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beautiful moment.........
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is naye saal ki pehli subah............ -
3rd January 2008, 07:14 PM
is naye saal ki pehli subah,
jab tumhare nain khulen,
is naye saal ki pehli ghadi,
jab tumhare hath uthen,
is naye saal ki pehli khushi,
jab tumhare gale lage,
is naye saal ki pehli soch,
jo tumhare jeevan mein nikhaar laye,
to itnaa jaan lena ke koi or hath bhi,
tumhare liye uthe zaroor hain,
jis ke dil se bhi yehi dua nikli hai ki,
wo nain unke hamesha khushiyan dekhen,
wo mangi dua unki pori ho jaye,
wo gum unse door kahin bhatakte milen,
wo saath wo haath kabhi
hum se nahin choote,
wo soch tumhare muqaddar ko
hamesha urooh pahunchaye,
to kuch hamare bare mein soch lena
ke koi hai jo na jane
kab se tumhare bare mein
barsoon se soch rahi hai,
Haa,
in aate jaate saalon mein,
haseen sooraj ke nikalne ,
to kahin shaam ke dhalne mein ,
har pal haseen lamhon mein,
tumhen koi soch rahi hai ,
sirf tumhi ko LAMHA soch rahi hai........
doston ....umeed karti hoo ki aap ko meri ye choti si koshish pasand aayegi....zaroor reply kar ke bataiyega ki aap ko ye ehsaas kaise lage.....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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ek dost
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3rd January 2008, 08:16 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by LAMHA
is naye saal ki pehli subah,
jab tumhare nain khulen,
is naye saal ki pehli ghadi,
jab tumhare hath uthen,
is naye saal ki pehli khushi,
jab tumhare gale lage,
is naye saal ki pehli soch,
jo tumhare jeevan mein nikhaar laye,
to itnaa jaan lena ke koi or hath bhi,
tumhare liye uthe zaroor hain,
jis ke dil se bhi yehi dua nikli hai ki,
wo nain unke hamesha khushiyan dekhen,
wo mangi dua unki pori ho jaye,
wo gum unse door kahin bhatakte milen,
wo saath wo haath kabhi
hum se nahin choote,
wo soch tumhare muqaddar ko
hamesha urooh pahunchaye,
to kuch hamare bare mein soch lena
ke koi hai jo na jane
kab se tumhare bare mein
barsoon se soch rahi hai,
Haa,
in aate jaate saalon mein,
haseen sooraj ke nikalne ,
to kahin shaam ke dhalne mein ,
har pal haseen lamhon mein,
tumhen koi soch rahi hai ,
sirf tumhi ko LAMHA soch rahi hai........
doston ....umeed karti hoo ki aap ko meri ye choti si koshish pasand aayegi....zaroor reply kar ke bataiyega ki aap ko ye ehsaas kaise lage.....
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wah lamha ji bahut khub kash sabke khayalat app jese hote hai to aaj kabhi kisi ke naseeb judai na likhi hoti apko dil se thanks kehta hu lamha ji appne bahut acha likha hai a padhakar sayad kisi aur ke khayalat bhi badal jaaye itni ummid karta hu me
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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ZINDAGI NE SAB CHHIN LIYA
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4th January 2008, 12:35 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by LAMHA
is naye saal ki pehli subah,
jab tumhare nain khulen,
is naye saal ki pehli ghadi,
jab tumhare hath uthen,
is naye saal ki pehli khushi,
jab tumhare gale lage,
is naye saal ki pehli soch,
jo tumhare jeevan mein nikhaar laye,
to itnaa jaan lena ke koi or hath bhi,
tumhare liye uthe zaroor hain,
jis ke dil se bhi yehi dua nikli hai ki,
wo nain unke hamesha khushiyan dekhen,
wo mangi dua unki pori ho jaye,
wo gum unse door kahin bhatakte milen,
wo saath wo haath kabhi
hum se nahin choote,
wo soch tumhare muqaddar ko
hamesha urooh pahunchaye,
to kuch hamare bare mein soch lena
ke koi hai jo na jane
kab se tumhare bare mein
barsoon se soch rahi hai,
Haa,
in aate jaate saalon mein,
haseen sooraj ke nikalne ,
to kahin shaam ke dhalne mein ,
har pal haseen lamhon mein,
tumhen koi soch rahi hai ,
sirf tumhi ko LAMHA soch rahi hai........
doston ....umeed karti hoo ki aap ko meri ye choti si koshish pasand aayegi....zaroor reply kar ke bataiyega ki aap ko ye ehsaas kaise lage.....
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are wah lamha kya baat hai maine pahele bhi ye gazal padhi thi par kya hai ki mere pass koi words nahi the sach me lamha tumhari ye gazal itni achhi hai ki iski tarif kaise karu kuch samaj me nahi aa raha hai sach me tum bahut hi achha likhti ho bas aage bhi aise hi likhti rahena hum hamesha tumhare saath hai
aapka dost krenil
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beautiful moment.........
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4th January 2008, 10:17 PM
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Originally Posted by dineshdharvi
wah lamha ji bahut khub kash sabke khayalat app jese hote hai to aaj kabhi kisi ke naseeb judai na likhi hoti apko dil se thanks kehta hu lamha ji appne bahut acha likha hai a padhakar sayad kisi aur ke khayalat bhi badal jaaye itni ummid karta hu me
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Quote:
Originally Posted by krenil
are wah lamha kya baat hai maine pahele bhi ye gazal padhi thi par kya hai ki mere pass koi words nahi the sach me lamha tumhari ye gazal itni achhi hai ki iski tarif kaise karu kuch samaj me nahi aa raha hai sach me tum bahut hi achha likhti ho bas aage bhi aise hi likhti rahena hum hamesha tumhare saath hai
aapka dost krenil
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bahut bahut shukriya aap dono doston ka......aap ne meri is choti si koshish ko itna saraha uske liye mai DINESH & KRENIL aap dono ki tahe dil se shukra-guzar hu....thanx a lot.................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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