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Love kis ne mujko sadaa dii bataa kaun hai...... - 5th April 2008, 09:26 PM
kis ne mujhako sadaa dii bataa kaun hai

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kis ne mujhako sadaa dii bataa kaun hai
ai havaa tere ghar me.n chhupaa kaun hai

baarisho.n me.n kisii pe.D ko dekhanaa
shaal o.Dhe huye bhiigataa kaun hai


mai.n yahaa.N dhuup me.n tap rahaa huu.N magar
vo pasiine me.n Duubaa kaun hai


aasamaano.n ko hamane bataayaa nahii.n
Duubatii shaam me.n Duubataa kaun hai


Khushbuuo.n me.n nahaa_ii huyii shaaKh par
phuul saa muskuraataa huaa kaun hai


dil ko patthar huye ik zamaanaa huaa
ham makaa.N me.n magar bolataa kaun hai

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Love 5th April 2008, 10:37 PM
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kis ne mujhako sadaa dii bataa kaun hai

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kis ne mujhako sadaa dii bataa kaun hai
ai havaa tere ghar me.n chhupaa kaun hai

baarisho.n me.n kisii pe.D ko dekhanaa
shaal o.Dhe huye bhiigataa kaun hai


mai.n yahaa.N dhuup me.n tap rahaa huu.N magar
vo pasiine me.n Duubaa kaun hai


aasamaano.n ko hamane bataayaa nahii.n
Duubatii shaam me.n Duubataa kaun hai


Khushbuuo.n me.n nahaa_ii huyii shaaKh par
phuul saa muskuraataa huaa kaun hai


dil ko patthar huye ik zamaanaa huaa
ham makaa.N me.n magar bolataa kaun hai




wah lamha bahut hi achhi poet hai aapne ise yaha share kiya isiliye aapka bahut shukhriya taki hame itni achhi poet padhne ko mili sach me bahut hi achhi hai aage bhi aise hi share karte rahena
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6th April 2008, 01:20 AM
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kis ne mujhako sadaa dii bataa kaun hai

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kis ne mujhako sadaa dii bataa kaun hai
ai havaa tere ghar me.n chhupaa kaun hai

baarisho.n me.n kisii pe.D ko dekhanaa
shaal o.Dhe huye bhiigataa kaun hai


mai.n yahaa.N dhuup me.n tap rahaa huu.N magar
vo pasiine me.n Duubaa kaun hai


aasamaano.n ko hamane bataayaa nahii.n
Duubatii shaam me.n Duubataa kaun hai


Khushbuuo.n me.n nahaa_ii huyii shaaKh par
phuul saa muskuraataa huaa kaun hai


dil ko patthar huye ik zamaanaa huaa
ham makaa.N me.n magar bolataa kaun hai
bahoot khoob lamha thanx for sharing
wonderful dear
manu
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6th April 2008, 03:19 AM
Lamha ji apne Bashir Badr ki jo ghazal pesh ki he vo bas so so he ku ki is ghazal ka jadid andaz he jo mujhe pasand nahin. men to bas rivayati shairi pasand karta hun. sorry aisa men ne kaha ku ki men sach bat kahna bura nahin samajhta. mujhe pata he k bahot se logon ko Bashir Badr sahib pasand hen or ho sakta he men ne unka dil dukha diya ho. sorry.

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kis ne mujhako sadaa dii bataa kaun hai
ai havaa tere ghar me.n chhupaa kaun hai
hawa ka ghar kia hota he? yeh raz mere upar nahin afshan ho raha
baarisho.n me.n kisii pe.D ko dekhanaa
shaal o.Dhe huye bhiigataa kaun hai
ajib o gharib istiarat aur talmihat mustamil kiye hen
mai.n yahaa.N dhuup me.n tap rahaa huu.N magar
vo pasiine me.n Duubaa kaun hai
is sher ke dusre misre men ek lafz missing he ku k 2 syllables [arkan] ki kami he. vo lafz he "vahan". yeh misra yun hona chahie

vo pasiine men vahan duba kaun he

Khushbuuo.n me.n nahaa_ii huyii shaaKh par
phuul saa muskuraataa huaa kaun hai
phoolon men nahai hui sham - ye bhi ajib laga mujhe
dil ko patthar huye ik zamaanaa huaa
ham makaa.N me.n magar bolataa kaun hai
dusre misre ka pahla lafz ham nahin ho sakta ku k ham maka.n ka koi matlab nahin nikalta. mere khayal se yeh lafz 'han' he.
   
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wah lamha bahut hi achhi poet hai aapne ise yaha share kiya isiliye aapka bahut shukhriya taki hame itni achhi poet padhne ko mili sach me bahut hi achhi hai aage bhi aise hi share karte rahena



thank u soooooo much KRENIL..............

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bahoot khoob lamha thanx for sharing
wonderful dear
manu



THANX 4 READING MANU...................

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Lamha ji apne Bashir Badr ki jo ghazal pesh ki he vo bas so so he ku ki is ghazal ka jadid andaz he jo mujhe pasand nahin. men to bas rivayati shairi pasand karta hun. sorry aisa men ne kaha ku ki men sach bat kahna bura nahin samajhta. mujhe pata he k bahot se logon ko Bashir Badr sahib pasand hen or ho sakta he men ne unka dil dukha diya ho. sorry.



aap ko sorry kehne ki bilkul zaroorat nahi hai kyon ki jo ghazal muje pasand aayi,zaroori nahi hai ki wo sab ko pasand aaye....aap ne apni raay di ,iske liye aap ka shukriya................

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GHAZAL BAHOT ACHCHE HAI .............
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kis ne mujhako sadaa dii bataa kaun hai

Bashir Badr





kis ne mujhako sadaa dii bataa kaun hai
ai havaa tere ghar me.n chhupaa kaun hai

baarisho.n me.n kisii pe.D ko dekhanaa
shaal o.Dhe huye bhiigataa kaun hai


mai.n yahaa.N dhuup me.n tap rahaa huu.N magar
vo pasiine me.n Duubaa kaun hai


aasamaano.n ko hamane bataayaa nahii.n
Duubatii shaam me.n Duubataa kaun hai


Khushbuuo.n me.n nahaa_ii huyii shaaKh par
phuul saa muskuraataa huaa kaun hai


dil ko patthar huye ik zamaanaa huaa
ham makaa.N me.n magar bolataa kaun hai
   
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