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Titlee jo ek mujh ko mili thi kitaab main - 8th May 2011, 12:27 PM

Titlee jo ek mujh ko mili thi kitaab main
Woh apna aks chore gayi mere khuwaab main

Ab tak woh mere zehen main uljha sawaal hai
Shaamil rahi jo har ghari mere nisaab main

Aankhon main neend hai na koi khuwaab door tak
Rehte hain hum bhi aaj kal waise azaab main

Milta hai gardishon se gale lag ke chaand bhi
Aaye the simat ke faasle kitne saraab main

Aakhir meri wafa ka mujhe kya sila mila
Likha na aik harf bhi us ne jawaab main


Anil Arora

Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai,
Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai,
Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare,
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8th May 2011, 04:02 PM

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Titlee jo ek mujh ko mili thi kitaab main
Woh apna aks chore gayi mere khuwaab main

Ab tak woh mere zehen main uljha sawaal hai
Shaamil rahi jo har ghari mere nisaab main

Aankhon main neend hai na koi khuwaab door tak
Rehte hain hum bhi aaj kal waise azaab main

Milta hai gardishon se gale lag ke chaand bhi
Aaye the simat ke faasle kitne saraab main

Aakhir meri wafa ka mujhe kya sila mila
Likha na aik harf bhi us ne jawaab main
Nice One ..... Anil Ji !

Thanks 4 Sharing ......... !

Aur Bhi Behtar Lagta .. Yadi Ghazal Ke End MeN Shayar Kaa Naam Ankit Kar Dete !




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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8th May 2011, 06:52 PM

Shayar ka naam b kahan se du,woh dene he nhi deta, chahta hai ki tum mashur rho,hum duniya ki nazar me aana nhi chahte. Aage he hum apne jaam k karan jane jate,logo pata lag jaye ki hum shayar hai to kuch or he gulshan me shigufa fat jayega.


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12th May 2011, 02:07 AM

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