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Be-sabas hi aaj udhas hai dil,
ishq hota to koi baat bhi thi
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thar_tharii sii hai aasamaano.n me.n
zor kuchh to hai naatavaano.n me.n
[thar_tharii = tremors; naatavaa.N = weak]
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24th May 2007, 02:12 PM
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tha>>>
thar_tharii sii hai aasamaano.n me.n
zor kuchh to hai naatavaano.n me.n
[thar_tharii = tremors; naatavaa.N = weak]
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me>>>>>>>>>>>
mere chehre pe ghazal likhatii gai_iin
sher kahatii hu_ii aankhe.N us_kii
Shokh lamho kaa pataa dene lagiin
tez hotii hu_ii Saanse.N us kii
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me>>>>>>>>>>>
mere chehre pe ghazal likhatii gai_iin
sher kahatii hu_ii aankhe.N us_kii
Shokh lamho kaa pataa dene lagiin
tez hotii hu_ii Saanse.N us kii
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kisii ra.njish ko hawaa do ki mai.n zi.ndaa huu.N abhii
mujh ko ehasaas dilaa do ki mai.n zi.ndaa huu.N abhii
>sudarshan faakir
bhii>>>>>
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Kii>>>>>>
kisii ra.njish ko hawaa do ki mai.n zi.ndaa huu.N abhii
mujh ko ehasaas dilaa do ki mai.n zi.ndaa huu.N abhii
>sudarshan faakir
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bheegta badan...mehakta aanchal...julf ghata si....
aur jheel si uski ankhon main mujhko doob jaana tha
bheegte hue hi mila mujhe mera "saccha pyar"
tabhi to mushkil us manzar ko bhool jaana tha
tha>>>>>>>>
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bhe>>>>
bheegta badan...mehakta aanchal...julf ghata si....
aur jheel si uski ankhon main mujhko doob jaana tha
bheegte hue hi mila mujhe mera "saccha pyar"
tabhi to mushkil us manzar ko bhool jaana tha
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Friends, ChuN kii 'tha' lafz se bohat kam Sher hai, ess liye ham aage se 'tha' kii 'Tha'('Tha' of Thandi,) se Shuruaat kar sakte haiN... ok? filhaal usi lafz se sher haazir hai:
Thakii huii sii hawaa meiN tarang aane de,
Chaman se jaa kahiiN, PhooloN ke raNg aane de.[NM]
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Friends, ChuN kii 'tha' lafz se bohat kam Sher hai, ess liye ham aage se 'tha' kii 'Tha'('Tha' of Thandi,) se Shuruaat kar sakte haiN... ok? filhaal usi lafz se sher haazir hai:
Thakii huii sii hawaa meiN tarang aane de,
Chaman se jaa kahiiN, PhooloN ke raNg aane de.[NM]
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de>>>
Dekha to mera sayaa bhi mujh se judaa milaa
Socha to har kisii se mera sil-silaa milaa
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ji sir,,age se aise hi karenge
de>>>
Dekha to mera sayaa bhi mujh se judaa milaa
Socha to har kisii se mera sil-silaa milaa
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laakho.n kii sunaa tum ne taqadiir sa.Nvaarii hai
mujh se yahii kah dete ab ke terii baarii hai
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la>>>
laakho.n kii sunaa tum ne taqadiir sa.Nvaarii hai
mujh se yahii kah dete ab ke terii baarii hai
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dunia mei.n kisi ke ho to gaye, tumhe pyar nibahna aa to gaya...
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humse na sahi gairo.n se sahi, tumhe dil ka lagana aa to gaya,
dunia mei.n kisi ke ho to gaye, tumhe pyar nibahna aa to gaya...
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Us kii galiyo.n se jab laute apanaa bhii ghar bhuul gaye
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Yaad nahii.n kyaa kyaa dekha thaa saare manzar bhul gaye
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aaj tahktey nahi jo waffa ki kasme khatey huey"
-sunita virender singh
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"gujre waqt ki tarah wo mujhe bhi bhool jayn.ge,
aaj tahktey nahi jo waffa ki kasme khatey huey"
-sunita virender singh
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ey>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Ey dil itna bhi bada dil na ban
ke woh apni chal chal jaye khub
haath mein thama de apni tasveer
or kehta jaye lo ab ho jao khush
rakho hamesha apni nazar ke saamne
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ey>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Ey dil itna bhi bada dil na ban
ke woh apni chal chal jaye khub
haath mein thama de apni tasveer
or kehta jaye lo ab ho jao khush
rakho hamesha apni nazar ke saamne
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honth khuley nahi par baat kar li,
dil mei.n machal gaye hazaro armaan,
humne teri ankho ki nami aapne naam kar li"
-sunita virender
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"nazar ne nazar se mulakaat kar li,
honth khuley nahi par baat kar li,
dil mei.n machal gaye hazaro armaan,
humne teri ankho ki nami aapne naam kar li"
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Lagaa ke dekh le jo bhi hisaab aata ho
mujhe ghataa ke woh ginti mein reh nahin sakta
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"nazar ne nazar se mulakaat kar li,
honth khuley nahi par baat kar li,
dil mei.n machal gaye hazaro armaan,
humne teri ankho ki nami aapne naam kar li"
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likhte hain ret per wo mera naam,
fir khud hii pairon se apne mita dete hain
hushn walon ki adaye.n kabhi samajh na aayin
barbad karte hain use jise wo pyar karte hain.
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likhte hain ret per wo mera naam,
fir khud hii pairon se apne mita dete hain
hushn walon ki adaye.n kabhi samajh na aayin
barbad karte hain use jise wo pyar karte hain.
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"hai meri zindgi mei.n ujala tere dum se,
gar tu rutha kabhi mar jaungi kasam se,
kabhi tu mujhe be-waffa na samjna,
mohabat hai tere diye huey har gum se"
-sunita virender
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"hai meri zindgi mei.n ujala tere dum se,
gar tu rutha kabhi mar jaungi kasam se,
kabhi tu mujhe be-waffa na samjna,
mohabat hai tere diye huey har gum se"
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se>>>>>>>>>>>
Seene me sailaab-o-toofan,
Chehre par dikha,kuch bhi nahin
Kasm-e-ulfat,waada-e-wafa
Tumne diya kuch bhi nahin
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se>>>>>>>>>>>
Seene me sailaab-o-toofan,
Chehre par dikha,kuch bhi nahin
Kasm-e-ulfat,waada-e-wafa
Tumne diya kuch bhi nahin
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>>> IN
In aankho.n main udasii ki dasta.n nahi dikhtii
meri hansi ke piche dard ki kahani nahi dikhtii
jo doond lete hain patharo.n main bhii jindgii
hame to jindgii main bhii jindgii nahi dikatii.....................
dilip
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>>> IN
In aankho.n main udasii ki dasta.n nahi dikhtii
meri hansi ke piche dard ki kahani nahi dikhtii
jo doond lete hain patharo.n main bhii jindgii
hame to jindgii main bhii jindgii nahi dikatii.....................
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are dilipjee aapko in se nahin likhna hain........mera last word nahin hain....to hindi main hi hua...mayankjee ke anusaar hume last word hindi ka
use karna hain roman ka nahin.....
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
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are dilipjee aapko in se nahin likhna hain........mera last word nahin hain....to hindi main hi hua...mayankjee ke anusaar hume last word hindi ka
use karna hain roman ka nahin.....
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wo kya hai na mousam jii aaj kal pata nahi dimag kahan hai
per accha hai aapne kam se kam mujhe bata diya
waqt ki kami ke chalte main abhii doosra to nahi likh sakta so aapka sher hi yahan continue karta hoon
Seene me sailaab-o-toofan,
Chehre par dikha,kuch bhi nahin
Kasm-e-ulfat,waada-e-wafa
Tumne diya kuch bhi nahin
thnx
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
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uffffffffffffffff
wo kya hai na mousam jii aaj kal pata nahi dimag kahan hai
per accha hai aapne kam se kam mujhe bata diya
waqt ki kami ke chalte main abhii doosra to nahi likh sakta so aapka sher hi yahan continue karta hoon
Seene me sailaab-o-toofan,
Chehre par dikha,kuch bhi nahin
Kasm-e-ulfat,waada-e-wafa
Tumne diya kuch bhi nahin
thnx
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hijr kii shab hai aur ujaalaa hai
kyaa tasavvur bhii luTane vaalaa hai
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hii>>>
hijr kii shab hai aur ujaalaa hai
kyaa tasavvur bhii luTane vaalaa hai
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ke>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Ke Sapne unke jaab bhi aate hain !
Sadiyon pal mein saamet laate hain !
Ke har gujra lamha hum lagta hai essa !
Jesse woh bethe hamri julfen sehlate hain !
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ke>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Ke Sapne unke jaab bhi aate hain !
Sadiyon pal mein saamet laate hain !
Ke har gujra lamha hum lagta hai essa !
Jesse woh bethe hamri julfen sehlate hain !
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"hai.n aaj ankhe ashkbaar meri,
gar tera daaman hota to kuch aur baat hoti"
-sunita virender
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"ti"se mujhe kuch word na mila .....so ta se likhti hoon
Tamam shaher mein aisa nahin khulus na ho
Jaha umeed ho iski waha nahin mila!
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"ti"se mujhe kuch word na mila .....so ta se likhti hoon
Tamam shaher mein aisa nahin khulus na ho
Jaha umeed ho iski waha nahin mila!
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"likhney wala agar tera saath mere mukadar mei.n likh deta,
uska kaya jata...........bas mujhe jeene ka sahara mil jata"
-sunita virender
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"likhney wala agar tera saath mere mukadar mei.n likh deta,
uska kaya jata...........bas mujhe jeene ka sahara mil jata"
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tadapate hain na rote hain na ham fariyaad karate hain
sanam kii yaad men hardam Khudaa ko yaad karate hain
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tadapate hain na rote hain na ham fariyaad karate hain
sanam kii yaad men hardam Khudaa ko yaad karate hain
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ja tera naam hamne gazal likh diya.........
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hai dard-e-mohabat verna shayari hai kya
ja tera naam hamne gazal likh diya.........
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hume har rivayat badalne ki zid hain
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yahi baat apni akharti hain sab ko
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"hai tinka tinka ashiaana mera,
ja to chun kar ghar banna do en tinko ka,
ja phir aag laga do en tinko mei.n"
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main nahin kehta ke harzaai ho aap
main to hathon ki lakeeron se hun khafa
by maikashji
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13th June 2007, 09:16 AM
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main nahin kehta ke harzaai ho aap
main to hathon ki lakeeron se hun khafa
by maikashji
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"Falak ke sitare hote nahi sabhi ke liye,
mahboob ka pyar bhi hota nahi sabhi ke liye,
kudha ne yeh doulat banai hai kisi kisi ke liye"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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13th June 2007, 03:55 PM
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"Falak ke sitare hote nahi sabhi ke liye,
mahboob ka pyar bhi hota nahi sabhi ke liye,
kudha ne yeh doulat banai hai kisi kisi ke liye"
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Ye>>>>>>>>>>>>>.
yeh tassali hain ki hain nashaad sab
main akela hi nahin barbaad sab
by javed akhtar
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16th June 2007, 01:46 PM
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Ye>>>>>>>>>>>>>.
yeh tassali hain ki hain nashaad sab
main akela hi nahin barbaad sab
by javed akhtar
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ba>>>>>>
banaa gulaab to kaa.NTe.n chubhaa gayaa ik shaKhs
huaa chiraaG to ghar hii jalaa gayaa ik shaKhs
sh>>>>>
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16th June 2007, 03:37 PM
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ba>>>>>>
banaa gulaab to kaa.NTe.n chubhaa gayaa ik shaKhs
huaa chiraaG to ghar hii jalaa gayaa ik shaKhs
sh>>>>>
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Shaam-e-firaq ab na puch,aai aur aake tal gayi
Dil tha ke fir behal gaya,jaan thi ki fir sambhal gayi
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
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17th June 2007, 03:09 PM
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Shaam-e-firaq ab na puch,aai aur aake tal gayi
Dil tha ke fir behal gaya,jaan thi ki fir sambhal gayi
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yee>>>>>>
ye aur baat terii galii me.n na aaye.n ham
lekin ye kyaa ki shahar teraa chho.D jaaye.n ham
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18th June 2007, 03:24 PM
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yee>>>>>>
ye aur baat terii galii me.n na aaye.n ham
lekin ye kyaa ki shahar teraa chho.D jaaye.n ham
ma>>>>>
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mann ke bandhan main bandha na koii
tann ke bandhan main uljhaa hain har koii
Wahi hain zameen wahin hai aasman
par badla badla sa hain yaha har koii
Zururto^n ne simta diya waqt "sanju"
Warna milta tha main apno sa har kanhii
sorry main 1 sher ke badle 3 sher likh diye..
hi>>>>>>>>>
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21st June 2007, 01:16 PM
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mann ke bandhan main bandha na koii
tann ke bandhan main uljhaa hain har koii
Wahi hain zameen wahin hai aasman
par badla badla sa hain yaha har koii
Zururto^n ne simta diya waqt "sanju"
Warna milta tha main apno sa har kanhii
sorry main 1 sher ke badle 3 sher likh diye..
hi>>>>>>>>>
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hmm.. har dil azeez Sanju bhaaii ka likha huaa... woh to saath nahiiN lekin un ke nagme saath haiN....
ii>>>>>
ek bas tuu hii nahii.n mujhase Khafaa ho baiThaa
mai.n ne jo sa.ng taraashaa vo Khudaa ho baiThaa
Tha>>>>
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21st June 2007, 02:43 PM
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hmm.. har dil azeez Sanju bhaaii ka likha huaa... woh to saath nahiiN lekin un ke nagme saath haiN....
ii>>>>>
ek bas tuu hii nahii.n mujhase Khafaa ho baiThaa
mai.n ne jo sa.ng taraashaa vo Khudaa ho baiThaa
Tha>>>>
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yeh "ii" ka "ek" bhi ho sakta hain...very smart...
Thaa tab talak mere jeevan main ghamon ka andhiaraa
Teri mohabbat ka chirag jalana chaaha maine
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25th June 2007, 08:02 PM
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yeh "ii" ka "ek" bhi ho sakta hain...very smart...
Thaa tab talak mere jeevan main ghamon ka andhiaraa
Teri mohabbat ka chirag jalana chaaha maine
by mayankji
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haaN jee dono ek hii haiN
ne>>>
nazar me.n Dhal ke ubharate hai.n dil ke afasane
ye aur baat hai duniyaa nazar na pahachane
hai>>>
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