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Meri bhi EID ho jaye.... - 11th October 2007, 02:23 PM
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Hath mein kangan

tum bin magar mere sajan
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na choori mein khanak
pheeki labon ki laali
khali aankh ki piyali
payal meri soyee soyee
dilki dunia khoyee khoyee
ye rang roop mera
ye mera haarsinghaar
sajan tum bin sab bekaar

tum jo chale aou
nazar bhar ke dekh jaou
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mehak uthe tanman
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SALAAM AZMI JI ...................Wow bahut khubsoorat apka kalaam laga aur bade hi umda dhang se apne pyar ke intezar ko bayan kiya hai jise badi shiddat se kisi ki nighaen dhoondti hai wo shaks miljaye to sari khushian naseeb ho jati hai aur wakei men esa lagta hai jese chaand nikal aya ek umda koshish per daad hazir hai kubool ho ..................khush rahiye hamesha.........KHUDA HAFIZ

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Smile frnd 4 ever - 12th October 2007, 05:22 PM
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Chunri meri zartar
bara saja sanwra haarsinghaar
labon pe laali
kaan mein baali
ankh mein kajaal
paoun mein payal
Hath mein kangan

tum bin magar mere sajan
na chunri mein damak
na choori mein khanak
pheeki labon ki laali
khali aankh ki piyali
payal meri soyee soyee
dilki dunia khoyee khoyee
ye rang roop mera
ye mera haarsinghaar
sajan tum bin sab bekaar

tum jo chale aou
nazar bhar ke dekh jaou
damakne lage chunri meri
chanak uthe kangan
mehak uthe tanman
thirakne lage payal meri
sulag uthe labon ki laali
bhar jaye ankh ki changal khali

Tumahree jo eik jhalak paa jaoun
khatm ho raat aamaavas walee
chand nikal ayae
meri bhi Eid ho jayae
Aadab maham ji,
kaise hain aap?

aaj hi aapki is nayi koshish pe nazar padi,
wah ji,,aankho k samne kya khoob manzar khincha hai aapne,

aapki dili kefiyat to saaf saaf nazar aa gayi,
chaliye hum dua karege,
k aapki eid bohot hi yaad gaar ho,
ur aapko yeh din hamesha yaad rahe,
AMIN,SUMM AAMIN,

AAPKO HAMARE OR HAMARE HaSSaN ki TARAF SE EID BOHOT BOHOT MUBARAK HO.

apna khayal rakhiye,
khush rahiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ

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12th October 2007, 05:32 PM
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Chunri meri zartar
bara saja sanwra haarsinghaar
labon pe laali
kaan mein baali
ankh mein kajaal
paoun mein payal
Hath mein kangan

tum bin magar mere sajan
na chunri mein damak
na choori mein khanak
pheeki labon ki laali
khali aankh ki piyali
payal meri soyee soyee
dilki dunia khoyee khoyee
ye rang roop mera
ye mera haarsinghaar
sajan tum bin sab bekaar

tum jo chale aou
nazar bhar ke dekh jaou
damakne lage chunri meri
chanak uthe kangan
mehak uthe tanman
thirakne lage payal meri
sulag uthe labon ki laali
bhar jaye ankh ki changal khali

Tumahree jo eik jhalak paa jaoun
khatm ho raat aamaavas walee
chand nikal ayae
meri bhi Eid ho jayae
gr8888888............maham ji, sach kahuN to mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki yeh nazam mere liye hi likhi gaye hai jaise........kaashhhhh meri bhi eid ho jaye...........behad pasand aaye ahsaas....mere dil ki baat aapki kalam se likhi gaye hai......

eid mubarak ho........maham ji
kal hamari chutti hai, so ek din phele wish kar diiiiii

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Chunri meri zartar
bara saja sanwra haarsinghaar
labon pe laali
kaan mein baali
ankh mein kajaal
paoun mein payal
Hath mein kangan

tum bin magar mere sajan
na chunri mein damak
na choori mein khanak
pheeki labon ki laali
khali aankh ki piyali
payal meri soyee soyee
dilki dunia khoyee khoyee
ye rang roop mera
ye mera haarsinghaar
sajan tum bin sab bekaar

tum jo chale aou
nazar bhar ke dekh jaou
damakne lage chunri meri
chanak uthe kangan
mehak uthe tanman
thirakne lage payal meri
sulag uthe labon ki laali
bhar jaye ankh ki changal khali

Tumahree jo eik jhalak paa jaoun
khatm ho raat aamaavas walee
chand nikal ayae
meri bhi Eid ho jayae
Bahut hi khoobsoorat peshkash le ke aap haazir hue hain!

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SALAAM AZMI JI ...................Wow bahut khubsoorat apka kalaam laga aur bade hi umda dhang se apne pyar ke intezar ko bayan kiya hai jise badi shiddat se kisi ki nighaen dhoondti hai wo shaks miljaye to sari khushian naseeb ho jati hai aur wakei men esa lagta hai jese chaand nikal aya ek umda koshish per daad hazir hai kubool ho ..................khush rahiye hamesha.........KHUDA HAFIZ
Kashif sahab , aap jis tarz se parhte hein hamaree kaavishain aur jis gehrayee se unko mehsus kar jate hein vohi hamare liye sab kuch hei kisi qari ke context mein ,

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14th October 2007, 12:37 PM
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Chunri meri zartar
bara saja sanwra haarsinghaar
labon pe laali
kaan mein baali
ankh mein kajaal
paoun mein payal
Hath mein kangan

tum bin magar mere sajan
na chunri mein damak
na choori mein khanak
pheeki labon ki laali
khali aankh ki piyali
payal meri soyee soyee
dilki dunia khoyee khoyee
ye rang roop mera
ye mera haarsinghaar
sajan tum bin sab bekaar

tum jo chale aou
nazar bhar ke dekh jaou
damakne lage chunri meri
chanak uthe kangan
mehak uthe tanman
thirakne lage payal meri
sulag uthe labon ki laali
bhar jaye ankh ki changal khali

Tumahree jo eik jhalak paa jaoun
khatm ho raat aamaavas walee
chand nikal ayae
meri bhi Eid ho jayae
maham jee:

aadaab arz hai, aap ke likhane ka andaaz behad khuub hai! aur kuchh is tarah se likhati hai.n aap kii dil par naqsh ho jaate hai,n ehsaas. yuu.n hii likhti rahe.n ham paRhte rahe.nge.. khuub-suurat khayaal aur dil-fareb andaaz-e-bayaa.n. dhero.n daad haazir hai! qubool ho

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Aadab maham ji,
kaise hain aap?

aaj hi aapki is nayi koshish pe nazar padi,
wah ji,,aankho k samne kya khoob manzar khincha hai aapne,

aapki dili kefiyat to saaf saaf nazar aa gayi,
chaliye hum dua karege,
k aapki eid bohot hi yaad gaar ho,
ur aapko yeh din hamesha yaad rahe,
AMIN,SUMM AAMIN,

AAPKO HAMARE OR HAMARE HaSSaN ki TARAF SE EID BOHOT BOHOT MUBARAK HO.

apna khayal rakhiye,
khush rahiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ
Janab ite pyar se khulus se aur apnaiyat se dee hoee daad ke liye

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gr8888888............maham ji, sach kahuN to mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki yeh nazam mere liye hi likhi gaye hai jaise........kaashhhhh meri bhi eid ho jaye...........behad pasand aaye ahsaas....mere dil ki baat aapki kalam se likhi gaye hai......

eid mubarak ho........maham ji
kal hamari chutti hai, so ek din phele wish kar diiiiii
Baahat achee see sunita ji ,

adaab arz hie ,

apki is piyaree see eid mubarak ke liye buahat shukriya

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Thanx hazaroun gulistan for all ur wordz of appreciation , ma'am

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Maham jee :

aadaab..

ees Khoobsoorat naZm ko paRh ke dil baaGh-baaGh ho gaYaa.. merii dilii daad-o-mubaaraqbaad qabUl farmaaYeN..!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN..

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Thanx hazaroun gulistan for all ur words janab ,

I m genuinely thankful to u ,

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maham ji - 22nd October 2007, 09:54 PM
bahut umda tareeke se bayan kiya hai aapne is kalam ko aapko padhna achcha lagta hai kyun ki aapke har kalam me kahin na kahin zindagi ki sachchai chupi hoti hai dad kubul kijiye tahe dil se.........
   
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23rd October 2007, 06:29 AM
bahut pyara likhkha hai aapne...

thanks for sharing your writings...

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25th October 2007, 10:26 AM
B'lated Eid mubarak MahamAzmi jee..

azmi ji behtareen alfazon se sajaya hai ehsaason ko,, andaaz bahut pasand aaya ehsaason ki peshqash ka....

judai ka dard aur us dard se ubharne ki ummid... bahut khub...

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maham ji aaj fir se is kalam ko padne ko ji chaha so pada aaj bhi aisa laga ki paheli bar pad raha hun aaj mujhe anjum rahbar ka ik sher yad aa gaya ke.......
khud ko sawanrungi ghar ko saja lungi.
aayega wo jis din eid mana lungi.

bahut achcha lagta hai aapko padna aur dusri bat jab aap hamen hamari khamiyan batati hai to hame bahut achcha lagta hai uske liye mai aapka shukraguzar hun ke aap ham jaise longon ki rahnumai karti hain.aur aapse ik ilteza hai ke shayed aapne meri nazm[ budi sawari] nahi padi agar nahi padi to pad kar apni rai jarur pesh kijiyega..khuda hafiz........rahnuma
   
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apki daad buahat hee qeemtee hamare liye hazrat

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maham ji aaj fir se is kalam ko padne ko ji chaha so pada aaj bhi aisa laga ki paheli bar pad raha hun aaj mujhe anjum rahbar ka ik sher yad aa gaya ke.......
khud ko sawanrungi ghar ko saja lungi.
aayega wo jis din eid mana lungi.

bahut achcha lagta hai aapko padna aur dusri bat jab aap hamen hamari khamiyan batati hai to hame bahut achcha lagta hai uske liye mai aapka shukraguzar hun ke aap ham jaise longon ki rahnumai karti hain.aur aapse ik ilteza hai ke shayed aapne meri nazm[ budi sawari] nahi padi agar nahi padi to pad kar apni rai jarur pesh kijiyega..khuda hafiz........rahnuma
aap sa koi khubsoorat shayer Maham ki kisi adnaa kaavish ko dobara parhe aan kar to ye mehaz apka husn e nazar hazrat mehaz apka karam,

dil o jaan se shukriya ada kartee hei is izat afzayee ke liye Maham apka hazrat ,

Wid all my due respects to a wonderful poet ,

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Hum yaha bhi late hain par aa ye na ..............waise to yeh maine pehle hi padh liya tha par aapko reason batadiya na maine ki hum reply dena bhul gaye... bahut hi accha likha ahin...apne mehbub ko chand se compare karke....wow...2 cute................yeh padhke na hume humari site ki ek member ka likha hua eid pe kuch yaad aa gaya...use yaha share karte hain...aapko zaroor pasand ayega........................

Noor e mehtaab me itraati,
Ye raat kitni jawaan hai..
Hans kar kehti mujhhe 'Pagli!..
Tera chand kahaan hai??!'

Hatheli apni dikhaayi maine,
Heena se chand bana hai..
'Dekh zara in lakeeroN ko..
Saajan ka naam likha hai.'

Hawa ne aanchal lehraaya mera,
Shayad unka payaam aaya hai..
SarsaraahaT kaisi aangan me?
Kisne mujhhe pukaara hai?

Wo Eid bhi intezaar me guzri..
Ye bhi intezaar me guzar jaaegi..
Jab dhoondenge chand aasmaan me..
kasam se sanam, teri yaad aayegi.

mausam
itne pyar se hamaree adnaa kaavish pe aana aur usko sarhaana , shukriya mohtarama buahat buahat shukriya aur ye itni mesmerizing poem , hosh uratee nazm kiss member ki hei un tak hamare daad zaroor pohancha dijiye ga aap

Thanx hazaroun gulistan
ita sara pyar , apki

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