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20th May 2015, 11:38 AM
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Ek funny wala not to be included....
Kal tak tha jisko ammi banana
Aaj humare bachon ki Bhua ho gayi.
Gustakhi maaf...��
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this one's also not included... :-
iqrar-e-mohabbat karne waali!
bacchon kii khala ho gayi...
khala : aunt
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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20th May 2015, 01:42 PM
Hehe...........masi............lol
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20th May 2015, 01:58 PM
Ek aur
Jo kholti apni kismat ko
Wo laga ke tala so gayi.
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20th May 2015, 02:21 PM
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Ek aur
Jo kholti apni kismat ko
Wo laga ke tala so gayi.
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lol..... hilarious
us ne mujhe di thi jo anghooti!
woh nazar-e- bait-ul-khala ho gayi ...
bait-ul-khala : toilet
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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20th May 2015, 09:21 PM
DostoN,
Bahut khoob ghazal ek din mein bankar taiyaar hoti nazar aa rahi hai...makta likhne ki koshish kar raha hoon..umeed karta hoon aapko pasand aayegaa
ek baar phir poori ghazal par rukh karte hai...
Sarika ji aapne ghazal ke qaafiya aur radeef mein pher badal kiya hai...aage se thoda ehtiyaad baratiyeGaa
Matla
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
- Shaad
2nd sher
dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....
- Mast
3rd sher
bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee
- Madhu
4th sher
Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane
Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi
- masti
5th sher
tumse bichad kar yeh jana hamne,
zindgi hi hamse khaffa ho gayee..
- Sunita Virender
6th sher
ehd-o-paimaan sab khaak hue!
wafa-e-yaar jafa ho gaye...
- Hassan
Makta
pehle 'mast' yun deewaana na tha
zaalim yeh kaisi adaa ho gayee...
-Mast
Qasid
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क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
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21st May 2015, 09:28 AM
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Matla
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
- Shaad
2nd sher
dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....
- Mast
3rd sher
bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee
- Madhu
4th sher
Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane
Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi
- masti
5th sher
tumse bichad kar yeh jana hamne,
zindgi hi hamse khaffa ho gayee..
- Sunita Virender
6th sher
ehd-o-paimaan sab khaak hue!
wafa-e-yaar jafa ho gaye...
- Hassan
Makta
pehle 'mast' yun deewaana na tha
zaalim yeh kaisi adaa ho gayee...
-Mast
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wahhhh sach meiN khoobsurat gazal bani hai................ nye gazal ki shuruyaat kijiye.
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st May 2015, 10:34 AM
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DostoN,
Bahut khoob ghazal ek din mein bankar taiyaar hoti nazar aa rahi hai...makta likhne ki koshish kar raha hoon..umeed karta hoon aapko pasand aayegaa
ek baar phir poori ghazal par rukh karte hai...
Sarika ji aapne ghazal ke qaafiya aur radeef mein pher badal kiya hai...aage se thoda ehtiyaad baratiyeGaa
Matla
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
- Shaad
2nd sher
dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....
- Mast
3rd sher
bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee
- Madhu
4th sher
Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane
Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi
- masti
5th sher
tumse bichad kar yeh jana hamne,
zindgi hi hamse khaffa ho gayee..
- Sunita Virender
6th sher
ehd-o-paimaan sab khaak hue!
wafa-e-yaar jafa ho gaye...
- Hassan
Makta
pehle 'mast' yun deewaana na tha
zaalim yeh kaisi adaa ho gayee...
-Mast
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bohat khoob Mast bhai ...
lekin is thread kii pehli post ky mutabiq, jis meiN Parastaar saahab ny wazeh
kiya hy ky ghazal 8 ashaar per mukammal ho gi... us hisaab sy 7 ashaar haiN yeh ...
chaleN complete maiN kiye deta hooN ... :-
Matla
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
- Shaad
2nd sher
dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....
- Mast
3rd sher
bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee
- Madhu
4th sher
Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane
Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi
- masti
5th sher
tumse bichad kar yeh jana hamne,
zindgi hi hamse khaffa ho gayee..
- Sunita Virender
6th sher
ehd-o-paimaan sab khaak hue!
wafa-e-yaar jafa ho gaye...
- Hassan
7th sher
baatoN meiN mithas ki jagah zehar!
nafrat ki saahib inteha ho gayi
- Hassan
Makta
pehle 'mast' yuN deewaana na tha
zaalim yeh kaisi adaa ho gayee...
- Mast
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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21st May 2015, 10:40 AM
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bohat khoob Mast bhai ...
lekin is thread kii pehli post ky mutabiq, jis meiN Parastaar saahab ny wazeh
kiya hy ky ghazal 8 ashaar per mukammal ho gi... us hisaab sy 7 ashaar haiN yeh ...
chaleN complete maiN kiye deta hooN ... :-
Matla
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
- Shaad
2nd sher
dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....
- Mast
3rd sher
bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee
- Madhu
4th sher
Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane
Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi
- masti
5th sher
tumse bichad kar yeh jana hamne,
zindgi hi hamse khaffa ho gayee..
- Sunita Virender
6th sher
ehd-o-paimaan sab khaak hue!
wafa-e-yaar jafa ho gaye...
- Hassan
7th sher
baatoN meiN mithas ki jagah zehar!
nafrat ki saahib inteha ho gayi
- Hassan
Makta
pehle 'mast' yuN deewaana na tha
zaalim yeh kaisi adaa ho gayee...
- Mast
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Hassan bhai aapne usloon ko yaad dila ka aur apna ek sher ka izaafa karke ghazal ko muqammal kiya shukriyaa Janaab
7/8 sher par makta kaha jaa sakta hai shayad shuruaati daur mein yeh adjustment ki gayi thi mujhe yaad hai. Khair aapse guzaarish hai ki bazm ko aap naya matlaa dein.
Qasid
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
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21st May 2015, 10:41 AM
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DostoN,
Bahut khoob ghazal ek din mein bankar taiyaar hoti nazar aa rahi hai...makta likhne ki koshish kar raha hoon..umeed karta hoon aapko pasand aayegaa
ek baar phir poori ghazal par rukh karte hai...
Sarika ji aapne ghazal ke qaafiya aur radeef mein pher badal kiya hai...aage se thoda ehtiyaad baratiyeGaa
Matla
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
- Shaad
2nd sher
dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....
- Mast
3rd sher
bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee
- Madhu
4th sher
Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane
Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi
- masti
5th sher
tumse bichad kar yeh jana hamne,
zindgi hi hamse khaffa ho gayee..
- Sunita Virender
6th sher
ehd-o-paimaan sab khaak hue!
wafa-e-yaar jafa ho gaye...
- Hassan
Makta
pehle 'mast' yun deewaana na tha
zaalim yeh kaisi adaa ho gayee...
-Mast
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Shukriyaa di................................
Qasid
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
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21st May 2015, 10:53 AM
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Hassan bhai aapne usloon ko yaad dila ka aur apna ek sher ka izaafa karke ghazal ko muqammal kiya shukriyaa Janaab
7/8 sher par makta kaha jaa sakta hai shayad shuruaati daur mein yeh adjustment ki gayi thi mujhe yaad hai. Khair aapse guzaarish hai ki bazm ko aap naya matlaa dein.
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Izzat bakhshne ky liye manoon hooN Mast bhai ...lejiye matla arz hy:-
Matla
tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha..
dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha...
- Hassan
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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21st May 2015, 04:00 PM
Shukriyaa Hassan bhai kya haseen matla diya hai is ghazal mein yakeenan mazaa aane waala hai...Bahut der tak aapke diye matle ko padha aur phir kuch yun aage ki kahaani ban paayi hai...
Matla
tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha..
dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha..
-Hassan
2nd sher
humne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha..
teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha..
-Mast
Qasid
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
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21st May 2015, 04:08 PM
Bohut mast ......Hassan ji and mast ji
Sorry urdu mein haath tang hai. Please meaning bhi bhejiye saath mein.
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21st May 2015, 04:09 PM
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Shukriyaa Hassan bhai kya haseen matla diya hai is ghazal mein yakeenan mazaa aane waala hai...Bahut der tak aapke diye matle ko padha aur phir kuch yun aage ki kahaani ban paayi hai...
Matla
tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha..
dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha..
-Hassan
2nd sher
humne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha..
teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha..
-Mast
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Mast bhai .... waaaaaaaaahh! waahhh waaaaah waaaaaaah..
kia keh diya ... kamaal hiii kamaal .. jamaal hii jamaal
chaleN 3rd sher bhi arz hy :-
Matla
tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha..
dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha..
- Hassan
2nd sher
hum ne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha..
teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha..
- Mast
3rd Sher
sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii!
zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha
- Hassan
jalaal : glory, majesty
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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21st May 2015, 04:18 PM
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Bohut mast ......Hassan ji and mast ji
Sorry urdu mein haath tang hai. Please meaning bhi bhejiye saath mein.
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jee zaroor Sarika jee ..
maqtal : place of killing
jamaal : beauty
daleel : evidence, proof, argument
daryaaft : inquired, asked
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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21st May 2015, 06:51 PM
Matla
tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha..
dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha..
- Hassan
2nd sher
hum ne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha..
teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha..
- Mast
3rd Sher
sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii!
zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha
- Hassan
Deedar e yaar na mil saka jinko..
unki nazron me gam aur malaal dekha.
Madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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21st May 2015, 07:52 PM
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Matla
tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha..
dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha..
- Hassan
2nd sher
hum ne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha..
teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha..
- Mast
3rd Sher
sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii!
zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha
- Hassan
Deedar e yaar na mil saka jinko..
unki nazron me gam aur malaal dekha.
Madhu
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Ishq o Mohabbat ko chodo yaaron
humne jisko bhi dekha hota halaal dekha
Masti
ismein koi galti ho to beshaq delete kar dijiyega.
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21st May 2015, 08:14 PM
Bahut khoob...Sabhi doston ke sher pur asar huye...
Matla
tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha..
dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha..
- Hassan
2nd sher
hum ne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha..
teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha..
- Mast
3rd Sher
sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii!
zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha
- Hassan
4th sher
Deedar e yaar na mil saka jinko..
unki nazron me gam aur malaal dekha.
-Madhu
5th sher
Ishq o Mohabbat ko chodo yaaron
humne jisko bhi dekha hota halaal dekha
-Masti
6th sher
apne shehar mein hi kab se ma'doom hoon main
raaz-daaron ne bhi na mud ke haal dekha..
-Mast
ma'doom - hidden/disappeared
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क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
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Bahut khoob...Sabhi doston ke sher pur asar huye...
Matla
tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha..
dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha.. (Hassan)
2nd sher
hum ne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha..
teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha.. (Mast)
3rd Sher
sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii!
zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha (Hassan)
4th sher
Deedar e yaar na mil saka jinko..
unki nazron me gam aur malaal dekha. (Madhu)
5th sher
Ishq o Mohabbat ko chodo yaaron
humne jisko bhi dekha hota halaal dekha (Masti)
6th sher
apne shehar mein hi kab se ma'doom hoon main
raaz-daaron ne bhi na mud ke haal dekha.. (Mast)
ma'doom - hidden/disappeared
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.... khoob ashaaroN se saji hy meHfil ...
Matla
tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha..
dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha..(Hassan)
2nd sher
hum ne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha..
teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha.. (Mast)
3rd Sher
sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii!
zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha (Hassan)
4th sher
Deedar e yaar na mil saka jinko..
unki nazron me gam aur malaal dekha. (Madhu)
5th sher
Ishq o Mohabbat ko chodo yaaron
humne jisko bhi dekha hota halaal dekha (Masti)
6th sher
apne shehar mein hi kab se ma'doom hoon main
raaz-daaron ne bhi na mud ke haal dekha.. (Mast)
7th sher
kamsin ki adaa zamane se hai juda!!!
ulfat ke baad nafrat ka ishteaal dekha.. (Hassan)
kamsin : delicate
ishteaal : agitation
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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25th May 2015, 07:38 PM
Bahut khoob baat bani hai janaab, chaliye is ghazal ko makta dete haiN..
Matla
tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha..
dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha..(Hassan)
2nd sher
hum ne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha..
teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha.. (Mast)
3rd Sher
sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii!
zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha (Hassan)
4th sher
Deedar e yaar na mil saka jinko..
unki nazron me gam aur malaal dekha. (Madhu)
5th sher
Ishq o Mohabbat ko chodo yaaron
humne jisko bhi dekha hota halaal dekha (Masti)
6th sher
apne shehar mein hi kab se ma'doom hoon main
raaz-daaron ne bhi na mud ke haal dekha.. (Mast)
7th sher
kamsin ki adaa zamane se hai juda!!!
ulfat ke baad nafrat ka ishteaal dekha.. (Hassan)
kamsin : delicate
ishteaal : agitation
Makta
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Bahut khoob baat bani hai janaab, chaliye is ghazal ko makta dete haiN..
Matla
tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha..
dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha..(Hassan)
2nd sher
hum ne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha..
teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha.. (Mast)
3rd Sher
sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii!
zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha (Hassan)
4th sher
Deedar e yaar na mil saka jinko..
unki nazron me gam aur malaal dekha. (Madhu)
5th sher
Ishq o Mohabbat ko chodo yaaron
humne jisko bhi dekha hota halaal dekha (Masti)
6th sher
apne shehar mein hi kab se ma'doom hoon main
raaz-daaron ne bhi na mud ke haal dekha.. (Mast)
7th sher
kamsin ki adaa zamane se hai juda!!!
ulfat ke baad nafrat ka ishteaal dekha.. (Hassan)
kamsin : delicate
ishteaal : agitation
Makta
Aahat par pursaan rehte hai yun bechain
'Mast' yun humne bhi unka surat-e-haal dekha.. (Mast)
pursaan: inquisitive
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Kya baat hai...bahut khoob ghazal huyi hai doston..
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Mast sahab ijazat ho to mahfil ko naya matla diya jaye....
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Kya baat hai...bahut khoob ghazal huyi hai doston..
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Mast sahab ijazat ho to mahfil ko naya matla diya jaye....
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Bilkul aap dijiye Matla aur hum nibhaane ki koshish karenGee......
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Bilkul aap dijiye Matla aur hum nibhaane ki koshish karenGee......
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Shukriya janaab...lijiye
Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho.
Madhu.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Shukriya janaab...lijiye
Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho.
Madhu.
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Bahut khoob Madhu likiye agla sher pesh-e-khidmat haiN...
Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu)
1st Sher
toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN
bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast)
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27th May 2015, 10:01 AM
bahot bahot khoob Madhu sahiba aur Mast saahab..... silsile ko aage badhaate hue aglaa sher pesh kar raha hoon......
Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu)
1st Sher
toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN
bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast)
2nd sher
kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho,
kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho...
(shaad)
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bahot bahot khoob Madhu sahiba aur Mast saahab..... silsile ko aage badhaate hue aglaa sher pesh kar raha hoon......
Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu)
1st Sher
toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN
bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast)
2nd sher
kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho,
kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho...
(shaad)
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Wah Wah Shaad bhai bakhoob sher hua ha, aage suniye
Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu)
1st Sher
toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN
bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast)
2nd sher
kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho,
kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho (Shaad)
3rd sher
akele bahut hi yeh tanha safar hai
ab tum mere saath chal ke dekho (Mast)
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क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
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27th May 2015, 11:16 AM
waahhh kyaa baat hai bahot hi ummdaah...... aage dekhiye..
Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu)
1st Sher
toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN
bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast)
2nd sher
kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho,
kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho (Shaad)
3rd sher
akele bahut hi yeh tanha safar hai
ab tum mere saath chal ke dekho (Mast)
kahaa.n jaa ke sotaa hai boo.Dhaa bhikhaarii,,
zaraa gharo.n se nikal ke dekho.
(shaad)
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27th May 2015, 03:50 PM
Shaad ji I think she is suggesting Ki thodi Si zidd karo na please thoda sa machal kar to dekho.
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Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu)
1st Sher
toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN
bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast)
2nd sher
kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho,
kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho (Shaad)
3rd sher
akele bahut hi yeh tanha safar hai
ab tum mere saath chal ke dekho (Mast)
4th sher
kahaa.n jaa ke sotaa hai boo.Dhaa bhikhaarii,,
zaraa gharo.n se nikal ke dekho.
(shaad)
5th sher
kyu kehte ho ki bura hai ishq,
es aag meiN jara jal ke dekho...(Sunita Virender)
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Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu)
1st Sher
toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN
bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast)
2nd sher
kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho,
kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho (Shaad)
3rd sher
akele bahut hi yeh tanha safar hai
ab tum mere saath chal ke dekho (Mast)
4th sher
kahaa.n jaa ke sotaa hai boo.Dhaa bhikhaarii,,
zaraa gharo.n se nikal ke dekho.
(shaad)
5th sher
kyu kehte ho ki bura hai ishq,
es aag meiN jara jal ke dekho...(Sunita Virender)
6th sher..
Na rootho hamse milao nazre
Na aayenge fir ye pal ke dekho.
(Madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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4th June 2015, 10:00 AM
Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu)
1st Sher
toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN
bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast)
2nd sher
kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho,
kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho (Shaad)
3rd sher
akele bahut hi yeh tanha safar hai
ab tum mere saath chal ke dekho (Mast)
4th sher
kahaa.n jaa ke sotaa hai boo.Dhaa bhikhaarii,,
zaraa gharo.n se nikal ke dekho.
(shaad)
5th sher
kyu kehte ho ki bura hai ishq,
es aag meiN jara jal ke dekho...(Sunita Virender)
6th sher..
Na rootho hamse milao nazre
Na aayenge fir ye pal ke dekho.
(Madhu)
7th sher
tere naam se ho dil meiN halchal,
aanchal bhi hai kaise dhalke dekho---(Sunita Virender)
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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4th June 2015, 12:57 PM
Bahut khoob doston, lijiye Makhta pesh kar raha hoon...
Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu)
1st Sher
toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN
bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast)
2nd sher
kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho,
kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho (Shaad)
3rd sher
akele bahut hi yeh tanha safar hai
ab tum mere saath chal ke dekho (Mast)
4th sher
kahaa.n jaa ke sotaa hai boo.Dhaa bhikhaarii,,
zaraa gharo.n se nikal ke dekho (shaad)
5th sher
kyu kehte ho ki bura hai ishq,
es aag meiN jara jal ke dekho (Sunita Virender)
6th sher
Na rootho hamse milao nazre
Na aayenge fir ye pal ke dekho (Madhu)
7th sher
tere naam se ho dil meiN halchal,
aanchal bhi hai kaise dhal ke dekho (Sunita Virender)
Makhta
'Mast' hum to ab bhi wahi khade hai
tum raastaa badal ke dekho (Mast)
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Bahut khoob doston, lijiye Makhta pesh kar raha hoon...
Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu)
1st Sher
toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN
bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast)
2nd sher
kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho,
kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho (Shaad)
3rd sher
akele bahut hi yeh tanha safar hai
ab tum mere saath chal ke dekho (Mast)
4th sher
kahaa.n jaa ke sotaa hai boo.Dhaa bhikhaarii,,
zaraa gharo.n se nikal ke dekho (shaad)
5th sher
kyu kehte ho ki bura hai ishq,
es aag meiN jara jal ke dekho (Sunita Virender)
6th sher
Na rootho hamse milao nazre
Na aayenge fir ye pal ke dekho (Madhu)
7th sher
tere naam se ho dil meiN halchal,
aanchal bhi hai kaise dhal ke dekho (Sunita Virender)
Makhta
'Mast' hum to ab bhi wahi khade hai
tum raastaa badal ke dekho (Mast)
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Waah khoob makhta kaha hai anu ji....bahut khoob doston.....sabhi ke sher bahut khoob rahe..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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9th June 2015, 02:14 PM
Next matla please................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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9th June 2015, 05:14 PM
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Bahut khoob doston, lijiye Makhta pesh kar raha hoon...
Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu)
1st Sher
toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN
bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast)
2nd sher
kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho,
kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho (Shaad)
3rd sher
akele bahut hi yeh tanha safar hai
ab tum mere saath chal ke dekho (Mast)
4th sher
kahaa.n jaa ke sotaa hai boo.Dhaa bhikhaarii,,
zaraa gharo.n se nikal ke dekho (shaad)
5th sher
kyu kehte ho ki bura hai ishq,
es aag meiN jara jal ke dekho (Sunita Virender)
6th sher
Na rootho hamse milao nazre
Na aayenge fir ye pal ke dekho (Madhu)
7th sher
tere naam se ho dil meiN halchal,
aanchal bhi hai kaise dhal ke dekho (Sunita Virender)
Makhta
'Mast' hum to ab bhi wahi khade hai
tum raastaa badal ke dekho (Mast)
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10th June 2015, 08:20 AM
Agli ghazal ka matlaa dene ki koshish kar raha hooN...
Takhti (122 122 122 122)
na yun paas aao na doori badhaao
na naz.ren churao.n na yun mus.kuraao (Mast)
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Agli ghazal ka matlaa dene ki koshish kar raha hooN...
na mere paas aao na dur jaao
na naz.ren churao.n yun na mus.kuraao (Mast)
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Waaah! Waaah! Kya dilfareb matla likh diya hai mast ji...bahut khoob..
chaliye ise nibhane ki pur zor koshish rahegi...aati hoon jaldi hee....
tamaam doston se bhi guzarish hai...apna hunar ajmayein....aur yahaan tashreef layein......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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10th June 2015, 10:47 AM
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Agli ghazal ka matlaa dene ki koshish kar raha hooN...
na mere paas aao na dur jaao
na naz.ren churao.n yun na mus.kuraao (Mast)
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Bohot khoob matla diya hai Mast bhai....meri taraf se y koshish pesh karvraha hoon....
Gudguda k hamen yoN na khud khilkhilao
Kya iraada hai dil me, kuch to batao
Bhushan
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