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khata!!!!! - 7th February 2004, 06:24 PM
sabne kaha tum se pyar karke khata kardi humne,
is kahta ki saza kaisi hogi,
humne kaaha khata inti hasin hai to ,
khata ki saza kaisi hogi.



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7th February 2004, 06:38 PM
Dear Neha Jee, baas wah hi nikal ayi mere dilse. Keya baat hein. Bohot khushi huyi. Likhte rahiyega. Tahe dilse shukriya kabool kijiyega. Take care. God bless you.

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hi - 8th February 2004, 01:51 PM
Dear Neha Jee, baas wah hi nikal ayi mere dilse. Keya baat hein. Bohot khushi huyi. Likhte rahiyega. Tahe dilse shukriya kabool kijiyega. Take care. God bless you.

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8th February 2004, 09:01 PM
Salam,
Dear Asif Jee, wah, aapka bhi keya kehna. Aapko likhne ki taqleef nehi karni padi, hein na? Waise aapka signature meh jo hein woh padte hue mujhe ek gana yaad aa jaati hein kuch yun: Shaaam bhi khub hein paas mehboob hein zindegi ke liye aur keya chahiye shaam bhi khub hein paas mehboob hein Ashiqui ke liye aur keya chahiye........ Nice one, right? I know you wouldn't take it wrong. Take care. God bless you. Allah Hafiz.

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9th February 2004, 09:52 AM
suhan allah....

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9th February 2004, 01:03 PM
namaste.. neha..ji..

bahut khoob likha hai yar..apne.. .bahut khoob.... hum too bus yahi..chahte hai ki..apko khata hi rahe..uski koi saza na mile..

asie hi likhte rahiye..

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Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai...
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9th February 2004, 02:20 PM
Neha Ji..

Namskaar..

sabne kaha tum se pyar karke khata kardi humne,
is kahta ki saza kaisi hogi,
humne kaaha khata inti hasin hai to ,
khata ki saza kaisi hogi.

BAhoot khoobsoart sa sher likha hai aap ne. Daad kabul farmaiega.. Aise hi humesha likhti rahiye.

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hi - 9th February 2004, 03:18 PM
very good .pretty great.keep u the good work .till then bye.
   
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