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27th February 2007, 08:57 PM
hi sab nu
aj me akri var likh rahi ha umid hai ki app nu pasand ave gha aj jo bhi likhea hai sirf me dil t likhea hai sirf usle jo mere dil rehta hai khushboo banke mehko tum yuhin meri saanson me...dhadkan banke dhadko tum yuhin mere dil me....khwaab banke chamko tum yuhin meri aankhon me...pyaar na ho yeh khatm kabhi....kuch yoon sama jaao meri jaan me.... ke bas...Mera pyar,mera har armaan ho tum.............. Dil ki har dhadkan pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai dhadkan ki har ik saaz pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai Khil bhi jaayen hazaaron phool baaghon mein sanam Har ik khiltay phool pay bas tumhaara naam likkha hai Ugh bhi jaye aasmaan mein dheron chand aur sooraj Har ik sitaare ki roshni pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai Ruk bhi jaayein saansein meri chalte chalte janeman Har ik chalti rukti saans pay bas tumhara naam likkha hai Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera yeh jism magar Meri rooh ke har ik hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai Khatm bhi hojaye zindagi yuhi ik roz meri jaan lekin Is zindagi ke har ik pal pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai.......! Khamooshi Say Ek Dard Ko Sehna Acha Lagta Hay Us Ka Milna Na Milna Qismat Ki Baat Hay Pal Pal Us Ki Yaad May Roona Acha Lagta Hay Us Key Bina Sari Khushyaan Aajab lagti Hain Roo Roo Kar Us Ki Yaad May Soona Acha Lagta Hay jann raj
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27th February 2007, 10:52 PM
dear kamal ,
kaisi ho?.. aapki is kosisH ke liye to mere pass koi lafz nahiN har ik sher ne seedhe dil meiN jaGaah bana di sach me bahot hi achha sa andaaz aur ehsaasoN ko aapne itni khoobsoorti ke sath pesH kiye haiN ki aapka yeH kalaam dil ko chhu gaya..bahot hi masoomiyaT se sab baateN keh di aapne .. Quote:
bahot hi khub raha kamal!!! aur yeH kya maiN deKh raha huuN??? Quote:
apna khaYaal rakhna aur khush raho.. duaoN ke sath ijaazaT aapka bhai dhaval |
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1st March 2007, 05:22 AM
"dilki baat" ji aapne bahut hi achche khayalon se ise likkha hai. paRhkar achcha laga
Regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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2nd March 2007, 05:21 PM
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shukrya aarya ji khush rehna Khamooshi Say Ek Dard Ko Sehna Acha Lagta Hay Us Ka Milna Na Milna Qismat Ki Baat Hay Pal Pal Us Ki Yaad May Roona Acha Lagta Hay Us Key Bina Sari Khushyaan Aajab lagti Hain Roo Roo Kar Us Ki Yaad May Soona Acha Lagta Hay jann raj
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2nd March 2007, 05:24 PM
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ab me appka sath chod rahi hoon kyon ki meri zindghi ke bhot thode din rehghe ne app se ek request hai hamare le dua karna ki jitne din zindghi ke bache mujhe utne dino ke liye mera pyar vapas mil jae aj ke badh hum es site pe nahi ayeghe kyon ki jitne idl bache hai vo hum apne parvar aur apne pyar ke sath guzarna chaheghe app sabse bhot pyar mila shukrya khush rehna appki behen kamal Khamooshi Say Ek Dard Ko Sehna Acha Lagta Hay Us Ka Milna Na Milna Qismat Ki Baat Hay Pal Pal Us Ki Yaad May Roona Acha Lagta Hay Us Key Bina Sari Khushyaan Aajab lagti Hain Roo Roo Kar Us Ki Yaad May Soona Acha Lagta Hay jann raj
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3rd March 2007, 03:19 PM
hi preet ji
kese ho aap? preet ji aap har baar ek dard bhara paigam likhte ho, aur wo hamare dil ko bhi kahi na kahi chhu jata hai, aapne jo is rachna mein dard jataya hai use padhte padhte ek alag hi nazara hamari aankho ke samne aaya tha aapki ya rachna hamein behad pasand aayi hai aur ha mera wada yaad rakhna dost aapki rachna ka javab shayri ke rup mein gaur ki jiyega Dil ki har dhadkan pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai dhadkan ki har ik saaz pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai Jiski khatir hum saara jahan bhul gaye, Suna he ki wo hamara naam tak bhul gaye, Kasam khayi thi jisne saath nibhane ki, Yaaro wo aaj hamari maiyat me aana bhul gaye. Khil bhi jaayen hazaaron phool baaghon mein sanam Har ik khiltay phool pay bas tumhaara naam likkha hai Phool banker muskurana zindagi hai, Muskurakar gum bhulana zindagi hai, Mil kar khus hue to kya hua? Bina mile riste nibhana zindagi hai. Ugh bhi jaye aasmaan mein dheron chand aur sooraj Har ik sitaare ki roshni pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai Ye nazaro ne har pal unka didar manga, Jaise amavas ne har raat chand manga, Ruth gaya wo khuda bhi humse, Jab humne har dua me uska pyaar manga, Ruk bhi jaayein saansein meri chalte chalte janeman Har ik chalti rukti saans pay bas tumhara naam likkha hai Yadon ki dhun me aapki parchhai si lagti hai, Kaanon me bajti shehnai si lagti hai, Aap ho to apnapan hai, Warna seene me sanse bhi parai si lagti hai. Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera yeh jism magar Meri rooh ke har ik hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai Aankho me rehne wale yaad nahin karte, Dil me rehne walo ki baat nahin karte, Hamari to ruh me bas gaye ho aap, Tabhi to hum milne ki fariyaad nahin karte. Khatm bhi hojaye zindagi yuhi ik roz meri jaan lekin Is zindagi ke har ik pal pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai.......! Teri har ada mohabbat si lagti hai, Ek pal ki judai muddat si lagti hai, Pehle nahi tha socha aaj sochte hai, Ki jindagi ke har lamhe mein teri zarurat se lagti hai. dost ese hi likhte rehna aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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27th April 2007, 05:54 PM
hello dilkibaat ji me appka name to nahi janta lekin me appki saria kalama padhi hoya ne app kafi acha likhi thi magar je jan kar bhot dhukh hoya ki app ab likhan badh kar diya umid hai app theek hovo ghy
vaise is kalam ka to jawab hi nahi kitna kubsurat likha hai appne mujhe bhot pasand aya Khatm bhi hojaye zindagi yuhi ik roz meri jaan lekin Is zindagi ke har ik pal pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai.......! is line pata laghda hai ki app kisi se kitna pyar karti hoo khudha se dua karta hoon ki app theek ho aur appko appka pyar mil jae maaf karna agar kuch galat likha ho to je line to dil ko shu ghy meri daab kabul kijiye appka dost jotty har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya  kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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30th April 2007, 05:46 PM
dilkibaat ji
me appke liye ek shear likha hai wo app ko likh raha hoon umid hai ki apko pasand ave gha eh sher mene tuhade ate us vare sochke likhea jisnu app bhot pyar karti hoon yun tanhai me hum dil ko saza dete hen aksar akele me tujhe yaas karte hen teri yaas ke saye khud ko rakhte hen kabhi jite hen to kabhi marte hen banate hen aks apne haton se hum teri tasveer sine me chupa rakhte hen sochte hen tujhe raat ke andheron me pukarte hen tujhe tanhai ke lamon me bas tere hi kheyal me rehte hen najane tujhe kyon itna yaad karte hen? najane kyon tujhe itna pyar karte hen? khush rehna appka dost jotty har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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3rd May 2007, 11:05 PM
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me kamal ha eh id mere brother di si aj to me use kara ghy khush rehna juhi sath dete rehna appki dost preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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