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~*~"Sabke Nazar Main Kyun Gunehgar Ban Gayi"~*~ -
4th September 2008, 02:13 PM
Tujhse se nazar kya mili jaise khata ho gayi
Puri duniyan ab meri Dushman ho gayi
Pyar hi to kiya koi chori nehin ki
Fir sabke Nazar main kyun gunehgar ban gayi
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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4th September 2008, 02:15 PM
Wafa Bewofa ki matlab hum nehin jante
Riste ki had kahan tak yeh hum nehin jante
mana hai tujhko sanam apna guroor
Duniyan kya soche yeh hum nehin jante ...
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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4th September 2008, 05:37 PM
accha likha hai. or likhte rahe yahi dua rab se. keep writing and smiling
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4th September 2008, 06:31 PM
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accha likha hai. or likhte rahe yahi dua rab se. keep writing and smiling
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Sukriya Raj ji ........koshish ehi rahegi ki kuchh achha likh sakun
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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4th September 2008, 06:39 PM
galatfemi main jee rahi hun
ashko ko pee rahi hun
Zinda hum sirf logon keliye
khud pal pal mar rahi hun
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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4th September 2008, 06:54 PM
ashqo ka ankho se ye kaisa nata
ki gam me juda ho jate hai
dusro ko dete hai sila wafa ka
or khud bewafa ho jate hai.
diya ji apki shayri ankho ko nam kar deti hai. ye shikayat nahi tareef hai apki.
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8th September 2008, 02:06 PM
Ek ishq humse kiya nehin jata
Duja woh ilzam pe ilzam diye ja rahe hain
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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8th September 2008, 02:26 PM
Diya Ji
Mein To Pehli Matfa Aapki Shaayari Padh Rah Hoon
"Bahut Khoob Likhti Hain Aap"
Aapke Liye...
"Tere Naam Ye Paigaam Likhte Hain,
Beete Lamho Ki Yaad Mein,Wo Dikhte Hain,
Wo Kalam Bhi Teri Deewani Ho Jaati Hai,
Jisse Hum Tera Naam Likhte Hain"
Rab Aapko Aur Kaabiliyat Bakshe
Haal-E-Dil
Dard Mein Bhi Ye Lab, Muskara Jaate Hain
Beete Lamhe Humein Jab BHi Yaad Aate Hain....
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8th September 2008, 02:29 PM
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Diya Ji
Mein To Pehli Matfa Aapki Shaayari Padh Rah Hoon
"Bahut Khoob Likhti Hain Aap"
Aapke Liye...
"Tere Naam Ye Paigaam Likhte Hain,
Beete Lamho Ki Yaad Mein,Wo Dikhte Hain,
Wo Kalam Bhi Teri Deewani Ho Jaati Hai,
Jisse Hum Tera Naam Likhte Hain"
Rab Aapko Aur Kaabiliyat Bakshe
Haal-E-Dil
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Sukriya ji hume khusi hui aap ko humare nagme pasand aaye..........
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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8th September 2008, 03:48 PM
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Ek ishq humse kiya nehin jata
Duja woh ilzam pe ilzam diye ja rahe hain
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ilzamo ki fikra wo karte hai jinko muhabbat par aitbar nahi,
smandar se wo darte hai, jin par hausle ki patwar nahi.
keep writing good going.
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8th September 2008, 07:49 PM
" diya bankar jalti hun tere aangan ko roshan banane k liye
shaam bankar dhal jaungi teri raaton ko pal pal mahkane k liye"
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8th September 2008, 07:50 PM
" aye husn-e-haseen na magroor ban is kadar
aftaab k deewane abhi aur bhi hain"
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8th September 2008, 08:05 PM
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" diya bankar jalti hun tere aangan ko roshan banane k liye
shaam bankar dhal jaungi teri raaton ko pal pal mahkane k liye"
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Wah Sony ji bahat khoob.......
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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8th September 2008, 09:34 PM
wafa Bewofa ke baat kya lena dena
pyar karna hai bas kiye ja rahe hain
jante hain ishq sab ke naseeb main nehin
Ek galat femi hai, bas jiye ja rahe hain
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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10th September 2008, 05:12 PM
Gunahgaar insa nahi aas hoti hai
Gunah ham nahi viswas karta hai
Kya khoob kikha hai...
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10th September 2008, 05:16 PM
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Gunahgaar insa nahi aas hoti hai
Gunah ham nahi viswas karta hai
Kya khoob kikha hai...
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Sukriya ji............aap ko pasand aaya, hume khusi hui
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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10th September 2008, 07:11 PM
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wafa Bewofa ke baat kya lena dena
pyar karna hai bas kiye ja rahe hain
jante hain ishq sab ke naseeb main nehin
Ek galat femi hai, bas jiye ja rahe hain
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" kya khoob arz kiya ahi diya ji.......aisa lagta hai mano apni kahani diya ji ki zubani.........bhut khoob iya ji........salaam karte hain aapko....
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10th September 2008, 07:36 PM
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" kya khoob arz kiya ahi diya ji.......aisa lagta hai mano apni kahani diya ji ki zubani.........bhut khoob iya ji........salaam karte hain aapko....
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Sukriya sweety.......main koshish karoongi tumhari kahan apni jubani se fir koi nagma likhne ki ......khus raho......
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
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12th September 2008, 10:44 PM
Na kabhi dur hai hum unse na woh humare pass hai
mohabbat hain unse itna har pal unka hi ehesas hai
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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Wo Tu Hi Thee , Jo Kehti thee -
16th September 2008, 03:40 PM
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Wo Tu Hi Thee , Jo Kehti thee..
Ki Meelungi Har Gali, Har Mod, har Darwaje ke Peeche...
Aur Wo bas tu hee nahi thi, mere janaaze ke peeche..
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Haan! Wo Main Hi Thee , Jo Kehti thee..
Ki Meelungi Har Gali, Har Mod, har Darwaje ke Peeche...
Par tune to mudkar bhi na dekha ..
ki ek aur janaaza tha, tere janaaze ke peeche
Dard Mein Bhi Ye Lab, Muskara Jaate Hain
Beete Lamhe Humein Jab BHi Yaad Aate Hain....
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18th September 2008, 03:36 PM
bahut khoob !
daad hamaari taraf se bhi !
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24th September 2008, 08:00 PM
Pal Pal se banta hai Ehsas,
Ehsas se banta hai vishwas,
Vishwas se bante hai reshtey,
Aur rishton se banta hai koi khaas jaise ki aap.
REGARDS:-
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25th September 2008, 07:19 PM
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Pal Pal se banta hai Ehsas,
Ehsas se banta hai vishwas,
Vishwas se bante hai reshtey,
Aur rishton se banta hai koi khaas jaise ki aap.
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Sukriya Thakur ji ...................
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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26th September 2008, 03:36 PM
good diya rani..
umar bhar jo jeet-te jeet-te na thaka...
wo samne aaya to main uski haar ban gayi...
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26th September 2008, 05:18 PM
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good diya rani..
umar bhar jo jeet-te jeet-te na thaka...
wo samne aaya to main uski haar ban gayi...
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kya kahoob kaha aapne .........
khud ko kho kar kisko pane ki koshish na karna tanhai milegi
hadse gujar ke kisise pyar mat karna badle main judai milegi
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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26th September 2008, 07:11 PM
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galatfemi main jee rahi hun
ashko ko pee rahi hun
Zinda hum sirf logon keliye
khud pal pal mar rahi hun
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Hum jeete to tab bhi the
Jab tum hmari zindgi mein naa the
Hum ab bhi jee lenge
Fark sifr itna hi hoga pehle koi gam naa tha
Aur ab koi khushi naa hogi
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26th September 2008, 07:16 PM
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Na kabhi dur hai hum unse na woh humare pass hai
mohabbat hain unse itna har pal unka hi ehesas hai
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Duriyon ki parwaah kia naa kijiye
Dil jab chaahe bula lijiye
Hum door jyada nahi hai aapse
Bas apni aankhon ki palko ko mila lijiye...
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Very Well Written Diya -
11th December 2008, 01:47 AM
Milayi Jo Nazrein Mujhse Toh Koi Khata Nahi ho gayi,
Toh Kya Hua Jo Duniya Teri Dushman ho gayi,
Yun Apne Pyaar Ko Darza Mat De Chori Ka,
Nibhayi Tune Jis Din Mohhbat Bas Tabse Is Dil Ki Tu Khuda Ho Gayi...
Nalin
Very Well Written Diya
Quote:
Originally Posted by Diya_Jale
Tujhse se nazar kya mili jaise khata ho gayi
Puri duniyan ab meri Dushman ho gayi
Pyar hi to kiya koi chori nehin ki
Fir sabke Nazar main kyun gunehgar ban gayi
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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