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khada karna hai ek jalaal-ae-hindustan - 24th May 2011, 12:58 PM
In halatoon ko badlna hoga
Har patthar ko pighlna hoga

khada karna hai ek jalaal-ae-hindustan
Abb to har shaqs ko sambhlna hoga

joshe-ae-zor itna ho duaoon mai abb
khurshid ko bhi samander se niklna hoga

khatam karna hai har firoone-shaitaan ko
jalna pade atishe-schayi mai bhi to jalna hoga

Chuna hai ek nayi uchai iss vatan ko
Abb to har kisi ko apna mukader badlna hoga


jitna mushkil safar ho jitni bhi ho takleefe
abb En thedi medhi ranhoon per bhi chalna hoga


rakh de badal ke har kisi ki zindagi
pina pade Zeher bhi to pina hoga

Badalna hai tasveer iss desh ki
Abb to har kisi ko apni taqdeer se ladna hoga

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25th May 2011, 03:08 AM
Hello Samyasar ji,

bahut hi josh say bhari kavita hai. my congrats to you. my answer yes if we want to keep our desh on top we have to bring the changes in by ourselves.
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25th May 2011, 10:08 AM
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In halatoon ko badlna hoga
Har patthar ko pighlna hoga

khada karna hai ek jalaal-ae-hindustan
Abb to har shaqs ko sambhlna hoga

joshe-ae-zor itna ho duaoon mai abb
khurshid ko bhi samander se niklna hoga

khatam karna hai har firoone-shaitaan ko
jalna pade atishe-schayi mai bhi to jalna hoga

Chuna hai ek nayi uchai iss vatan ko
Abb to har kisi ko apna mukader badlna hoga


jitna mushkil safar ho jitni bhi ho takleefe
abb En thedi medhi ranhoon per bhi chalna hoga


rakh de badal ke har kisi ki zindagi
pina pade Zeher bhi to pina hoga

Badalna hai tasveer iss desh ki
Abb to har kisi ko apni taqdeer se ladna hoga
Ji .. Namaste Samyasar Ji, .. Ji aap ki is rachanaa pe bas yahi kahe sakte hai ke ... simply superb .. heart touching ... kitane hi dilo ki baat kahe gaye aap ke ye shabd ..

kitane hi sailaab, kitane toofaan ... kitane hi sandesh apne andar samete huye logon ke dilo ki ye baatein hai ... Sachchaayi bayaan karti huyi aap ki is rachanaa ke ehsaas dil mai bas gaye ...

Ji .. ek baat puchhani thi aap se ... hume urdu nahi aati .. kuchh words ke meaning hume samajh nahi aaye .. gar aap please unke meaning bataa de to achchha hoga .. yunhi likhate rahiye ...

"jalaal-ae-hindustan, khurshid, firoone-shaitaan ??"

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

Khuda Hafiz, Jay Ambe

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25th May 2011, 03:43 PM
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Hello Samyasar ji,

bahut hi josh say bhari kavita hai. my congrats to you. my answer yes if we want to keep our desh on top we have to bring the changes in by ourselves.
Regards,
A
bhut bhut shukriya ankita g appne phada orr appko pasand ayya thanx for ur congrates

and offcourse we have to do everythng no buddy else will do

thanx again

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25th May 2011, 03:48 PM
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Ji .. Namaste Samyasar Ji, .. Ji aap ki is rachanaa pe bas yahi kahe sakte hai ke ... simply superb .. heart touching ... kitane hi dilo ki baat kahe gaye aap ke ye shabd ..

kitane hi sailaab, kitane toofaan ... kitane hi sandesh apne andar samete huye logon ke dilo ki ye baatein hai ... Sachchaayi bayaan karti huyi aap ki is rachanaa ke ehsaas dil mai bas gaye ...

Ji .. ek baat puchhani thi aap se ... hume urdu nahi aati .. kuchh words ke meaning hume samajh nahi aaye .. gar aap please unke meaning bataa de to achchha hoga .. yunhi likhate rahiye ...

"jalaal-ae-hindustan, khurshid, firoone-shaitaan ??"

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

Khuda Hafiz, Jay Ambe

bhut bhut shukriya gudia g appko pasand ayya hume behad kushi mili

orr rahi baat kuch urdu words ke liye uske liye hum apse mazrat chahnge

jalaal--means proud ya fir keh lijiye hindi mai tej
khurshid--- sun

firone--- firone was actually name of one of baddes king of egypt he is almost same to devil he only do bad works and only torture its people like our netaas

and shaitaan u know devil

bas itne se hi thi koi khas bhari words nahi use kiye the humne

fir bhi apke phadne ke liye anne ke liye bhut bhut shukriya
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In halatoon ko badlna hoga
Har patthar ko pighlna hoga

khada karna hai ek jalaal-ae-hindustan
Abb to har shaqs ko sambhlna hoga

joshe-ae-zor itna ho duaoon mai abb
khurshid ko bhi samander se niklna hoga

khatam karna hai har firoone-shaitaan ko
jalna pade atishe-schayi mai bhi to jalna hoga

Chuna hai ek nayi uchai iss vatan ko
Abb to har kisi ko apna mukader badlna hoga


jitna mushkil safar ho jitni bhi ho takleefe
abb En thedi medhi ranhoon per bhi chalna hoga


rakh de badal ke har kisi ki zindagi
pina pade Zeher bhi to pina hoga

Badalna hai tasveer iss desh ki
Abb to har kisi ko apni taqdeer se ladna hoga
bhut hi bhadiya sach mai abb in halatoon ko badlana hoga orr vkai mai har kisiko smbhalna hoga
bhut hi bhadiya likha hai appne hum sabhi ko khud hi apna mukader badlana hoga
simple or asaan shabdoon mai appne bhut hi important baat kahi hai dil se daad

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Kyaa baat hai yasir bhai, sabse pahle meri mubaarakbaad qubool farmaaeN apni
sar-zameen ki shaan me likhe gaye is khoobsurat kalaam ke liye... bahot khoob.

aapke kalaam me haqiqat aur majburi nazar aai hai jo ke hamaare desh ki sabse badi pareshani banke ubhri hai, uski bhalaai ke liye jo aapne pahel ki hai wo qaabile tareef hai.. khuda kare ke sabhi iske baare me sochen.. aur aise raastoN pe chaleN jo jhut kapat aur buraai se kosoN door ho aur apne desh ke liye ek misaal qaayam kareN..

likhte rahiye.. Allah aur nawaaze..

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Abb to har kisi ko apna mukader badlna hoga

kya gazab hai sir......itna accha kahna bhi zulm hai.....

magar aapse guzarish hai aur sitam dhaiye....

very good peice,indeed.

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