Bari Muddaton Baad Ghazal Likhni Ki Ghustaki Ki hai Ap Sabki Raye Ka Teh-e-dil Se Intizar Rahega Shukriyaa.....
Kisi Bhi Lamhe Tujhe Bhulate Nahi...
Kiun Dil Se Dard Yeh Jaatey Nahi....
Kalvatoo Ka Thikaana Ab Zingai Meri
Kiun Mere Jazbat Yeh Samajh Pate Nahi...
Jalta Ja Raha Hun Dhukon Ki Agg Main
Janey Kiun Anso Bhi Ise Bhujate Nahi....
Kabhi Fursat Main Apna Dard Zikr Kareinge...
Ek Ghazal Main Tujhe Samait Paate Nahi....
Tar Tar Na Hu Jaye Izaat-o-Abro....
Is Kauf Se Palak Jhanpkate Nahi....
Waqt-e-intizar Guzar Rahi Hai Zindagi ''Shahry''
Kun Faarishte Meri Ruh Ko Lene Ate Nahi...
Salman Saahib adaab g!
Thodi gazzal menu vaddi changi lagi...khaskar a highlighted shair ne apna ek assar chadya hai dmag ch!
Keep sharing with us! Need litlle touch ups here n there but a bit on the minor side! Good work g!
Honaa Hai Fenaah Yaad Rakh Aye Shams Tujhko Bhi,
Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee!
Bari Muddaton Baad Ghazal Likhni Ki Ghustaki Ki hai Ap Sabki Raye Ka Teh-e-dil Se Intizar Rahega Shukriyaa.....
Kisi Bhi Lamhe Tujhe Bhulate Nahi...
Kiun Dil Se Dard Yeh Jaatey Nahi....
Kalvatoo Ka Thikaana Ab Zingai Meri
Kiun Mere Jazbat Yeh Samajh Pate Nahi...
Jalta Ja Raha Hun Dhukon Ki Agg Main
Janey Kiun Anso Bhi Ise Bhujate Nahi....
Kabhi Fursat Main Apna Dard Zikr Kareinge...
Ek Ghazal Main Tujhe Samait Paate Nahi....
Tar Tar Na Hu Jaye Izaat-o-Abro....
Is Kauf Se Palak Jhanpkate Nahi....
Waqt-e-intizar Guzar Rahi Hai Zindagi ''Shahry''
Kun Faarishte Meri Ruh Ko Lene Ate Nahi...
Salman jiii....bahuttttt accha laga aapko padna...bahut accha likha hai aapne...daad ke haqdaar haiN aap....hame to aapke signature meiN likha sher bhi bahut pasand aaya :-)
Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai....
ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........
keep writing.
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...