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Teraa Chehraa nazar aata hai....... -
6th December 2014, 06:26 PM
ek ghazal aaapki khidmat mein.....
Jis simt bhi dekhuN teraa cheheraa nazar aata hai,
rukhsaar pe ek chaaNd sa thahraa nazar aata hai.
shamaa ki numaaish bhi hone nahii dete hain,
parwaano ka har waqt hi pahraa nazar aataa hai.
ek zulfe pareeshaaN ki sun lo shiqaayateN ab,
maathe pe tumhaare jo bikhraa nazar aataa hai.
pardaa yuN tumhaara hai jaise ke koi jaaduu,
parbat pe ghaTaaoN ka kohraa nazar aataa hai.
dikhtaa hoon bahaaroN sa lekin main Shaad hooN kyaa,
jo khud me jhaanKtaa hoon Sahraa nazar aataa hai.
Shaad......
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6th December 2014, 09:21 PM
Aha ha ha ......kya baat hai , badi rumani hai.aapki.ghazal ..
aap ki ghazal se vo gana yaad aa haya , ye reshmi.zulfeiN ye sharbati.ankhein ,
.. .. Inhe dekh kar jee rahe haiN sabhi.
Aap ki akhri do lines bahut hi kamal ki lagi , kambhakt apni tareef khud kar dali.
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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6th December 2014, 09:34 PM
Good one Shaad
dikhtaa hoon bahaaroN sa lekin main Shaad hooN kyaa,
jo khud me jhaanKtaa hoon Sahraa nazar aataa hai.
well said...............
ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं
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6th December 2014, 10:30 PM
Waaaaaaah.........kya gazal kahi shaad bhai.....
Behad khoobsurat alfaz aur andaz e bayan
Nacheez ki daad kubul farmayen
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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6th December 2014, 10:32 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
ek ghazal aaapki khidmat mein.....
Jis simt bhi dekhuN teraa cheheraa nazar aata hai,
rukhsaar pe ek chaaNd sa thahraa nazar aata hai.
shamaa ki numaaish bhi hone nahii dete hain,
parwaano ka har waqt hi pahraa nazar aataa hai.
ek zulfe pareeshaaN ki sun lo shiqaayateN ab,
maathe pe tumhaare jo bikhraa nazar aataa hai.
pardaa yuN tumhaara hai jaise ke koi jaaduu,
parbat pe ghaTaaoN ka kohraa nazar aataa hai.
dikhtaa hoon bahaaroN sa lekin main Shaad hooN kyaa,
jo khud me jhaanKtaa hoon Sahraa nazar aataa hai.
Shaad......
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Waah waah kya kahne shaad ji...kya bayangi hai..
Dil se daad is rumani gazal k liye..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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7th December 2014, 09:10 AM
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Originally Posted by Hamdam
Aha ha ha ......kya baat hai , badi rumani hai.aapki.ghazal ..
aap ki ghazal se vo gana yaad aa haya , ye reshmi.zulfeiN ye sharbati.ankhein ,
.. .. Inhe dekh kar jee rahe haiN sabhi.
Aap ki akhri do lines bahut hi kamal ki lagi , kambhakt apni tareef khud kar dali.
Sanjay Sehgal
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Sanjay saahab bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka... jo aap ne is kavita ko pasand kiyaa......
maqke ko khaas pasand karne ke liye aapki inaayat hai....... wese sach kahun to maine isme apni tareef nahi apni asliyat kahii hai ke ho sakta hai dekkhne me log mujhe bahaaron se tulna karte hon.. par asal me jab main khud me jhaanKtaa hoon to mujhe isme Sahraa yaani registaan yaani banjar zamee nazar aatii hai......
baharhaaal ek baar fir se aapka shukriyaa..... tashreef laate rahiyegaa
Shaad....
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7th December 2014, 09:18 PM
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Good one Shaad
dikhtaa hoon bahaaroN sa lekin main Shaad hooN kyaa,
jo khud me jhaanKtaa hoon Sahraa nazar aataa hai.
well said...............
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Thanks a Ton Mayoos saahab.... do keep coming and keep reading
take care
Shaad....
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8th December 2014, 07:44 PM
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Waaaaaaah.........kya gazal kahi shaad bhai.....
Behad khoobsurat alfaz aur andaz e bayan
Nacheez ki daad kubul farmayen
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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behad inaayat hai aapki bhushan saahab..................................
shukriyaa tahe dil se
Shaad...
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9th December 2014, 10:32 AM
ek zulfe pareeshaaN ki sun lo shiqaayateN ab,
maathe pe tumhaare jo bikhraa nazar aataa hai.
bahut khoob shoiab Bhai.,...ye sher bahut pas and aya....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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9th December 2014, 08:43 PM
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Waah waah kya kahne shaad ji...kya bayangi hai..
Dil se daad is rumani gazal k liye..
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behad inaayat aur karam aapka Madhu saahiba..................
mujhe khushi hai jo aapko ye adna sa kalaam passand aaya... aati rahiyegaa
Shukriyaa
Shaad....
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12th December 2014, 04:58 PM
bahut khubbbb Shaad ji.....................
kyaa baat hai.........bahut hi umadaa gazal
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shamaa ki numaaish bhi hone nahii dete hain,
parwaano ka har waqt hi pahraa nazar aataa hai.
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13th December 2014, 04:05 PM
shamaa ki numaaish bhi hone nahii dete hain,
parwaano ka har waqt hi pahraa nazar aataa hai.
wah shaad saheb is peshkash ko padh ke dil "Shaad" ho gaya.. dua hai aap yu hi suraj ki trh chamakte rahe..
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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16th December 2014, 10:35 AM
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ek zulfe pareeshaaN ki sun lo shiqaayateN ab,
maathe pe tumhaare jo bikhraa nazar aataa hai.
bahut khoob shoiab Bhai.,...ye sher bahut pas and aya....
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bahot shukriya Aru bhai... aate rahiye.........................
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16th December 2014, 10:35 AM
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bahut khubbbb Shaad ji.....................
kyaa baat hai.........bahut hi umadaa gazal
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bahot shukriyaaa Raj saahab........................................
aate rahen
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16th December 2014, 10:38 AM
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shamaa ki numaaish bhi hone nahii dete hain,
parwaano ka har waqt hi pahraa nazar aataa hai.
wah shaad saheb is peshkash ko padh ke dil "Shaad" ho gaya.. dua hai aap yu hi suraj ki trh chamakte rahe..
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bhai aapki is tarah pazeeraai se mashkoor hoon mere bhai...............
aate raheiyegaa aur duaaon me yaad rakhiyegaa
shukriyaa
Shaad...
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3rd January 2015, 03:26 PM
bohat achi post niiceee shayeri,
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5th March 2015, 10:34 AM
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bohat achi post niiceee shayeri,
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behad inaayat hai aapki Areebaa khan saahibaa.................. aapke aane ka intzaar rahegaa aage bhii hamaari nazmon aur ghazlon par.. shukriyaa
Shaad.....
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5th March 2015, 10:59 AM
[I]adaye tumhari h to humaari bhi kam nahi..
log ishq humse kar lete h hum to kehte nahi..
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