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Kyun nahi.n hai aaj woh hulchul……… - 13th May 2009, 04:49 PM

Hello Friends !
I m dedicating my this poem to Nazu............. coz she is not that active on SDC these days and i was missing her so much, when i wrote this..... i hope she will like it

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Kyun nahi.n hai aaj woh hulchul………

Kal tak jo khela karti thi, har taraf machalti thi,
Kaha.n hai aaj woh pyaari surat,

roz savere khilti thi, auro.n ko khushboo deti thi,
kaha.n gai woh dil ki moorat,

atkheliyon ne jiski hardamm dhoom yahan machayi thi,
baatein bhi karti thi jo khoobsurat,

Apna dard chupaye dil mein, auro.n ko hasati thi,
Us hasti kali ki humko aaj bhi hai zaroorat………!

-Shan


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Hello Friends !
I m dedicating my this poem to Nazu............. coz she is not that active on SDC these days and i was missing her so much, when i wrote this..... i hope she will like it

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Kyun nahi.n hai aaj woh hulchul………

Kal tak jo khela karti thi, har taraf machalti thi,
Kaha.n hai aaj woh pyaari surat,

roz savere khilti thi, auro.n ko khushboo deti thi,
kaha.n gai woh dil ki moorat,

atkheliyon ne jiski hardamm dhoom yahan machayi thi,
baatein bhi karti thi jo khoobsurat,

Apna dard chupaye dil mein, auro.n ko hasati thi,
Us hasti kali ki humko aaj bhi hai zaroorat………!

-Shan
Wah Shan Bhai achcha likha hai,

Sach me tumne kitna samjha hai Naaz ko... I am also agry with you....
And it's really superb expression from your.. mujhe fakhar hai tum jaise Dost per...
And this line is really true about her I Know also....

Apna dard chupaye dil mein, auro.n ko hasati thi,
Us hasti kali ki humko aaj bhi hai zaroorat………!

and I also missing you Naaz,

Keep It Up...

Good work.....

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Wah Shan Bhai achcha likha hai,

Sach me tumne kitna samjha hai Naaz ko... I am also agry with you....
And it's really superb expression from your.. mujhe fakhar hai tum jaise Dost per...
And this line is really true about her I Know also....

Apna dard chupaye dil mein, auro.n ko hasati thi,
Us hasti kali ki humko aaj bhi hai zaroorat………!

and I also missing you Naaz,

Keep It Up...

Good work.....

Khush raho Duaon ke sath....
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Hello Friends !
I m dedicating my this poem to Nazu............. coz she is not that active on SDC these days and i was missing her so much, when i wrote this..... i hope she will like it

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Kyun nahi.n hai aaj woh hulchul………

Kal tak jo khela karti thi, har taraf machalti thi,
Kaha.n hai aaj woh pyaari surat,

roz savere khilti thi, auro.n ko khushboo deti thi,
kaha.n gai woh dil ki moorat,

atkheliyon ne jiski hardamm dhoom yahan machayi thi,
baatein bhi karti thi jo khoobsurat,

Apna dard chupaye dil mein, auro.n ko hasati thi,
Us hasti kali ki humko aaj bhi hai zaroorat………!

-Shan
Shaan..

bahot khoob likha hai tumne..........


Aur haan Naaz aaj-kal bahot kam nazar aati hai SDC par..... Shayad isi liye tum bhi Invisible mod par rahene lage ho...........

Likhte raho

Khush raho

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bahot khoob likha hai tumne..........


Aur haan Naaz aaj-kal bahot kam nazar aati hai SDC par..... Shayad isi liye tum bhi Invisible mod par rahene lage ho...........

Likhte raho

Khush raho

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I m dedicating my this poem to Nazu............. coz she is not that active on SDC these days and i was missing her so much, when i wrote this..... i hope she will like it

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Kyun nahi.n hai aaj woh hulchul………

Kal tak jo khela karti thi, har taraf machalti thi,
Kaha.n hai aaj woh pyaari surat,

roz savere khilti thi, auro.n ko khushboo deti thi,
kaha.n gai woh dil ki moorat,

atkheliyon ne jiski hardamm dhoom yahan machayi thi,
baatein bhi karti thi jo khoobsurat,

Apna dard chupaye dil mein, auro.n ko hasati thi,
Us hasti kali ki humko aaj bhi hai zaroorat………!

-Shan


how sweet..................awesome yaar SHAAN........kaash ! hume bhi koi itni shiddat se yaad karta.....


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how sweet..................awesome yaar SHAAN........kaash ! hume bhi koi itni shiddat se yaad karta.....
tum gayab hokar to dekho......... tumhara to kaan pakad ke wapis le aaunga......

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Well Dude..... Shaan this is the problem with you, anybody Tom, dick n harry can take you for a ride.....hehehehe

Well i Alwayz take the driving seat, this way i'll not be taken for a ride

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Well Dude..... Shaan this is the problem with you, anybody Tom, dick n harry can take you for a ride.....hehehehe

Well i Alwayz take the driving seat, this way i'll not be taken for a ride

Now dont be Senti....just be Mental okai
Okie Dokie........................................

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kya khoob likhe ho shan jee
ab to lagta hai main bhi mahino gayab rah jauN
taki koi to likhe mereliye bhi

achha laga aapki tahreer
yun hi likhte rahiye

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kya khoob likhe ho shan jee
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taki koi to likhe mereliye bhi

achha laga aapki tahreer
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Shaan aur bhi buri buri baatein karta hai tumhare barey mein... when you are not around.............

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Yakeeeeen nahi aata.... i have proves.....


Aur Shaan... you double timer...tauba tauba... Lamha se pyar ke waadey, Naaz se flirting.... Praneeta ke saath bachon ke naam bhi rak liye tu ney
   
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Yakeeeeen nahi aata.... i have proves.....


Aur Shaan... you double timer...tauba tauba... Lamha se pyar ke waadey, Naaz se flirting.... Praneeta ke saath bachon ke naam bhi rak liye tu ney
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Yakeeeeen nahi aata.... i have proves.....


Aur Shaan... you double timer...tauba tauba... Lamha se pyar ke waadey, Naaz se flirting.... Praneeta ke saath bachon ke naam bhi rak liye tu ney
beech mein mera naam kyu laya tumne....tumhare iraden kya hai??
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I m dedicating my this poem to Nazu............. coz she is not that active on SDC these days and i was missing her so much, when i wrote this..... i hope she will like it

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Kyun nahi.n hai aaj woh hulchul………

Kal tak jo khela karti thi, har taraf machalti thi,
Kaha.n hai aaj woh pyaari surat,

roz savere khilti thi, auro.n ko khushboo deti thi,
kaha.n gai woh dil ki moorat,

atkheliyon ne jiski hardamm dhoom yahan machayi thi,
baatein bhi karti thi jo khoobsurat,

Apna dard chupaye dil mein, auro.n ko hasati thi,
Us hasti kali ki humko aaj bhi hai zaroorat………!

-Shan

bahot khub dost......good going
keep up the good work
Regards
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bahot khub dost......good going
keep up the good work
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oye!!!!!!!!!!!!beech mein mera naam kyu laya tune....tere iraden kya hai re??!

praneeta aap se request hai ke aap itni rough language me baat na karein, ye ek adab ki mehfil hai,zara is baat ka khayaal rakhiye......badi meherbaani hogi.....




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praneeta aap se request hai ke aap itni rough language me baat na karein, ye ek adab ki mehfil hai,zara is baat ka khayaal rakhiye......badi meherbaani hogi.....
sorry zainy ji....frustration mein kuch bhi ho jata hai
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hmmm... finally aaj ka task poora hova.. kam se kam ek ko tou frustrate karna chahiye ek din mein
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hey ,

ek humble suggestion doon guys.......................... without any offence, yeh specially moderators ke liye hain, MODS, please SDC pe live chat/live thread ki facility shuru kijiye naaa.....................

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ek humble suggestion doon guys.......................... without any offence, yeh specially moderators ke liye hain, MODS, please SDC pe live chat/live thread ki facility shuru kijiye naaa.....................

What say Guys...........????

Well....suggestion rejected... cuz this site is only for shayari... no faltoo chatting and no live shows... yahan log sirf dukhi aatma hotey hai and kabhi kabhi khush hotey hai tou koi khushi wali ghazal pesh karte hai... and most of them are sooooooooo humble..... Like what they call themselves... ( Nacheeez, tahey dil se... tahey jigar se shukar guzaar...mamnoo mashkooor hoon..... apki hasla afzai -whatever....)

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