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Sher ka jawaab sher meiN deejiye.. -
8th May 2007, 06:57 PM
Sher ka jawab sher meiN deejiye..
DostoN, ham apni is Anjuman main ek or thread ka izafa karte haiN ess main aap ko ashar hi likhne haiN or agle member ko us sher ke jawab main koi sher meiN likhna hoo ga theek hai ?  yeh koi naya silsila nahi hai sab ko pata hoga ke kaise khelna hai yeh.. aise threads say hame kaafi kuchh seekhne ko milta hai.. Sher kisii ka bhii ho sakta may be your own or borrowed..  bas she'r likhte vaqt is baat ka khayaal rakha jaaye ke javaaban jo she'r likha jaa rahaa hai, us ka koi na koi rabt pichle she'r se hona chaahiye..Shukryah! to chaliye meiN hi Shuruaat karta huuN: ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa PS: to keep the beauty & meaning of the thread 'sher ka jawaab sher me.n deejiye', it is requested to all member that, please reply a 'sher' with a 'sher' only (not with four liners, qitaa, Ghazal, nazm etc etc). I hope all members will cooperate me to maintain beauty and dignity of the site in all level. thank u all Mayank |
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9th May 2007, 01:15 PM
frineds.. kuchh examples de raha huuN....
jaise kii pahela Sher hai.. ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa ess Sher ka jawaab kuchh ess tarah ho sakta hai... ishq me.n jaa.N se guzarate hai.n guzarane vaale maut kii raah nahii.n dekhate marane vaale aur phir ess Sher ka jawaab kuchh es tarah de sakte haiN... us lab-o-chashm se hai zindagii-o-maut apanii kab-kabhii pal me.n jilaayaa kabhii pal me.n maaraa |
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9th May 2007, 02:29 PM
fir ek nayi column....
good..........waise jawab dena try kar rahin hoon..sahin hain ki galat jaroor batana.... nida fazlijee ka sher hain yeh...... Kabhi kisiko mukammal jahan nahin milta, Kahin zameen to kahin aasman nahin milta... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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9th May 2007, 02:36 PM
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hmm.. answer sahiii hai aur rabt bhii dono SheroN meiN.. yeh Sher waise bhii mera pasandidah Sher hai... so, thanks tooab ess Sher ke jawaab meiN, Ek Sher arz hai... zamii.n pe chal na sakaa aasmaan se bhii gayaa kaTaa ke par ko parindaa uDaan se bhii gayaa |
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I don't know if I'm replying this right.. still trying to.. Na cheeno usse uski udaan, keh raha hai ek parinda.. Aasmaan me hi hai muskaan uski, mat karo use sharminda.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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9th May 2007, 07:35 PM
Chaahat aap ka Sher bilkul sahii... aur khuubsuurat Sher chuna hai aap ne.. daad!
apa ke SHer ke jawaab meiN yehi kahuNga.. Na cheeno usse uski udaan, keh raha hai ek parinda.. Aasmaan me hi hai muskaan uski, mat karo use sharminda.. mujhe maaluum hai us kaa Thikaana phir kahaa.N hogaa pari.ndaa aasmaa.N chhuune me.n jab naaqaam ho jaaye |
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9th May 2007, 08:06 PM
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is thread mai,mai bhi shirkat karna chahungi.umeed hai mera sher sahi hai, hamarii koshishon ko naakaami ka naam na do yaaron, milen na manzil jab tak hum haaraa nahi karte. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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9th May 2007, 08:36 PM
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milen na manzil jab tak hum haaraa nahi karte. Sara jee: aap ne Sher sahii kahe haiN.. daad! ab aap ke Sher ke jawaab meiN.. ajab chiiz hai ye mohabbat kii baazii jo haare vo jiite, jo jiite vo haare |
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9th May 2007, 09:07 PM
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Mohabbat karne vaale, haar jeet ka kahaan hisaab rakhte hain.. Dil me mehboob ki dhadkan, aur aankhon me hijaab rakhte hain.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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9th May 2007, 09:11 PM
Mohabbat karne vaale, haar jeet ka kahaan hisaab rakhte hain..
Dil me mehboob ki dhadkan, aur aankhon me hijaab rakhte hain.. ~Priya kyon ho koi hijaab mehboob aur aashiq ke darmiyaan?? bas yeh wasl ki baatein logon ko bataaya nahi karte. akelijaan gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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22nd March 2010, 10:07 PM
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AAPKE IS SHER K JAWAB MEIN MIRZA GHALIB KEHTE HAIN, ISHQ PER ZOR NAHIN YE HAI WOH AATISH GHAALIB JO LAGAYE NA LAGE AUR BUJHAYE NA BANE. |
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10th May 2007, 03:50 PM
mahfile shayarii ko mera aadab
main bhii is mahfil main shirkat karne kii koshish kar raha hoon umiid hai ki sher kuch thik thak hoga shukriyaa dilip merii mohbbat ko unhone dosti naam de diyaa shayad ye bhii ek ada thi unki mujhe satane kii.....  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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10th May 2007, 04:09 PM
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Darta hun naye dost banane se.... Bahut Zakhm khaye hain dosti ke bahane se........ NM Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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10th May 2007, 05:29 PM
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"Dosti kudha ka ek nayaab tohfa hai, na kar inkaar esko apna-ne se, thaam le tu haath dosti ka, mil jayegi janaat esi bahane se" -Sunita Virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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10th May 2007, 05:53 PM
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Har dost ko dost pyara mat samjho.. Nazar nazar me bhi farak hota hai.. Har nazar ko ishara mat samjho.. ------NOT MINE-------- ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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10th May 2007, 06:44 PM
Thanks friends, aap sab waqaii meiN bohat achchha kar rahe haiN.. aap ek ke baad ek Sher ko paRhenge to bohat mazza aayega... aisa lagegaa kya khuub silsila chal raha hai..
Priya, aap ke Sher Har lehar ko kinaara mat samjho.. Har dost ko dost pyara mat samjho.. Nazar nazar me bhi farak hota hai.. Har nazar ko ishara mat samjho.. ess ke jawaab meiN: Takaraa hii ga_ii merii nazar un kii nazar se dhonaa hii pa.Daa haath mujhe qalb-o-jigar se qalb-o-jigar: jaaN aur dil |
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10th May 2007, 07:07 PM
Takaraa hii ga_ii merii nazar un kii nazar se
dhonaa hii pa.Daa haath mujhe qalb-o-jigar se -mayank jawaab arz hai, han,kuch pane ke liye kuch khona to padta hai, tune to bas khoya hai dil,woh apne qaraar ko tarasta hai. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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10th May 2007, 07:15 PM
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10th May 2007, 07:29 PM
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na taras kisi ko aaye hai, kis daur se guzar rahe hain hum, ye poochne bhi na koi aaye hai!!! gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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10th May 2007, 07:56 PM
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Kisiko dhundhte hain hum kisime........nida fazli Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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15th September 2009, 06:15 PM
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tera mujrim hon dub ke mar janae de mujhe kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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15th September 2009, 07:50 PM
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ye dil ke mujhe chain se marne nahiiN detaa taHzeeb saleeke kee, insaan qareene ke |
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15th September 2009, 09:40 PM
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Ye husn wale raah chale nigah jab mila jate hai Abed Farooqui Jalegi shammaye tere naam se qamar Parwaana hun tera naam jo liya karun |
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17th September 2009, 05:46 PM
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Kon hota hai teray gham se pareshan Sajid, Wo to apni hi kisi baat pe roye honge.... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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11th May 2007, 12:34 PM
Arey sunita ji chill, I am not angry at all. Infact I ws replying to mayank's sher But took some time and now when I posted my sher there are couple of more posts before me.... mistake oops...
Na lo inteqam mujhse mere saath saath chal ke..... Dil diya thaa to muqader bhee ataa kar detey, warna taqhlik se pehley he fanaa kar detey, tumne samajhi hee nahi ishq kee azmat warna, hum tumhey ek he sajdey main khudaa kar detey... Meri bandagi hai woh bandagi, jo qaid-e-dair-o-haram nahi, mera ek nazar tujhey dekhna, ba-khuda namaz se kam nahi... |
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11th May 2007, 12:44 PM
it's ok sandy , Sher ka jawaab achchha diya hai aap ne.. ab aap mere us Sher ka jawaab deejiye, jis Sher ka jawaab baaqi hai.. lekin jaldi kahiiN aisa na ho kii aap se pahle koii aur jawaab de de..
chooTaa kar ke dekhiye jiivan kaa vistaar aa.Nkho.n bhar aakaash hai, baaho.n bhar sa.nsaar Mayank |
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11th May 2007, 12:53 PM
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jeevan ke din rain kaa , kaise lage hisaab deemak ke ghar baith kar, lekhak likhe kitaab Na lo inteqam mujhse mere saath saath chal ke..... Dil diya thaa to muqader bhee ataa kar detey, warna taqhlik se pehley he fanaa kar detey, tumne samajhi hee nahi ishq kee azmat warna, hum tumhey ek he sajdey main khudaa kar detey... Meri bandagi hai woh bandagi, jo qaid-e-dair-o-haram nahi, mera ek nazar tujhey dekhna, ba-khuda namaz se kam nahi... |
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11th May 2007, 01:05 PM
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hum bhi ek doha likh de.... divas gavaya khai ke, rain gavaye soye, heera janam amul hai, kodi badle jaye...! .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th May 2007, 02:48 PM
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so main phir se sher hi se start karti hoon.....Chamakti hain andhero mein khamoshi Sitare tutte hain raat hi mein! Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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11th May 2007, 03:51 PM
yeh meri likhi hue gazal ka hi ek sher hai:
Siyah shab maine gujari jaag kar, teri yaad tadpati rahi shab-bhar -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th May 2007, 04:51 PM
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merii tarah kisii se muhabbat use bhii thii [zikr-e-shab-e-firaaq = mention of the night of separation] [vahashat = fear/dread] Na lo inteqam mujhse mere saath saath chal ke..... Dil diya thaa to muqader bhee ataa kar detey, warna taqhlik se pehley he fanaa kar detey, tumne samajhi hee nahi ishq kee azmat warna, hum tumhey ek he sajdey main khudaa kar detey... Meri bandagi hai woh bandagi, jo qaid-e-dair-o-haram nahi, mera ek nazar tujhey dekhna, ba-khuda namaz se kam nahi... |
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11th May 2007, 04:58 PM
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likhkar naam tera haath par humne chuppa liya, dunia na raaj jaan le, palko ka parda gira liya... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th May 2007, 05:18 PM
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Jo aakar gire daaman pe sabaa woh ashq nahi woh paani hai, Jo ashq na chhalke palko se us ashq kee keemat hoti hai.... Gulshan kee faqt phoolon se nahi kaanto se bhee zeenat hoti hai, jeeney ke liye is duniya main gam kee bhee zaroorat hoti hai.... Na lo inteqam mujhse mere saath saath chal ke..... Dil diya thaa to muqader bhee ataa kar detey, warna taqhlik se pehley he fanaa kar detey, tumne samajhi hee nahi ishq kee azmat warna, hum tumhey ek he sajdey main khudaa kar detey... Meri bandagi hai woh bandagi, jo qaid-e-dair-o-haram nahi, mera ek nazar tujhey dekhna, ba-khuda namaz se kam nahi... |
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11th May 2007, 05:29 PM
Palkein bhi chamak uthti hain sote main hamari..
Ankhon ko abhi khwab chupane nahin aate by...bashir badr Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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26th February 2008, 08:04 PM
Hazaro Jhopdiya Jalkar Rakh Hoti Hai,
Tab Jakar Kahi 1 Mahal Banta Hai. Aashiqo Ke Marne Pe Kfan Bhi Nhi Milta,Or Hasinao Ke Marne Pe Tajmahal Bnta Hai.!!!!!!!! |
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26th February 2008, 08:08 PM
Samjha Na Koi Dil Ki Bat Ko,
Dard Duniya Ne Bina Soche Hi De Dia , Seh Gaye Jo Gum Hum Chupke Se, To Tumne Humko Hi Pathar Dil Keh Dia…. |
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26th February 2008, 08:44 PM
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na tha malom mujhy her koi chor jaey ga anjan tha zindagi ka aisa mod bhi aye ga who bhi chala gya ulty paon yeh soch ker |
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16th March 2008, 07:12 PM
[quote=sandysandy;232109]Dohe ka jawab dohe se....
jeevan ke din rain kaa , kaise lage hisaab  nice thread.... hissab jindagi ka ab apane samjh me aaya, paani se sasta bikate, jab usake lahu ko dekha |
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