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Love Kee kahan main kee kahaan ik ghazal - 5th July 2011, 07:56 AM

Dosto ik naviN ghazal pesh kar riha haaN aas hai aaonu pasaNd aayegi





KEE KAHAAN MAIN KEE KAHAAN CHAN TAARIYAAN NU KEE KAHAAN



Kee kahaaN main kee kahaN chan tariyaaN nu kee kahaaN
kyoN nahioN aaiyaa aje saariyaaN nu kee kahaaN

vaaT teri takdaa chan taaN kadoN da sauoN gayaa
naal mere jaagde nazaariyaaN nu kee kahaaN

dostaaN di mahfillaN’ ch hasda haaN baar baar
ikall di bukkal sulaghde aNgaariyaaN nu kee kahaaN

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dil’ch uTHde valvale bechaaryaaN nu kee kahaaN

tuN nahiyoN kade aawna ‘Ashk’ taaN ih jaanda
latke hoye saahaaN de siskaariyaaN nu kee kahaaN

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8th July 2011, 05:23 PM

bahut hi shaandar.... Punjabi di eh badkismati hai ki punjabi wich gazal llikhan di himmat koi koi hi karda hai. lekin tusi saanu yaad karwaaundey renhdey ho....

naal merey jaagdey nazaariaaN nu ki kahaan....

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Love Kee kahaan main kee kahaan - 18th July 2011, 08:13 AM

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bahut hi shaandar.... Punjabi di eh badkismati hai ki punjabi wich gazal llikhan di himmat koi koi hi karda hai. lekin tusi saanu yaad karwaaundey renhdey ho....

naal merey jaagdey nazaariaaN nu ki kahaan....

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aapnu ghazal pasand aayi, meri ,mehant safal hoi. bas inj hi hausla vadhande rehna. bahut dhanvaad

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kaim gazal aa ji...likhde rho............................................... ........
   
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Kee kahaan main kee kahaan - 13th August 2011, 12:25 AM

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kaim gazal aa ji...likhde rho............................................... ........
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Ehsaasaan dil vich utr gaye - 13th August 2011, 07:00 PM

Ashk Saabji baut din baad inni sohni gazal o v punjabi gazzal parhan milli..todda dili shukriyya jee...


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Smile Kee kahaan main kee kahaan - 30th August 2011, 10:52 AM

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Ashk Saabji baut din baad inni sohni gazal o v punjabi gazzal parhan milli..todda dili shukriyya jee...
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aapnu ghazal pasand aayii, tahedil ton shukriya

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31st August 2011, 03:40 PM

bahut hi shaandaar gazal bai ji .. punjabi ch gazal kade kade parhan nu mildi a, mainu tilak ji di gal v bahut jach gyi.. thnks for sharing ..

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