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Muhabbat kaa silaa... -
23rd November 2011, 12:55 AM
Agar Tanhaa Mohabbat ko Tumhaara Hauslaa Miltaa,
To Apne bhi Chaman me Phool Chaahat ka Khilaa Miltaa.
Kabhi ye Haanth jo Humne Badhaaya hai Museebat meiN,
Sabhi ahbaab ki jaanib hameshaa Faaslaa Miltaa.
Na hotee gar lakeereN Mulq meiN Zardaar-o-Daulat ki,
Mere BacchoN Madarse meiN tumhe bhi Daakhilaa Miltaa.
Subah tak hooN jalaa Tanhaa, CharaagoN ne to Dam ToRaa,
Koyee to HumsaFar hotaa, kaheeN to Qaafilaa Miltaa.
Ye Kyaa Jaadu Kiyaa tumne Zameen-o-Arsh par Jaanaa,
Har ik Makhlooq Duniyaa ka tumhii meiN Mubtilaa Miltaa.
Zakham haiN ChaaanD se Ujle, NishaaN Anjum se bhi Zyaada,
Mohabbat kaa yahi Aye "Shaad" jaane kyoN silaa Miltaa.
Shaad...
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Umdah Kalaam! -
23rd November 2011, 01:37 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Agar Tanhaa Mohabbat ko Tumhaara Hauslaa Miltaa,
To Apne bhi Chaman me Phool Chaahat ka Khilaa Miltaa.
Kabhi ye Haanth jo Humne Badhaaya hai Museebat meiN,
Sabhi ahbaab ki jaanib hameshaa Faaslaa Miltaa.
Na hotee gar lakeereN Mulq meiN Zardaar-o-Daulat ki,
Mere BacchoN Madarse meiN tumhe bhi Daakhilaa Miltaa.
Subah tak hooN jalaa Tanhaa, CharaagoN ne to Dam ToRaa,
Koyee to HumsaFar hotaa, kaheeN to Qaafilaa Miltaa.
Ye Kyaa Jaadu Kiyaa tumne Zameen-o-Arsh par Jaanaa,
Har ik Makhlooq Duniyaa ka tumhii meiN Mubtilaa Miltaa.
Zakham haiN ChaaanD se Ujle, NishaaN Anjum se bhi Zyaada,
Mohabbat kaa yahi Aye "Shaad" jaane kyoN silaa Miltaa.
Shaad...
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As Salamalykom Shaad Bhaee!
Buhat khoobsoorat aur gehree soch ko nomaayan kartee hay aapki yay taazah tareen Ghazal! Khaaksaar ki jaanib say dili daad wa mobarakbaad qabool farmayayn!
Thanks
Ahmad!
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23rd November 2011, 05:54 AM
Agar Tanhaa Mohabbat ko Tumhaara Hauslaa Miltaa,
To Apne bhi Chaman me Phool Chaahat ka Khilaa Miltaa.
Subah tak hooN jalaa Tanhaa, CharaagoN ne to Dam ToRaa,
Koyee to HumsaFar hotaa, kaheeN to Qaafilaa Miltaa.
WaaH ! Shaad Bhai !! AchChhe Sher Kahe HaiN ... Umdaa Ghazal Hui Janaab ... BehtreeN Peshkash ... Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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23rd November 2011, 09:17 AM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Agar Tanhaa Mohabbat ko Tumhaara Hauslaa Miltaa,
To Apne bhi Chaman me Phool Chaahat ka Khilaa Miltaa.
Kabhi ye Haanth jo Humne Badhaaya hai Museebat meiN,
Sabhi ahbaab ki jaanib hameshaa Faaslaa Miltaa.
Na hotee gar lakeereN Mulq meiN Zardaar-o-Daulat ki,
Mere BacchoN Madarse meiN tumhe bhi Daakhilaa Miltaa.
Subah tak hooN jalaa Tanhaa, CharaagoN ne to Dam ToRaa,
Koyee to HumsaFar hotaa, kaheeN to Qaafilaa Miltaa.
Ye Kyaa Jaadu Kiyaa tumne Zameen-o-Arsh par Jaanaa,
Har ik Makhlooq Duniyaa ka tumhii meiN Mubtilaa Miltaa.
Zakham haiN ChaaanD se Ujle, NishaaN Anjum se bhi Zyaada,
Mohabbat kaa yahi Aye "Shaad" jaane kyoN silaa Miltaa.
Shaad...
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bahut khoob shaad bhai, behtreen ghazal dili daad o mubaraqbad.
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23rd November 2011, 10:17 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Agar Tanhaa Mohabbat ko Tumhaara Hauslaa Miltaa,
To Apne bhi Chaman me Phool Chaahat ka Khilaa Miltaa.
Kabhi ye Haanth jo Humne Badhaaya hai Museebat meiN,
Sabhi ahbaab ki jaanib hameshaa Faaslaa Miltaa.
Na hotee gar lakeereN Mulq meiN Zardaar-o-Daulat ki,
Mere BacchoN Madarse meiN tumhe bhi Daakhilaa Miltaa.
Subah tak hooN jalaa Tanhaa, CharaagoN ne to Dam ToRaa,
Koyee to HumsaFar hotaa, kaheeN to Qaafilaa Miltaa.
Ye Kyaa Jaadu Kiyaa tumne Zameen-o-Arsh par Jaanaa,
Har ik Makhlooq Duniyaa ka tumhii meiN Mubtilaa Miltaa.
Zakham haiN ChaaanD se Ujle, NishaaN Anjum se bhi Zyaada,
Mohabbat kaa yahi Aye "Shaad" jaane kyoN silaa Miltaa.
Shaad...
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aadaab janaab shaad saheb,
kaise haiN aap?
behad umdah peshkash, aapke khayaalaat ki gehraayee dekh kar rashq hua jaata hai aapse....ek se badh kar ek sher kahe haiN aapne...aapka ye qalaam aalaah darze ka hua hai...meri dili mubaraqbaad aur daad qubuul kijiyega....
bahut bahut badhiya....
mast...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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23rd November 2011, 11:16 AM
shaad ji....
kal hi kisise kaha tha k shaad ne jald kuch dhamaka karna hai.. aur wo iss tarah turant ho jana hai ye nahin pata tha.... har ek sher khud b khud apni tareef kar raha hai.... kya khyaal kya shabd kya ehsaas aur kya shayri... sab ka nichod nikla aaya lagta hai jaise..... din b din aap jis tarah apne makaam ki taraf badhte ja rahe hain.. wahan bht jald pahonch jayenge.....
dil se mubarakbad aapki iss behtareen peshkash k liye.... yunhi likhte rahiye and inspire karte rahiye.... God bless u ....
Aaj fir dil shayar hona chahta hai..
Dard lafzon me pirona chahta hai..
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23rd November 2011, 09:04 PM
janab...
aapka kya kehna subhanallah!!!
kya kahu ke smjh nahi aaraha, kaha se dhoond kar lee aate hai ye ehsaas... ke jinki koi misaal hi nahi milti.... bhot bhot khoob
aise hi likhte rahiye...
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24th November 2011, 10:10 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Agar Tanhaa Mohabbat ko Tumhaara Hauslaa Miltaa,
To Apne bhi Chaman me Phool Chaahat ka Khilaa Miltaa.
Kabhi ye Haanth jo Humne Badhaaya hai Museebat meiN,
Sabhi ahbaab ki jaanib hameshaa Faaslaa Miltaa.
Na hotee gar lakeereN Mulq meiN Zardaar-o-Daulat ki,
Mere BacchoN Madarse meiN tumhe bhi Daakhilaa Miltaa.
Subah tak hooN jalaa Tanhaa, CharaagoN ne to Dam ToRaa,
Koyee to HumsaFar hotaa, kaheeN to Qaafilaa Miltaa.
Ye Kyaa Jaadu Kiyaa tumne Zameen-o-Arsh par Jaanaa,
Har ik Makhlooq Duniyaa ka tumhii meiN Mubtilaa Miltaa.
Zakham haiN ChaaanD se Ujle, NishaaN Anjum se bhi Zyaada,
Mohabbat kaa yahi Aye "Shaad" jaane kyoN silaa Miltaa.
Shaad...
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Waah umdaa peshkash bhai. Behad khoobsoorat ehsaaso khayaalaat. Aapne to jaise hamse pasand karwane or waah waahi karwaane ki zidd hi pakad li lagti hai. Chaliye main khud bhi yahi chahta hu. Aaj kal aap hi qalaam hota hai jispe technical baad mein or ehsaas pehle dikhaai dete hain.
Bus aise hi mehfil mein raunak banaye rakhiye.
Likhte rahiye
or main kamaan k samne hi khada hu
Filhaal izaazat talab.
Allah haafiz
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24th November 2011, 12:56 PM
behtreen ghazal likhi hai shaad bhai !!
dil se daad qubool karein ...
keep writing
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24th November 2011, 04:05 PM
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As Salamalykom Shaad Bhaee!
Buhat khoobsoorat aur gehree soch ko nomaayan kartee hay aapki yay taazah tareen Ghazal! Khaaksaar ki jaanib say dili daad wa mobarakbaad qabool farmayayn!
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Ahmad!
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Walekum Assalaam Ahmad bhai, Aapki daaad aur Hauslaa afzaai ke liye behad shukriyaa... Tashreef laaate rahiyegaa... shukriyaa
Shaad....
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24th November 2011, 05:18 PM
Janab Shaad Sahib............!
Mashallah Boht Shandar Kalam Ataa Kia Hai Aap Ne........ Aap Ke KHubsurat KHyalat Ke Sath Sath Kalaam Ki Rawani Bhi Qabil-e-Daad Hai......... Dheron Daad Qabool Farmayen Is Khubsurat Kalaam Pr......
Shaad Sb.......Sirf Aik Baa tKrna Chahun Ga...... Bila-Shuba Ye Kalaam Alaa Darjay Ka Hai, Or Umdah bhi Hai, Lekin Mujhy Aik Sher Me Thori Si Problem Lagi, Agar Aap Us Pr Bhi Thora Ghaur Farma Len To Mazid Nikhar Aaye Ga....
Ye Kyaa Jaadu Kiyaa tumne Zameen-o-Arsh par Jaanaa,
Har ik Makhlooq Duniyaa ka tumhii meiN Mubtilaa Miltaa.
Shaad Sb.... Mere Khayal Me "MAKHLOOQ" Moannas Hai..... Is Ke Sath "Milta" Nahi Laga Saktay......... Bs Ye Aik Choti Si Baat Mujhy Theak Nahi Lagi To Socha Aap Se Share Kr Lun....
Ummid Hai Ke Aap Is Baat Pr Mere Sath Muttafiq Hon Gay........
Is Khubsurat Kalaam Pr Aik Baar Phir Daad......... Yunhi Likhtay Rahen
KHush Rahne
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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25th November 2011, 08:28 AM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Agar Tanhaa Mohabbat ko Tumhaara Hauslaa Miltaa,
To Apne bhi Chaman me Phool Chaahat ka Khilaa Miltaa.
Subah tak hooN jalaa Tanhaa, CharaagoN ne to Dam ToRaa,
Koyee to HumsaFar hotaa, kaheeN to Qaafilaa Miltaa.
WaaH ! Shaad Bhai !! AchChhe Sher Kahe HaiN ... Umdaa Ghazal Hui Janaab ... BehtreeN Peshkash ... Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
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Behad shukriyaa aapki inaayatoN ke liye mehra saab,... aap aaaye yahi bahot badee daad hai mere liye.. shukriyaa...
Shaad...
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26th November 2011, 03:58 PM
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Agar Tanhaa Mohabbat ko Tumhaara Hauslaa Miltaa,
To Apne bhi Chaman me Phool Chaahat ka Khilaa Miltaa.
Kabhi ye Haanth jo Humne Badhaaya hai Museebat meiN,
Sabhi ahbaab ki jaanib hameshaa Faaslaa Miltaa.
Na hotee gar lakeereN Mulq meiN Zardaar-o-Daulat ki,
Mere BacchoN Madarse meiN tumhe bhi Daakhilaa Miltaa.
Subah tak hooN jalaa Tanhaa, CharaagoN ne to Dam ToRaa,
Koyee to HumsaFar hotaa, kaheeN to Qaafilaa Miltaa.
Ye Kyaa Jaadu Kiyaa tumne Zameen-o-Arsh par Jaanaa,
Har ik Makhlooq Duniyaa ka tumhii meiN Mubtilaa Miltaa.
Zakham haiN ChaaanD se Ujle, NishaaN Anjum se bhi Zyaada,
Mohabbat kaa yahi Aye "Shaad" jaane kyoN silaa Miltaa.
Shaad...
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ji nice one ............................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com
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26th November 2011, 07:04 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Agar Tanhaa Mohabbat ko Tumhaara Hauslaa Miltaa,
To Apne bhi Chaman me Phool Chaahat ka Khilaa Miltaa.
Kabhi ye Haanth jo Humne Badhaaya hai Museebat meiN,
Sabhi ahbaab ki jaanib hameshaa Faaslaa Miltaa.
Na hotee gar lakeereN Mulq meiN Zardaar-o-Daulat ki,
Mere BacchoN Madarse meiN tumhe bhi Daakhilaa Miltaa.
Subah tak hooN jalaa Tanhaa, CharaagoN ne to Dam ToRaa,
Koyee to HumsaFar hotaa, kaheeN to Qaafilaa Miltaa.
Ye Kyaa Jaadu Kiyaa tumne Zameen-o-Arsh par Jaanaa,
Har ik Makhlooq Duniyaa ka tumhii meiN Mubtilaa Miltaa.
Zakham haiN ChaaanD se Ujle, NishaaN Anjum se bhi Zyaada,
Mohabbat kaa yahi Aye "Shaad" jaane kyoN silaa Miltaa.
Shaad...
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bahut khooooooob .... dil se daad .... radhe radhe ...............
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