Maafi ke kabil nahi ye galtiya.

[taqdeer.786]

Assalam mere aziz dosto...
me aapko aaj ye ek gazal post kar raha hoon..
jara dhyan se ahista se padhna
aur
khud ko sawal karna ki ye gazal kaha tak sach hai?
is gazal ka asli author me nahi hoon.
is gazal ka author ravi ratlami hai.
.................................................. ..................................................

Maafi ke kabil nahi ye galtiya,
tab bhi ho rahi galtiyo pe galtiya.

Mouj ki dasyavali lagti to hai par,
pidhiyo ko sehni hogi ye galtiya.

Jab bhi pakda gaya farmaya usney,
bhul se hi ho rahi thi ye galtiya.

Ab to dour ye aaya naya hai yaroo,
sach ka jama pahane hai ye galtiya.

Kabhi apni bhi gin lo Aftab tumne,
dusro ki to khub dekhi ye galtiya.

[loveforgudia]

Originally Posted by taqdeer.786

Assalam mere aziz dosto...
me aapko aaj ye ek gazal post kar raha hoon..
jara dhyan se ahista se padhna
aur
khud ko sawal karna ki ye gazal kaha tak sach hai?
is gazal ka asli author me nahi hoon.
is gazal ka author ravi ratlami hai.
.................................................. ..................................................

Maafi ke kabil nahi ye galtiya,
tab bhi ho rahi galtiyo pe galtiya.

Mouj ki dasyavali lagti to hai par,
pidhiyo ko sehni hogi ye galtiya.

Jab bhi pakda gaya farmaya usney,
bhul se hi ho rahi thi ye galtiya.

Ab to dour ye aaya naya hai yaroo,
sach ka jama pahane hai ye galtiya.

Kabhi apni bhi gin lo Aftab tumne,
dusro ki to khub dekhi ye galtiya.

Dear Friend, ...aapki poetry is just too good.....very very very nice. aur ye sach hi to hai ......ki aaj kal sach ka naqaab pahene huye log jhooth ka khel khel jaate hai. Haath thaam kar chalane waale hi tholar maar kar giraate hai........

Par iaske saath hi iaski aakhri do lines mai khud bhi dil se maanti hoon aur hammesha follow karne ki koshish karti hoon ki ....hum hammesha khud ki galtiyaan dekhate hai par kisi ki galtiyaan dekhane se pahele hume khud ki bhi dekh leni chaahiye.

Very nice .....and once again last ki do lines ne sach mai dil ko chhu liya ....keep posting.

Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

Jay Ambe.

[taqdeer.786]

Originally Posted by loveforgudia

Dear Friend, ...aapki poetry is just too good.....very very very nice. aur ye sach hi to hai ......ki aaj kal sach ka naqaab pahene huye log jhooth ka khel khel jaate hai. Haath thaam kar chalane waale hi tholar maar kar giraate hai........

Par iaske saath hi iaski aakhri do lines mai khud bhi dil se maanti hoon aur hammesha follow karne ki koshish karti hoon ki ....hum hammesha khud ki galtiyaan dekhate hai par kisi ki galtiyaan dekhane se pahele hume khud ki bhi dekh leni chaahiye.

Very nice .....and once again last ki do lines ne sach mai dil ko chhu liya ....keep posting.

Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

Jay Ambe.

Hi...!
Gudiya
thank you 4 ur reply
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