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Question Kya Jaroorat Thi Tujhe Jindagi Mai Aane Ki - 22nd April 2003, 11:29 AM

Ye saja pai hai humne wafa nibhane ki!
Kar nahi sakte shikayat dil ke tut jaane ki !

Main to wise bhi tha barbadiyon ka afsaana .
Kya jarurat thi tujhko jindgi mai aane ki !

Mujhse puchha to kah diya ke pyaar kar lena .
Baat nikli thi baharon mai ghar jalaane ki !

Yun to kahte hain gareebon ka khuda hota hai .
Phir garibi hai kyon mohtaaz dane dane ki !

Jab bhi tuti teri bijali to mere dil pe giri.
Dad deta hun falak main tere nishane ki!

Ye jo muskan hai hoto ki chin na payegi.
Na ho yakeen to kar koshish aajmane ki!

Teri turbat pe ‘anish’ uzaala kis tarah hota .
Kasam kha rakhi hai usne diya bhujane ki !

‘ANISH’ PALIWAL

tumse naraz nahi hun main ,
aap apne se pareshan hun !


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tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko !
meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !!


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Very nice.
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Very nice. - 19th May 2003, 03:16 AM

Anish ji wakai main aapne bahaut khoob likha hai. Har ek word dil ko nahi aatmaa ko chu gaya, sach mai. Kitni lucky hogi woh larki jisko aapne pyar kiya aur sachche dil aur poori wafa ke saath apnaya .
Likhte rahiyega .

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hello - 19th May 2003, 11:44 AM

Anish jii,

Yun to kahte hain gareebon ka khuda hota hai .
Phir garibi hai kyon mohtaaz dane dane ki !


Bahoot khoob likha hai aapne. pyar mein unke aap khoob dube, lekin unhone kya kiya yah to aap hi jante hain

mujhe pasand aayi aapki yah shayri. aap esi tarah likhate rahiye aur muskurate rahiye.


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19th May 2003, 12:50 PM

Wah! Anish ji, bohat hi achha kalaam likha hai aapne... kaunse sher ki tareef karein, sab ke sab bohat khoob hain!.. bas, tareef qubool farmaaein itne haseen kalaam likhne ke liye..


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19th May 2003, 03:34 PM

bahut hi badhiya kalam hai aapka
aur ush kalam mai, Jahan hai aapka
yaki hai "Lachar" ko sawera hoga
ye khayal bilkul hai mahan aapka


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15th May 2006, 03:32 PM

dear lachar jee
sorry for very late reply and thnx for reply

dear afshan
thnx ke aap yanaha aye or aapne meri is rachna ko saraha


anish

tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko !
meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !!


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15th May 2006, 04:43 PM

GUNAAH HAI KISI KO DIL SE CHAHNA YAHAN
BAS YEHI KHATA HAI IS DEEWANE KEE


ANISH BHAI BAHUT KHOOB KIHA HAI AAPNE . U R R REALLY GREAT



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