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दोस्तों की इस प्यार भरी महफिल को विचित्र का सलाम

प्यार मे आशिक अपनी और अपनी माशूका के बीच की गुफ्तगू को किस तरह बयान करता है....
पेश है .....


मेरे होठों की नमी अपने गालों से पोछ्ली तुमने.... लेकिन
अगर फिर इन्होने प्यार की मोहर लगाई तो तुम क्या करोगी


बिखरी जुल्फों को सिर से झटक कर हटा दिया तुमने.... लेकिन
अगर यह फिर से तुम्हारे चेहेरे पर बिखर आई तो तुम क्या करोगी


अंगडाई लेते हुए अपना संगमरमरी बदन लहरा तो दिया तुमने.... लेकिन
अगर कहीं मेरी तबियत मचल आई तो तुम क्या करोगी


हर बात पर ना कहने की तुमने आदत तो बना ली.... लेकिन
अगर तुम्हारी इस अदा से विचित्र की जान पर बन आये तो तुम क्या करोगी

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29th October 2009, 09:59 PM

vichiter Ji....achi likhi hai....
romaani guftugu...

likhte rahiye...
khush rahiye...
duaaon ke saath...




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31st October 2009, 10:42 PM

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vichiter Ji....achi likhi hai....
romaani guftugu...

likhte rahiye...
khush rahiye...
duaaon ke saath...
naresh ji ko namshkaar

kaisay hai aap.....aap hi ki duaaon ka asar hai aur aapka aashirvaad hai yohin aapna pyar banye rakhna ............

aapka vichitra


Yeh manjilen yeh rastay mushkilo bhari yeh dager.....
Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer......
Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
   
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1st November 2009, 10:53 PM

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दोस्तों की इस प्यार भरी महफिल को विचित्र का सलाम

प्यार मे आशिक अपनी और अपनी माशूका के बीच की गुफ्तगू को किस तरह बयान करता है....
पेश है .....


मेरे होठों की नमी अपने गालों से पोछ्ली तुमने.... लेकिन
अगर फिर इन्होने प्यार की मोहर लगाई तो तुम क्या करोगी


बिखरी जुल्फों को सिर से झटक कर हटा दिया तुमने.... लेकिन
अगर यह फिर से तुम्हारे चेहेरे पर बिखर आई तो तुम क्या करोगी


अंगडाई लेते हुए अपना संगमरमरी बदन लहरा तो दिया तुमने.... लेकिन
अगर कहीं मेरी तबियत मचल आई तो तुम क्या करोगी


हर बात पर ना कहने की तुमने आदत तो बना ली.... लेकिन
अगर तुम्हारी इस अदा से विचित्र की जान पर बन आये तो तुम क्या करोगी

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aapki yeh gazal bhout hi achchi lagi...khyaal aur andaaj bhout hi achcha hai

daad kabool kijiyega

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6th November 2009, 03:17 PM

hi,

achha likha hai..nice innovative thot...


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hi,

achha likha hai..nice innovative thot...
aapka bhout bhout shukriya

aapka vichitra


Yeh manjilen yeh rastay mushkilo bhari yeh dager.....
Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer......
Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
   
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