lafz "MAHV" mein "AH" ka pronounciation waise hi hai jaise lafz "SHAHR" (city) ya "ZAHR" (poison) mein "AH" ka pronounciation hai. any other opinion or way of explaining is most welcome.
to har baar ki tarah hum lafz MAHV par ghaur karenge apne qalaam mein us ka istemaal kar ke, aur us par guftagoo kar ke.
shayari ki duniya mein “mahv” hone ke liye cheezon ki kami naheen hai … misaal ke taur pe mahv-e-gham, mahv-e-nazaara, mahv-e-yaad, mahv-e-chaman, mahv-e-ishq, mahv-e-yaas, mahv-e-khwaab, mahv-e-hairat, mahv-e-ada wagairah wagairah wagairah. shayar log to jahaan dekho mahv ho jaate hain, mahv hone ke liye ek cheez dhoondho to hazaaron mil jayengeen
on a serious note, lafz “mahv” is a very expressive and evocative word to describe the state of being completely absorbed / engrossed / lost / fascinated in something.
chaliye dekhte haiN lafz “mahv” par ustaad shora ke kuchh khoobsurat aashaar
mahv itna bhi n ho ishq-e-butaaN meiN ai “zauq”
chaahiye bande ko har waqt Khuda yaad rahe
Zauq
ajab n tha ke maiN begaana-e-alam ho kar
tere jamaal ki raanaaiyoN meiN kho rehta
tera gudaaz badan teri neem-baaz aaNkheiN
inhee haseen fasaanoN meiN mahv ho rehta
Sahir Ludhianvi
(mashhoor nazm “kabhi kabhi mere dil meiN khayaal aata hai” se)
hum aise mahv-e-nazaara n the ke hosh aata
magar tumhaare taghaaful ne hoshiyaar kiya
Daagh Dehlevi
kya huwe wo din ki mahv-e-aarzoo the husn-o-ishq
rabt tha donoN meiN go rabt-e-shanaasaayee n tha
Hasrat Mohani
kahaaN ke naale kahaaN ki aaheiN jamee haiN un ki taraf nigaaheiN
kuchh is tarah mahv-e-yaad hooN maiN ke fursat-e-yak-nafas naheeN hai
Shakeel Badaayuni
aaNkh jo kuchh dekhtee hai lab pe aa sakta naheeN
mahv-e-hairat hooN ki duniya kya se kya ho jaayegee
Iqbal
az azal taa ba abad mahv-e-tamaasha hona
maiN wo hooN jis ko n marna hai n paida hona
Asghar Gondvi
jo kuchh hai mahv-e-shokhi-e-abroo-e-yaar hai
aaNkhoN ko rakh ke taak pe dekha kare koyee
Ghalib
tamaasha ke ai mahv-e-aaeena-daaree
tujhe kis tamanna se hum dekhte haiN
Ghalib
“mahv” ki taqti mere hisaab se hai 21, any other opinion is welcome.
lafz “mahv” par mashq-e-sukhan ka silsila hum jaaree rakkhenge agle 7 dinon tak yaani 28th Sept raat 10:00 PM India time ya 4:30 PM GMT.
to chaliye, intezaar kis baat ka hai. apni shayari ke zariye lafz “mahv” mein mahv ho jaate hain.
duaon ke saath
zarraa
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Zarraasaab,
bahot hi umda lafz laaye haiN aap iis baar bhii....
mahv kaa dusra maanii 'erase' bhii hota hai......
mahv dil se sab shikaayat ho gayii
saamne jab unkii suurat ho gayii
-- Ahsan Marahravi
aayaa idhar khayaal udhar mahv ho gayaa
kehne ko tha na jaane abhii kya maiN apne app se
-- Naushad Ali saab
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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22nd September 2014, 10:31 AM
aaiine meN aks unkaa mahv sabko kar gayaa
dil meN hai raqs-e-junooN* aur aaNkheN khulii reh gayii
(* frenzy dance)
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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22nd September 2014, 11:09 AM
the ejaaz-e-jaaN-dahii* pe mahv hum jinkii kabhii
le gaye wo jaaN hamaari aaj to shikwaa ho kyuN
(*miracle of giving life)
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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22nd September 2014, 11:45 AM
maiN mahv* to rahaa na kabhii itnaa jaam meN
jitnaa Duubaa hooN unke ye juu-e-KHiiraam** meN
(*lost; **walk like rivulet)
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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22nd September 2014, 12:54 PM
halqa-e-zulf* meN tere hum itne mahv hai
juzv-e-hayaat** meN bhii kiyaa karte sahv*** hai
(*ringlets of tresses [of hair];
**a portion of life
***mistakes)
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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22nd September 2014, 01:26 PM
sabhii mahv-e-raks-e-havas* hai jahaaN meN
safiir-e-haram** bhii yahaaN uryaaN*** hai
(*busy/lost in dance of greed;
**ambassador of holy place [priest];
***naked/bare)
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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22nd September 2014, 02:02 PM
kaii the jahaaN meN taare jo ki mahv ho gaye haiN
kare yaad koii unko ye saraa pe aaj phir kyuN
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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22nd September 2014, 04:38 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by aadeil
Zarraasaab,
bahot hi umda lafz laaye haiN aap iis baar bhii....
mahv kaa dusra maanii 'erase' bhii hota hai......
mahv dil se sab shikaayat ho gayii
saamne jab unkii suurat ho gayii
-- Ahsan Marahravi
aayaa idhar khayaal udhar mahv ho gayaa
kehne ko tha na jaane abhii kya maiN apne app se
-- Naushad Ali saab
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Shukriya aadeil sahab is lafz ke mani khol dene ke liye
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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23rd September 2014, 04:16 PM
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Shukriya aadeil sahab is lafz ke mani khol dene ke liye
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vaise, Zaraasaab, http://rekhta.org/ zindabaad
shukriya
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23rd September 2014, 04:36 PM
jaane kahaaN gaye haiN log........
sabhii dost mahv haiN per ye pataa nahiN kahaaN hai
hai sunii padii ye mehfil ye dayaar kare fugaaN* hai
(* cry)
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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