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Love pata nahin kab - 5th June 2009, 10:00 PM

bekhabar is dil ko ,pata nahin kab hui unki khabar,
kab unke dil ne is dil ki dhadkano pe ,chhod diya apna asar.

masum tha ye dil kuch samajh nahin paaya,sirf use hi is dil mein basakar har lamha sharmaaya,har payal ke chhanak par thi ehsaaso ki gunjan,mere saanso mein chhupi thi sirf uski hi sargam.

har hararat shararat ban ne lagi thi,har karwat nind se shikayat karne lagi thi,
kaise woh anjaana chehra apna sa lagne laga tha ,kaise woh ankahe shabd kuch kehne lage the,

pata nahin kab meri dosti is bekhabar duniya se hone lagi thi
pata nahin kab meri ye zindagi is kadar badal gahyee thi,
pata nahin kab un anjaane kadmo ke sath maine kadam milana shuru kar diya tha ,pata nahin kab is dil mein uss anjaane ne ghar banana shuru kar diya tha ,pata nahin kab hamari duniya ehsaaso ke dor mein bandh gayee thi ,pata nahin kab woh chori chhupe aake mere dil mein bas gaya tha.

ek mulaaqat ki baat main kaise karu,uss ehsaaso ki baat kaise karu,pata nahin kab unke khayalo se meri tanhai ki baat ho gayee thi,pata nahin kab unke khumari mein taaro se bhari raat gujar gayee thi'


kuch kehte to kya kehte,chup rehte to kab tak rehte .
har lamha sirf unka hi naam lete,kyun ye khamosh rehkar meri jaan lete

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19th August 2009, 01:57 PM

pata nahin kab
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achha try kiya hain
par thoda aur achha ho sakta tha
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keep smiling
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19th August 2009, 02:19 PM

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pata nahin kab
he he he
achha try kiya hain
par thoda aur achha ho sakta tha
good one
keep smiling
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muskaan ji.......kya apna hi likkha bhul gayi kya???
pata hai ho jata hai kabhi kabhi

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19th August 2009, 03:09 PM

hamein khud ko hamesha judge karne chahiye
yahi meri soch hain
mujhe khud ko comment dena achha lagta hain
thnx meri poem pe inayat karne ki
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28th June 2010, 03:11 PM

wooow kohi tho meri type ki hi yahan----

yes ur rit khud pe comment karne ka mazaahi kuch aur hai jaani....


so nice wordings dosth keep rocking


Girthe huve tharon se kya mang the hO
O tho khud toot ke gir the haI
Mangna hi tho us aasman se mangO
Bina sahare zindagi kaise jiye ye sika tha hi tumE
Un hasinavon se kya ishq karte hO
Jine doosron se ziyad apni fikar hO
Karni ho mohabbath us suraj se karO
Jo khud jalkar doosron ko roshni chamkatha hO
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29th June 2010, 01:06 PM

bhot acha likha hai aapne



aapke liye ek sher


din gujar jata hai khud ko chunne main faraz
sham ko hawa chalti hai fir bikhar jata hu,
ji to cahta hai muft main jaan de dena faraz
fir sochta hu is mosam-e-kharidaar se kya lena kya dena
   
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24th July 2010, 05:28 PM

thnx
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once again thnx for ur appreciation and 4 ur support
   
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24th July 2010, 05:35 PM

ek mulaaqat ki baat main kaise karu,uss ehsaaso ki baat kaise karu,pata nahin kab unke khayalo se meri tanhai ki baat ho gayee thi,pata nahin kab unke khumari mein taaro se bhari raat gujar gayee thi'
achha tassavur hai, umda khyal, mujhe ye jyada achha laga , good job
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25th July 2010, 03:53 PM

thnx math kahoji....just shukriya boli ji.....!!!!

shayar and muskan ji aap dono ke liye...

Mere jaise lakhon milthe tuje
Muje tho sirf tu he ek tha

Her waqth thu mujse door huwa kartha
Phir bhi mere dil ke paas tha

Kithne baar thod diya thune dil mera
Kash thu ek baar muje manaliya hoth

Sub kuch lawtadiya there pyar me maine
Jhoot hi sahi mujse pyar hai kehdiya hotha
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Muskaan Arora Ji! Aik nafees poetry hai, achchha laga paRhkar. Daad qubul kijiye.

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bekhabar is dil ko ,pata nahin kab hui unki khabar,
kab unke dil ne is dil ki dhadkano pe ,chhod diya apna asar.

masum tha ye dil kuch samajh nahin paaya,sirf use hi is dil mein basakar har lamha sharmaaya,har payal ke chhanak par thi ehsaaso ki gunjan,mere saanso mein chhupi thi sirf uski hi sargam.

har hararat shararat ban ne lagi thi,har karwat nind se shikayat karne lagi thi,
kaise woh anjaana chehra apna sa lagne laga tha ,kaise woh ankahe shabd kuch kehne lage the,

pata nahin kab meri dosti is bekhabar duniya se hone lagi thi
pata nahin kab meri ye zindagi is kadar badal gahyee thi,
pata nahin kab un anjaane kadmo ke sath maine kadam milana shuru kar diya tha ,pata nahin kab is dil mein uss anjaane ne ghar banana shuru kar diya tha ,pata nahin kab hamari duniya ehsaaso ke dor mein bandh gayee thi ,pata nahin kab woh chori chhupe aake mere dil mein bas gaya tha.

ek mulaaqat ki baat main kaise karu,uss ehsaaso ki baat kaise karu,pata nahin kab unke khayalo se meri tanhai ki baat ho gayee thi,pata nahin kab unke khumari mein taaro se bhari raat gujar gayee thi'


kuch kehte to kya kehte,chup rehte to kab tak rehte .
har lamha sirf unka hi naam lete,kyun ye khamosh rehkar meri jaan lete
   
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skhukriya waquifji
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