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Love my 1st love letter - 25th May 2009, 12:10 PM

hi friends...... sabki life mei kuch khaas moments aate hai.... kal maine life ka 1st love letter likha... aap logo ke saath share karna chahti hu.... padhke zaroor bataiyega ke kaisa tha.. and kyaa ye love letter hota hai ye bhi batana.. kyunki mujhe ye bhi nahi pata ke love letter actually hota kaisa hai... naa kabhi likha naa kisika padha and naa hi dekha

My feelings for u AND only u.........u have been someone like wat shud i really say.....poori life mei ek khalbali si macha di aapne.......so...only and only for u my jaan...written frm my heart to my heartbeats...just to let u feel how special u r for me....love u a lot darling.....shayris aaj tak bohat likhi..... logo ke saath share bhi ki.....par kissi ko itna lucky nahi banne diya k kissike liye likhu..... aap wo pehle the aur aap hi rahenge.....aapke alawa koi us jagah aaya to maa papa ke liye..... par aap ki kissike saath koi tulna nahi...... aap hai toh main hu jaanu..... warna mai kyaa?... par kabhi kissi ko us singhasan pe nahi bithaya jispe aapko hi baithne ka haqq hai..... you are my everything..... b wid me even after my heartbeat stops..... i dont love u frm the centre of my heart.. but i love you whole heartedly..... jeeyungi toh aapke saath..... marungi toh aapke saath..... khudse pehle aapko jaane naa dungi..... uppar bhi pareshaan karungi..... u know y??? coz i love u .........
I LOVE YOU MY LOVE


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Surprising no one commented on this.
Nice, but too sweet. Its like what Simon Cowell said on 'Britains got talent', "7 sugar cubes in a cup of coffee." Maybe more
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Surprising no one commented on this.
Nice, but too sweet. Its like what Simon Cowell said on 'Britains got talent', "7 sugar cubes in a cup of coffee." Maybe more
hey thanks a lot yaar for replying......... hahahaha...... maine socha k woh padhkar jhoot bol rahe the k bohat achcha hai.......... chalo unke alawa also someone liked it...
mai toh sharam se paani paani ho rahi thi k 21 saal ki ho gayi hu aur ek love letter likhna nahi aata mujhe...... shame on me......
well thanks a lot dear........ aapko pata nahi hai mujhe yaha aapko paakar kitni zaada khushi hui hai.......... thanks again
   
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27th May 2009, 12:04 AM

Khanak dear
mujhe nahi pata love letter kaise likhte hain ...nahi to main bata deti ...kya hai na sweety yeh mobile aur email ke jamane mein ab royal mail aana band ho gayi hai ....gar letter aata hai ya to phone ka bill ya fir gas ka ....Love letter to kabhi aata hi nahi

tumhara yeh pyaar bhara khat bahot achha hai .....badi khubsoorati se tumne dil ki baat ko ...bayaan kiye ho ...aapki woh kya SDC ki member hai ...?jo unkeliye itni pyaari pyaari nazam poem aap likh rahe ho roz roz .....aise dikha jaye to ehesaas mujhe bahot pasand aayi aur tumhari yeh masoom love letter bhi

mujhe bhi tarqeeb sikha dena
taki main bhi kuchh likh paun
Zindagi bemaza ho gayi hai

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27th May 2009, 12:15 AM

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Khanak dear
mujhe nahi pata love letter kaise likhte hain ...nahi to main bata deti ...kya hai na sweety yeh mobile aur email ke jamane mein ab royal mail aana band ho gayi hai ....gar letter aata hai ya to phone ka bill ya fir gas ka ....Love letter to kabhi aata hi nahi

tumhara yeh pyaar bhara khat bahot achha hai .....badi khubsoorati se tumne dil ki baat ko ...bayaan kiye ho ...aapki woh kya SDC ki member hai ...?jo unkeliye itni pyaari pyaari nazam poem aap likh rahe ho roz roz .....aise dikha jaye to ehesaas mujhe bahot pasand aayi aur tumhari yeh masoom love letter bhi

mujhe bhi tarqeeb sikha dena
taki main bhi kuchh likh paun
Zindagi bemaza ho gayi hai

take care

Diya
thanksssssssssssssssssss diya
yaar aaj aap log nahi jaante mai kitni khush ho gayi hoo............ saath mei mere love letter ko 2 compliments...... thanku
and haa he is not here on sdc............ he is a complete busy man..... though takes out time 4 me... lovely na???
anyways thanks diya once again......... waise mujhe bhi yahi toh problem thi k i dont know ye love letters kaise hote hai so aap logo ki help maangi....... ab mom chachi logo se toh ye pooch nahi sakti na.........
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LOVE LETTER>........................................... .......

tum toh tution start karlo, learn to write love letters, saari ladkiyan seekh lengi tumse...............................kya mast likha hai tumne..................... waise kon khushnaseb hain woh, jinke liye apki kalam ne yeh phool barsaye hain.................



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hi friends...... sabki life mei kuch khaas moments aate hai.... kal maine life ka 1st love letter likha... aap logo ke saath share karna chahti hu.... padhke zaroor bataiyega ke kaisa tha.. and kyaa ye love letter hota hai ye bhi batana.. kyunki mujhe ye bhi nahi pata ke love letter actually hota kaisa hai... naa kabhi likha naa kisika padha and naa hi dekha

My feelings for u AND only u.........u have been someone like wat shud i really say.....poori life mei ek khalbali si macha di aapne.......so...only and only for u my jaan...written frm my heart to my heartbeats...just to let u feel how special u r for me....love u a lot darling.....shayris aaj tak bohat likhi..... logo ke saath share bhi ki.....par kissi ko itna lucky nahi banne diya k kissike liye likhu..... aap wo pehle the aur aap hi rahenge.....aapke alawa koi us jagah aaya to maa papa ke liye..... par aap ki kissike saath koi tulna nahi...... aap hai toh main hu jaanu..... warna mai kyaa?... par kabhi kissi ko us singhasan pe nahi bithaya jispe aapko hi baithne ka haqq hai..... you are my everything..... b wid me even after my heartbeat stops..... i dont love u frm the centre of my heart.. but i love you whole heartedly..... jeeyungi toh aapke saath..... marungi toh aapke saath..... khudse pehle aapko jaane naa dungi..... uppar bhi pareshaan karungi..... u know y??? coz i love u .........
I LOVE YOU MY LOVE


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Palke kuch jhukaayi si
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Dabi si muskaan muskurati si
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Tann mei uthti bechaini si
Mai kuch khoyi khoyi si

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Pairo mei ek kampan si
Chalte chalte mai rookti si
Khawabo mei kuch khoyi si
Kuch mai khoyi khoyi si

Aapko chup se dekhte si
Naa ho paas to dhoondhti si
Sab kuch khaas mai karti si
Payal ki jhankaar si
Kangan ki khankaar si
Khanakti hui aapki khanak si
Pyaar mei pagli hoti si
Aapke ehsaas mei khoti si
Kuch mai khoyi khoyi si.
............ aapki aur sirf aapki..... khanak



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LOVE LETTER>........................................... .......

tum toh tution start karlo, learn to write love letters, saari ladkiyan seekh lengi tumse...............................kya mast likha hai tumne..................... waise kon khushnaseb hain woh, jinke liye apki kalam ne yeh phool barsaye hain.................
god nalin ji.................... itna bada compliment
well thanks a lot........ woh khushnaseeb ek bohat hi pyaare se insaan hai jo mujhse bohat saara pyaar karte hai lekin phir bhi din mei atleast ek baat par daat dete hai
par i guess pyaar mei to ye sab chalta rehta hai... aur waise bhi unhe wapas manaana bhi mai jaanti hoo........ but nalin ji its really so gud to see ur reply....... thankss a lot
   
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hey thanks a lot yaar for replying......... hahahaha...... maine socha k woh padhkar jhoot bol rahe the k bohat achcha hai.......... chalo unke alawa also someone liked it...
mai toh sharam se paani paani ho rahi thi k 21 saal ki ho gayi hu aur ek love letter likhna nahi aata mujhe...... shame on me......
well thanks a lot dear........ aapko pata nahi hai mujhe yaha aapko paakar kitni zaada khushi hui hai.......... thanks again
Un ke alawa ke bhi tumhe comments/compliments chahiye tha tou... sab ko likhti.... sirf "unhe" hi kyun likha....hahahaha

I must say you are a great bluffer.... keep goin... Lagey raho....

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Un ke alawa ke bhi tumhe comments/compliments chahiye tha tou... sab ko likhti.... sirf "unhe" hi kyun likha....hahahaha

I must say you are a great bluffer.... keep goin... Lagey raho....

(What da world is comin to... galz feel ashamed of being naive and innocent huh...!)

OH GOD...........PLZZZZ JALDI QAYAMAAT AAJAYE
aisa nahi hai dear......... i wanted to know k sach mei ye kaisa hai........ woh jo keh rahe the woh sach tha yaa mujhe u hi mama bana rahe hai... aur kuch nahi
   
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aisa nahi hai dear......... i wanted to know k sach mei ye kaisa hai........ woh jo keh rahe the woh sach tha yaa mujhe u hi mama bana rahe hai... aur kuch nahi
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Un ke alawa ke bhi tumhe comments/compliments chahiye tha tou... sab ko likhti.... sirf "unhe" hi kyun likha....hahahaha

I must say you are a great bluffer.... keep goin... Lagey raho....

(What da world is comin to... galz feel ashamed of being naive and innocent huh...!)

OH GOD...........PLZZZZ JALDI QAYAMAAT AAJAYE

usne kaha tha aayega Qayamat tak
kaash ki Qayamat ho aur vo aajaye



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Jis ke baat par barosa nahi usse love letter hi kyun likh rahi ho...

Jo barosey ke khabil hi nahi ... usse pyar ka izhaar hi kyun kar rahi ho
well........... unpe bohat zaada bharosa hai and pyaar bhi bohat hai
but shayad aap is pyaar ko samajh nahi paayenge......... maine ye letter bohat pyaar se likha tha
and mera dil naa dukhe isliye wo jhoot toh nahi bol rahe ye hi dekhna chahti thi.........
...unpe mai us ishwar se zaada bharosa rakhti hoo in fact mere liye toh unki comparision ishwar se bhi nahi kyunki mere liye wo hi mere ishwar hai........ and aapse is baat ka suggestion to maine maanga hi nahi k mai kispe bharosa karu and kisse apne pyaar ka izhaar karu
   
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Jis ke baat par barosa nahi usse love letter hi kyun likh rahi ho...

Jo barosey ke khabil hi nahi ... usse pyar ka izhaar hi kyun kar rahi ho
well baqs.......... wat happened.......... bolti band kyu ho gayi
plzz dear stop giving me ur suggestions....... i dnt need any frm u... aap jo ho theek hai... yaha i dnt know how do people bear u???
jo bhi ho lets get it completed... ok?
so... never ever try to disscuss on my matters...
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well baqs.......... wat happened.......... bolti band kyu ho gayi
plzz dear stop giving me ur suggestions....... i dnt need any frm u... aap jo ho theek hai... yaha i dnt know how do people bear u???
jo bhi ho lets get it completed... ok?
so... never ever try to disscuss on my matters...
well thanks anyways and gudbye
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well........... unpe bohat zaada bharosa hai and pyaar bhi bohat hai
but shayad aap is pyaar ko samajh nahi paayenge......... maine ye letter bohat pyaar se likha tha
and mera dil naa dukhe isliye wo jhoot toh nahi bol rahe ye hi dekhna chahti thi.........
...unpe mai us ishwar se zaada bharosa rakhti hoo in fact mere liye toh unki comparision ishwar se bhi nahi kyunki mere liye wo hi mere ishwar hai........ and aapse is baat ka suggestion to maine maanga hi nahi k mai kispe bharosa karu and kisse apne pyaar ka izhaar karu
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hello diya
ham sab duniya me shirf ek duje ka sahara hai....mai samzta hu inshan ki jindagi me ek sahara aisha hota hai jo uski takdir hoti hai lekin jo chala gaya
so chala gaya takdir thori legay ...
ham ne to sab be vajha sab kho diya hai..
fir bhi aaj ek ekele saqsh ki tarha ji rahe hai jab kabhi koi kami mahesus hoti hai to aap sab logo se mil leta hu....
ishi tarha bus jindagi haste gaate bita lete... hai..

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hello diya
ham sab duniya me shirf ek duje ka sahara hai....mai samzta hu inshan ki jindagi me ek sahara aisha hota hai jo uski takdir hoti hai lekin jo chala gaya
so chala gaya takdir thori legay ...
ham ne to sab be vajha sab kho diya hai..
fir bhi aaj ek ekele saqsh ki tarha ji rahe hai jab kabhi koi kami mahesus hoti hai to aap sab logo se mil leta hu....
ishi tarha bus jindagi haste gaate bita lete... hai..

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hum vo phool hai jo loot gaye bahaar meiN~~~
rijaan ji......aap ayse messages diya ko pm karenge to diya ke saath saath hum sab ko bhi bohat khushi hogi,....kisi aur ki thread per diya ko msgs bhejna theek nahi, maine pehle bhi 2-3 threads per aapke msgs dekhe hain diya ke liya.........

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mai ek na samaz inshan hu.... muje muaf karna aga maine kishi ka dil dukhaya hai to
ab mai samaz nahi paya aap ye jo likha hai kishi aur ki thread msg bejna thik nahi hai isme kya bura hai mai to ek dest hone ke nate socha ki is bahane sabhi dosto se baat ho jaye kya ye bura hai
mujse kabhi bhi koi bhi kuch bhi khel khel sakta hai aur mai hu nasamaj ki samaj nahi pata hu....



apni taqdir me hum mohabbat mangna bhul gaye,

dil to manga par dildar mangna bhul gaye,

hum to dil kisi ko de aaye,

par badle me uska dil mangna bhul gaye...!!
dekhiye rijaan ji.....agar aap sab doston se kuch kehna chahte ho to zarur kahiye, diya ko quote karke, diya ka naam beech me laane ki aapko zarurat nahi hai

jab diya aapse baat nahi karna chahti hain, to aap is tarah thread per unka naam le lekar unhe pareshan na kare to behtar rahega

maine pm karke bhi aapko warn kiya..agar dubara aap aysa karenge to i will have to take strict action agaist you.........




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Hi Khanak.......frst love letter is too personal to share it publicly, anyways u need reassuarance frm us whthr ur bf complimentd u correctly or not, well it all depends on the feeling of a person u luv, frankly speaking i was amused whn i read ur luv letter........ur text msg was gud bt bit filmi attempt at nazam was ok bt not touching........hope u'll do better in ur second luv letter
thanks naaz........ but actually baat kuch aisi hai k mai kuch zaada hi filmi hoo... and yaa mai 1 aur last love letter likhi hoo... aage dobaara likhungi nahi...... saari baatei hamari phone pe ho hi jaati hai.... wo toh 1 love letter likhne ka craze tha so likh diya......
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bahutkhoob likha hai.........!!!!

bahutkhoob ji.
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hi friends...... sabki life mei kuch khaas moments aate hai.... kal maine life ka 1st love letter likha... aap logo ke saath share karna chahti hu.... padhke zaroor bataiyega ke kaisa tha.. and kyaa ye love letter hota hai ye bhi batana.. kyunki mujhe ye bhi nahi pata ke love letter actually hota kaisa hai... naa kabhi likha naa kisika padha and naa hi dekha

My feelings for u AND only u.........u have been someone like wat shud i really say.....poori life mei ek khalbali si macha di aapne.......so...only and only for u my jaan...written frm my heart to my heartbeats...just to let u feel how special u r for me....love u a lot darling.....shayris aaj tak bohat likhi..... logo ke saath share bhi ki.....par kissi ko itna lucky nahi banne diya k kissike liye likhu..... aap wo pehle the aur aap hi rahenge.....aapke alawa koi us jagah aaya to maa papa ke liye..... par aap ki kissike saath koi tulna nahi...... aap hai toh main hu jaanu..... warna mai kyaa?... par kabhi kissi ko us singhasan pe nahi bithaya jispe aapko hi baithne ka haqq hai..... you are my everything..... b wid me even after my heartbeat stops..... i dont love u frm the centre of my heart.. but i love you whole heartedly..... jeeyungi toh aapke saath..... marungi toh aapke saath..... khudse pehle aapko jaane naa dungi..... uppar bhi pareshaan karungi..... u know y??? coz i love u .........
I LOVE YOU MY LOVE


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Palke kuch jhukaayi si
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Tann mei uthti bechaini si
Mai kuch khoyi khoyi si

Mann mei chalti asmanjas si
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Pairo mei ek kampan si
Chalte chalte mai rookti si
Khawabo mei kuch khoyi si
Kuch mai khoyi khoyi si

Aapko chup se dekhte si
Naa ho paas to dhoondhti si
Sab kuch khaas mai karti si
Payal ki jhankaar si
Kangan ki khankaar si
Khanakti hui aapki khanak si
Pyaar mei pagli hoti si
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Un ke alawa ke bhi tumhe comments/compliments chahiye tha tou... sab ko likhti.... sirf "unhe" hi kyun likha....hahahaha

I must say you are a great bluffer.... keep goin... Lagey raho....

(What da world is comin to... galz feel ashamed of being naive and innocent huh...!)

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hi friends...... sabki life mei kuch khaas moments aate hai.... kal maine life ka 1st love letter likha... aap logo ke saath share karna chahti hu.... padhke zaroor bataiyega ke kaisa tha.. and kyaa ye love letter hota hai ye bhi batana.. kyunki mujhe ye bhi nahi pata ke love letter actually hota kaisa hai... naa kabhi likha naa kisika padha and naa hi dekha

My feelings for u AND only u.........u have been someone like wat shud i really say.....poori life mei ek khalbali si macha di aapne.......so...only and only for u my jaan...written frm my heart to my heartbeats...just to let u feel how special u r for me....love u a lot darling.....shayris aaj tak bohat likhi..... logo ke saath share bhi ki.....par kissi ko itna lucky nahi banne diya k kissike liye likhu..... aap wo pehle the aur aap hi rahenge.....aapke alawa koi us jagah aaya to maa papa ke liye..... par aap ki kissike saath koi tulna nahi...... aap hai toh main hu jaanu..... warna mai kyaa?... par kabhi kissi ko us singhasan pe nahi bithaya jispe aapko hi baithne ka haqq hai..... you are my everything..... b wid me even after my heartbeat stops..... i dont love u frm the centre of my heart.. but i love you whole heartedly..... jeeyungi toh aapke saath..... marungi toh aapke saath..... khudse pehle aapko jaane naa dungi..... uppar bhi pareshaan karungi..... u know y??? coz i love u .........
I LOVE YOU MY LOVE


Raat ke taare si tilmilati si
Sagar ki gehraai mei doobi si
Pedo se thitholi karti si
Bethe bethe kuch sochti si
Aapki yaado mei baithi si
Mai kuch khoyi khoyi si…

Palke kuch jhukaayi si
Hoth daatho ke beech dabaayi si
Dabi si muskaan muskurati si
Anguliyo ko ladaati si
Tann mei uthti bechaini si
Mai kuch khoyi khoyi si…

Mann mei chalti asmanjas si
Pait mei chalti khalbali si
Pairo mei ek kampan si
Chalte chalte mai rookti si
Khawabo mei kuch khoyi si
Kuch mai khoyi khoyi si…

Aapko chup se dekhte si
Naa ho paas to dhoondhti si
Sab kuch khaas mai karti si
Payal ki jhankaar si
Kangan ki khankaar si
Khanakti hui aapki khanak si
Pyaar mei pagli hoti si
Aapke ehsaas mei khoti si
Kuch mai khoyi khoyi si…….
............ aapki aur sirf aapki..... khanak

Well Khanak

Agar ise love letter kehte hain......... to Ae Khudaya to mujhe aaj hi kisi se Mohabbat kara de


Jokes apart dear.. !

its really awesome ............ u know.......... i've fallen in love wid ur letter


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hahahahaa..................... Oh God.............


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Pleasure is mine sweetie ek baat aur bolti hun wht i felt after reading ur post hope u dnt mind its just my thoughts, i thought ki agar ye post tumhare bf dekhte to unhe kaisa lagta??????? i hope u get wht i mean, if not thn just ignore ths comment
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Well Khanak

Agar ise love letter kehte hain......... to Ae Khudaya to mujhe aaj hi kisi se Mohabbat kara de


Jokes apart dear.. !

its really awesome ............ u know.......... i've fallen in love wid ur letter
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hmmmmmm.. love letter...
bhari mehfil meiN... haila publicly ye kya howing ji..

waise.. is love letter ko jara aur pyar ke honey pot meiN dubana padega den it will b perfact 4 ur man..
par joo bhi kaho.. haiN bada hi dilchasp aur mazedar... lagta haiN.. kisi ke pyar ka ekdam gehra aasar haiN, aap par..

chaliye har koi aap ko yaha samjhais de raha haiN, too hum bhi aap ko aapne andaaz meiN kuch kahate haiN,

jara gaur farmaiyega....


yeh jo tum mehfiL me kiya karti hooN
" uff " bada hii gaZab kiya karti hooN

baNd jubaaN kii batooN ko yuh tum
ek buland aawaz bana diya karti hooN

sUn loo yeh joo tum kiya karti hooN
Khanak bada hi galat kiya karti hooN

bayan-e-mohabbat toh likha karti hooN
par yuh mehfiL me sazaya Q karti hooN..


-- OMi


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Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......

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hmmmmmm.. love letter...
bhari mehfil meiN... haila publicly ye kya howing ji..

waise.. is love letter ko jara aur pyar ke honey pot meiN dubana padega den it will b perfact 4 ur man..
par joo bhi kaho.. haiN bada hi dilchasp aur mazedar... lagta haiN.. kisi ke pyar ka ekdam gehra aasar haiN, aap par..

chaliye har koi aap ko yaha samjhais de raha haiN, too hum bhi aap ko aapne andaaz meiN kuch kahate haiN,

jara gaur farmaiyega....

yeh jo tum mehfiL me kiya karti hooN
" uff " bada hii gaZab kiya karti hooN

baNd jubaaN kii batooN ko yuh tum
ek buland aawaz bana diya karti hooN

sUn loo yeh joo tum kiya karti hooN
Khanak bada hi galat kiya karti hooN

bayan-e-mohabbat toh likha karti hooN
par yuh mehfiL me sazaya Q karti hooN..


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omi..................thanks for the compliment and sorry for the mistake..............
   
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