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~.. Pal pal kisne teri ibadat ki -
29th January 2010, 04:58 PM
Ye nazm maine bahut pahle "Anil Masoom shayar ji ke liye likhi thi ya yun kahu ki unki wife ke liye likhi thi ... aapse share kar raha hun ... umeed hai aapko pasand ayegi ..........!!
halnki woqt ke sath seekhta gaya aur aaj padha to laga kuch eidt karu ... taki flow mai aaye .. lekin fir socha ye to woh tofha hai jo mai de chuka hun ab ispe itan hi adhikaar hai ki ise padha saku.... baki unak kaam jinko samrpit  __________ aadhi-aadhi raat ko jag kar tu likhta hai nazm mohabbat ki kabhi din mai b nahi dekha tune pal pal kisne teri ibadat ki usne eent ko eent se joda aise ho sang-marmar tajmahal ka jaise tune to bas kuch lagaye paise aise tase bas khadi imarat ki rasoyee mai jab khanke bartan kabhi to kangan naap leta jo kahne se pahle kahi nahi uski wo khwahishen bhannp leta bat ye koe khaas nahi par bat hai dil ki hasrat ki mana ki usne tujhko masoom shayar banaya hai par isne bhi to tujhko sar se panv tak sajaya hai dahleej darwaje khidki se puch isne teri kitni khidmat ki woh teri har nazm mai hai shamil kyu isko bas ghar mai panaah mili tere har jhooth ki kahani mai bas ik yahi sachi gavaah mili usne had na ki zudai ki isne had nahi kurbat ki kabhi din mai b nahi dekha tune pal pal kisne teri ibadat ki __ |
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bahut khoobsurat nazm -
29th January 2010, 05:09 PM
Vikas jii.................bahut sacche ahsaas haiN yeh, aur MASOOM SHAYAR ji ko main bhi bahut acchi tarah jaanti hoon, sach mein woh dono aise hi haiN, bahut accha laga padkar, aap jab ahsaas kagaz par likhte ho to ahsaaso.n meiN jaan daal detey ho....yeh aapki khoobi hume behad pasand hai...bhagwaan aapki kalam ki dhaar ko aur tez kareN.
duao.n ke saath .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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29th January 2010, 05:37 PM
Vikas Ji.....Namaste ! aapki iss nazm ke ehsaas bhi bahut khoob lage mujhe......humesha ki tarha.....
Yeh panktiya toh chhu gai mann ko..... rasoyee mai jab khanke bartan kabhi to kangan naap leta jo kahne se pahle kahi nahi uski wo khwahishen bhannp leta bat ye koe khaas nahi par bat hai dil ki hasrat ki mana ki usne tujhko masoom shayar banaya hai par isne bhi to tujhko sar se panv tak sajaya hai dahleej darwaje khidki se puch isne teri kitni khidmat ki Yuhi likhte rahen....dil se daad hazir hai..... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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4th February 2010, 07:09 PM
Bohat khoob Vikas Jee..........
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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