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Love ab maaf bhi kar do - 27th May 2009, 12:27 AM

Khata ho gayi sajna
Ab maaf bhi kar do
Choti si bhool ki
Aisi sazaa na do
Zor se daat lo
Par baat toh karo
Yu rooth kar naa baitho
Thoda hass hi lo
Mai toh cartoon hoo
Ye jaante aap ho
Ab meri baato ko
Yu dil pe naa lo
Achcha baba promise
Ab kabhie aisa naa ho
Bas ek baar fir meri taraf
Pyaar se dekh toh lo

   
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27th May 2009, 11:04 AM

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Khata ho gayi sajna
Ab maaf bhi kar do
Choti si bhool ki
Aisi sazaa na do
Zor se daat lo
Par baat toh karo
Yu rooth kar naa baitho
Thoda hass hi lo
Mai toh cartoon hoo
Ye jaante aap ho
Ab meri baato ko
Yu dil pe naa lo
Achcha baba promise
Ab kabhie aisa naa ho
Bas ek baar fir meri taraf
Pyaar se dekh toh lo

wow khanak
2 good yaar,,,
i like it
keep it up


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wow khanak
2 good yaar,,,
i like it
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hey........thanks rani......
u r most welcome my jaan,,,,,,,,
,tc,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


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u r most welcome my jaan,,,,,,,,
,tc,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
raastei khud b khud mil jaayenge
bas aapka saath chahiye
agar hum tum saath ho jaayenge
kasam se... registaan mei bhi phool khil jayenge
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27th May 2009, 09:16 PM

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raastei khud b khud mil jaayenge
bas aapka saath chahiye
agar hum tum saath ho jaayenge
kasam se... registaan mei bhi phool khil jayenge
.......... love u yaar

love you 2,,,,,,,,,
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28th May 2009, 04:49 PM

Khanak Jii

its really super feelings expression expressed by you...

Now my felings also wants beg from my dear.......
aisa lag raha hai mere hi felings aapne likh dii

bhaut hi achche yunhi likhti rahiye....

Keep Up kep sharing.........
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28th May 2009, 05:37 PM

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Khanak Jii

its really super feelings expression expressed by you...

Now my felings also wants beg from my dear.......
aisa lag raha hai mere hi felings aapne likh dii

bhaut hi achche yunhi likhti rahiye....

Keep Up kep sharing.........
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thanks khwahish............... dil se aapka shukriyaaa
   
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30th May 2009, 12:23 AM

kyaa baat haiN... clap 4u..

now m becoming fan of ur poem.. really doing gr8.
fantastic and really nice flow..

Move is good.. attachment with word is also gud..

lagta haiN.. mausM ka suroor chaaNe laga haiN
aap par..

well.. keep wrtting.. gud luck 2u.


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Khata ho gayi sajna
Ab maaf bhi kar do
Choti si bhool ki
Aisi sazaa na do
Zor se daat lo
Par baat toh karo
Yu rooth kar naa baitho
Thoda hass hi lo
Mai toh cartoon hoo
Ye jaante aap ho
Ab meri baato ko
Yu dil pe naa lo
Achcha baba promise
Ab kabhie aisa naa ho
Bas ek baar fir meri taraf
Pyaar se dekh toh lo



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30th May 2009, 10:08 AM

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kyaa baat haiN... clap 4u..

now m becoming fan of ur poem.. really doing gr8.
fantastic and really nice flow..

Move is good.. attachment with word is also gud..

lagta haiN.. mausM ka suroor chaaNe laga haiN
aap par..

well.. keep wrtting.. gud luck 2u.

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nahi nahi.............. itni badi baat bhi naa kahiye........... mai aapki fan achchi lagti hoo par koi mera fan?????????? and woh bhi aap?
god....... kyaa baat keh di yaar........... well anyways............. thanks omi... thanks a lot for reading me.......
   
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31st May 2009, 03:22 PM

ur welcum..

hmmm... its nt a big deal yaar.. and i already hav celing faN.
soo aap meri faN.. no no.. me aapka faN hi theek lagta huN..lol lol


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nahi nahi.............. itni badi baat bhi naa kahiye........... mai aapki fan achchi lagti hoo par koi mera fan?????????? and woh bhi aap?
god....... kyaa baat keh di yaar........... well anyways............. thanks omi... thanks a lot for reading me.......


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ur welcum..

hmmm... its nt a big deal yaar.. and i already hav celing faN.
soo aap meri faN.. no no.. me aapka faN hi theek lagta huN..lol lol
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