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waahhh bahut khoob doston..... ek se badh kar ek sher..................................
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Takhti - 212 1222 212 1222
Behr - Hazaj musamman ashtar
Arkaan - Faa-i-lun, ma-faa-ee-lun, Faa-i-lun, ma-faa-ee-lun
Matla
dil se bewafaa jis din hum tujhe bhulaayenge
hai kasam teri phir jee kar tujhe dikhaayenge (Mast)
1st sher
Teri aarzuu ab khwabon me na mere hogi
Tuu agar hai khush ye doori bhi ham nibhayenge(madhu)
2nd sher..
ye nahii khabar thii ke ab aap bhii sataaenge,
aap muskuraaenge chehraa chupaaenge...
(Shaad)
3rd sher
Jo malaal tumko mujhse kyun mil gaye ho tum
Saamne na aayenge ab na dil dukhayenge.(madhu)
4th sher
baat baat par aksar roothate ho tum jaanam
hum jo roothe tumse to lout ke n aayenge (Masti)
5th sher
meri har udasi jo haNs ke loot lete the.
Kya pata tha ek din vo hee hame rulayenge.(madhu
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Bahut khoob sher sabhi ki taraf se....aapse guzarish hai ise mukammal karne me sath dein....taki nayi ghazal ka agaaz ho..
Shukriya..
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3rd January 2016, 09:48 PM
chaliye agle sher ki gustaakhi karne jaa raha hoon
Takhti - 212 1222 212 1222
Matla
dil se bewafaa jis din hum tujhe bhulaayenge
hai kasam teri phir jee kar tujhe dikhaayenge (Mast)
1st sher
Teri aarzuu ab khwabon me na mere hogi
Tuu agar hai khush ye doori bhi ham nibhayenge(madhu)
2nd sher..
ye nahii khabar thii ke ab aap bhii sataaenge,
aap muskuraaenge chehraa chupaaenge...(Shaad)
3rd sher
Jo malaal tumko mujhse kyun mil gaye ho tum
Saamne na aayenge ab na dil dukhayenge.(madhu)
4th sher
baat baat par aksar roothate ho tum jaanam
hum jo roothe tumse to lout ke n aayenge (Masti)
5th sher
meri har udasi jo haNs ke loot lete the.
Kya pata tha ek din vo hee hame rulayenge.(madhu)
6th sher
khod kar zameen dil ki gumshudaa ho jaayenge
dil ki aarzoo bhi hum dil mein hi dabayenge (Mast)
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chaliye agle sher ki gustaakhi karne jaa raha hoon
Takhti - 212 1222 212 1222
Matla
dil se bewafaa jis din hum tujhe bhulaayenge
hai kasam teri phir jee kar tujhe dikhaayenge (Mast)
1st sher
Teri aarzuu ab khwabon me na mere hogi
Tuu agar hai khush ye doori bhi ham nibhayenge(madhu)
2nd sher..
ye nahii khabar thii ke ab aap bhii sataaenge,
aap muskuraaenge chehraa chupaaenge...(Shaad)
3rd sher
Jo malaal tumko mujhse kyun mil gaye ho tum
Saamne na aayenge ab na dil dukhayenge.(madhu)
4th sher
baat baat par aksar roothate ho tum jaanam
hum jo roothe tumse to lout ke n aayenge (Masti)
5th sher
meri har udasi jo haNs ke loot lete the.
Kya pata tha ek din vo hee hame rulayenge.(madhu)
6th sher
khod kar zameen dil ki gumshudaa ho jaayenge
dil ki aarzoo bhi hum dil mein hi dabayenge (Mast)
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Bahut khoob sher kaha..mast ji....waah!!
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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5th January 2016, 10:54 PM
Takhti - 212 1222 212 1222
Matla
dil se bewafaa jis din hum tujhe bhulaayenge
hai kasam teri phir jee kar tujhe dikhaayenge (Mast)
1st sher
Teri aarzuu ab khwabon me na mere hogi
Tuu agar hai khush ye doori bhi ham nibhayenge(madhu)
2nd sher..
ye nahii khabar thii ke ab aap bhii sataaenge,
aap muskuraaenge chehraa chupaaenge...(Shaad)
3rd sher
Jo malaal tumko mujhse kyun mil gaye ho tum
Saamne na aayenge ab na dil dukhayenge.(madhu)
4th sher
baat baat par aksar roothate ho tum jaanam
hum jo roothe tumse to lout ke n aayenge (Masti)
5th sher
meri har udasi jo haNs ke loot lete the.
Kya pata tha ek din vo hee hame rulayenge.(madhu)
6th sher
khod kar zameen dil ki gumshudaa ho jaayenge
dil ki aarzoo bhi hum dil mein hi dabayenge (Mast)
7th sher
Na fareb khayenge na hi zulm dhayenge
Sajde mein jabee.N ko itna na ham jhukayenge(madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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6th January 2016, 10:48 AM
Quote:
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Takhti - 212 1222 212 1222
Matla
dil se bewafaa jis din hum tujhe bhulaayenge
hai kasam teri phir jee kar tujhe dikhaayenge (Mast)
1st sher
Teri aarzuu ab khwabon me na mere hogi
Tuu agar hai khush ye doori bhi ham nibhayenge(madhu)
2nd sher..
ye nahii khabar thii ke ab aap bhii sataaenge,
aap muskuraaenge chehraa chupaaenge...(Shaad)
3rd sher
Jo malaal tumko mujhse kyun mil gaye ho tum
Saamne na aayenge ab na dil dukhayenge.(madhu)
4th sher
baat baat par aksar roothate ho tum jaanam
hum jo roothe tumse to lout ke n aayenge (Masti)
5th sher
meri har udasi jo haNs ke loot lete the.
Kya pata tha ek din vo hee hame rulayenge.(madhu)
6th sher
khod kar zameen dil ki gumshudaa ho jaayenge
dil ki aarzoo bhi hum dil mein hi dabayenge (Mast)
7th sher
Na fareb khayenge na hi zulm dhayenge
Sajde mein jabee.N ko itna na ham jhukayenge(madhu)
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Umdaa sher hua hai Madhu...daad qubool farmaiyegaa
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Umdaa sher hua hai Madhu...daad qubool farmaiyegaa
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shukriya anu....
doston...ye ghazal mukammal huyi..aap sab doston ka behad shukriya aage bhi aapki shirkat ka intzaar rahega.....
daad aur mubarakbaad qubool karein..
take care
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to doston...agaaz kar rahe hain ek nayi ghazal ka...ek naye khayaal ke sath...aap sab ke sath ki ummeed karti hun......
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ek baar kisii aur ke khaatir chalo ji lei.n.
hotho.n pe tabassum rakhei.n a.nkho.n ki nami lei.n (Madhu)
na hone de be-noor kabhi shaam-e-muhabbat
chhalke jo nighaahei.n to ashqon ko bhi pi lei.n (Mast)
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7th January 2016, 11:35 AM
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ek baar kisii aur ke khaatir chalo ji lei.n.
hotho.n pe tabassum rakhei.n a.nkho.n ki nami lei.n (Madhu)
na hone de be-noor kabhi shaam-e-muhabbat
chhalke jo nighaahei.n to ashqon ko bhi pi lei.n (Mast)
Gham baantne se hota hai kam aisa sunaa hai
chal baant ke apni khushi thodi si gamii lei.n (Masti)
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7th January 2016, 11:37 AM
Ek Suggestion : agar takhti ki filmi tarz maloom hai to usey daal dein jisse hum jaise naye practice karne waalon ko aasaani ho.....................
Iss takhti par based gaana hai:
Dushman na kare dost ne wo kaam kiya hai..................
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Ek Suggestion : agar takhti ki filmi tarz maloom hai to usey daal dein jisse hum jaise naye practice karne waalon ko aasaani ho.....................
Iss takhti par based gaana hai:
Dushman na kare dost ne wo kaam kiya hai..................
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ji sahi kahaa sarika..aage se koshish yahi rahegi takhti me based gana daal diya jaye....
shukriya....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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ek baar kisii aur ke khaatir chalo ji lei.n.
hotho.n pe tabassum rakhei.n a.nkho.n ki nami lei.n (Madhu)
na hone de be-noor kabhi shaam-e-muhabbat
chhalke jo nighaahei.n to ashqon ko bhi pi lei.n (Mast)
Gham baantne se hota hai kam aisa sunaa hai
chal baant ke apni khushi thodi si gamii lei.n (Masti)
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waah...bahut khoob sher kahe aap dono ne............
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Matla
ek baar kisii aur ke khaatir chalo ji lei.n.
hotho.n pe tabassum rakhei.n a.nkho.n ki nami lei.n (Madhu)
1st sher
na hone de be-noor kabhi shaam-e-muhabbat
chhalke jo nighaahei.n to ashqon ko bhi pi lei.n (Mast)
2nd sher
Gham baantne se hota hai kam aisa sunaa hai
chal baant ke apni khushi thodi si gamii lei.n (Masti)
3rd sher
Jo baat kisi dil ko zara bhi na khushi de
Na layei.n zubaa.n par use ham hotho.n ko see lei.n (madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Matla
ek baar kisii aur ke khaatir chalo ji lei.n.
hotho.n pe tabassum rakhei.n a.nkho.n ki nami lei.n (Madhu)
1st sher
na hone de be-noor kabhi shaam-e-muhabbat
chhalke jo nighaahei.n to ashqon ko bhi pi lei.n (Mast)
2nd sher
Gham baantne se hota hai kam aisa sunaa hai
chal baant ke apni khushi thodi si gamii lei.n (Masti)
3rd sher
Jo baat kisi dil ko zara bhi na khushi de
Na layei.n zubaa.n par use ham hotho.n ko see lei.n (madhu)
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Matla
ek baar kisii aur ke khaatir chalo ji lei.n.
hotho.n pe tabassum rakhei.n a.nkho.n ki nami lei.n (Madhu)
1st sher
na hone de be-noor kabhi shaam-e-muhabbat
chhalke jo nighaahei.n to ashqon ko bhi pi lei.n (Mast)
2nd sher
Gham baantne se hota hai kam aisa sunaa hai
chal baant ke apni khushi thodi si gamii lei.n (Masti)
3rd sher
Jo baat kisi dil ko zara bhi na khushi de
Na layei.n zubaa.n par use ham hotho.n ko see lei.n (madhu)
4th sher
jab hamko khatawaar samajhtaa hai zamaanaa
to zehr ke pyaale sare- mahfil hamii pee len.. (Shaad)
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Matla
ek baar kisii aur ke khaatir chalo ji lei.n.
hotho.n pe tabassum rakhei.n a.nkho.n ki nami lei.n (Madhu)
1st sher
na hone de be-noor kabhi shaam-e-muhabbat
chhalke jo nighaahei.n to ashqon ko bhi pi lei.n (Mast)
2nd sher
Gham baantne se hota hai kam aisa sunaa hai
chal baant ke apni khushi thodi si gamii lei.n (Masti)
3rd sher
Jo baat kisi dil ko zara bhi na khushi de
Na layei.n zubaa.n par use ham hotho.n ko see lei.n (madhu)
4th sher
jab hamko khatawaar samajhtaa hai zamaanaa
to zehr ke pyaale sare- mahfil hamii pee len.. (Shaad)
5th sher
hum bhi hain khataa-khaar tha maaluum jab hua
kis baat ka shikwaa karein ab aise hi jee lei.n (Mast)
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waaah....bahut khoob..sher kahe aap sabne..
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Matla
ek baar kisii aur ke khaatir chalo ji lei.n.
hotho.n pe tabassum rakhei.n a.nkho.n ki nami lei.n (Madhu)
1st sher
na hone de be-noor kabhi shaam-e-muhabbat
chhalke jo nighaahei.n to ashqon ko bhi pi lei.n (Mast)
2nd sher
Gham baantne se hota hai kam aisa sunaa hai
chal baant ke apni khushi thodi si gamii lei.n (Masti)
3rd sher
Jo baat kisi dil ko zara bhi na khushi de
Na layei.n zubaa.n par use ham hotho.n ko see lei.n (madhu)
4th sher
jab hamko khatawaar samajhtaa hai zamaanaa
to zehr ke pyaale sare- mahfil hamii pee len.. (Shaad)
5th sher
hum bhi hain khataa-khaar tha maaluum jab hua
kis baat ka shikwaa karein ab aise hi jee lei.n (Mast)
6th sher
unko bhi sukoo.n aaye koi poochta to hai
milne ka bahana karei.n ehsaan kabhi lein.(madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Matla
ek baar kisii aur ke khaatir chalo ji lei.n.
hotho.n pe tabassum rakhei.n a.nkho.n ki nami lei.n (Madhu)
1st sher
na hone de be-noor kabhi shaam-e-muhabbat
chhalke jo nighaahei.n to ashqon ko bhi pi lei.n (Mast)
2nd sher
Gham baantne se hota hai kam aisa sunaa hai
chal baant ke apni khushi thodi si gamii lei.n (Masti)
3rd sher
Jo baat kisi dil ko zara bhi na khushi de
Na layei.n zubaa.n par use ham hotho.n ko see lei.n (madhu)
4th sher
jab hamko khatawaar samajhtaa hai zamaanaa
to zehr ke pyaale sare- mahfil hamii pee len.. (Shaad)
5th sher
hum bhi hain khataa-khaar tha maaluum jab hua
kis baat ka shikwaa karein ab aise hi jee lei.n (Mast)
6th sher
unko bhi sukoo.n aaye koi poochta to hai
milne ka bahana karei.n ehsaan kabhi lein.(madhu)
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Umdaa sher hua hai Madhu...daad qubool farmaiyegaa
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27th January 2016, 08:11 PM
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Matla
ek baar kisii aur ke khaatir chalo ji lei.n.
hotho.n pe tabassum rakhei.n a.nkho.n ki nami lei.n (Madhu)
1st sher
na hone de be-noor kabhi shaam-e-muhabbat
chhalke jo nighaahei.n to ashqon ko bhi pi lei.n (Mast)
2nd sher
Gham baantne se hota hai kam aisa sunaa hai
chal baant ke apni khushi thodi si gamii lei.n (Masti)
3rd sher
Jo baat kisi dil ko zara bhi na khushi de
Na layei.n zubaa.n par use ham hotho.n ko see lei.n (madhu)
4th sher
jab hamko khatawaar samajhtaa hai zamaanaa
to zehr ke pyaale sare- mahfil hamii pee len.. (Shaad)
5th sher
hum bhi hain khataa-khaar tha maaluum jab hua
kis baat ka shikwaa karein ab aise hi jee lei.n (Mast)
6th sher
unko bhi sukoo.n aaye koi poochta to hai
milne ka bahana karei.n ehsaan kabhi lein.(madhu)
Makta
Jis raah pe chalne se lage darr kabhi tumko
us rab se zaraa pooch lein sang usko hi le lein..(Masti)
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28th January 2016, 10:22 AM
khoob ghazal hui hai is baar bhi.....agle matle ke intezaar mein
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28th January 2016, 11:49 AM
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Takhti - 221/1221/1221/122
Matla
ek baar kisii aur ke khaatir chalo ji lei.n.
hotho.n pe tabassum rakhei.n a.nkho.n ki nami lei.n (Madhu)
1st sher
na hone de be-noor kabhi shaam-e-muhabbat
chhalke jo nighaahei.n to ashqon ko bhi pi lei.n (Mast)
2nd sher
Gham baantne se hota hai kam aisa sunaa hai
chal baant ke apni khushi thodi si gamii lei.n (Masti)
3rd sher
Jo baat kisi dil ko zara bhi na khushi de
Na layei.n zubaa.n par use ham hotho.n ko see lei.n (madhu)
4th sher
jab hamko khatawaar samajhtaa hai zamaanaa
to zehr ke pyaale sare- mahfil hamii pee len.. (Shaad)
5th sher
hum bhi hain khataa-khaar tha maaluum jab hua
kis baat ka shikwaa karein ab aise hi jee lei.n (Mast)
6th sher
unko bhi sukoo.n aaye koi poochta to hai
milne ka bahana karei.n ehsaan kabhi lein.(madhu)
Makta
Jis raah pe chalne se lage darr kabhi tumko
us rab se zaraa pooch lein sang usko hi le lein..(Masti)
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bahut khoob sher kaha sarika...aur isi ke sath ghazal ko muqammal kiya aapka behad shukriya..aur sabhi ko mubarakbaad aur daad pahunche...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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28th January 2016, 11:54 AM
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khoob ghazal hui hai is baar bhi.....agle matle ke intezaar mein
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ji..khoob ghazal huyi hai.....par agle matle ke intzaar mein ham bhi hain.....
please jaldi dijiye.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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24th February 2016, 05:45 PM
sarika is baar aapki janib se koi matla sunna chahenge ham sab...
Ummeed hai tumhari taraf se jaldi hee kisi khoobsoorat ghazal ka agaaz hoga...
Intzaar me....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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24th February 2016, 10:26 PM
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sarika is baar aapki janib se koi matla sunna chahenge ham sab...
Ummeed hai tumhari taraf se jaldi hee kisi khoobsoorat ghazal ka agaaz hoga...
Intzaar me....
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Jo hukm madam ji........................
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24th February 2016, 10:29 PM
Tarz.. hum the jinke sahaare..
Behr..2122 122 2122 122
Matla
Das rahi hai judaayii..yaad phir unki aayi
Ro rahi dil ki dhadkan..shor deta sunayii
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24th February 2016, 11:15 PM
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Jo hukm madam ji........................
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Originally Posted by masti
Tarz.. hum the jinke sahaare..
Behr..2122 122 2122 122
Matla
Das rahi hai judaayii..yaad phir unki aayi
Ro rahi dil ki dhadkan..shor deta sunayii
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kya baat hai....tumne meri baat rakh li..vaqt nikal kar matla post kiya vo bhi..itna asardaar aur khoob behr chuni hai sarika.......
Ab doston aapki bari hai..ghazal ko aage badhaiye....
Aap sab ke khoobsoorat sher jald padhne ko milenge is intzaar me aapki dost ..
Madhu..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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27th February 2016, 03:41 PM
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Tarz.. hum the jinke sahaare..
Behr..2122 122 2122 122
Matla
Das rahi hai judaayii..yaad phir unki aayi
Ro rahi dil ki dhadkan..shor deta sunayii
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Kya khoob matla hai
Meri peshkash ye rahi
Jab bhi kii haiN duaaeN, Kuchh na maNga Khuda se
Jissko mil jaaye chaahat, KyuN wo maaNge Khudayee
raah meiN hi manziloN ka zikr mat chedo Praveen
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi
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27th February 2016, 04:12 PM
naam tera hi dil meiN. har su deta sunaaii,
dekh le meri haalat ab na jaaye bataayii..
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th February 2016, 08:38 AM
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Kya khoob matla hai
Meri peshkash ye rahi
Jab bhi kii haiN duaaeN, Kuchh na maNga Khuda se
Jissko mil jaaye chaahat, KyuN wo maaNge Khudayee
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Waah..bahut hee khoob sher kaha aapne...
Apka behad shukriya ki aapne vaqt nikal kar koocha me shirkat ki...
Yun hee sath dete rahiyega...
Regards
Madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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naam tera hi dil meiN. har su deta sunaaii,
dekh le meri haalat ab na jaaye bataayii..
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Waah di...bahut khoob..
Dil se shukriya aapka..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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28th February 2016, 05:52 PM
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Waah di...bahut khoob..
Dil se shukriya aapka..
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Bahut Khoob Matla hai,
Tarz.. hum the jinke sahaare..
Behr..2122 122 2122 122
Matla
Das rahi hai judaayii..yaad phir unki aayi
Ro rahi dil ki dhadkan..shor deta sunayii
lijiye haajir hai ham apne sher k saath
tera hee aksh meri ghazalo me bas gaya hai,
aaina bhi jo dekhoon tu hee tu de dikhaayi
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Bahut Khoob Matla hai,
Tarz.. hum the jinke sahaare..
Behr..2122 122 2122 122
Matla
Das rahi hai judaayii..yaad phir unki aayi
Ro rahi dil ki dhadkan..shor deta sunayii
lijiye haajir hai ham apne sher k saath
tera hee aksh meri ghazalo me bas gaya hai,
aaina bhi jo dekhoon tu hee tu de dikhaayi
'manu"manish
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waah manu ji...khoob sher kaha hai aapne..
sach kahuun purane doston ka sath milta hai to alag hee khushi hoti hai...
bas yahi kahna chahoongi ki aate raha kariye....
likhte rahiye..
takecare
madhu..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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28th February 2016, 06:12 PM
Tarz.. hum the jinke sahaare..
Behr..2122 122 2122 122
Matla
Das rahi hai judaayii..yaad phir unki aayi
Ro rahi dil ki dhadkan..shor deta sunayii
1 sher
Jab bhi kii haiN duaaeN, Kuchh na maNga Khuda se
Jissko mil jaaye chaahat, KyuN wo maaNge Khudayee(praveen ji)
2 sher
naam tera hi dil meiN. har su deta sunaaii,
dekh le meri haalat ab na jaaye bataayii..(sunita di)
3 sher
tera hee aksh meri har ek ghazal me basa hai,
aaina bhi jo dekhoon tu hee tu de dikhaayi.(acharya_mj)
sabhi doston ne khoob sher kahein hain...
ummeed hai jald hee aage aur khoobsoorat sher shamil honge..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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3rd March 2016, 12:51 PM
[QUOTE=Madhu 14;491439] Tarz.. hum the jinke sahaare..
Behr..2122 122 2122 122
Matla
Das rahi hai judaayii..yaad phir unki aayi
Ro rahi dil ki dhadkan..shor deta sunayii
1 sher
Jab bhi kii haiN duaaeN, Kuchh na maNga Khuda se
Jissko mil jaaye chaahat, KyuN wo maaNge Khudayee(praveen ji)
2 sher
naam tera hi dil meiN. har su deta sunaaii,
dekh le meri haalat ab na jaaye bataayii..(sunita di)
3 sher
tera hee aksh meri har ek ghazal me basa hai,
aaina bhi jo dekhoon tu hee tu de dikhaayi.(acharya_mj)
4 sher
Ye nazaare wahin hai..nazrein par woh nahi hain
Jinse milti thi palkein..dete naa wo dikhaayi(masti)
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3rd March 2016, 06:28 PM
Tarz.. hum the jinke sahaare..
Behr..2122 122 2122 122
Matla
Das rahi hai judaayii..yaad phir unki aayi
Ro rahi dil ki dhadkan..shor deta sunayii
1 sher
Jab bhi kii haiN duaaeN, Kuchh na maNga Khuda se
Jissko mil jaaye chaahat, KyuN wo maaNge Khudayee(praveen ji)
2 sher
naam tera hi dil meiN. har su deta sunaaii,
dekh le meri haalat ab na jaaye bataayii..(sunita di)
3 sher
tera hee aksh meri har ek ghazal me basa hai,
aaina bhi jo dekhoon tu hee tu de dikhaayi.(acharya_mj)
4 sher
Ye nazaare wahin hai..nazrein par woh nahi hain
Jinse milti thi palkein..dete naa wo dikhaayi(masti)
5th sher
Ek jhalak apni dekar le gaya mera sab kuch
Dil mera poochta hai....kyun nazar ye milai.. (madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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10th March 2016, 05:05 PM
koocha pe agle sher ka intzaar hai doston........
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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1st April 2016, 12:34 AM
Dosto kya ye ghazal mukammal hogayi hai
Zara bata dijiye
Mujhe ye mehekma khususan pasand aayi
Umeed karta hu mai bhi jald iss mai shirkat karunga
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