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Part-10 - 5th February 2011, 12:14 AM

Ab kya chahte ho Mukhtar..?" Jis tarah Sameena ki ummeed tooti thi uske baad unhe qatai andaaza nahi tha ki Mukhtaar unhe phone kar sakte hain. " Dekho ye jo bhi huaa, us silsile me naa mujhe kuch kahna hai aur behtar
hogaa tum bhi kuch na kaho... rahi baat Rakshi ki to wo bhi Tumse is waqt baat nahi karna chahegi. Tum aaindah se kabhi phone mat karna.." Itna kahne ke baad unhone saamne wale ki baat bina sune hi phone patak diya.. Rakshi ki taraf palteeN to wo kursi ke upar pair rakhe baithi kuch soch rahi thee, na uski aankhon me maa se koi sawaal tha na hi koi gham ke Mukhtaar se baat na ho saki. wo to bas khamoshi ki chaadar odhe gumnaamiyon me khoi thee..

Mukhtaar reciever haanth me uthaaye hi rah gaye...Kitna kuch socha tha Rakshi ko samjhaaenge, usse maafi maang lenge, aur use aage ki zindgi ke liye hauslaa denge par shaayad Rakshi unki soch se kahin zyaada aage thee.. Unhe shayad isi baat ka malaal rah gayaa tha ke Rakshi ko is haal me bhi unki zarurat nahi. Khamosh to Mukhtar bhi hue the lekin kuch bahot zor ka toota tha unke seene me..

Idhar Farha ke ghar pe mahaul urooz pe tha, khushiyaan failee theeN har taraf. Shaadi ki taiyaariyan zoron pe theeN, akhir 1 mahine se bhi kam waqt bachaa tha shaadi ke liye.
"Baaji aap bhi cahlen naa saath, aakhir shadi ka joDaa aapne khud hi pasand karnaa hai.." Samreen ne farha ko saath chalne ka kaha to wo bolee, " Nahi sammu tu jaa.. meri zara tabiyat kharaab si mahsoos ho rahi hai.."
" Thik hai baaji aap aaraam kar lein, main baaki ke saaman aaj pasand kar leti hoon, aap mere saath kal chaliyega, aakhir aapka haq hai aap hi poora karna.." wo boli to farha ne muskurate hue haath joD ke kaha.. : haan
meri maa abhi to tu jaa..."

" Bhai kiske haq ki baaten ki ja rahi hain.." itna kahte hue Zarina andar aain to farha bistar se kood padi aur zarrro ko lipat gai.. " haaye meri bahnaa tujhe yaad na aai apni kaneeez ki, aankhen taras gaeeN tujhe dekhe hue."

Zarina ne bhi muskurate huee kaha.. "Tum kyon nahi aa jaya kartee..aakhir wo bhi tumhara hi ghar hai."
Itne me Samreen bhi maidaan me kood padee.. " Zarro baaji inhe kuch din aur hamare saath rah lene dijiye, fir to

hamesha aapke ghar hi rahna hai.." Itna bolte hi farha ne use maarna chaha par wo unhe chidhate hue pahle hi

baahar nikal gayee..

" kaisi hai zarro.. Munsif ko nahi laai??"
" nahi wo amma ke paas hi hai.. unka dil hi nahi lagta Munsif ke bina.." to farha ne kaha.. "wo hai hi itna pyaara

masha-allah, kiska dil bharega uski muhabbat se..?"

" Zarro ek baat mujhe khaae jaa rahi hai, par tujhse nahi chupa sakti kyonki tu meri bahot acchee dost bhi hai.."
" bol na Farha , tujhe kis baat ne uljhaa rakkha hai.?"

" Allah jane ye mera wahem hai ya sach, mujhe lagta hi nahi hai ke Mukhtaar dil se mere saath shaadi kar rahe hain, kya shaadi hone ke baad wo mujhe kubool kar paaenge..??"

" Farha tu pareshan na ho, aisa kuch bhi nahi hai, bhai ne poori razamandi se tujhe apna banane ka faisla kiya tha, tu khamkha pareshan na ho.."
" hmmm... kaash ke aisa hi ho." Usne ye baat man me hi kahi.
Un dono ke beech kaafi der tak baten hoti raheeN aur shaam ko Zarina wahan se lout aai.


" Parween hum log Qureshi saab ke bete ke nikaah me jaa rahe hain, tum chalogi kya hamare saath??" Zarina ne poocha to wo mana kar gayee.. shaadi me sabhi ja rahe they, Abba, amma, zarrro munsif, bas haajra taai rukeen
theeN kyonki unke Ghutne me bahot dard thaa..

" Theek hai tum apne aur taai ke liye kuch bana lena hum logon ko der ho jaaegi aane me.." usne haami bhar dee,
"Aur haan ho saktaa hai Aadil bhai ghar aa jaen thodi der me match khel ke unke liye bhi kuch banaa lena.." itna

kahte hue wo log badh gaye aage aur Parween bhi lag gai gehuuN binNe me.

Shaaam ko haajra taai aur Parween aaNgan me hi baithey the, Aadil ab tak nahi loute they.. " khaala ye jo us din aain theeN wo kis Rakshi ki baat kar rahi theeN??" Uske behad maasuum se sawaal pe haajra muskuraa paDeeN aur boleeN "Beta ye unche Khaandano ki baaten hain, yahaan pagDi aur Naak ke aage kisi ko kuch dikhaai nahi deta, bacchon ki khushiyaaN bhi nahi.. Allah Neki de mere Mukhtaar ko bechare ne haste haste dard ka saaraa samundar khud me hi samet liyaa.. par kisi ko ye qurbaani nazar nahi aati.."
Haajra baDee der tak badbadaati raheen aur unki baaton se Parween bhi bahot kuch samajh gaee thi...

Aadil der shaam ko loute, apne kamre me dandanaate hue ghus gaye, Naha dhoke fresh hue aur sofe pe baith ke koi magzine dekh rahe they, ke itne me Parween andar aai.. Chaay mez pe rakhi aur loutne lagee to Aadil ne use aawaz lagaai.. " Tumhe pata hai na is waqt main chaay nahi peeta.. Mujhe bhukh lagee hai, agar ghar me kuch khane ko ho to de do.. aur aaindah waqt ka khayaal rakh ke kaam ko anjaam diya karo.. samjhee.." Unki baaten zaher se bharee hui theeN... Jo us patthar dil insaaan ko bhi ghaayal karne me koi kasar na chodteeN, Parween ko shuru se hi uss shaksh ki nafrat bardaasht na hotee thi, use Aadil ke lafz zameen me sharmindgi se gaDD jaane ko majboor kar diya karte they... lekin wo bechaari chupchaap zaher ke ghuuNt pee pee ke sabki khsuhi ke liye lagee rahtee sara din.

Wo khaana bana chuki thee, maare garmi ke uska buraa haal tha. Haajra taai apne kamre me aaram kar rahi theeN..
Parween fauran guslkhane ki taraf baDh gayee, aur naha dhoke jab baahar nikli to koi keh nahi saktaa tha ki wo is ghar me ek naukraani ki haisiyat se rahtee hai.. Nihaayat Gori, khoobsurat, dubli patli si ladki thee, baal bhi
ghane, lambe aur siyaah itne ke jaise lagta tha Aabe baam pe Maahtaab ko badliyon ne gher rakkha ho,.... libaas jo pahenti to sharaafat ki muurat lagtee, pallu sar pe hamesha dhakaa rahta tha.

Khana leke jab kamre me Daakhil hui to ek pal ko Aadil bhi hakke bakke se ho gaye, use dekhte hi rah gaye, par

unhe jald hi khayaal aa gaya, unhone bas khamoshi se itna hi kaha " table pe hi rakh do.." aur wapas palat gaye..
Parween ko bahot taajjub huaa ke pahli baar is shaks ke dil me murawwat kaise paidaa ho gayee..?
" ye khaanaa hai.???... namak to aisa daal rakkha hai jaise zaher."
Aadil ke kamre me se zor ki aawaz aai to wo dar hi gai, lekin jald hi khud ki khushfahmioN se use nijaat mil gayee aur unki nafrat ka wahi andaaz dekhkar use thodaa sa chain zaroor aaya, kyonki mausam agar jald badal jaaeN to
mizaaje-bahara bhi bardaasht nahi hotaa....

Der raat jab sab log waapas ghar loute to Wo dono to so chukeeN theeN lekin Aadil abhi bhi jaag hi rahe they, wo chhat pe tahal rahe the aur cigrette ke kash lagaate hue kisi baDee gahree soch me khoe they, ke itne me
gharwaalon ke aa jane se darwaaze ki aahat hui to cigarette wahin bujhaai aur neeche chal diye...
Parween ki neend bhi kacchhi thee lekin wo nahi uthi soch rahi thee, " ab itni raat me kya kaam hoga.. khana peena bhi kha kar hi aaye honge, aakhir bade logon ki shaadi thii.."

Filhaal abhi ijaazat...milte rahiyega...

shaad


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hmmmm..................ab kal ka intezaar rahega


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Pyaari kavita negi saahiba.. meri ghazlon me wese to aapne bahot dino ke baad aana shuru kiya, lekin meri kahaani me shuru se saath de rahi hain.. ye baat mujhe bahot acchee lagi aapki.. aur rahi baat kahaani ki tareef ki, to aap sab logon ke saath ne hi ise ab tak silsilewaar rakkha hua hai, warna shayad ab tak main likhna band kar detaa...

rahi mukhtar aur rakshi ke nikaah ki bata to.. ssssshhhhhh
Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost.. padhti raho, sab pata chalta rahega..
Shaad Jee,
Kahani waqai me bahut interesting hai....!!! isliye tareef karna to banta hai....!!! Aur likhna kabhi band mat karna.....!!!

mukhtar aur rakshi ka nikaah na ho na sahi .... par kahani ka end dekhne ka to mann hai..........!!!

Aur aaj ka part bhi kaafi achaa laga......!!! Bs likhte rahiyee....!!! Khush rahiyeee.....!!!


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hmmmm..................ab kal ka intezaar rahega

Haanjee hame bhi kal ka intezaar reahega.. kal to kahani me nai jaan aane wali hai.. padhhna zaroor...


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Shaad Jee,
Kahani waqai me bahut interesting hai....!!! isliye tareef karna to banta hai....!!! Aur likhna kabhi band mat karna.....!!!

mukhtar aur rakshi ka nikaah na ho na sahi .... par kahani ka end dekhne ka to mann hai..........!!!

Aur aaj ka part bhi kaafi achaa laga......!!! Bs likhte rahiyee....!!! Khush rahiyeee.....!!!

bahot bahot shukriya kavita jee... aapne jo hame is laayaq samjha badi meherbaani aapki. Theek hai kabhi band ahi karenge iske baad agli kahanai bhi pesh ki jaaegi.. haan tahts the spirit, kabhi predict karke nahi chalna chahiye kahani ko asal zindgi se jod ke padhogi to zyada maza aaega... lekin har kisi ko khushi ki ummeed to rahti hi hai isliye main aapka aur sunita deee ka dil nahi todunga.. Duaa karoonga ke happy ending hoe.. baaki aage allah ki marzi..
khush rahiye kavita jee.................... wese ek khushkhabri doon, haajra taaai ke ghutne ka dard theek ho gaya hai.......

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bahot bahot shukriya kavita jee... aapne jo hame is laayaq samjha badi meherbaani aapki. Theek hai kabhi band ahi karenge iske baad agli kahanai bhi pesh ki jaaegi.. haan tahts the spirit, kabhi predict karke nahi chalna chahiye kahani ko asal zindgi se jod ke padhogi to zyada maza aaega... lekin har kisi ko khushi ki ummeed to rahti hi hai isliye main aapka aur sunita deee ka dil nahi todunga.. Duaa karoonga ke happy ending hoe.. baaki aage allah ki marzi..
khush rahiye kavita jee.................... wese ek khushkhabri doon, haajra taaai ke ghutne ka dard theek ho gaya hai.......

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Hajra taai ka ghutne ka dard theek ho gya... Ek din pehle theek kar dete to bechaari shaadi me enjoy kar leti kisi ka ghutna aise nahi dukhaaya karte shaad saheb.....!!! hahahaha


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Hajra taai ka ghutne ka dard theek ho gya... Ek din pehle theek kar dete to bechaari shaadi me enjoy kar leti kisi ka ghutna aise nahi dukhaaya karte shaad saheb.....!!! hahahaha

kahaani ki maang thi yaar unke guthne me dard hona.. maiin parween aur aadil ko akele ghar pe nahi chhod sakta tha naa.. warna mare gusse ke aadil ko parween ka khoon hi kar denaa tha.. koi to hona chahiye na bachane waala..


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Aaj ghar pe sab log bahot khush they.. Mukhtaar jo wapas India aa gaye they. unki shaadi me mahaz 1 haftaa rah gayaa thaa... Ghar pe kaam dhaam zoron pe chal raha thaa.. Idhar Amma aur abba bhi behad khush they, Aadil ne bhi dil hi dil kubool kar liya tha Farha ko apni bhabhi par shayad Mukhtar abhi bhi use apna kubool na kar paae they.. Rakshi kahin na kahin abhi bhi unke dil me shaamil thee.

" Zarro tu chal mere saath, bazaar se bahot saari shopping karni hai." Aadil ne kaha to Zarina fat se taiyaar ho gai usne kaha, "Bhai main soch rahi thee agar hamare saath Parween bhi chale to accha rahegaa, hame bhi thodi uski madad mil jaaegi aur wo bechaari bhi apne liye kuch le legi.." Aaj Aadil ka dil na jane kyon us majloom ke liye pighal gaya thaa, unhone sahmati de di..
Car me Aadil ne ghazal chalaa deen aur chupchaap se uska maza lete hue drive kar rahe the.. Peeche Zarina aur Parween baaten karne me mashgool theeN, Zarina use bataa rahi theeN ke farha ke liye aisa dress lenge, wo necklace lenge aur wo bhi apne tazurbe unke saath baanT rahi thee.. Pahle to Aadil ne gaur na kiya tha un dono me lekin baad me wo bhi dilchaspi lene lage they.. Unhone chupke se mirrror me peeche baithe shaksh ko dekha to unki chor nazar ko us husn ki mallika ne pakad liya, wo ekdam se apni nazren churaa baithee, aur Aadil ne bhi fauran mirror se dhyaan haTaa ke ghazal pe dhyan dena shuru kar diyaa..

Aaj na jane kyon uski baaten Aadil ko bahot lubha rahi theeN, aaj itne din ke baad parween ko khush hone ka mauqaa mila to wo rok na saki khud ke jazbaaton ko.. Is roop me muskuraate hue wo aaj aur bhi zyaada haseeen nazar aa rahi thi.. " Baaji, aap ye waala joDa hi rakkhen, Farha pe khoob jachegaa."
" haan Parween maine bhi yahi socha tha, tumhari aur meri pasand kitni miltee hai..Ab baaki dresses bhi tum khud hi pasand karogi ." Itna kah ke wo dono dresses dekhne me lag gaeeN aur Aadil cigarette ke kash maarne baahar chale aaye. Unke dimaag me jo khayaal chal rahe they wo waaqai pareshaan kar dene waale they, " Kya is ladki ke liye tumhare jazbaaat badal gaye hain Aadil.. kya us nafrat ka ab isse koi naata nahi raha, kyon kii tumne nafrat isse, agar wajah ye hai ke wo tum logon ke TukDon pe mohtaaz hai to ye tumhari galatfahmi hai, yahaan rahne ka wo poora karz chukaati hai, kasoor iski badkismati ka hai aur tumhe koi haq nahi ki use aur bhi zyaada takleef pahuchaao.." Aadil ko baar baar ye baateN pareshan kiye ja rahi theeN..

Der-shaam jab ghar loute to Sabko saaman dikhaya amma boleeN, " waah ree Zarro teri pasand ki to daad deni hogi.."
" Amma ye meri akele ki pasand nahi hai isme se zyaadatar cheezen Parween ne khud pasand ki hain..." Itna sunte hi Amma ne koi jawaab to na diya lekin dil hi dil me aag lag gaee thi, na jaane kyon wo usse itna chidh khaae baithee theeN, Amma ki haalat dekh Aadil mand mand muskuraa rahe they, aur zarina bhi bhaamp gayee sab, amma ke aur maje lene ke liye Zareena ne ab wo joDaa dikhaya jo unhone Parween ke liye pasand kiyaa tha... Amma to khushi se bhar gayee thi us joDe ko dekh par apni khushi Zaahir na hone deeN..
"haan haan , theek hai, theek hai.." Fir unhone baat palaTte hue baaki ke kapdon pe dhyaan dena shuru kar diyaa.. Parween bhi bahot khush thee, aaj itne dino baad uske liye naye kapde jo aaye they..

" Mukhtaar, beta jaldi baahar aaja aaj teri haldi ki rasam hai, bahar sab log tera intezaar kar rahi hain.." wo bole.." haan Amma aap chalo main abhi aaya.." Itna kah kar wo Aadil ki taraf muDe aur kahne lage.." yaar kya hai ye sab, mujhe bilkul pasand nahi hai haldi mehndi.."
" bhai, jaana to padegaa, aakhir rasm hai nibhani padti hai..." Aadil muskuraaye...
" haan beta dekhunga,, tera bhi waqt aane waala hai bahot jald hi, fir dekhunga tu kitni khoobi se rasm nibhaata hai..." wo hasne lage to Aadil bole.." Bhai Allah se main to duaaen maang maang ke thak gaya ke ab apne naam se bhi band bajwaa do, par shaayd unhe meri duaaon ke liye fursat hi nahi hai.. filhaal to aapke sitaare jagmagaa rahe hain bhai.. enjoy karo.."

Ghar pe kaafi chahal pahel badh gayee thi, door daraaz ke mehmaan bhi aa gaye they.. sab bahot khush ho rahe they, kyonki Mukhtaar ghar me sabse bade bhai they aur pahli baar kisi Dulhe ko taiyaar kiya jaana tha is ghar se...
Sab afra tafri me lage they, kisi ko kisi ke liye fursat nahi thee.. Bas yoon lag raha tha ke kya kya kaam padaa hai baiThna uThnaa dushwaar ho gaya tha.. Parween shaadi ki taiyaari ke saath saath ghar ke members ka bhi utna hi dhyaan rakh rahi thee..
Parween Aadil ke kamre me chaay ki tray leke aai. wo chaay aage baDhaai to wo bole. " shukriya parween, tumhe sab kaise pata hota hai ki mujhe is waqt chaay ki itni talab lag rahi thee..." To usne muskuraate hue bas itna hi kahaa.. " Hame aapke saath saath baaki sabka waqt bhi raT gaya hai, kaun kitni der chaay peeta hai kab khaata hai..ab jaldi se chaay pijiye warna thandi ho jaaegi.. " Aadil ne bhi muskurate hue Chaay ki chuski maari aur use thanks kah diyaa.. Aakhir dheere dheee Aadil ki narm dili ko usne bhi mahsoos kiya tha, aur use accha lagaa tha ke kam se kam ek aadmi ke dil se nafrat wo khatam karne me kaamyaab hui, use is ghar me accha lagne laga thaa sabse pyaar ho gaya tha, aur shaayad baaki members ko bhi us ladki ki aadat pad gayee thee, aur pade bhi kyon na wo sabka itna khayaal jo rakhti thii..

Shaam hote hi dulhaan ke ghar se 5,6 ladkiyaan aa gain apne dulha-bhai ke liye mehndi ki rasm karne.. khoob mazaaq masti hui, sabne khoob enjoy kiya, aur jo hasee thitholi me saaliyon ne Mukhtaar se maze lene ki koshsih karteeN to Mukhtaar ke support me uski dono bahne Zarina aur Parween taiyaar hoke baithee rahti.. Majaal hai un dono ke saamne ek bhi saali ki chal paai ho.. Wo bechaari neg tak maangne me sharminda ho gain par Mukhtaar ne unka dil rakhte hue sabko 500, 500 deke khush kar diya.. Wo bhi apne Dulha - bhai ki tareef karte karte vidaa huin aur jaldi baraat le aane ka kahne lageeN, to Aadil ne unhe hauslaa bandhaaya " Aap sab befikar rahen, agar bhaai ne late kiya to main aa jaaunga apni baraat lekar.." wahaan maujood sabhi log Aadil ke is mazaaq pe zor se thahaake lagaa diye..

" Kya baat hai bhai, bade handsome lag rahe ho sehre me.." Aadil ne mukhtaar ki tareef kai to wo jhep gaye aur bole, "Beta ek baar shaadi ho jane de, uske baad main tujhe batata hoon.." dono haNs pade..

Raat kareeb 10 baje Rifle ke fire ke saath Mukhtaar ki Baraat rawaana hui.. Aatishbaazi ka wo nazaara tha ke dekhte hi bantaa tha.. Abba aur baaki Buzurgwaan aage aage chal rahe they, Beech me band waalon ke saath jhund ke jhund ladke naach gaane me mashgool they, un sab me Aadil bhi apni kalaa ka jauhar dikha rahe they..aur unhe ajeeb ajeeb tarah se naachte dekh Parween apni hansee nahi rok Paa rahi thee.. Peeche Aurton, ladkiyon ka ghera tha, Zarina bhi maidaan me kood paDee thi , aakhir bade bhai ki shaadi jo thee... Usne parween ko bhi ishaaron se bulaya par wo manaa kar gai, par wo zarina hi kya jo itni aasani se maan jaae.. wo aage badhi aur parween ka haanth pakad ke kheench laai.. thodi hi der me Parween bhi rang me jam gayee, aur aissa naachi ke seedhe dulhan ke ghar pe jaake hi usne saans lee...

Nikaah dono taraf se kubool ho gaya thaa.. sab ek dusre ko mubaarakbaad dene me lagey they.. Firoz saahab behad muhabbat se apne bade bhai Obaid saahab se mile, unhone aapas me mubarakbaad deeN.. khane peene ke maamle ko Imraan aur faheem sambhale hue they, dulhan ke bhai the bechaare kyon na aage badhte... Rukhsaar aur Aamna bhi bahot khush theeN, aakhir unke bacchoN ka nikaah thaa, Shaadi aise dhoomdhaam se ki gai theee, ke logon ne jitni tareef kaarni chahi, kam hi padeeN..

Aaj Parween ke husn me wo chaandni utar aai thi ke jo bhi dekhta to bas dekhta rah jaata, dulhan ka husn bhi us shokh ke aage feeka pad raha thaa..
Aadil ne unhe gaur se dekha to wo sharmaa gayeeN, Aadil ne unhe rokte hue kaha, " masha allah kahiN hamaari nazar naa lag jaae aapko.." to wo itna hi bol paai " apno ki nazar bhi bhala lagti hai kaheeN" aur jo bhaagi ke fir wo bechaare aahen bharte rah gaye.. Lekin aaj jo deedar husn ka Aadil ne kiya tha wo use kabhi bhula nahi sakte they..

khana peena sab ho jaane ke baad Aadil ne bhai ko gale se lagaa liya.. unhe aage aane wali zindgi ke liye wish kiya aur na jaane kahaaN se unki aankhon me Aansu aa gaye, Mukhtaar ki bhi Aankhen chalak padeen... Jahaan Mukhtaar ne dil hi dil me apne khudaa se rakshi ki muhabbat ke liye maafi maangi, wahin Aadil ki Aankhon se aansu ka jo qatra tapkaa usme yakeenan Farha kaa hi naam tha, lekin Wo aakhri aaNsu tha shaayad unki muhabbat ke naam kaa.....



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"Chaand jaisi hai bilkul hamari bahu.." Haajra ne uski ki balaaen lete hue kaha to Aamna boleeN, "Aapa ye hamari bahu nahi hamari beti hai, Allah Tum dono ki JoDee salaamat rakkhe." ye kahkar Aamna ne bhi bade pyaar se Farha ke maathe ko choom liya.

Valeeme ka din thaa, saara din to Mukhtaar bhi idhar udhar arrangement karne me hi gawaa diya.Unhe bilkul fursat naa milee ke apni dulhan se bhi mil lete uske haal samachaar le lete.. Shaam ko function khatam hone ke baad Mukhtaar apne kamre me jaane ko they, par Darwaaze pe Zarina, aur baaki sab bahne pahle hi maujood theeN, Unse acchee khaasi rakam lootne ke baad hi bhai ko andar jane diya.. Wo andar aaye to Dulhan banee jo baithee thee wo Yaqeenan Mukhtaar ki Tamanna nahi thee lekin uski aage aane wali zindgi thee. Mukhtaar ne aakhir apni aane wali zindgi ki taraf badhne ka faislaa kiya.

Mukhtaar uske paas aake baithey to wo masoom si jaan ghabraai si baithee rahee, unke bhi kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha ke kya baat karen, thodi der ke baad Mukhtaar ne baaton ka silsila badhaane ki koshish ki. " Assalamoalakum.." us taraf se behad dheere aawaz aai,"Walekum assalaam" Mukhtaar fir thodi der khamosh rahne ke baad pooche " Khaana to kha liya hoga na, kisi cheez ki zarurat ho to kah do mujhse." Farha ne gardan hilaate hue nahi ka ishaara kar diya. Ab Mukhtaar ne Uska ghunghat uthaya aur bole, " Isse pahle maine tumhara aisa husn kabhi dekha nahi tha. Bahot hi pyaari lag rahi ho, aisa lag raha hai do jahaan ka husn utar aaya ho.."

Sharam ke maare Farha ki munDi upar nahi uth paa rahi thee.. Tab Mukhtaar ne muh-dikhai ke taur pe ek bahot khoobsurat si heere ki anguthii nikali aur uski ungli me pahna dee.. Aise hi na jane kab tak baaton ka silsila chalta raha, Mukhi ko apni zindgi kubool karne me dikkaten to aani theeN par itna mushkil ho jaaega kisi aur ko apni zindgi banaana unhone socha bhi nahi tha shayad..

Shaadi hue 1 haftaa beet gaya tha, is beech Farha bhi apne maayke ho ke aa gai thee. wese use rukna to thaa kuch aur waqt apne maa ke ghar pe magar Mukhtaar bhi waapas dubai jaane wale the 1,2 din me isliye wo jaldi hi aa gai thee. Saari rasmeN poori ho gai theeN aur Farha ne ghar ka sara charge le liye thaa, Khana to aisa pakaati thee ke log taareef karte na thakte the. ghar ke saare kaamo me bhi aisi hoshiyaar ke sabke dil me us ladki ke liye bas pyaar hi pyaar paida ho jata tha.. Parween use bhabhi kaha kartee thi aur kichen ke saare kaamo me uski bahot madad kiya kartee thee. Dono ke beech kaafi muhabbat paidah ho gai thee aur farha bhi use sagi nand ki tarah hi pyaar kiya karti thee.

Mukhtaar usse zyaada baat nahi kiya karte they, bas agar kuch kaam hota to hi usse do bol ehsaan ke bol diya karte they.. Yoon to farha ko har koi pyaar karta tha par Mukhtar ka ye rawaiyya usse bardaasht nahi hota tha.. aur wo apne dil ke dard ko bas dil me hi sameTe jaa rahi thee.. Ashraf apna transfer leke india aa gaye the, aur Lucknow me posting ho gayeee thi. Zarina bhi wahin chali gai thee unke paas.

Aaj Mukhtar ko dubai rawaana hona tha, filhal Farha ka passport nahi bana thaa aur wese bhi wo use abhi saath le jana nahi chahte they.. " Suno Mukhtaar, Dulhan ko akele chhod ke jaaoge to bechaari ko bahot takleef hogee. "
" Amma main use abhi sath nahi le ja sakta, wahan bahot arrangement karni hogee, naya ghar bhi dhundna padega. Aur wese bhi 2,3 mahine ki baat hai tab tak uska passport ka masla bhi sulajh jaaega..."
" wo sab to theek hai par...!!"
" par war kuch nahi amma, aap pareshan na hoen, main bahot jald use saath le jaaunga." Aamna kya kahteeN bechaari bas ek chahat ki maari us ladki ki taraf se thodee si daleel pesh kareeN par mukhtar ne us arzi ko radd kar diya tha.

jaane se pahle unhone ek baar Rakshi ke ghar pe phone bhi lagaaya tha par wo number service me nahi rah gaya tha. Unhone ummeed zyada to nahi rakhi thi par unke dil ko thodi takleef zaroor pahuchi thee.


" suniye, apna khayaal rakhiyega, khana wana time pe khaaiyega.".. Farha se kuch kaha nahi ja raha tha bechari subha se hi udaas thee, badi mushkil se itna hi kah paai thi.

Mukhtar ne bhi kaTeeli muskaan hothoN pe sajakar kaha, " tumse pahle bhi main wahaan rahta tha, aur dekho khana peena nahi khaata to ye sehaat aisi na rah jaati... hainaa??" unke alfaaz zaher banke utarte they us masoom ke seene me. Iske baad uski himmat nahi hui kuch kehne ki, aur Mukhtaar ke jaane ke baad wo itna phoot ke roi apne kamre me ke dil ka gubaar aansuon ke saath jaata rahaa.

Us shaam jab farha aur parween khana bana rahi theeN us waqt Aadil bhi kitchen me aa pahuche, wo Farha ki izzat karne lage they aur bhabhi maante hue unse hasee mazaaq karte rahte.
" Aaiye Aadil bhai, kahen aaj kya farmaaish hai aapki ??"
" Hamari chahat to kuch aur hai bhabhijaan, aap nahi samjhengi." Aadil ke itna kahne pe Parween bhi muskuraane lagi thee, aur shaayad farha ne bhi samajh liya tha unke jazbaaton ko.. farha ne kaha, " Accha bhai aisi baat hai to apni chahat se kabhi hame bhi milwaaiye."
" Milwa denge milwa denge , aisi bhi kya jaldi hai huzoor? "
Wo dono samajh gaye they ek doosre ki baaton ke peeche chupe hue ehsaas ko. Parween ko bahot sharm aa rahi thee wahan, wo ye bolte hue nikalne ki koshish karee, " Allah itna waqt ho gayaa, maine abhi tak magrib ki namaaz bhi nahi padhee."
to uske palaTte hi Aadil ne uska haanth pakad liya aur bole, " ajee zara hamaare haq me bhi duaaen maang lijiyega, sitaare baDe gardish me hain aajkal.."
" haaye allah...khudaa ke liye hamaara haanth chhod dein koi dekh lega..." itna kah kar wo bhaagi aur farha ne Aadil ke kaan kheench liye...



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Mukhi aur farah ki shaadi karva di.....!!! Mubarak ho..... aapne to saara interest khatam kar diya story ka..........!!! Kahani me itna bad twist......!!! Kher umeed tooti nahi hai abhi bhi .... aage dekhte hai kya hota hai....!!! Likhte rahiyee....!!! Khush rahiyee.......!!!


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Mukhi aur farah ki shaadi karva di.....!!! Mubarak ho..... aapne to saara interest khatam kar diya story ka..........!!! Kahani me itna bad twist......!!! Kher umeed tooti nahi hai abhi bhi .... aage dekhte hai kya hota hai....!!! Likhte rahiyee....!!! Khush rahiyee.......!!!

kavita jee namashkaar... ummeed karta hoon khush hongi aap.. Zyada to nahi magar itna hi kahunga, ke ummeed khatam na karen, aakhir ummeed pe to duniya kaayam hai... dekhen na sunita dee ko inna bura laga dono ki shaadi se,, ke aaj unka padhne ke baad reply tak nahi aaya unka..

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shaab bhai....dukh to jaroor hua muje, par es baat maanti hooN maiN ki pyar karne walon ke jisam chahe na mil paayeN, par unki rooh jaroor mil jati hai....so pyar jismoN ka nahi ruhoN ka milaap hai....jo ki un dono meiN hai.



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behad shukriya baaji aapne pyaar karne waale dino ke ehsaasaat samjhe, unki majburiyaan samjheeN, beshaq na mil paana muhabbat ka ant nahi hai.. kabhi kabhi muhabbar kurbat ke bahot aage ki daaasataan bhi suna jaati...
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thoda waqt dijiye.. bahot jald hi post karunga.. maafi chahunga ke waqt ki tangi ke chalte abhi tak nahi kar paaya.. but thoda intezaar aur sahi...


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aaj ka episode

jaldi post kijiye waqt ki kami ko beech meiN laiyeN, hamara bhi sochiye jinka etna interest bana hua hai story meiN


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bas kuch din aur intezaar Dee... Kuch personal work ki wajah se out of town hooon.. next wek tak chian se saans lene ki fursat nahi hai.. min jaldi haazir ho jaaunga... Ummeed hai gustaakhi muaaf hogi..ijaazat

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bas kuch din aur intezaar Dee... Kuch personal work ki wajah se out of town hooon.. next wek tak chian se saans lene ki fursat nahi hai.. min jaldi haazir ho jaaunga... Ummeed hai gustaakhi muaaf hogi..ijaazat

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shukriya kavitaa jee... jab tak aaap jaise dost hain.. hame kisi baat se pareshan hone ki zarurat hi nahi... khud ko khushnaseeb samajhta hoon aap sabhi ka saath paakar.. ummeed hai aage bhi aisa hi responce aur duaaen milti rahngi... khush rahiye

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thoda intezaaar aur chalega.... aap sabhi padhne waalon ko happy valentines day.....


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Beet gaye hain barsoN, kya se kyaa ho gaya hoga,
Wo jo but huaa karta thaa khudaa ho gayaa hogaa.

main lout aaya hoon tere shahar yahi soch ke sanam,
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Sir, sharing se aapka ishaara kis taraf hai... sher ki taraf ya kahaani ki taraf.. meri kam aqli ki wajah se aapka ye comment samajh nahi aaya.. ,maafi chahunga jo takleef de raah hoon par zara tafseel me bataaenge to behtar hoga..


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Shaad Bhai, intezaar ki bhi hadd hoti hai, ab aur sabar nahi hota....jaldi se next episode post karo.....nahi to


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hahahhaa.... aap dono (u and kavita jee) ke gusse me bhi mujhe pyaar nazar aa raha hai... bas bas intezaar khatam dekhiye kabhi bhi next part aapke saamne aa sakta hai.. kabhi bhi kisi bhi waqt... updates check karte rahen..
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Filhaal is kahaani se Mutalliq ek ghazal pesh kar rahaa hoon.. kahani ka next part bhi bahot jaldi post karoonga.. ummeed hai koshsih pasand kareneg aap sab..


Jaate jaate bas itna hi khayaal rakhna,
Har aamad pe apne, ek sawaal rakhnaa.

Gham kya karna jo wo naa mile humko,
Kya uski yaad me rona, kya malaal rakhna.

Khaab ki tabeer na bano,par itna hi kardo,
jab bhi aao chehre pe wahi jamaal rakhna.

Zara adab se miyaN, Mashooq ki gali hai aai,
Gair-munasib hai yahaN jhumti-chaal rakhna.

Husne barham pe ye gesu jaise qayamat ho,
Rukhe-roshan pe do zulf yuNhi nikaal rakhna.


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yeh gazal to pahle hi pasand kar chuki hoon, ab next episode pesh kijiye.....



Kavita agar 1-2 din meiN naya episode post na hua to hum dono Shaad ke khilaaf ho jayeNge....tum mere saath ho na


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Ohho.. GuTbaaji chaalu hai yahaan to...

chaliye koi baat nahi hum poori koshsih karenge aapko apne khilaaf na hone denge.. fikar not. appijaan.. take care.


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Next part>>>>>>> maafi chahunga kuch masrufiyat ki wajah se late post kar rha hoon.. aur aage se kossish karungaa ke gaayab na houn.....



Mukhtaar ki shaadi ko kareeb ek baras beet chukaa thaa. Is beech wo ek baar bhi india lout ke nahi aaye they, haan unhe ye khabar pahuchwaa dee gayee thee ki wo ek behad khubsurat si bacchee ke baap ban gaye hain, tab jaake kahin unhe ye ehsaah huaa ki unka bhi ek ghar hai ek parivaar hai.. bas tab se hi unki mulk wapas jaane ki chahat ubaal maarne lagee..Aakhir bacche ki muhabbat hoti hi aisi hai.
Haalaki is beech unki bahot kam baar hi Farha se baaten hui, baten kya huin bas sab ek rawaati taur pe salaam duaa se zyada kuch bhi nahi..Idhar farha ne bhi dil pakka kar liya tha unke bagair jeene ke liye.

Aadil bhaagte hue kamre me aaye aur bina saans liye kahte chale gaye, " Amma, aree O Amma...kahan ho?"
" kya huaa Aadil kyon itne bahke bahke se ho, zara saans to le lo."
"Saans lene ki fursat kise hain meri pyaari Ammijaan, baat hi aisi hai." wo jitni khushi se bata rahe the kamre me maujood Aamna bee, haajra taai aur Farha ka dhyaan unki taraf khichta chala gaya...
"Arre magar huaa kya aage bhi kuch bataaoge.." unhone besabri se poocha.
" Bhai Dubai se waapas aa rahe hain, unka phone aaya tha abhi mere paas, kah rahe they kisi ko bolna mat par mujhse raha nahi gaya, aakhir aap logon ke intezaar ki bhi to hadd ho gayee thee.."
Itna sunte hi Aamna aur haajra to maare khushi ke phooli nahi samaa rahi theeN, Lekin farha ne is baat me koi khaas dilchaspi nahi dikhaai bas halka sa muskuraa ke reh gayee.

Uska dil patthar ho chuka thaa, jis shakhs ne uski zindgi me pyaar ki ek ek boond ko tarsaa daala tha aaj agar wo lout ke aaye bhi to kis ummeed pe wo baarishon ki tamanna kartee, bas ek lalak to uthi thee apne sartaaj ki ziyaarat karne ki, magar isse zyaada uski khwahish thee apni masoom si bacchee ke liye baap ki aankhon me pyaar dekhne ke liye. Na jaane kaise magar apne papa ke aane ki khabar sunte hi wo 2 mahine ki kahkashaaN ne bhi apne honThon pe muskuraahat sajaa lee thee, wo uski samajh thee ya Allah ka karishma lekin jo bhi ho uski muskuraahat ne mahaul ko aur bhi rangeen bana diya tha.

Aaj subah subah se hi ghar me kaafi raunak thee, tarah tarah ke pakwaan ban rahe they, Aadil ki bhi khushi ka koi thikana nahi tha unhone kaha, " Parween tumhe pata hai, bhai ne bachpan se hi kabhi humse seedhe muh baat nahi ki, lekin door jaane ke baad hamare diloN me muhabbat bahot zyada badh gai ek dusre ke liye.." aur muskuraae to parween boli, " haan!! aap sahi kah rahe hain.. apno ki muhabbat hoti hi aisi hai ke duriyon se un rishtoN pe koi farq nahi padtaa, halaaki unme mazbuti badhti jaati hai."
Itne me hi baahar se Aamna ki Aawaz aai, to parween bhi daudTe hue baahar nikli, " beta parween, khana wana to sab taiyaar hai naa, Mukhtaar ki flight land ho gayee hai wo kabhi bhi aa sakta hai".. unki baaton me jitni khushi jhalak rahi thee utni hi bete ke deedar karne ka intzaar bhi nazar aa raha tha.. to usne bhi unhe befikar rahne ka kah diya " amma aap befikar rahen, sab kuch ready hai.." Itne din saath rahne se Aamna ke dil me bhi Parween ke liye pyaar umaD aaya tha, unhe bhi wo pasand ho chalee thi..

Idhar Farha kaa dil bhi bezaar bana tha subah se hi, uske routine me dekha jaae to koi khaas farq nahi aaya tha, jaisa ke normal din ho koi wo aisa hi mahsoos kar rahi thi, magar kuch nayapan zaroor use mahsoos ho raha thaa, usne kahkashaaN ko taiyaar karke fursat kar diya tha jo is waqt Apni dadijaan ki god me chaDhe iThlaa rahi thee..

Baahar se car ke horn ki aawaz aai to sab ke cheheroN pe khushi ki laher dauD uthi, Aadil bhagta hua bahar gaya aur fauran bhai ka saaman haanth me lekar andar aaya, bade bhai bhi saath chal ke aa rahe they, unhone aate hi sabse salaam kiya bade budhon se duaaen leeN, Farha ne unse jis anmane andaaz me salaam kiyaa usi andaaz me unhone bhi use jawaab diyaa. Bas unhe to fikr thee apni pyaari si bacchi ke deedar ki, unhone use God me le liya aur sab bahar garden me aake baithe aur baateN shuru ho gayeeN.. aaj ghar me nai jaan aa gayee thi, bade bete ke naa rahne se kitna farq padta hai aaj us kami ki poori bharpaai ho gayee thii..saara din kaise kat gaya kisi ko pata bhi na chala..Zarina bhi aa gai thee apne bhai ka swaagat karne..

" Farha kaisi ho tum, pahle se bhi zyada khubsurat ho gayee ho." unohne itne din baad jo use dekha to tareef kiye bina na rah sake they.. usne bhi bas yoon hi jawaab deke unhe taalna chaha asal me uske paas kuch aisi baten bhi nahi theeN aur ye shakhs bhi use ajnabi saa lag raha thaa.
" main bilkul theek hoon, aap aaraam karen, main Zarina ke kamre me jaa rahi hoon sone.." usne jana chaha to wo bole, " Farha main shaayad yahaaN tumse milne bhi aaya hoon, tumhe aisa behave nahi karna chahiye.."
" mujhse milne .. huh, ye aap apne dil se poochiye..." itna kahte hi wo bina jawab ka intezar kiye badee tez se bahar nikal gayee, Mukhtaar bas use dekhte hi rah gaye..

Agle din se bhi wahi routine chaalu tha, farha ghar pe khoob kaam karti sabka dhyaan rakhti thee, ek zimmedaar bahu ka poora farz nibhaa rahi thee wo.. Uski bacchi ki zimmedaari Aamna bee aur Zarina ne le rakkhi thee, aur wo bacchi bhi aisi ke bin maa ke bhi sara din khelti rahti.. Aadil aur Parween ki muhabbat bhi parwaan chadh chuki thee, dono ek dusre ko behad pasand karte they, aur jald se jald apne rishte ko naam dena chahte they.. Aadil ko koi parwaah nahi thi zamaane ki lekin Parween bahot ghabraati thee, haalaki ye baat ghar ke sabhi log jaante they, lekin khule aam bahes kisi ne na ki thee..

Mukhtaar Lawn me subah subah paper padh rahe they ki Ashraf bhi aa gaye unse milne, dono bade pyaar se mile, ek dusre se baateN share ki itne me hi zarro chaay leke aai aur Ashraf ko dekh ke chouk padee..."Aap.????......"
" Haan main!!! kyon nahi aana chahiye tha??" unhone apne typical style me muskurate hue sawaal daaga to wo sakpakaa gayee, " nahi aisi baat nahi hai, kam se kam khabar kar dete..."
" Khabar karke aana Ashraf ki aadatoN me shumaar nahi.. kyon kuch problem ho gayee hai kya.." unhone jaan bujh kar poocha to wo bolee.. "Asal me ghar pe doodh khatam ho gaya, mujhe to ye soch ke hairat aur pareshani hui ke ab aapko chaay kaise pilaaungi.. aap khabar kar dete to hum baahar se mangwaa lete.. " itna kah ke wo aur Mukhtaar to zor se has pade, magar Ashraf jhep gaye, " kya Mukhi bhai aap bhi isi ka saath dete hain, dekhen na itni badee ho gayee shararaten kam nahi huiN" to Mukhtar bole..
" bhai saath dena hi padtaa hai hamaari bahen jo hai.." aur dono bhai bahen ne taali maar dee... Ashraf bhi khush they..

Mukhtar ko aaye kai din ho gaye they lekin Farha ka rawaiya wahi ka wahi thaa, sabke liye uski muhabbat kam na hotee thi, magar Mukhtaar ko wo hamesha Taal jaya kartee thi, haan uske kaamoN ko wo bina kahe kar deti thi lekin muhabbat ke naam par uske paas ek boond bhi kuch nahi bacha tha.. Yoon jaise kisi khwahishmand ki khwahish jab bahot minnatoN ke baad bhi pooori nahi hoti to insaan ke dil me us cheeez se dheere dheere nafrat paida hone lagti hai..
Wo jitni muhabbat apni bacchee se karte they utna hi pyaar apni begum se bhi karna chahte they magar koi baat thee jo unhe bhi aage aane se roktee thi, aur wo jo baat thee, uske shaayad sabse baDe zimmedaar wo khud hi they...


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Dabangg ka ek dialoge hai... " pyaar se Dar lagta hai saab..."

Wese sahi kaha aapne aapki dhamki se hum bahot dar gaye they.. aur fauran lag gaye huqm ki tameel me...hehehhee...

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Dabangg ka ek dialoge hai... " pyaar se Dar lagta hai saab..."

Wese sahi kaha aapne aapki dhamki se hum bahot dar gaye they.. aur fauran lag gaye huqm ki tameel me...hehehhee...

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hmmmm.........sacchi meiN darr gye thy ya apni Baaji ko maska lga rahe ho ek baat aur yeh dhamki nahi thi sacchi tha....hum dono ne yaha fasaad shuru kar dene thy

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hmmmm.........sacchi meiN darr gye thy ya apni Baaji ko maska lga rahe ho ek baat aur yeh dhamki nahi thi sacchi tha....hum dono ne yaha fasaad shuru kar dene thy

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Maskaa lagaana hame aata hi kahaan hai baaji...
sach hi samajhiye, hame pata tha ke ye sacchai hai... dono ko acchee tarah se janata hoon.. ladne ke liye aamada rahti ho... sach kahun to isiliye dar gayaa ke agar aap dono mil gaye to mera kyaa hoga.... hehheh

jee haan ab poori koshsih karunga ke continuity me likhoon... duaaon me yaad rakhiye..


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dono ko acchee tarah se janata hoon.. ladne ke liye aamada rahti ho...
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shaad bhai yeh to ilzaam hai muj par mai to ladai se door hi bhaagti hoon, mere saamne agar koi behasbaaji bhi kare to muje gabrahat hone lag jati hai, ladai to badi door ki baat hai haaN pyar se daant jaroor lga deti hoon :-)


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shaad bhai yeh to ilzaam hai muj par mai to ladai se door hi bhaagti hoon, mere saamne agar koi behasbaaji bhi kare to muje gabrahat hone lag jati hai, ladai to badi door ki baat hai haaN pyar se daant jaroor lga deti hoon :-)

Ajee pyaar se ilzaam hi to laga rahe hain na.. mujhe sab pata hai aapke mizaaj ke baare me, bas zara yoonhi mazaaq me kah diya, plz dont mind...
Mujhe aapki Daant behad azeez hai, plz kabhi aalsipana karooN likhne me to zaroor daanT laga dijiyega..

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