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21st November 2007, 05:43 PM
beti aaj tou mujhay shidat say intezaar tha
kay jab tum apna nana munna basta lay kay aik bajay wapis aao gi tou mai ... tou mai tum ko us qayamat ka bataoon ga ... jo hum par guzri mai tum ko bataaon ga kay tum kay liyay aftari bananay wali maa nae rahi tum kay do bhai rozay may ... Allah ko bahut pyarey ho gayey aur un ko Allah nay apnay pass bula liya beti aaj tum jab aao gi aur apni copy khol kar apnay pooray pooray number good aur star dekhao gi Mithi Mithi batein karke bahut rulao gi Din bhar kehl logi magar jab tum thak jaao gi Maa yaad ayegi bahut roogi thak jaaogi soo jaogi Mere khudaya bahut bura kiya toone bachhe ko maa se juda kiya tune Meri beti kay liyay aftari bananay wali maa nae rahi............. Meri beti kay liyay aftari bananay wali maa nae rahi.......... Sush इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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22nd November 2007, 01:04 PM
Uff Sushil bhai,
Bahut dard hai aapke is kalaam me... Dard nikal kar aa raha hai lafzon se... taareef karoon kalaam ki yaa kya kahoon kucch samajh nahi aa raha... Bhagwaan naa kare kisi ke saath bhi aisa ho... May God Bles...Apna khayal rakhiyega... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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22nd November 2007, 02:20 PM
susheel ji aapne jo likha hai kaya yeh mahaz ek shayri hai....khuda kare shayri hi ho....pls es baat ka khulasa aapko apni shayri mein karna chahiye .........bahut dard bhara hai...mere paas koi bhi lafaz nahi hai kahne ko.
 .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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22nd November 2007, 02:43 PM
Priy Pulkit Bhai
Aap umr me bahut chote magar bahut unche kirdaar ke maalik lagte ho. God Bless You sush इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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22nd November 2007, 02:46 PM
Sunita Jee
I have never done syayri. In fact I dont know A B C of shayri. Na umda alzaaz or na hi wo syarana saleeka. Jo bhi thoda bahut likhta hun wo kisi na kisi ghatna ya meri yaadon se juda hota hei. Ye bhi ek dardnaak wakaya hei jo mere ek dost ke saath guzra. Jo kuch usne ro ro ke kaha wahi pesh-e-khidmat kar diya. God Bless Regards susheel इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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23rd November 2007, 12:40 AM
oh no shusheel ji
bahut bura hua...aur itna dardnaak manjar raha hoga woh us dost ke liye..jab usko ye khabar apni beti ko deni padi hogi...dard ko gahraai se byaan karte ho aur kahte ho kuch nahi aata... bas feelings ko jinda rakhana sakhi miss u शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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23rd November 2007, 07:36 PM
Hi Sakhi
How r u doing...... All fine!! Thanks for sharing your views. Warm Regards Susheel इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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23rd November 2007, 10:46 PM
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haqeeqat kitni takleef de hoti hai ye parrh ker pata chala jo dard aapne bayan kia hai na qabil e berdasht hai mere pas alfaz nahi hain ........... keep writing allah aapke dost ko himmat aur hosla de is dard ko berdasht kerne ke liye ameen apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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