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Tribute to Papa - 19th January 2005, 09:56 PM

These are the few words dedeicated to my Dad who left for a heavenly abode on 26th of December leaving the whole family behind in turmoil. Most of u won't understand it as it is in Punjabi but It had to be written in punjabi which is the language I learnt from him.



Kuchh likhna chahnda teri yaad wich,
Par samajh nahin aaundi ki likhan..
WaDhi-iyan di teri kiwe gal cheRa
Kinjj apne rab di zindagi likhan..

Janam-daata hain tuu Mera
Tuu hi mainu Naam ditta..
FaR ke ungal chalna sikhaya
Vidya daa tuu daan ditta.
Raatan nuu jaag ke kirat kamai
Mainu bistarian daa araam ditta
Baasa kha kha shukar manaya,
Sada taaza mainu pakwaan ditta.
Dil di si khwahish eh hi,
Khidmat si kuchh karni teri,
Tuu taa ditta sab kuchh menu
Par tenu main shamshaan ditta

Maapeya layi si thandi chaan tuu,
Lagan na ditti kade hawa taap di.
Mangda reha sada kher unha di,
Chadd parwah apne aap di.
Aap taa khatiyan bahut kamaiyan,
Kar kar ke sewa Maa-Baap di,
Saddi waari tur gaya ohle,
Bedarda de ke jind varlaap di.

Saare kehnde tuu duur hain maitho,
Par mainu nahin ehh jaapda hai
Teri maut di sachhi khabar den wala
Sarasar jhooth hi ohh aakhda hai.
Tuu vekhda hai is duniya nuu,
Jadd Akkhan main kholda haan
Dukhi marija’n nuu khush karan layi
Teri hi taa boli main bolda haan
Tuu maitho hai nahin juda
Tuu mere wich hi vassda hain
Meri aawaz ’ch hai teri awaaz
Meri hassi wich tuu hassda hain.

Pehla taa beshak duur si maitho.
Par hun hain mere chaar chufere
Mainu zindagi o’ den waale
Mar ke ho gaya hor wi neRe
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hi - 19th January 2005, 10:17 PM

Mr. Ghayalparwana ... maaf karna mai aapka naam nahi jaanti.

pehele to mai aapko yeh batadu ki dil ko dard mehsoos hua jab yeh suna ki aapke papa is duniya mein nahi rahe ... i know how it feels ... lekin zindagi yoon rukti to nahi ... aapne bahot hi khoob likha hai ... waise punjabi meri bhasha(language) nahi hai lekin samajh leti hoon aur aapka yeh kalaam mujhe bahot hi pasand aaya .... specially these two lines ...

"Tuu taa ditta sab kuchh menu
Par tenu main shamshaan ditta"

bahot dard se likha hai aapne ki padhne wale ko bhi aapka dard mehsoos ho .... take care and be brave ... u know ur dad is watching u and wants the best for u ...

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I am so Proud of You** - 19th January 2005, 10:19 PM

Dear Varinder Jee, Aapke saath hi hain Aur kuch youn shayaad ki Pita Jee..Aap hi mein Hain**Dard ki keya kahoun, I can't say much Aapna khayaal rakhiyega...God bless You.


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Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
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19th January 2005, 10:22 PM

Dukhi marija’n nuu khush karan layi
Teri hi taa boli main bolda haan
Tuu maitho hai nahin juda
Tuu mere wich hi vassda hain
Meri aawaz ’ch hai teri awaaz
Meri hassi wich tuu hassda hain.

Pyaare ghayal bhayyia...

aapki yeh kavita dil ki gehraahiyon tak chuu gayi...what can be a better tribute than this for a devtaa who brought you to this world and made you what you are now...haan main bhi sochti hoon ki papa duur nahin hain aapse...aapke paas...aapke andar...aapke aayine mein samaayein hain...unke diye sanskaar hii hain jo aapka insaan ke liye dard shayri ke ruup mein saamne aata hai...unki virasat aage badhate rehna...

tuu hi mera rab tu hee jahaan hain
meri har chavvi ch tuu vidymaan hain

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Dost - 19th January 2005, 10:41 PM

Dost Varinder ji,


Varinder ji aap ke dil se nikle hua har alfaz ne aaj hum sabhi ko chhu liya hai..aur mein bhi yehi maanta hoon ke aap ke papa aap ke aur aap ke parivaar se paas hi hai,unki yaadein aap ke paas hi rahengi......dost aap apna khayal rakhiye ga....

Aap ke papa aap ke har kadam kadam mein aap ke saath hai...

Khayal Rakhiye ga aap apna Varinder ji,

take care...
bye


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20th January 2005, 08:26 PM

Ghayalparwana saahab...namaskaar....aapki ye rachna parhi...Pita ke naam aapka ye sandesh...aapka ye prem dekha to...haaN aaNkheiN kuchh nam ho gai...

Sahi kaha aapne...jab hamaare kuchh dene ka waqt aaya to wo nahi the wo sneh paane ko...

Per saahab yahi kahooNga..ke phir bhi wo haiN...jeisa ki aapne kahaa...wo aapme haiN or aapka sneh dekhte haiN.

Bahut achchha laga aapki ye rachna parhkar...or mujhe ummeed hai aapke pita ji ki aatma bhi bahut khush hui hogi unke prati aapka ye prem dekhkar.

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21st January 2005, 12:45 PM

Namaste Ghayalparwana Ji,

Bohot dukh hua yeh khabar sun ke. Saath hi dil bhi bhar aaya aapka yeh pyaar dekh. Bhai, jab dil ki awaaz nikal thi hai to uski koi zabaan nahi hoti. Bas dilo par asar kar jaati hai jaise ke aapke is kalaam ne kiya hai.

Upar waala aapko aur aap ke parivar ko is mushkil ghari paar karne ki himmat ata farmaye


Luvs,

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21st January 2005, 01:07 PM

varinder veer ji..eh khabar sun kar mera vi dil ujaat jeya ho gaya...apna koi russ jaaye te banda mana leaunda he ... par je tur jaaye te bas hanju sambhe nai sambde...

tuhade likhe shabda vich unnanda pyar te ashirwaad sada banya rahe..

Tuu vekhda hai is duniya nuu,
Jadd Akkhan main kholda haan
Dukhi marija’n nuu khush karan layi
Teri hi taa boli main bolda haan
Tuu maitho hai nahin juda
Tuu mere wich hi vassda hain
Meri aawaz ’ch hai teri awaaz
Meri hassi wich tuu hassda hain.

Tusi ese pyaar naal apna farz nibhaaye jaao..rab tuhaanu age vadhan da haunslaa deve te naale tuhade pitaji di ruuh nu shanti...

aapna khayaal rakhna

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Re: Tribute to Papa - 21st January 2005, 02:59 PM

Dear Varinder Bhai....

.......................

Sa-Sneh....

Aapka..
Vij..


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Originally posted by ghayalparwana
These are the few words dedeicated to my Dad who left for a heavenly abode on 26th of December leaving the whole family behind in turmoil. Most of u won't understand it as it is in Punjabi but It had to be written in punjabi which is the language I learnt from him.



Kuchh likhna chahnda teri yaad wich,
Par samajh nahin aaundi ki likhan..
WaDhi-iyan di teri kiwe gal cheRa
Kinjj apne rab di zindagi likhan..

Janam-daata hain tuu Mera
Tuu hi mainu Naam ditta..
FaR ke ungal chalna sikhaya
Vidya daa tuu daan ditta.
Raatan nuu jaag ke kirat kamai
Mainu bistarian daa araam ditta
Baasa kha kha shukar manaya,
Sada taaza mainu pakwaan ditta.
Dil di si khwahish eh hi,
Khidmat si kuchh karni teri,
Tuu taa ditta sab kuchh menu
Par tenu main shamshaan ditta

Maapeya layi si thandi chaan tuu,
Lagan na ditti kade hawa taap di.
Mangda reha sada kher unha di,
Chadd parwah apne aap di.
Aap taa khatiyan bahut kamaiyan,
Kar kar ke sewa Maa-Baap di,
Saddi waari tur gaya ohle,
Bedarda de ke jind varlaap di.

Saare kehnde tuu duur hain maitho,
Par mainu nahin ehh jaapda hai
Teri maut di sachhi khabar den wala
Sarasar jhooth hi ohh aakhda hai.
Tuu vekhda hai is duniya nuu,
Jadd Akkhan main kholda haan
Dukhi marija’n nuu khush karan layi
Teri hi taa boli main bolda haan
Tuu maitho hai nahin juda
Tuu mere wich hi vassda hain
Meri aawaz ’ch hai teri awaaz
Meri hassi wich tuu hassda hain.

Pehla taa beshak duur si maitho.
Par hun hain mere chaar chufere
Mainu zindagi o’ den waale
Mar ke ho gaya hor wi neRe
Mar ke ho gaya hor wi neRe


Aaj Ke Daur Mai.N Ummede.N Wafa Kisase Kare.N
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21st January 2005, 05:04 PM

i can 'understand' watever u have written..no matter i dont knw much punjabi..n i can feel ur feelings in that..

Well, i dont knw wat to say. Im really poor at expressing myself. N i m speechless right now. I really dont knw wat to say
But wanna say one thing..
i wil always b wid u..whanever u need..
I knw it sounds lil dramatical but i dont knw the best sentence than this that comes in my mind
Take very gud care of urself


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feelings tht cannot be described. - 21st January 2005, 07:53 PM

there are a lot of feelings in life the ones that even though we say it we cant express them,,kuch dil diya galla dil hi samajh sakda hai.......agar insaan rus jaawe ho sakda hai ki asi usnu mana layiye par agar saade kolo dur tur jaave, vapis bulana bara hi mushkil hunda hai,,,sometimes i think that you know when our loved ones dont want to talk to us, they ignore us or anything we feel so bad, but we have a ummmed that one day we will be able to make things okay, but then there are other things that are not in our hands......>> raab de kaarnaame samajh hi nahi aande,, pehla iniya khushiya dainda hai hor pher aasnu, pehle hasaanda hai pher rulanda hai......varinder i know this is that special person that no one and nothing in life can replace.

*********but alwys remember one thing..."Your dad wants to see you happy always and if you are sad then he would be sad "Somewhere" also.....so for him and his sake, you have to be happy....because u may not know but your one smile will bring smile to many others and him"

Always be happy and remmeber those nice times you had with uncle and you will see that all the sadness will vanish and your dad will be around you and in your heart, pher kisi v cheez di kami nahi howegi.

I am alwys with u

Luv Priya


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Re: Tribute to Papa - 21st January 2005, 09:50 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by ghayalparwana
These are the few words dedeicated to my Dad who left for a heavenly abode on 26th of December leaving the whole family behind in turmoil. Most of u won't understand it as it is in Punjabi but It had to be written in punjabi which is the language I learnt from him.



Kuchh likhna chahnda teri yaad wich,
Par samajh nahin aaundi ki likhan..
WaDhi-iyan di teri kiwe gal cheRa
Kinjj apne rab di zindagi likhan..

Janam-daata hain tuu Mera
Tuu hi mainu Naam ditta..
FaR ke ungal chalna sikhaya
Vidya daa tuu daan ditta.
Raatan nuu jaag ke kirat kamai
Mainu bistarian daa araam ditta
Baasa kha kha shukar manaya,
Sada taaza mainu pakwaan ditta.
Dil di si khwahish eh hi,
Khidmat si kuchh karni teri,
Tuu taa ditta sab kuchh menu
Par tenu main shamshaan ditta

Maapeya layi si thandi chaan tuu,
Lagan na ditti kade hawa taap di.
Mangda reha sada kher unha di,
Chadd parwah apne aap di.
Aap taa khatiyan bahut kamaiyan,
Kar kar ke sewa Maa-Baap di,
Saddi waari tur gaya ohle,
Bedarda de ke jind varlaap di.

Saare kehnde tuu duur hain maitho,
Par mainu nahin ehh jaapda hai
Teri maut di sachhi khabar den wala
Sarasar jhooth hi ohh aakhda hai.
Tuu vekhda hai is duniya nuu,
Jadd Akkhan main kholda haan
Dukhi marija’n nuu khush karan layi
Teri hi taa boli main bolda haan
Tuu maitho hai nahin juda
Tuu mere wich hi vassda hain
Meri aawaz ’ch hai teri awaaz
Meri hassi wich tuu hassda hain.

Pehla taa beshak duur si maitho.
Par hun hain mere chaar chufere
Mainu zindagi o’ den waale
Mar ke ho gaya hor wi neRe
Mar ke ho gaya hor wi neRe

mere varinder,
papa ke liye jo tumne likha... oos ke saamne maie nat mastak hu. tumhare ahesaas ko mera pranaam.....

Bhala moae te bichdae kaun melae.......

[ jo mar chuke hai, jo bichad chuke hai oonse koun milan karaaye....]

varis shah ki yah panktiya muje yaad aa gayi....
lekin kai rishte aise hote hai jo jivan aur mrutyu se par hote hai.. jo dil maie hote hai aur humare had kadam par humare sath chalte hai.

mere bachae....
apna khayal rakhna

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24th January 2005, 10:29 AM

Kuchh likhna chahnda teri yaad wich,
Par samajh nahin aaundi ki likhan..
WaDhi-iyan di teri kiwe gal cheRa
Kinjj apne rab di zindagi likhan..


Varinder bhai!

May be i cud not understand some part of ur post... but i can very well see the love and resepect for ur father hidden in these words.... Bahut accha lgaa aapko padhkar.... Apna khayal rakhiyega........


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24th January 2005, 10:48 AM

veer bhai ..

iss duniya meiN kuch bhi aisa nahi hai jo hamesha humare sath rahta ho .. haaN bahut kuch aisa hota hai jiske jane se aasuoN ka nikalna roka nahi jata ..

jane wale ki yaad hamesha hi aati rahti hai .. aur inhi yadoN ke sahare vo humare dil me hamesha zinda rahte haiN ..

bhai bahut door huN aapse ... haath pakad ke sahara bhi nahi de sakta .. bas itna hi kah sakta huN ki

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24th January 2005, 12:38 PM

Varinder Veer.....


sach likhya hai..... eh ehsaas hunda hai sab nu.... jadon koi apna tur jaanda hai.....


apna khyal rakha....

thuda veer.....



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27th January 2005, 03:03 PM

Dear Rutu, Shimul, Paras, Yash, Chaand, Salim, Anu, Vij, Sanam, Priya, Meena ji, Rohin, Pulkit, Kshitiz Bhai and Aman, Thanks a lot for your words of encouragement and for your condolences.

I still cannot understand the games of god, if he lives around us, with us and for us in the form of parents then why does he always take himself away from us just like that. Does he think that we have grown enough to take good care of ourselves, if he thinks so, he is wrong. God I am still your child and would always be, I wanted you around me and with me always.. You have taken the most important form of urselves away from me, may be u needed him more than myself, but please do stay with me in all the infinite forms which are not visible. I thank you with all my Heart for giving me the best DAD in this world and I am ever so grateful for the wonderful time you had gifted me to spend with him.

Just one wish more, please give others an oppurtunity to spend a lot more time with their parents as compared to me, I would be the happiest person if you grant my wish...... Goodbye
   
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I Like ur Poem - 27th January 2005, 03:19 PM

HI Dear "ghayalparwana",

I dont know ur name, but like ur poetry or appreciate ur devotiness bout ur father, dont be afraid from this, coz many as much as like u and i m also one from these people, ok

So Keep it Up.

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Re: Tribute to Papa - 27th January 2005, 03:50 PM

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These are the few words dedeicated to my Dad who left for a heavenly abode on 26th of December leaving the whole family behind in turmoil. Most of u won't understand it as it is in Punjabi but It had to be written in punjabi which is the language I learnt from him.



Kuchh likhna chahnda teri yaad wich,
Par samajh nahin aaundi ki likhan..
WaDhi-iyan di teri kiwe gal cheRa
Kinjj apne rab di zindagi likhan..

Janam-daata hain tuu Mera
Tuu hi mainu Naam ditta..
FaR ke ungal chalna sikhaya
Vidya daa tuu daan ditta.
Raatan nuu jaag ke kirat kamai
Mainu bistarian daa araam ditta
Baasa kha kha shukar manaya,
Sada taaza mainu pakwaan ditta.
Dil di si khwahish eh hi,
Khidmat si kuchh karni teri,
Tuu taa ditta sab kuchh menu
Par tenu main shamshaan ditta

Maapeya layi si thandi chaan tuu,
Lagan na ditti kade hawa taap di.
Mangda reha sada kher unha di,
Chadd parwah apne aap di.
Aap taa khatiyan bahut kamaiyan,
Kar kar ke sewa Maa-Baap di,
Saddi waari tur gaya ohle,
Bedarda de ke jind varlaap di.

Saare kehnde tuu duur hain maitho,
Par mainu nahin ehh jaapda hai
Teri maut di sachhi khabar den wala
Sarasar jhooth hi ohh aakhda hai.
Tuu vekhda hai is duniya nuu,
Jadd Akkhan main kholda haan
Dukhi marija’n nuu khush karan layi
Teri hi taa boli main bolda haan
Tuu maitho hai nahin juda
Tuu mere wich hi vassda hain
Meri aawaz ’ch hai teri awaaz
Meri hassi wich tuu hassda hain.

Pehla taa beshak duur si maitho.
Par hun hain mere chaar chufere
Mainu zindagi o’ den waale
Mar ke ho gaya hor wi neRe
Mar ke ho gaya hor wi neRe
bhaiyaa


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apki hi sakhi


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May his soul rest in peace...
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May his soul rest in peace... - 27th January 2005, 05:21 PM

Virendra bhai.... Adaab.


Aapke papa ke dehant ke baare mein pata chala aur bohot afsoos hua. Aksar dimmag mein iss kism ke sawalaat aate hain lekin aapke gharwaloN ko aapki zaroorat hai... Kehte hai ghar mein marD ke joote bhi ho tau ek Himmat rehti hai...to phir marD ki tau baat hi aur hai... Mein samajh sakta hoon ke aap aur aapke gharwaloN par kya guzar rahi hai... kyoN ke kuch 1 saal pehle hi mere Walid Sahab ka bhi inteqaal hua tha... aap apna aur apne gharwaloN ka khayaal rakhiyega... aur himmat se kaam lijiyega..

mein apne kuch ehsaasaat choDe jaa raha huun..shayad aapke ehsaas ke kuch kareeb nikle....

Bachpan mein aksar unglee thaame shaam ko ghoomne nikalta tha, aur dil mein ek hasrat rehti thi ke baniye ki dukaan se aaj tau "Gems" leni hi hai... lekin najaane kab baniye ki dukaan aa jaati aur mere maangne se pehle girish kaka "Gems" ka packet nikaal ke rakhte...aur mein kushi ke maare maange ki baat tak bhool jaata...

Harr cheez maangne se pehle dete rahe.... jawaan hua kamaane laga, dil mein ek hasrat thi ke harr araam unke kadmoN mein laake rakh doon..lekin aaj unhone apni adaat badal li... "mujhe maangne se pehle dete rahe, aur mere dene se pehle chal diye.."

Unki khali kursee, akhbaar ka dher.... unmein se khushboo si aati hai mujhe apne walid ki... unki cigrette ki mehek, unke chasma pakaDne ka andaaz kuch unke pasandeeda nagmoN ki cassette...jaise harr kone mein aaj bhi woh maujood ho...kuch thehar jaate tua "carrom" mein ek baar to haraa hi deta....lekin..


Ta- Gor Tumhara

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Re: Tribute to Papa - 27th February 2006, 06:55 PM

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Originally posted by ghayalparwana




Kuchh likhna chahnda teri yaad wich,
Par samajh nahin aaundi ki likhan..
WaDhi-iyan di teri kiwe gal cheRa
Kinjj apne rab di zindagi likhan..

Janam-daata hain tuu Mera
Tuu hi mainu Naam ditta..
FaR ke ungal chalna sikhaya
Vidya daa tuu daan ditta.
Raatan nuu jaag ke kirat kamai
Mainu bistarian daa araam ditta
Baasa kha kha shukar manaya,
Sada taaza mainu pakwaan ditta.
Dil di si khwahish eh hi,
Khidmat si kuchh karni teri,
Tuu taa ditta sab kuchh menu
Par tenu main shamshaan ditta

Maapeya layi si thandi chaan tuu,
Lagan na ditti kade hawa taap di.
Mangda reha sada kher unha di,
Chadd parwah apne aap di.
Aap taa khatiyan bahut kamaiyan,
Kar kar ke sewa Maa-Baap di,
Saddi waari tur gaya ohle,
Bedarda de ke jind varlaap di.

Saare kehnde tuu duur hain maitho,
Par mainu nahin ehh jaapda hai
Teri maut di sachhi khabar den wala
Sarasar jhooth hi ohh aakhda hai.
Tuu vekhda hai is duniya nuu,
Jadd Akkhan main kholda haan
Dukhi marija’n nuu khush karan layi
Teri hi taa boli main bolda haan
Tuu maitho hai nahin juda
Tuu mere wich hi vassda hain
Meri aawaz ’ch hai teri awaaz
Meri hassi wich tuu hassda hain.

Pehla taa beshak duur si maitho.
Par hun hain mere chaar chufere
Mainu zindagi o’ den waale
Mar ke ho gaya hor wi neRe
Mar ke ho gaya hor wi neRe
Varinder Bhai,
Aapke likhey hue jazbaat parhe, aur jo nahin likhey unhe bhi parhney ki koshish kari. Marm ehsaas chupaa paaya kudrat ke khel mein.

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