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humhe hosh nahiN - 29th November 2014, 09:28 PM

Doston,

Ek ghazal aapki nazar...umeed karta hooN pasand aaYeGiii

is furqat mein kho jaane de humhe hosh nahiN
gir kar sambhal jaane de humhe hosh nahiN

yun to badnaam hai duniya mein sabhi dost hai mere
humko bhi peene pilaane de humhe hosh nahiN

guzarte nahi yunhi hum bekaar teri galiyon se
humko hosh to aane de humhe hosh nahiN

hisaab kitaab ke liye umr aabhi hai baaki
deedar-e-yaar ho jaane de humhe hosh nahiN

kaun kehtaa hai ki sanjiidah insaan hai hum
'mast' ko milne milaane de humhe hosh nahiN



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30th November 2014, 12:20 AM

yun to badnaam hai duniya mein sabhi dost hai mere
humko bhi peene pilaane de humhe hosh nahiN



waaahhh kya baat hai anu bhai.... yaqeen maaniye aapki is ghazla ne mast kar diyaa mujhe.... yaqeenan aapka takhaalluss kaafi asardaar hai..........

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yun to badnaam hai duniya mein sabhi dost hai mere
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waaahhh kya baat hai anu bhai.... yaqeen maaniye aapki is ghazla ne mast kar diyaa mujhe.... yaqeenan aapka takhaalluss kaafi asardaar hai..........

likhte rahiye.... Allah aur nawaaze

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5th December 2014, 01:18 PM

Humne Rindon ki mehfil mein rang jamaya ,
Thori aur peene de ab mujhe hosh nahiN ,,


Mast bhai aap ki ghazal per ke main bhi keh sakta hun ab ki ...

Teri ghazal ka itna nasha aya ki mujhe hosh nahiN,

waah bhai waah ...

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5th December 2014, 02:53 PM

Mast ji bohot khoobb gazal kahi aapne...maja aaa gaya padhkar.

Nacheez ki daad kubul karen

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Humne Rindon ki mehfil mein rang jamaya ,
Thori aur peene de ab mujhe hosh nahiN ,,


Mast bhai aap ki ghazal per ke main bhi keh sakta hun ab ki ...

Teri ghazal ka itna nasha aya ki mujhe hosh nahiN,

waah bhai waah ...

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Aapki zarra nawaazi ka shukriYaa JanaaB..aur aapka likha sher khud mein bayaan karta hai ki nacheez ki baat dil mein jaakar lagi hai.

Yunhi aapke saath aur daad ka talabgaar



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Mast ji bohot khoobb gazal kahi aapne...maja aaa gaya padhkar.

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Shukriya janaab ki aapne mujhe padha aur nacheez ke alfaazon ko chasm-e-nigah kiyaa

aage bhi aapke saath aur daad ki hasrat ke saath dua chahta hooN..



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14th December 2014, 07:08 PM

Hisaab kitaab keliye umr abhi hai baaki
Deedar-e-yaar ho jaane de humein hosh nahi

waaaaaaah.. kya baat hai janaab. bohot, bohot badhiya.
Nacheez ki dil se daad qubool karein.

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Hisaab kitaab keliye umr abhi hai baaki
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waaaaaaah.. kya baat hai janaab. bohot, bohot badhiya.
Nacheez ki dil se daad qubool karein.

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Doston,

Ek ghazal aapki nazar...umeed karta hooN pasand aaYeGiii

is furqat mein kho jaane de humhe hosh nahiN
gir kar sambhal jaane de humhe hosh nahiN

yun to badnaam hai duniya mein sabhi dost hai mere
humko bhi peene pilaane de humhe hosh nahiN

guzarte nahi yunhi hum bekaar teri galiyon se
humko hosh to aane de humhe hosh nahiN

hisaab kitaab ke liye umr aabhi hai baaki
deedar-e-yaar ho jaane de humhe hosh nahiN

kaun kehtaa hai ki sanjiidah insaan hai hum
'mast' ko milne milaane de humhe hosh nahiN



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