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Na main raja na koi rani thai...( Ghayel ) - 1st June 2011, 11:48 AM
Jhoothi bachpan ki who kahani thi
Na main raja na koi rani thi

Zulm usne kiye they duniya par
Jiski duniya bohat deewani thi

Khoobsurat thi zindagi unki
Jinki seerat bohat noorani thi

Kho gayee woh bhi aaj jane kaha
Maa ki tasweer jo ghar purani thi

Khwab kaise woh apne keh deti
Woh jo ladki thi khandani thi

Kaun keemat chukaye shero ki
Koi sasti ghazal sunani thi

Khud ko shayer samajhna mehfil me
Teri Ghayel badi nadaani thi

Sajid Ghayel

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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1st June 2011, 07:40 PM
Kho gayee woh bhi aaj jane kaha
Maa ki tasweer jo ghar purani thi


Sajid bhai is sher ke liye laakhoN daad... sach!! sabak lene ki zarurat hai is sher se..


Khwab kaise woh apne keh deti
Woh jo ladki thi khandani thi


bahot ummdah khayaal....

Khud ko shayer samajhna mehfil me
Teri Ghayel badi nadaani thi

Bhaai aapki ye naadani hame qubool hai.. aap khud ko shaayar samjahte raheN,.. kam se kam isi bahaane aapko padhne sunne ke mauqe hame milte rahnge.... likhte rahiyega

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Kho gayee woh bhi aaj jane kaha
Maa ki tasweer jo ghar purani thi

Khwab kaise woh apne keh deti
Woh jo ladki thi khandani thi

Bahut Khoobsurat Manzar .......... Sajid Bhai !!!

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Khwab kaise woh apne keh deti
Woh jo ladki thi khandani thi

Kaun keemat chukaye shero ki
Koi sasti ghazal sunani thi

Khud ko shayer samajhna mehfil me
Teri Ghayel badi nadaani thi

Sajid Ghayel

Nice lines Ghayel ji
Thnx 4 sharing

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Kaun keemat chukaye shero ki
Koi sasti ghazal sunani thi

Khud ko shayer samajhna mehfil me
Teri Ghayel badi nadaani thi


Bahut khooooooooob ..... Sajid Bhai :)

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Quote:
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Jhoothi bachpan ki who kahani thi
Na main raja na koi rani thi

Zulm usne kiye they duniya par
Jiski duniya bohat deewani thi

Khoobsurat thi zindagi unki
Jinki seerat bohat noorani thi

Kho gayee woh bhi aaj jane kaha
Maa ki tasweer jo ghar purani thi

umdaa...

Khwab kaise woh apne keh deti
Woh jo ladki thi khandani thi

Kaun keemat chukaye shero ki
Koi sasti ghazal sunani thi

bahot ache..waah

Khud ko shayer samajhna mehfil me
Teri Ghayel badi nadaani thi

Sajid Ghayel
Sajid bhai..bahot badhiya..daad hi daad..god bless u

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