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Pathar to aayine ki taqdeer me likhe hai - 21st November 2009, 02:22 PM
Is koshish me pass hui hu ya fail I dont know but mene ye lines ek aise aam insan ki soch ko lekar likhi hai jisse sach kahne par bhi log jeene nahi dete... or jhut kahne nahi dete...

Ye jindagi hai isse phir dur ho na jana,
Apni baat se itna majboor ho na jana,

Sach bolna bhi lajim jeena bhi hai jaruri,
Sach bolne ki dhun me mansoor ho na jana,

Pathar to aayine ki taqdeer me likhe hai,
Khud ko bacha kar rakhna…Kahi chur ho na jana………….

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Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai..
kayi chehre lekar log yaha jiya karte hai.......
hum in aasunao ko ek chehre ke liye peeya karte hai....
   
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21st November 2009, 04:02 PM
Nehaa Jii .............

Wah bahut bahut khoob lkha hai aapne........ Ek baar bhi aisa nahi aga ke koi naya writter ka likha hai.......... Bahut hi sahin aur khoobsurat lafzon mein aapne aapne sher kahe hai....... Dill se daad kabol kijye..........

Aur aisi hi koshish jari rakhiye.......... Yakinan aapke khayaloN se ruberu hoker bahut achcha aur naya padhne milenga yehi dua.......

Keep writting keep posting.........
May God Bless You...........
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Nehaa Jii .............

Wah bahut bahut khoob lkha hai aapne........ Ek baar bhi aisa nahi aga ke koi naya writter ka likha hai.......... Bahut hi sahin aur khoobsurat lafzon mein aapne aapne sher kahe hai....... Dill se daad kabol kijye..........

Aur aisi hi koshish jari rakhiye.......... Yakinan aapke khayaloN se ruberu hoker bahut achcha aur naya padhne milenga yehi dua.......

Keep writting keep posting.........
May God Bless You...........
Sabse pehle apko aapke janamdin ki bahut bahut shubhkamnaaye .....
shukriya ada karti hu apka ki aapko mere sher pasand aaye.... bas issi tarah se meri rang laati rahe or aap sabhi ko mere sher pasand aate rahe issi ummeed me koshish karti hu hamesha

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Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai..
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hum in aasunao ko ek chehre ke liye peeya karte hai....
   
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22nd November 2009, 09:03 AM
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Ye jindagi hai isse phir dur ho na jana,
Apni baat se itna majboor ho na jana,

Sach bolna bhi lajim jeena bhi hai jaruri,
Sach bolne ki dhun me mansoor ho na jana,

Pathar to aayine ki taqdeer me likhe hai,
Khud ko bacha kar rakhna…Kahi chur ho na jana…
Neha Ji...Namaste ! yakinan...aapki yeh koshish mujhe bahut pasand aai...aapki rachna ka khayal aur ehsaas bahut umda hai....aur use pesh bhi aapne bahut ache dhang se kiya hai....sabhi ashaar aapke khayal ki gehraai ko bata rahe hai...mujhe padhkar bahut acha laga...aise hi likhte rahiye....

dil se daad...hazir hai...

khush rahiye...
duaaon ke saath...



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23rd November 2009, 10:24 AM
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Neha Ji...Namaste ! yakinan...aapki yeh koshish mujhe bahut pasand aai...aapki rachna ka khayal aur ehsaas bahut umda hai....aur use pesh bhi aapne bahut ache dhang se kiya hai....sabhi ashaar aapke khayal ki gehraai ko bata rahe hai...mujhe padhkar bahut acha laga...aise hi likhte rahiye....

dil se daad...hazir hai...

khush rahiye...
duaaon ke saath...
Bahut bahut shukriya naresh G ki apko meri koshishe pasand aa rahi hai, is baat ki mujhe tahe dilse khushi hai....... ki meri mehnat kuch kuch rang la rahi h

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Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai..
kayi chehre lekar log yaha jiya karte hai.......
hum in aasunao ko ek chehre ke liye peeya karte hai....
   
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23rd November 2009, 02:43 PM
Waah waah neha ji... Har ek sher umda.. Bahut khoob.. Keep it up.. btw ye 'mansoor' ka kya meaning hota hai? Meri urdu thodi kachhi hai u knw..
   
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23rd November 2009, 02:47 PM
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Waah waah neha ji... Har ek sher umda.. Bahut khoob.. Keep it up.. btw ye 'mansoor' ka kya meaning hota hai? Meri urdu thodi kachhi hai u knw..
thnx raj G ... mujhe aacha lag raha hai ki sabko mere likhe sher pasand aa rahe hai.......... mansoor means kho jana, dubna... i think apko kuch kuch to samjh me aa hi gaya hoga na

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Dard ki mehfil me ek sher hum bhi aarz kiya karte hai..
Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai..
kayi chehre lekar log yaha jiya karte hai.......
hum in aasunao ko ek chehre ke liye peeya karte hai....
   
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thnx raj G ... mujhe aacha lag raha hai ki sabko mere likhe sher pasand aa rahe hai.......... mansoor means kho jana, dubna... i think apko kuch kuch to samjh me aa hi gaya hoga na
Thanx for telin me neha ji... Aur ek aakhiri sher pe thoda aur prakash daal deejiye to badi meher...

patthar to aaine ki 'TAKDEER' me likhe hain..
Khud ko 'BACHA K RAKHNA'
kahi choor ho na jana..

Jb takdeer me patthar hai aaine ki, to bhala wo kaise bachega...

bhala takdeer ka likha, koi mita saka hai aaj tak ??? Please clear it...
   
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24th November 2009, 10:38 AM
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Thanx for telin me neha ji... Aur ek aakhiri sher pe thoda aur prakash daal deejiye to badi meher...

patthar to aaine ki 'TAKDEER' me likhe hain..
Khud ko 'BACHA K RAKHNA'
kahi choor ho na jana..

Jb takdeer me patthar hai aaine ki, to bhala wo kaise bachega...

bhala takdeer ka likha, koi mita saka hai aaj tak ??? Please clear it...
yaha aaina ek aise insaan ko indicate kar raha hai jo hamesha sach bolta hai .... or mene bas us insaan ko itna hi kaha hai ki pathar to aaine ki taqdeer me likhe hai that means ki tumhe koi kitna bhi taana de par sach ka sath kabhi mat choadna................. isiliye next line me mene kaha hai ki khud ko bachakar rakhna kahi chur ho na jana that means ki jab log tumhe bura bhala kahe sach bolne par to aaine ki tarah mat tutna or jhut mat bolna,........................ hamesha sach ka sath dena pathar lagne par jis tarah aaina chur chur ho jata hai tum kabhi chur mat hona

I hope ki aap mere samjhane par kuch kuch samjh gaye honge.............. apna sath hamesha banaye rakhe meri koshish issi tarah jaari rahegi

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Dard ki mehfil me ek sher hum bhi aarz kiya karte hai..
Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai..
kayi chehre lekar log yaha jiya karte hai.......
hum in aasunao ko ek chehre ke liye peeya karte hai....
   
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yaha aaina ek aise insaan ko indicate kar raha hai jo hamesha sach bolta hai .... or mene bas us insaan ko itna hi kaha hai ki pathar to aaine ki taqdeer me likhe hai that means ki tumhe koi kitna bhi taana de par sach ka sath kabhi mat choadna................. isiliye next line me mene kaha hai ki khud ko bachakar rakhna kahi chur ho na jana that means ki jab log tumhe bura bhala kahe sach bolne par to aaine ki tarah mat tutna or jhut mat bolna,........................ hamesha sach ka sath dena pathar lagne par jis tarah aaina chur chur ho jata hai tum kabhi chur mat hona

I hope ki aap mere samjhane par kuch kuch samjh gaye honge.............. apna sath hamesha banaye rakhe meri koshish issi tarah jaari rahegi
thanx neha ji.... Par Neha ji shayad aapne mera reply dhyaan se nahi padha... Mujhe sher ka matlab to samajh aa gaya tha, lekin mai ye jaan'na chah raha tha k jb patthar 'TAQDEER' me hain to taqdeer k likhe ko koi kaise badal sakta hai ?? Wo kaise 'BACHA K RAKH' sakta hai apne ko... ?? Btw ab aap shayad ye kahengi k wo sach ka saath na chhore.. To mai ye kahunga k jo sach ka saath deta hai, wo 'flint stone' ki tarah hota hai, us par koi halke phulke jhoot k pathharo ka koi asar nahi hota.. I think aapko b kuch kuch samajh aa gaya hoga k mai kya poochna aur kehna chahta hu...
   
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thanx neha ji.... Par Neha ji shayad aapne mera reply dhyaan se nahi padha... Mujhe sher ka matlab to samajh aa gaya tha, lekin mai ye jaan'na chah raha tha k jb patthar 'TAQDEER' me hain to taqdeer k likhe ko koi kaise badal sakta hai ?? Wo kaise 'BACHA K RAKH' sakta hai apne ko... ?? Btw ab aap shayad ye kahengi k wo sach ka saath na chhore.. To mai ye kahunga k jo sach ka saath deta hai, wo 'flint stone' ki tarah hota hai, us par koi halke phulke jhoot k pathharo ka koi asar nahi hota.. I think aapko b kuch kuch samajh aa gaya hoga k mai kya poochna aur kehna chahta hu...
YE TO DO DIL DO NAJRE DO SOCH HAI.................................. sab different point of view rakhte hai... wakai me samjh nahi paayi thi ki aap kya puch rahe hai....................

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Dard ki mehfil me ek sher hum bhi aarz kiya karte hai..
Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai..
kayi chehre lekar log yaha jiya karte hai.......
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bahut khub ...acha likha hai samaj main nahii aya phir bhi acaha tha..

zindagi ke do pehloo hai sach or jothh .. koi hamesha sach nahi kehta or naa hamesha joth kehta hai .. because this is life




hasrat hoti hai kuch likhne ki jab aati hai kisi ki yaad ..
lagti hai chot dil pe ya jab hoti hai kisi se achii baat ...
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bahut khub ...acha likha hai samaj main nahii aya phir bhi acaha tha..

zindagi ke do pehloo hai sach or jothh .. koi hamesha sach nahi kehta or naa hamesha joth kehta hai .. because this is life




hasrat hoti hai kuch likhne ki jab aati hai kisi ki yaad ..
lagti hai chot dil pe ya jab hoti hai kisi se achii baat ...
shabbir ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya ki aapko meri rachna samjh nahi aayi fir bhi aapne mera hosla badhaya

iske liye bahut bahut shukriya..................

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Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai..
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