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aabhi yaad mujhko hai .......... - 24th April 2016, 08:36 AM
Doston ek nayi ghazal bazm mein rakh raha hoon...Umeed hai aap logon ko pasand aayegi


vo parvat vo mausam vo dilkash nazaare
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abhi yaad mujhko hai saare ke saare
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yun dhalte the din justjuu mein tu.mhari
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muhabbat mein kab thi zubaan ki zaroorat
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mujhe ab bhi dikhte ho bas tum hi jaanam
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Waah waah!!!! Aaj vahi purana mast andaaz dikha aapki ghazal me....vahi dila chura lene wale alfaz aur adayegi...

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Bahut khoob.....is khoobsoorat rawaan ghazal par daad qubool karein.........

Likhte rahiye....

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Waah waah!!!! Aaj vahi purana mast andaaz dikha aapki ghazal me....vahi dila chura lene wale alfaz aur adayegi...

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Bahut khoob.....is khoobsoorat rawaan ghazal par daad qubool karein.........

Likhte rahiye....

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duaa hai ke ye kalam apna jaadu aise hi chalaati rahe... shaadaab rahiye

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Doston ek nayi ghazal bazm mein rakh raha hoon...Umeed hai aap logon ko pasand aayegi


vo parvat vo mausam vo dilkash nazaare
vo baadal ke saaye vo lehron ke dhaare

abhi yaad mujhko hai saare ke saare
vo jheelon ka paani vo raaton ke taare

yun dhalte the din justjuu mein tu.mhari
guzarti thi shaamein bhi zulfon sahaare

muhabbat mein kab thi zubaan ki zaroorat
vo tujhse thi baatein ishaaron ishaare

mujhe ab bhi dikhte ho bas tum hi jaanam
kaha kho gaye log sheh.ron ke saare ?

ruko 'mast' thehro to ! dekho zara tum
kahin bhi nahi koi tumko pukaare

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वो पर्वत वो मौसम वो दिलकश नज़ारे
वो बादल के साये वो लहरों के धारे

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वो झीलों का पानी वो रातों के तारे

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मुझे अब भी दीखते हो बस तुम ही जानम
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Doston ek nayi ghazal bazm mein rakh raha hoon...Umeed hai aap logon ko pasand aayegi


vo parvat vo mausam vo dilkash nazaare
vo baadal ke saaye vo lehron ke dhaare

abhi yaad mujhko hai saare ke saare
vo jheelon ka paani vo raaton ke taare

yun dhalte the din justjuu mein tu.mhari
guzarti thi shaamein bhi zulfon sahaare

muhabbat mein kab thi zubaan ki zaroorat
vo tujhse thi baatein ishaaron ishaare

mujhe ab bhi dikhte ho bas tum hi jaanam
kaha kho gaye log sheh.ron ke saare ?

ruko 'mast' thehro to ! dekho zara tum
kahin bhi nahi koi tumko pukaare

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वो पर्वत वो मौसम वो दिलकश नज़ारे
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मुझे अब भी दीखते हो बस तुम ही जानम
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