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Aapne aur Humne - 29th May 2018, 08:03 PM

I just wanted to write a few lines to see if i can still write a little bit.

I know for sure that there are many mistakes in what i wrote and i was not going for technicality...just wanted to pour some emotions on paper. So here it is...

Aapne aur humne milke zindagi ko haseen banaya tha
meelon door hoke bhi zindagi ko khushiyon se sajaya tha

Rahenge saath har tufaan har sangharsh mai hum dono
haathon ko chuke oos flight mai vishvaash aapne dilaya tha

Aaye kai lamhe mushkilon se bhare zindagi mai humari
thama tha hume aapne pyar humara jab ladkhadaya tha

Mana ki aapse door jaane ka faisla humara hi tha
yakeen maaniye yaad karke ansu roz humne bahaya tha

Aa jaayiye thamne hume aur nibhane apne vadon ko
Jinko apne aur humne apni mohabbat se sajaya tha

Cheers!!!!!!!!

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Namaste

Bahot hi saral shabdon mein aapne apne dil ke ehsaason ko pesh kiye hain.. Aap ka ye likhaa huaa seedha dil se nikla hua hay aur dil me utar gayaa.. Dil ke ehsaas technical baaton pe dhyaan bhi kahaan dete hain. wo jaise hote hain kaaGaz pe aa jaate hain.. Dil se duaa hay aapko aapki khushiyaan milen

Khush rahen..

Aapka
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5th June 2018, 04:14 PM

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I just wanted to write a few lines to see if i can still write a little bit.

I know for sure that there are many mistakes in what i wrote and i was not going for technicality...just wanted to pour some emotions on paper. So here it is...

Aapne aur humne milke zindagi ko haseen banaya tha
meelon door hoke bhi zindagi ko khushiyon se sajaya tha

Rahenge saath har tufaan har sangharsh mai hum dono
haathon ko chuke oos flight mai vishvaash aapne dilaya tha

Aaye kai lamhe mushkilon se bhare zindagi mai humari
thama tha hume aapne pyar humara jab ladkhadaya tha

Mana ki aapse door jaane ka faisla humara hi tha
yakeen maaniye yaad karke ansu roz humne bahaya tha

Aa jaayiye thamne hume aur nibhane apne vadon ko
Jinko apne aur humne apni mohabbat se sajaya tha

Cheers!!!!!!!!

jaisa ke dhaval bhai ne kaha , behad saral aur sundar rachna hai aapki...

sach kahun to dil ko chuune wale naazuk se ehsaas... dil tak samaa gaye hain...

likhte rahiyegaa , aage bhi aapko padhne ka intezaar rahega...

Shukriyaa

Shaad.....


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