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2nd September 2004, 11:09 AM
aaj faile gamo ki chaader me lipti jati hoo..
tere diye dukho se khud ko shamma banaye jati hoo.. har pal bikher rahi hoo tere lafzo ki maar se.. tukde apni laash ke khud he samete jati hoo.. sochti hoo dafna doo khud ko apne hi haatho se.. ab tammanna bhi nahi ki tere kandho per sawar ho chaloo kaise bhool jaaoo jo jakhm tujh se mile hai.. dabe hue ghaav bhi riste hai jab tere kareeb aati hoo.. jab tak zinda huu...yeh rishta to nibhana parega.. mar-mar k jine se to behtar hai khud ko khatm kar doo.. bhatkegi dukhi aatma aatish-e-dozakh me bhi.. Khatm ho jayegi kahani..ab me apni arthi sazaa loo.. udas  ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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2nd September 2004, 12:49 PM
aaj faile gamo ki chaader me lipti jati hoo..
tere diye dukho se khud ko shamma banaye jati hoo.. har pal bikher rahi hoo tere lafzo ki maar se.. tukde apni laash ke khud he samete jati hoo.. sochti hoo dafna doo khud ko apne hi haatho se.. ab tammanna bhi nahi ki tere kandho per sawar ho chaloo kaise bhool jaaoo jo jakhm tujh se mile hai.. dabe hue ghaav bhi riste hai jab tere kareeb aati hoo.. jab tak zinda huu...yeh rishta to nibhana parega.. mar-mar k jine se to behtar hai khud ko khatm kar doo.. bhatkegi dukhi aatma aatish-e-dozakh me bhi.. Khatm ho jayegi kahani..ab me apni arthi sazaa loo.. bohat khoob udas ji  aapne to maar hi dala wakai mai jo kalam aapne pesh kiya hai kabile tareef hai wo aur sach bhi hai jo aapne likha uska ek ek lafz likhte rahiyega ,,,, sacccha_pyar tune ye masvira suna hai kya jindgi bina SACCCHA_PYAR ke hai kya |
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2nd September 2004, 02:16 PM
Hi Udas Ji,
Aap to bilkul apne naam kay hisaab say post kartey hai. But really luved u're nazm. I really luv u're posts. Kinda makes me think about the sadder parts of life. Please do keep on sharing such beautiful and soul touching words. Luvs Salim |
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3rd September 2004, 01:25 PM
Saccha_pyaar ji...
yaha pls apna naam bataiye...kuch likhte hua ajeeb lagta hai... aap ne sahi farmaya ek-ek lafz me sacchai chhupi hai...aji janab yahi to hamari zindgi ka dard hai....jise ab tak samait rakha tha aur shayri.com per jaise hi mauka mila apne dard ki chaader failane chale aaye... aap ko acchha laga....jaan kar bahut khushi hui....vaise aap bhi kalam se bahut dhaardar hai....isme koi shak nahi... u hi likhte rahiye.. & TC udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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3rd September 2004, 01:33 PM
Salim ji.......Namaskaar...
Kinda makes me think about the sadder parts of life Ye lines mujhe aapki samajh nahi aai ki aap kya kehna chahte hai... aapne likha ki ham apne naam ke anuroop likhte hai...bhai aise hi apna naam UDAS rakhna aur kehna to shayad kisi ko pasand na hoga....ham aise hi hai...(magar ye hamare ander ki baat hai) magar face se ham bahut khush nazar aane wale insano ki ginti me aate hai...aur ham sach me aise hai...isliye aisa likhna hamari aadat nahi...hamari nature hai... bhai jo nature k saath mail khayega...wahi to likh payenge na... anyways.....thanx bahut..bahut...apko hamara likha acchha laga... hamari hausla afjahi k liye bahut shukriya... udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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3rd September 2004, 01:50 PM
HI Udas Ji
Kinda makes me think about the sadder parts of life Ye lines mujhe aapki samajh nahi aai ki aap kya kehna chahte hai... Actually i'm a very happy go lucky person n am always in d pink o life. Rarely do i tend to veer on to the sadder moments of my life. Like u, mein bhi khush mizaj person hu. Lekin jab aapki koi bhi post pardta hu to really, mein apne in udhas lamho may kho jaata hu aur jo dard bharey lamhey thay mere zindagi may un pay ghaur karney lagta hu. Bas itna hi kehna chahta tha. I guess its kind of a good thing really. Aaj kal duniya may ziyada meetha ho ney say ya diabetes ho jata hai ya kiray lagtay hai :-) Well do take care or please aisey hi post kartey rahiye Luvs Salim |
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4th September 2004, 04:16 PM
Salim ji........Namaskaar!!
Jaan kar khushi hui ki aap ek khush-dil insaan hai...aur gamo k vo mausam beeta hua kal hai..... salim ji....aap hamari posts na para kare.....pls. galat mat samajhiye....main bilkul bhi nahi chahungi ki aap mujhe par kar udas vaadiyo me pahunch jaye.....maana ki salim ji....khushi bhi nahi hai baatne k liye mere paas magar aap dukhi ho aisa bhi theek nahi hai.... hamari yahi dua hai ki aap hamesha khush rahe...inhi bhavnao k saath izazet chahungi.... udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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5th September 2004, 11:55 AM
Hi Udas Ji,
salim ji....aap hamari posts na para kare.....pls. galat mat samajhiye....main bilkul bhi nahi chahungi ki aap mujhe par kar udas vaadiyo me pahunch jaye.....maana ki salim ji....khushi bhi nahi hai baatne k liye mere paas magar aap dukhi ho aisa bhi theek nahi hai.... Bhala yeh kya baat hui. Ghabraiye nahi, mein un lamho ko yaad kar kay bilkul udas nahi hota hu. Balke aap kay kalam pardh kay aur un lamho ko yaad kar kay bohot inspiration paa ta hu. Humeshaa un lamho say bhag ta raha ta mein. Ab jaa kay kahi mujh mein itni himmat aayi hai kay mein unka saamna kar saku. Yekin maaniye mere ghar may tak kay kisi ko nahi pata kay mere saath kya hua. Shayad apne dard ko kagaz par utar kar kuch dil halka to ho gaya aur jo humeshaa say ghutan sa mehsoos hota tha woh ab bilkul nahi hai. Mein aap say shama chahunga kay aap ko humari wajay say koi thes pauchi ho to. Lekin teh-e dil se mein aap ka shukarguzaar hu kay aapne mujh mein itna hausla to badaya. Bus ab mere payro tale zamin na ghasitiye yeh keh kar kay "aap hamari posts na para kare" Haar gaya tha mein zindagi say Chal para tha mein maut kay sang Teri ek choti si baat nay Bhar diya meri duniya may rang (thoda kachha hu isliye baccha samajh kay maaf karna) Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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