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shahana -
7th October 2003, 01:18 PM
i meet u as a stranger
i look u as a friend i hope we meet in heaven where friendship never ends |
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17th October 2003, 10:06 PM
Wonderful shahana jee...
one moe fantassy fofriends ..... I wish i could fly like a bird in the sky with u my dear without any fear up thee in the sky whre life doesnt cry with u my dear without any fear इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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18th October 2003, 11:09 PM
well shahana ji ur poem is damn good
keep writing In love you will never be rid of the constant ache of your heart what if you gave your heart away? the ache will never depart. meri nahi hai Hasan Sahab ki hain award paai thi poetry.com pe ye poem unki n unki site pe bhi hain waise aap achha likti hain n dard-e- sahab aap bhi achha likte hain keep it up |
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21st October 2003, 06:21 AM
Shahana Jee, bohot achha laga. Aise hi likhte rahiyega. Shukriya.
Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you. Great Jee, aapka poems toh hein hi achha! Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you. Modern Jee, Hasan Jee ka poem bhi achha hein. Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. Allah Hafiz. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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21st October 2003, 02:27 PM
salam thanks to all of u
its my pleasure u al like my poems take cre khuda hafiz with regards shahana |
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