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 this one's also not included... :- iqrar-e-mohabbat karne waali! bacchon kii khala ho gayi...  khala : aunt tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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20th May 2015, 01:42 PM
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20th May 2015, 01:58 PM
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us ne mujhe di thi jo anghooti! woh nazar-e- bait-ul-khala ho gayi ... bait-ul-khala : toilet  tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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20th May 2015, 09:21 PM
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Bahut khoob ghazal ek din mein bankar taiyaar hoti nazar aa rahi hai...makta likhne ki koshish kar raha hoon..umeed karta hoon aapko pasand aayegaa ek baar phir poori ghazal par rukh karte hai... Sarika ji aapne ghazal ke qaafiya aur radeef mein pher badal kiya hai...aage se thoda ehtiyaad baratiyeGaa Matla Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee, Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee..... - Shaad 2nd sher dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee..... - Mast 3rd sher bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee - Madhu 4th sher Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi - masti 5th sher tumse bichad kar yeh jana hamne, zindgi hi hamse khaffa ho gayee.. - Sunita Virender 6th sher ehd-o-paimaan sab khaak hue! wafa-e-yaar jafa ho gaye... - Hassan Makta pehle 'mast' yun deewaana na tha zaalim yeh kaisi adaa ho gayee... -Mast Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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21st May 2015, 09:28 AM
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wahhhh sach meiN khoobsurat gazal bani hai................  nye gazal ki shuruyaat kijiye......Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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21st May 2015, 10:34 AM
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lekin is thread kii pehli post ky mutabiq, jis meiN Parastaar saahab ny wazeh kiya hy ky ghazal 8 ashaar per mukammal ho gi... us hisaab sy 7 ashaar haiN yeh ... chaleN complete maiN kiye deta hooN ... :- Matla Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee, Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee..... - Shaad 2nd sher dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee..... - Mast 3rd sher bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee - Madhu 4th sher Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi - masti 5th sher tumse bichad kar yeh jana hamne, zindgi hi hamse khaffa ho gayee.. - Sunita Virender 6th sher ehd-o-paimaan sab khaak hue! wafa-e-yaar jafa ho gaye... - Hassan 7th sher baatoN meiN mithas ki jagah zehar! nafrat ki saahib inteha ho gayi - Hassan Makta pehle 'mast' yuN deewaana na tha zaalim yeh kaisi adaa ho gayee... - Mast tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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7/8 sher par makta kaha jaa sakta hai shayad shuruaati daur mein yeh adjustment ki gayi thi mujhe yaad hai. Khair aapse guzaarish hai ki bazm ko aap naya matlaa dein. Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Matla tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha.. dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha... - Hassan tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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21st May 2015, 04:00 PM
Shukriyaa Hassan bhai kya haseen matla diya hai is ghazal mein yakeenan mazaa aane waala hai...Bahut der tak aapke diye matle ko padha aur phir kuch yun aage ki kahaani ban paayi hai...
Matla tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha.. dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha.. -Hassan 2nd sher humne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha.. teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha.. -Mast Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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21st May 2015, 04:08 PM
Bohut mast ......Hassan ji and mast ji
Sorry urdu mein haath tang hai. Please meaning bhi bhejiye saath mein. Sarika |
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kia keh diya ... kamaal hiii kamaal .. jamaal hii jamaal chaleN 3rd sher bhi arz hy :- Matla tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha.. dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha.. - Hassan 2nd sher hum ne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha.. teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha.. - Mast 3rd Sher sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii! zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha - Hassan jalaal : glory, majesty tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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21st May 2015, 04:18 PM
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maqtal : place of killing jamaal : beauty daleel : evidence, proof, argument daryaaft : inquired, asked tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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21st May 2015, 06:51 PM
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tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha.. dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha.. - Hassan 2nd sher hum ne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha.. teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha.. - Mast 3rd Sher sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii! zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha - Hassan Deedar e yaar na mil saka jinko.. unki nazron me gam aur malaal dekha. Madhu अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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21st May 2015, 07:52 PM
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humne jisko bhi dekha hota halaal dekha Masti ismein koi galti ho to beshaq delete kar dijiyega. Sarika |
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21st May 2015, 08:14 PM
Bahut khoob...Sabhi doston ke sher pur asar huye...
Matla tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha.. dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha.. - Hassan 2nd sher hum ne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha.. teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha.. - Mast 3rd Sher sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii! zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha - Hassan 4th sher Deedar e yaar na mil saka jinko.. unki nazron me gam aur malaal dekha. -Madhu 5th sher Ishq o Mohabbat ko chodo yaaron humne jisko bhi dekha hota halaal dekha -Masti 6th sher apne shehar mein hi kab se ma'doom hoon main raaz-daaron ne bhi na mud ke haal dekha.. -Mast ma'doom - hidden/disappeared Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Matla tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha.. dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha..(Hassan) 2nd sher hum ne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha.. teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha.. (Mast) 3rd Sher sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii! zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha (Hassan) 4th sher Deedar e yaar na mil saka jinko.. unki nazron me gam aur malaal dekha. (Madhu) 5th sher Ishq o Mohabbat ko chodo yaaron humne jisko bhi dekha hota halaal dekha (Masti) 6th sher apne shehar mein hi kab se ma'doom hoon main raaz-daaron ne bhi na mud ke haal dekha.. (Mast) 7th sher kamsin ki adaa zamane se hai juda!!! ulfat ke baad nafrat ka ishteaal dekha.. (Hassan) kamsin : delicate ishteaal : agitation tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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25th May 2015, 07:38 PM
Bahut khoob baat bani hai janaab, chaliye is ghazal ko makta dete haiN..
Matla tere ishq ke maqtal meiN ajab haal dekha.. dil ke tukDay aur aankhoN ka rang laal dekha..(Hassan) 2nd sher hum ne tanhaayi mein bhi tha jamaal dekha.. teri daleelon mein daryaaft sang sawaal dekha.. (Mast) 3rd Sher sooli pe jo latkay haiN mohabbat kii! zaroor inhoN ne koiii jalaal dekha (Hassan) 4th sher Deedar e yaar na mil saka jinko.. unki nazron me gam aur malaal dekha. (Madhu) 5th sher Ishq o Mohabbat ko chodo yaaron humne jisko bhi dekha hota halaal dekha (Masti) 6th sher apne shehar mein hi kab se ma'doom hoon main raaz-daaron ne bhi na mud ke haal dekha.. (Mast) 7th sher kamsin ki adaa zamane se hai juda!!! ulfat ke baad nafrat ka ishteaal dekha.. (Hassan) kamsin : delicate ishteaal : agitation Makta Aahat par pursaan rehte hai yun bechain 'Mast' yun humne bhi unka surat-e-haal dekha.. (Mast) pursaan: inquisitive Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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26th May 2015, 05:23 PM
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26th May 2015, 05:35 PM
Mast sahab ijazat ho to mahfil ko naya matla diya jaye....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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26th May 2015, 08:01 PM
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...................................Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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26th May 2015, 08:01 PM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Matla.. HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho. Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho. Madhu. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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26th May 2015, 10:58 PM
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Matla.. HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho. Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu) 1st Sher toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast) Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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27th May 2015, 10:01 AM
bahot bahot khoob Madhu sahiba aur Mast saahab..... silsile ko aage badhaate hue aglaa sher pesh kar raha hoon......
Matla.. HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho. Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu) 1st Sher toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast) 2nd sher kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho, kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho... (shaad) |
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27th May 2015, 10:39 AM
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Matla.. HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho. Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu) 1st Sher toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast) 2nd sher kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho, kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho (Shaad) 3rd sher akele bahut hi yeh tanha safar hai ab tum mere saath chal ke dekho (Mast) Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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27th May 2015, 11:16 AM
waahhh kyaa baat hai bahot hi ummdaah...... aage dekhiye..
Matla.. HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho. Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu) 1st Sher toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast) 2nd sher kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho, kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho (Shaad) 3rd sher akele bahut hi yeh tanha safar hai ab tum mere saath chal ke dekho (Mast) kahaa.n jaa ke sotaa hai boo.Dhaa bhikhaarii,, zaraa gharo.n se nikal ke dekho. (shaad) |
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27th May 2015, 03:50 PM
Shaad ji I think she is suggesting Ki thodi Si zidd karo na please thoda sa machal kar to dekho.
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27th May 2015, 03:53 PM
Arey! Woh pehle wala comment kahan Gaye? ?
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27th May 2015, 05:31 PM
Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho. Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu) 1st Sher toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast) 2nd sher kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho, kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho (Shaad) 3rd sher akele bahut hi yeh tanha safar hai ab tum mere saath chal ke dekho (Mast) 4th sher kahaa.n jaa ke sotaa hai boo.Dhaa bhikhaarii,, zaraa gharo.n se nikal ke dekho. (shaad) 5th sher kyu kehte ho ki bura hai ishq, es aag meiN jara jal ke dekho...(Sunita Virender) .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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3rd June 2015, 09:21 PM
Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho. Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu) 1st Sher toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast) 2nd sher kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho, kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho (Shaad) 3rd sher akele bahut hi yeh tanha safar hai ab tum mere saath chal ke dekho (Mast) 4th sher kahaa.n jaa ke sotaa hai boo.Dhaa bhikhaarii,, zaraa gharo.n se nikal ke dekho. (shaad) 5th sher kyu kehte ho ki bura hai ishq, es aag meiN jara jal ke dekho...(Sunita Virender) 6th sher.. Na rootho hamse milao nazre Na aayenge fir ye pal ke dekho. (Madhu) अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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4th June 2015, 10:00 AM
Matla..
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho. Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu) 1st Sher toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast) 2nd sher kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho, kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho (Shaad) 3rd sher akele bahut hi yeh tanha safar hai ab tum mere saath chal ke dekho (Mast) 4th sher kahaa.n jaa ke sotaa hai boo.Dhaa bhikhaarii,, zaraa gharo.n se nikal ke dekho. (shaad) 5th sher kyu kehte ho ki bura hai ishq, es aag meiN jara jal ke dekho...(Sunita Virender) 6th sher.. Na rootho hamse milao nazre Na aayenge fir ye pal ke dekho. (Madhu) 7th sher tere naam se ho dil meiN halchal, aanchal bhi hai kaise dhalke dekho---(Sunita Virender)  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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4th June 2015, 12:57 PM
Bahut khoob doston, lijiye Makhta pesh kar raha hoon...
Matla.. HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho. Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho (Madhu) 1st Sher toote dil ke aasre bahut haiN bas ek baar sambhal ke dekho (Mast) 2nd sher kisii kii khushi me fidaa honaa seekho, kabhii shammaa sa pighal ke dekho (Shaad) 3rd sher akele bahut hi yeh tanha safar hai ab tum mere saath chal ke dekho (Mast) 4th sher kahaa.n jaa ke sotaa hai boo.Dhaa bhikhaarii,, zaraa gharo.n se nikal ke dekho (shaad) 5th sher kyu kehte ho ki bura hai ishq, es aag meiN jara jal ke dekho (Sunita Virender) 6th sher Na rootho hamse milao nazre Na aayenge fir ye pal ke dekho (Madhu) 7th sher tere naam se ho dil meiN halchal, aanchal bhi hai kaise dhal ke dekho (Sunita Virender) Makhta 'Mast' hum to ab bhi wahi khade hai tum raastaa badal ke dekho (Mast) Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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4th June 2015, 01:07 PM
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Waah khoob makhta kaha hai anu ji....bahut khoob doston.....sabhi ke sher bahut khoob rahe.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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9th June 2015, 02:14 PM
Next matla please................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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wahhhh...khoobsurat gazal taiyaar karne ke liye mubarakbaad .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th June 2015, 08:20 AM
Agli ghazal ka matlaa dene ki koshish kar raha hooN...
Takhti (122 122 122 122) na yun paas aao na doori badhaao na naz.ren churao.n na yun mus.kuraao (Mast) Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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10th June 2015, 08:53 AM
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Waaah! Waaah! Kya dilfareb matla likh diya hai mast ji...bahut khoob.. chaliye ise nibhane ki pur zor koshish rahegi...aati hoon jaldi hee.... tamaam doston se bhi guzarish hai...apna hunar ajmayein....aur yahaan tashreef layein...... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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