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Dhaagh dehalvi sahab ka ek sher pesh hai...
yakeen to hai vo khat ka jawaab likhenge magar navishta e qismat kisi ko kya maloom. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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adaab dston... .....khat lafz se bahut sari purani yadein taza ho gayi....ab vo daur hee nahi hai jab khat me dil nikaal ke rakh diya karte the log..aur fir dil ke badle dil hee ayega ya nahi is baat ka intzaar hota tha....vo intzaar vo vaqt kuch aur hee tha...bas usi me kho gayi aur chaah kar bhi vo sab nahi likh payi jo wakai likhna chahti thi......fir bhi jo ban paya hai...aap sab se share kiye bina nahi rah payi.... chhup ke tanhaii me jab bhi khat tere padhti hoo.n mai.n khud hee beeti bato.n par roti hu.n aur ha.nsti hu.n mai.n yu.n to haal e dil sanam tumko na likh paye kabhi. dil ki batei.n par teri tasweero.n se karti h.n main. muskuraa ke ja chhupe aur dil bhi sa.ng me le gaye. bekhabar tere liye hee dar b dar firti hu.n main. rangat e rukh aur a.nkhon me basi sharm o haya. har ada ka raaz tuu kaise kahoo.n darti hu.n mai.n ho duao.n mei.n asar uska kabhi deedar ho raat din jiske liye jeeti hu.n aur marti hu.n mai.n khat nahi ye barishei.n hai.n chahato.n ke naam ki in fuharo.n me gulo.n si aaj fir khilti hu.n main अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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kyaa baat hai madhu ji bahut haseen lafzon se aapne apne ehsaason ko bayaan kiya hai..... aur shuru me jaisaa aapne likhaa hai ke ab wo zamaana nahi rahaa, to beshaq us zamane ki baat hi kuch aur thii jo aj ki bhagtee daudtee zindagee se pare thi aur asal maayne me asal zindgi bhi thii..... aapka ye kalaam mere dil ke bahut kareeb rahaa... aur behad pasand aaya..... likhte rahiye aur khush rahiye.... Shaad.... |
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Ehsason ko samajhne ke liye...aur qalaam ko pasand karne ka bahut shukriya...yun hee inayat banaye rakhiye.... Shaad rahiye..... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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29th October 2015, 09:36 AM
vo KHat vo chehra vo zulf-e-siyaah to dekho ki shaam sub.h ke baad aa.e sub.h shaam ke baad Aasi Ghazipuri Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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shukriya.....mast sahab........... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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19th November 2015, 10:22 AM
Ek aur khaak sher mehfil mein pesh-e-kidhmat hai...
na khat aaya aur kisi ki khabar nahi aayi mayuus hoon meri lakht-e-jigar nahi aayi Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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waaaahhh...bahut khooob.................
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ye tere khat, tiree khushboo, ye tere khawab-o-khyaal mataa-e-jaan hain tere qaul-o-qasam ki tarah guzishtaa saal maine inhein gin ke rakha tha kisi ghareeb ki jori hui raqam ki tarah jaun elia... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Doston,
Ek arse se yeh mehfil kuch tham si gayi hai to chaliye ise waapis ujaagar karte hai ek naya lafz dekar aur vo hai 'raqiib' Word: raqiib Meaning: Rival/Opponent Dagh Dehlvi sahab ke ek sher se shuruaat karna chahungaa usne kaha hai sabr paDega raqiib ka le aur be-qarar hua be-qarar dil Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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ummeed hai sabhi dost aage aakar mahfil me kuch aur naye rang bharenge..... filhaal meri taraf se ek adna si koshish pesh hai...... jala ke dil mera aksar mujhe rulata hai raqib usko kyun e dil kaha na jata hai ? usi ke vaste har ek dua hai hothon par nazar chura ke jo yu hee mujhe satata hai... madhu. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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ji...mujhe bhi intzaar hai is lafz par sabke khayalon ko padhne ka.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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doston..
fir se hazir hun lafz raqiib par ek khayaal k sath.. Aapki tawajjo ki darkaar hai.. Kitna bada hai kon maloom kaise ho Kiske raqiib kitne bas itna jaan lo. Madhu अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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4th January 2016, 06:53 PM
baithe hue raqeeb hain dilbar ke aaspaas,
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Mera raqeeb jinke dard par tadap uthe Tamaam zakhm mile aise in habeebon se..... Madhu... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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behad shukriya... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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mahfil ko aage badhayein doston...........................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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4th April 2016, 09:34 AM
Are sach mein mehfil tham si gayi thi - chaliye agle lafz ki aur rukh karte hai aur mere zehan mein jo lafz aa raha hai vo hai 'saavan', umeed hai sabhi dost is lafz ko lekar mehfil ko aage badhaayenge....
chaliye ek sher jo zehan mein aa raha hai aap sab ke aage rakhtaa hoon - shayar ka naam yaad nahi maaufi ka talabgaar hoon ye husn-e-nau-bahaar ye saavan kii badliyaa.n piinaa hai farz aur na piinaa haraam aaj Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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ek sher pesh kar rahi hun ahmad nadeem qasmi ji ka.. teri zulfein hai ki sawan ki ghata chhayi hai tere aariz hain ki phoolon ko hansii aayi hai..... ummeed hai sabhi dost is unwaan par jald hee apne khayaal pesh karenge.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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5th April 2016, 08:03 PM
Bada Khus Hua Karta Hai Wo Sawan Ke Mosam Mein.. Ham Ankho Se Barishe Karte Rahe Uski Hasi Ki Khatir.. |
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Azaz sahab..khoob sher kaha..... Aise hee mahfil sajate rahiyega.......... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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5th April 2016, 08:35 PM
Tanha chor'h gaya voh mujh ko sawan ke mausam mai bhi
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5th April 2016, 10:39 PM
buhet acha likh,aa hay aa,p sab nay
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5th April 2016, 10:42 PM
Arz Kiya Hai Ki..
Ye To Wahi Bhini Si Khusbu Hai Mitti Ki "Safreen" Jo Pehli Barish Mein Aati Hai.. Abhi Sawan Ka Mosam To Aaya Nahi..Lagta Hai Teri Ankho Ne Hi Barishe Ki Hai.. Azaz AHMAD |
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8th April 2016, 03:01 PM
Aadaab dosto
Iss mehfil ko daraaz karte hue pesh hu naye lafz ke saath. Umeed karta hu aap saahibaan kaseer ta'daad mai shirkat karenge. Word: Falak Meaning= sky/aasmaan Arz karta hu Aye falak itni unchayi zyada achhi bhi nahi Girtey hai jo itni urooj se voh khaak hojatey hai Mujahid |
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8th April 2016, 05:57 PM
nice sher nice word mujahid saheb
mat sehal humen jano phirta hey falak barson tub khaak ke pardey se insaan nikalte hein meer taqi meer |
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8th April 2016, 11:02 PM
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Kuch batein yahaan par kahna chahoongi...ki ek unwaan par ek hafte ka vaqt diya jana zaroori hai...jisse ki sabhi ko apne khayaal pesh karne ka mauka mile... Aur naya lafz dene se pahle chal rahe unwaan ke khatm hone ki information dena bhi zaroori hai.... Ummeed hai sabhi is baat ka dhyaan rakhenge.. Sabhi doston..se guzarish hai falaq par apne khayaal hamare beech zaroor rakhein... Bahut shukriya.. Aapki dost Madhu अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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