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Ek Anjaan Shaks...
 
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''Bhulate Nai" Ek Ghazal Ek Dard -
4th September 2011, 01:21 AM
Bari Muddaton Baad Ghazal Likhni Ki Ghustaki Ki hai Ap Sabki Raye Ka Teh-e-dil Se Intizar Rahega Shukriyaa.....
Kisi Bhi Lamhe Tujhe Bhulate Nahi... Kiun Dil Se Dard Yeh Jaatey Nahi.... Kalvatoo Ka Thikaana Ab Zingai Meri Kiun Mere Jazbat Yeh Samajh Pate Nahi... Jalta Ja Raha Hun Dhukon Ki Agg Main Janey Kiun Anso Bhi Ise Bhujate Nahi.... Kabhi Fursat Main Apna Dard Zikr Kareinge... Ek Ghazal Main Tujhe Samait Paate Nahi.... Tar Tar Na Hu Jaye Izaat-o-Abro.... Is Kauf Se Palak Jhanpkate Nahi.... Waqt-e-intizar Guzar Rahi Hai Zindagi ''Shahry'' Kun Faarishte Meri Ruh Ko Lene Ate Nahi... in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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4th September 2011, 02:33 AM
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Thodi gazzal menu vaddi changi lagi...khaskar a highlighted shair ne apna ek assar chadya hai dmag ch! Keep sharing with us! Need litlle touch ups here n there but a bit on the minor side! Good work g! Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee! Ajnabi |
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4th September 2011, 09:17 AM
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 Aur Bhi Behtar Koshish Ke Saath Aate Rahen Aur likhte Rahen ... ! DuaaoN Ke Saath ... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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5th September 2011, 03:05 AM
Janab Mohatraham ajnabi sahab ....shukriya bahut bahut ....
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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5th September 2011, 03:06 AM
Janab Mohatraham naresh sahab...janab bahut bahut shukriya apka ....
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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6th September 2011, 01:44 AM
Janab Mohatraham janumanu shukriya apki tajveez pe ghaur kareinge janab ......
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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16th September 2011, 11:35 AM
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Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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16th September 2011, 12:49 PM
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Salman jiii....bahuttttt accha laga aapko padna...bahut accha likha hai aapne...daad ke haqdaar haiN aap....hame to aapke signature meiN likha sher bhi bahut pasand aaya :-) Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ keep writing. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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16th September 2011, 08:12 PM
nice work. thanks for sharing........................................
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8th December 2011, 02:28 AM
bahut bahut shukriyaa radhikha ji is na cheez ki ghazal ko pasand farmane k liye
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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8th December 2011, 02:29 AM
sunita ji..... teh dil se apka shukariya ada karta hun jo apne hamare kalaam ko bade shauk se padhke ushe pasand farmaya bahut bahut shukriya apka....
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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8th December 2011, 02:30 AM
bahut bahut shukrya mittal sahab.....
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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8th December 2011, 09:33 AM
Kabhi Fursat Main Apna Dard Zikr Kareinge...
Ek Ghazal Main Tujhe Samait Paate Nahi.... bahut badhiya salmaan saheb... ye sher mujhe khaas taur pe pasaNd aaya.. daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega.... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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19th January 2012, 01:20 AM
apka bhut bhut shukriyaa vikram sahab....
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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