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A small little life.... -
27th September 2006, 04:29 AM
( I had written this for my unborn child, who ironically never got to see life.)
A small little life wanting to be insight Love it through and through.... let it come into the world and bloom Let it see the secret of the world unfold some true and some a show. Let it see the natures mysteries some a laugh and still some sore Let it learn the life's games, some simple and some a strain Teach it the ways of life some hard and some as fresh as morning dew Let it come into the world and bloom love it through and through Wanting to be insight a small little life. |
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27th September 2006, 03:52 PM
Very sweet n touching one aarya..
May lovely little life enters ur world soon.. God Bless you !! |
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27th September 2006, 11:43 PM
many thanks for liking the few lines i had penned down.
best regards aarya |
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5th October 2006, 11:26 AM
aarya gr8 goin
keep it up......take care ur frnd dhaval |
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6th October 2006, 02:03 PM
Very Nice Poem..Keep writing
 Love Dil_Ki_Dhadkan |
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6th October 2006, 11:42 PM
thanks for liking the words written "dil_ki_dhadkan".
best regards aarya |
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2nd April 2007, 03:29 AM
aarya
nice one.... sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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3rd April 2007, 11:00 AM
thanks sakhi for reading it.
regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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11th April 2007, 04:04 AM
aarya really gud, but its the last part of the first paragraphd line that touch my heart.....its a really gud and touchin poem.....
u will b in my prays tc Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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29th September 2007, 08:02 AM
thanks musafir ek pal, thanks a ton for the prayers...
regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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hey.. |
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29th September 2007, 06:07 PM
hii mam..i must say this a a beautiful creation of ur's...really very nice
may god bless u n ur chweet little baby too... kp smiling..  
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3rd October 2007, 05:46 AM
Hi anamika,
thanks so much for the appreciation... May God Bless U Too... Take Care Regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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6th October 2007, 12:40 AM
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I think that only from a woman's pen can come out such a fantastic poem...! I like the way you inverted the first lines in the end...! Regards  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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19th October 2007, 05:29 AM
Mushkil ji,
thanks a lot for the appreciation. regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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i like it |
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i like it -
11th August 2008, 06:00 PM
Realy a fantastic poem. I like it very much. It touches my heart.
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20th August 2008, 11:14 AM
Achint,
thanks a lot for liking the poem. regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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