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Love Jaldi thee.. - 3rd April 2016, 01:14 AM

Tumhen paane ki jaldi thee
Humen khone ki jaldi thee

Kisee bhi moud per ruktey
Safar karne ki jaldi thee

Usey samjha nahiN paaye
HameN jaane ki jaldee thee

Mohabbat haath aayee jAb
Usey khoney ki jaldee thee

Usey maaloom hay usko
Bichad jaane ki jaldee thee

Main usko rok laitee per
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3rd April 2016, 08:35 AM

bahut khoob saba ji......

Main usko rok laitee per
Usey jaane ki jaldi thee..

Waah!!kya kahne....

Likhti rahein......



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3rd April 2016, 08:52 AM

Usey maaloom hay usko
Bichad jaane ki jaldee thee


waahhh kya baat hai saba saahibaa nihaaytii khoobsurat kalaam pesh kiyaa hai aapne.... dard se labrez is ghazal ke liye meri traf se dher saari daad aur duaaen...
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3rd April 2016, 10:43 AM

La-jawaab ghazal hui hai saba sahiba

Itni mukhtasar behar mai bohat kuch keh diya

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3rd April 2016, 03:33 PM

thnks madhu ji aa,p nay saraha,a
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bahut khoob saba ji......

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Usey jaane ki jaldi thee..

Waah!!kya kahne....

Likhti rahein......


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3rd April 2016, 03:34 PM

thanks shaad saaheb aa,p nay saraah,aa

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Usey maaloom hay usko
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waahhh kya baat hai saba saahibaa nihaaytii khoobsurat kalaam pesh kiyaa hai aapne.... dard se labrez is ghazal ke liye meri traf se dher saari daad aur duaaen...
khush rahiye salaamat rahiye

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3rd April 2016, 03:35 PM

[SIZE="4"]thanks mujahid saaheb[ aa,p nay sarahaa pasand kia is ghazal ko shukria/SIZE]

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29th April 2016, 08:30 AM

Saba jee......ek nayab aur bemisaal nagma aapka.....dil se daad .....



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