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In My Broken Heart
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In My Broken Heart - 15th January 2005, 03:38 PM

My heart broke down
and cried today,
my pillow stained with tears.
My life's still in
a state of grief,
after seven lonely years.

I tell myself
you're an angel now,
somewhere in the stars.
But I can't help
to feel so cheated,
without you in my arms.

For I never
had the chance,
to see the color of your eyes.
Never did I hear
your sweetest voice,
nor hear your midnight cries.

I never got to
feel your lovely touch,
or the softness of your breath.
All these things
I'd wished so much for,
were stolen from me by death.

All this time
that's come to pass,
my arms still ache to hold you near.
In seven years
and counting,
I still love and miss you dear.

I know there's
nothing I can do,
that we're so far apart.
Until the day
we meet again,
I'll hold you in my broken heart.


YA ALLAH, all I need is just `PRAYER`.
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hello - 16th January 2005, 08:01 PM

hello ayaanji........ur composition shows the feeling of ur heart filled with pain....it would be wrong of me to say that i absolutely understand u 'coz i think jispe beethti hai wahi jaanta hai...but still i feel 7 yrs is like ages u have to get on with life even if its not easy afterall life is meant to be lived inspite of all the hardships....please do try...bye 4 now!..take care!


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20th January 2005, 05:43 PM

hart felt.....beautiful


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15th February 2005, 08:20 AM

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